Outline Template
I. Introduction
Hook (introduces the issue): parents are more concern on their monetary life to support their
family than taking care of their children.
Background Information (broader picture of the issue): explain world statistics full time
working parents.
What the writer intends to do (thesis statement): the benefits of child care centres and
grandparents will be best care and my recommendations.
II. Body
A. Body Paragraph 1: (1st view)
1. Topic sentence 1: Advantages of childcare centre offer the best care for children.
2. Supporting details: Staff all trained and able to bring up the kids growing skills.
B. Body Paragraph 2: (2nd view)
1. Topic sentence 2: Benefits of grandparents will be better career for their children.
2. Supporting details: parents believe that grandparents will be a better option and safest
decision to take care of their children.
C. Body Paragraph 3: (Your opinion)
1. Topic sentence 3: I feel childcare centre offer best care for children.
2. Supporting details: care centre can build a child with good skills as well as a good
mannered child at the same time.
III. Conclusion
Restatement: childcare centre provides more benefits in taking best care of their children than
grandparents.
Prediction or issue in broader context: I think that in future child care center will become more
popular and very useful to full time working parents.
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Question 1
Most of the parents are more concern on their monetary life to support their family than
taking care of their children. Do you know that according to the world statistics 80.4 % parents
are doing fulltime work. So, they do not have time to take care of their children and make a
decision to send them to children care center or ask for grandparents help. This essay will
discuss the benefits of child care centers and grandparents will be good care and my
recommendations.
First and foremost, full time working parents prefer to send their children to childcare
center. The advantage of sending childcare centers are staff all fully trained and they able to
bring up the children growing skills. Moreover, staffs know how to take of the children
according to their age level. Children are trained since young to be independent and they are a
lot of activities will be given to them. For example, activities such as play dough, puzzles,
outdoor game, indoor game, arts, language development game, singing, storytelling and some
more. Children will learn good thinking skills and communication skills since young. Besides,
children also will develop their critical thinking skills and will take a smart decision in handling
a problem. Moreover, they will learn to work in a team, since there are many children will
mingle around. One of the theory that is applicable is spoken to, and allowed to explore
stimulating surroundings are more likely to develop improved neutral connections which aid
later learning (Karr-Morse and Wiley, 1997). Furthermore, children will get more friends and
gives an opportunity to socialize with children from different races. Hence, childcare center is
one of the best way to take care of their children.
Besides that, some parents consider that seeking for grandparents’ help will be a good
decision to take care of their children. Most of the working parents believe that grandparents
will be a better option and safest decision to take care of their children. According to the recent
research, children and teens who are really abducted 25% of children are kidnap by strangers
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so certain parents choose grandparents is the best option for the taking care of their kids.
Another most important advantages are can reduce cost fees. If parents send children to
childcare center have to pay higher rate to take care of their children but grandparent do not
expect lots of money to care their children and working parents also can considerable cost
saving. Moreover, they will pay more attention to their grandchild and make sure they are not
encounter any problems. One of the theory are advantages for children in having attachments
to a number of significant adults and especially to grandparents (Silverstein, 1991; Tizard,
1986). Other than that, grandparents give full love and care to their grandchild. They also will
teach good manners, norms and values. This is because every grandparent will give extra
attention to shape a well discipline grandchild.
In my opinion, child care center is the best way to take care of their children. This is
because children care center provide more advantages in giving best care for children compared
to grandparents. The valid reason on my opinion is children care center can build a child with
good skills as well as a good mannered child at the same time. They are being trained in
different skills and able to apply the knowledge they have learnt in future. For an illustration,
playdough and writing skills activities for kids to develop them gross motto skills and also
excitement and makes children develop sportsmanship.
In conclusion, it clearly shows that childcare center provides more benefits in taking
best care of their children than grandparents. I think after reading this essay for those full time
working parents can make the right decision. I think that in future child care center will become
more popular and very useful to full time working parents.
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References
cpsinfo. 2017. Employment Characteristics of Families Summary. April 20 . Accessed agust
30, 2017. https://www.bls.gov/news.release/famee.nr0.htm.
Karr-Morse, Wiley. 2007. Children’s early learning and developmen. may 20. Accessed
August 15, 2017.
http://www.ncca.ie/uploadedfiles/curriculum/ld%20background%20paper%20may.pd
f.
Lipsett, Anthea. 2009. Nurseries better than grandparents, research shows. February 10 .
Accessed agust 28, 2017.
https://www.theguardian.com/education/2009/feb/10/grandparents-childcare-pre-
school.
Silverstein, Tizard. 2006. The changing role of grandparents. November 2. Accessed august
17, 2017. https://aifs.gov.au/cfca/publications/changing-role-grandparents.
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Question 2
Online shopping or in store?
Shopping are something vital and nearly necessary for some people. Hence, online
shopping or in-store have specialized in various way. Both options provide us with product
same however the main difference between them cost involved. In both cases, offers a great
variety of stores to choose from. Practically any store you would typically find in-store will
have a corresponding online store featuring the same items. If purchases items broken or
damage bought form online or store can also be returned or an exchange. However, the online
shopping can look for the best and cheapest price we can research in quick time. Both have
different prices, 65% of the it's the time online channels that are cheaper than offline (in-store)
channels, the study found. Customer also don’t to irritating to stand in long line to pay money
in-store. In my opinion, it sounds more worthwhile to online shopping can save time and money
when compared to store.
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References
Nanji, Ayaz. 2014. Pricing-Are Online Product Price Lower Than In-Store Prices. April 23.
Accessed august 22, 2017. http://www.marketingprofs.com/charts/2014/24975/are-
online-prices-lower-than-in-store-prices.
Torres, Matthew. 2017. Comparison: Buying Online vs In A Store. April 26. Accessed agust
28, 2017. https://www.lifewire.com/buy-online-or-in-store-3276438.
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