mommyspoolboy
Se unió el oct 2016
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I would like to start this review off with me saying I HIGHLY ENJOYED THIS WEBSERIES, so I'm not trying to dog on it, but it's going to sound like I am. I would first like to address the issues with the web series that I found to.. stick out like a sore thumb.
Issues: Well I believe the first and main problem overall was audio, which can be fixed in the future IF a second season ends up being made. At times you couldn't hear what someone was saying or if you could, the sound was just REALLY muffled, in which this was distracting and even at times becoming aggravating. To fix this, I would record the audio separately through another device to get a more clear sounding final product.
Another issue that needs to be addressed is actually two issues put into one. These issues being (some) writing and (some) acting. The writing felt very bad and extremely cheesy at times as if the script was written in a day. The reason I included acting in this portion is because the writing felt cheesy a lot of the times, but only due to the poor acting of some of the characters. The writing could have been saved at times if there was a better delivery, but sometimes atrocious writing can't be saved no matter what.
The final issue I want to address is one story point in general, in which I will not spoil for anyone viewing this. The build up to this point was awesome, but ultimately fell to be pointless. When building up to this, there is a conflict that isn't even solved until the final episode, which is good, but when the time came for the build up to pay off, the result just ended within... maybe a minute at most? Which made the whole build up feel pointless, but enjoyable nonetheless.
The good things: The characters were written amazingly with each and every character feeling relatable in some way or another. The chemistry between these characters brings a feeling of warmness to this web series. A very close friendship between all of these teens will surely bring some joy to your heart. Their situations along with their wants and needs are relatable in a sense, or at least that is how I felt when I watched this web series.
The pacing of the show was on par, being a 5 episode web series and while there were some cases where the episode felt rushed, most of the time the pacing was okay.
Most of all, the story did keep me intrigued all the way through and I ended up wanting more by the time the show was over. With that, I call the show a success!
Issues: Well I believe the first and main problem overall was audio, which can be fixed in the future IF a second season ends up being made. At times you couldn't hear what someone was saying or if you could, the sound was just REALLY muffled, in which this was distracting and even at times becoming aggravating. To fix this, I would record the audio separately through another device to get a more clear sounding final product.
Another issue that needs to be addressed is actually two issues put into one. These issues being (some) writing and (some) acting. The writing felt very bad and extremely cheesy at times as if the script was written in a day. The reason I included acting in this portion is because the writing felt cheesy a lot of the times, but only due to the poor acting of some of the characters. The writing could have been saved at times if there was a better delivery, but sometimes atrocious writing can't be saved no matter what.
The final issue I want to address is one story point in general, in which I will not spoil for anyone viewing this. The build up to this point was awesome, but ultimately fell to be pointless. When building up to this, there is a conflict that isn't even solved until the final episode, which is good, but when the time came for the build up to pay off, the result just ended within... maybe a minute at most? Which made the whole build up feel pointless, but enjoyable nonetheless.
The good things: The characters were written amazingly with each and every character feeling relatable in some way or another. The chemistry between these characters brings a feeling of warmness to this web series. A very close friendship between all of these teens will surely bring some joy to your heart. Their situations along with their wants and needs are relatable in a sense, or at least that is how I felt when I watched this web series.
The pacing of the show was on par, being a 5 episode web series and while there were some cases where the episode felt rushed, most of the time the pacing was okay.
Most of all, the story did keep me intrigued all the way through and I ended up wanting more by the time the show was over. With that, I call the show a success!