The CEO's Tempting Secretary

The fundamental storyline here is one of intrigue more than purely romance. There is a plot arc for crime family goings-on, a plot arc for a seduction for hire and of course, a romance involving not only the lead male, but also some of the secondary players. Certainly, one positive is that it doesn't just follow the usual plot arc of the typical vertical romance, nor does it fill up a lot of time with dumb conniving by an assortment of background player antagonists. Most all the actors are credible in their roles. However, the principal romance is on-again, off-again which tends to make it a little less engaging. The storyline bounces around quite a bit and is often not cohesive. The scripting is the main negative....it's fairly amateurish. With a good re-write to tighten things up and make the dialogue between characters more compelling, this could be an excellent vertical movie.