Maji Tuji Reshimgath

What is happening man,whatt... 1.neha is in financial department but can't handle simple calculations of her own house??

2.so she has a loan ,but didn't she gets email from banks?? How any bank's executive come directly to her,is that is the manner??

3.if Yash is a busy businessman,then how he spends so much much time on Neha???

4.okay,Yash told a lie to Neha but she's giving so much reaction, means,gaane ka raas nikal kar use fake doo,ase aste friendship?

Please improve.

The visuals are good, the music is good, the plot is good (not really original plot but Ok), but there's no logic no sense in writing

the heroien unnecessarily dumb, can't handel basic economics but still working in a bank, the weakest and dumbest singel mother ever. Hero also dumb, never makes a logical decision, has intelligence equivalent of a monkey.

In the starting many plot points were set-uped but never revisited

the kid is there only to get ocassional AWWWWs, serves no purpose to the story.

Side characters lives revolves around lead characters, no efforts put in them also

overall, feels like a really bad attempt at copying honar sun me hy gharchi.