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The document summarizes feedback from two panel reviewers on a thesis document. The panel provided corrections and suggestions across multiple sections of the document including the statement of the problem, conceptual framework, definition of terms, title page, research locale, and distribution of participants. The author took actions such as reorganizing variables, rewording definitions, changing titles, shortening sections, and reflecting suggestions in conclusion to address the feedback from the panel reviewers.

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Matrix

The document summarizes feedback from two panel reviewers on a thesis document. The panel provided corrections and suggestions across multiple sections of the document including the statement of the problem, conceptual framework, definition of terms, title page, research locale, and distribution of participants. The author took actions such as reorganizing variables, rewording definitions, changing titles, shortening sections, and reflecting suggestions in conclusion to address the feedback from the panel reviewers.

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Name of Corrections/Suggestions Actions Done Page number

Panel

Mr. Statement of the Problem


Supremo
- Reflect Statement of the - Organized Placement of pp. 7
problem to the variables to reflect
conceptual framework Statement of the problem

- Placed Participants first pp. 9


- Put “Participants” first

Conceptual Framework
pp. 7
- Rearrange Conceptual - Reorganized variables of
Competency by itemizing
Framework
Self Efficacy and
Satisfaction under
“Competency”
Definition of Terms

- Improve Operational - Reworded Operational pp. 9


Definition Definitions

Mr. Title Page


Oducado
- Change “Parenting - Changed to “Parenting Front page
Competence and Sense Sense of Competence of
of Satisfaction of Visually Impaired Persons
Visually Impaired in Iloilo City”
persons in Iloilo City”

RRL
- Too lengthy - Synthesized and Shortened pp. 2
RRL

Definition of Terms
- Change “Competence” - Changed to “Parenting
to “Parenting Competence” and pp. 9
Competence” rearranged in alphabetical
- Alphabetical Order
order
Distribution of Participants
- Reflect “Low, Average,
and High Income” in the - Reflected to Definition of pp. 9
definition of terms under terms
Family Income

Research Locale
- Change to past tense - Changed to Past tense
pp. 12
Statement of the Problem - Described under pp. 33
- Describe SOP 1,2,6,7 Conclusion
under Conclusion

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