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Her Perfect Revenge by Anna Mara
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did not like it

This is quite literally one of the worst books I've ever read. It's one of those books where the 2 main characters can't stand each other but rip each other's clothes off whenever they have the chance.

You might wonder why, if I thought it was so bad,I actually finished the book. Well, the editing appears to have been done by an 8th grade student who is failing English, and the grammar errors were so frequent and obvious that it was fun to keep reading just to see what was going to show up next.

Things like "It was 4 am in the morning," "It was 2 a.m. in the morning".. repeat ad nauseum.

"That was saying alot."

"You've said your peace. Just go."

Tons of exclamation points, often several within the same paragraph, incorrect compound words "backdoor" instead of "back door"... I could go on and on. I've never noticed more than a few of these types of errors in any other book I read, so the many in this book stood out like a blinking neon light.

Don't waste your valuable time on this one. If you love romance novels, there are a lot better ones out there.
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October 1, 2011 – Finished Reading
October 23, 2011 – Shelved

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message 1: by Chris (new)

Chris I think I enjoyed your review more than you enjoyed the book!


Brooke So true! The grammar killed me in this book. I said this in my own review, but I felt dumber having read the book. Terrible.


Valerie Thanks, Chris! And Brooke, I agree... I felt dumber too. But yet, I stuck with it. What does that say about me?


message 4: by Lisa (new) - rated it 1 star

Lisa Loved this review. One of my favorites was "hard erection", repeated again and again. Isn't that redundant. I too tortured myself with the reading just to see how she got to the inevitable conclusion, and how many cliches could be used.


message 5: by Jan (new) - rated it 1 star

Jan Agree. One very short chapter in I wondered if it was self-published. Poor writing, hackneyed expressions, simple dialogue, predictable characters, etc. I was 3% into this piece of 7th grade flotsam and deleted it.


message 6: by Amy (new) - rated it 4 stars

Amy Kelley Yes! I’ve never seen so many grammatical errors in a book. The amount of times the author misspelled even the main character’s name is appalling.


message 7: by Beth (new) - rated it 1 star

Beth Davis Agree, I couldn't even finish this tripe!


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