Name:
Kyle Smith Block: 7th Date:
Word
Choice
Diction Word Choice
Word
Order
Diction -
Syntax The arrangement and
grammatical relation of words, phrases,
and clauses in a sentence
The authors choice of words
__ -
What is a diction error?
A diction error is a wrong word error. For instance, if an employer say we interviewed
perspective candidates instead of we interviewed prospective candidates, she has committed an
error in diction. Perspective means point of view, but prospective means potential. On the
SAT, a diction error will be a word that almost sounds right.
Correct the diction error in the following sentences:
1. My sister cant go to school today.
2. Why doesnt she go to the infirmary?
3. The game should be over now.
4. Out of all three of us, you are the slowest.
5. This movie is harder than the last one I saw.
6. My book is there on the table.
EXERCISE #2
Why is Syntax Important?
Syntax is the grammatical tool that deals with how sentences are put together and the relationship
between words. It is a very methodical and logical sequence, ensuring that sentences are put
together using subject, verb and object and that the words in the sentence all have agreement, so that
the correct forms of words are used.
Read this sentence and see if you detect a problem with its syntax:
Tourists see statues of many famous patriots walking along Bostons Freedom Trail.
It appears that the statues are walking, not the tourists. In English, modifiers are usually placed as
close as possible to the words they describe, so this sentence should read:
Tourists walking along Bostons Freedom Trail see statues of many famous patriots.
Fix the error in syntax in each of the following sentences:
1. I thought I heard a strange rattle driving my car.
Driving in my car, I thought I heard a strange raddle
2. Strumming on his guitar, we suddenly remembered where we had seen this folk singer
before.
He remimbered this folk when we started strumming his guitar.
3. I turned the corner and bumped into an elderly gentleman paying no attention to where I was
going.
Paying no attention where I was going I bumped into an elderly gentleman.
EXERCISE #3
Correct the diction in the following sentences: What is
diction?
1. Those kinds of sounds make me nervous.
The Choice of
2. That woman is our teacher.
words of the
author
3. The teacher will Teach us the rules.
4. This shoe is yours.
5. In this class, everyone passed except this boy.
6. Which dorm dont have air conditioning?
What is syntax?
Correct the syntax in the following sentences:
7. Orbiting between Mars and Jupiter, research astronomers discovered a new group
of asteroids.
8. I saw a long line of traffic looking both ways before I tried to cross the street.
9. The caterer served refreshments to the guests wearing a frilly white apron.
10.Raised in an open field without any pesticides, I prefer vegetables and fruits.
EXERCISE #4
Correct the diction in the following sentences: What is
diction?
1. Where is your paper at?
2. Oh, I ate two much!
3. Janet doesnt work here anymore.
4. No thanks, I dont want any of that cake.
5. The man who stole the car was caught.
6. Driving that old car aggravates me.
7. He should of done his housework earlier.
What is syntax?
Correct the syntax in the following sentences:
8. Cooked too long, she thought the pasta did not taste good any more.
9. Spiced with Italian herbs, I had never tasted anything quite like Imeldas salad.
10.Wrapped in brightly colored paper, Mickey tore open the birthday present.
Name:
Date:
DICTION AND SYNTAX HOMEWORK
CONTENT
25 Points
Concept mastered
15 Points
Concept well
understood
10 Points
Concept
understood
5 Points
Concept partially
understood
ERRORS
No errors
Mostly free of
errors
Some errors
Many errors
COMPONENTS
None missing
Most components
present
Some missing
components
Many missing
components
EFFORT
Outstanding
Much effort
Some effort
Minimal effort
Make a poster on 8 x 11 paper containing the following
elements:
Attach this sheet to your mini-poster.
Your name
The literary terms and definitions
DICTION: word choice
SYNTAX: The arrangement and grammatical
relation of words, phrases, and clauses in a
sentence
Write a sentence with incorrect diction.
Explain what makes the error an error in diction.
Correct the error in diction.
Write a sentence with incorrect syntax.
Explain what makes the error an error in syntax.
Correct the error in syntax.
