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I haven't graded any chapters so far, but I've just lost my patience. This chapter had to pay for the wait, and what ended up leaving me much more confused. I have had to stop a few times because my brain couldn't process what I saw. None of the revelations come close to anything that could be called interesting, but what's worse is that most of them don't make any sense. Totally disappointed. Give me back my time.

I can't think of what could happen in the last chapter to raise this dead horse, but it needs to be nothing less than a galactic masterpiece of human history.

Banana. Potato. Ponny.

What more would I want than a good piece of sci-fi and some guilty visual pleasure. But after more than 20 minutes everything felt so uncomfortably bad that I couldn't help but read reviews so as not to waste my time. It seems like it was a good decision.

Although I can tolerate the medieval appearances of intergalactic travelers, I cannot tolerate preschool dialogue and plots as superficial as tracing paper. How difficult it can be to write something that feels like real people in real circumstances. A mystery.

A shame, because I was genuinely interested in this potential new franchise. Someone get Snyder away from pencil and paper once and for all.