Pay Day

Terrible writing, delivery, and pacing. The only reason I give this 2 stars is your camera work and framing is pretty good. But this was such a flop in every way. Joey tries to be a sleezy Italian up and coming gangster and falls completely flat. Not the slightest bit intimidating, menacing, or interesting to watch on screen. The other actors seem inexperienced but not trying too hard, not nearly as over acted as the lead. 4 minutes is too long in my opinion; and for god sake what in the hell is "dick money"? Lines like this are what make this unwatchable and borderlining parody. Wish you the best of luck in getting better in your craft.