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This is easy viewing on par with many sitcoms. Some people are out to be negative from the start.

For me all the female work well, its the 2 males that can't act and are not remotely funny. Which as one is the creator and lead thats a problem. If we get series 2 kill off the males just stick with the females.

Far too much dialogue.

Just stop the characters talking incessantly; have them take a breath and actually do things. We might actually learn something about them that way.

As it stands, it was hard to feel I knew any of the characters and so impossible to care what happened to them.

And the comedy is very weak (e.g. The "joke" in the trailer about the reason for the rented room being so cheap).

Some itv cabbage wants knocking out,for believing this is comedy.

C+ "Nice first attempt but needs more work and polish particularly on dialogue, humour, character development and narrative flow. I think your style is more suited to children's books than adult comedy". This I'm sure was the mark and comment from the Creative Writing for TV professor who set this 1st year writing assignment.

The comment goes on to say, "You did successfully address one of the assignment's key goals to create a group of characters that demonstrate the most annoying characteristics of the millennial generation".

The greatest achievement of this show is that it went from a mediocre 1st year creative writing assignment to a funded tv show.