Jamie Mandeville
Professor McGriff
ENC 1102
4 March 2020
                                      Final Draft
       Cyberbullying is best defined as the use of electronic communication to cause harm
through harassment or threatening behaviors as mentioned in the article “Cyberbullying” by
researcher Elana Pearl Ben-Joseph. The use and development of technology has allowed for a
drastic increase in the number of cyberbullied victims per year. Unfortunately, teens and young
adults have become the most vulnerable and targeted through the social media and the internet.
With constantly growing internet platforms, social media and self-esteem cause cyberbullying to
impact teenagers’ mental and physical health which needs to be acknowledged as a rising issue.
       Social media use has infiltrated the daily lives of teenagers and young adults all around
the world. In the article “Teen Social Media Use May Increase Mental Health Risks”, author
Caitlin Hoffman gives the rising issues involved with social media which take on two forms on
how teenagers handle certain situations which can lead to bullying or getting bullied. One of
these forms being internalizing behaviors which “can involve social withdrawal, directing
feelings inward, or difficulty coping with anxiety or depression.” (Hoffman 3). Internal
behaviors can influence a young, developing mind that can affect schoolwork, social life,
individual goals or morals, and overall reshape a person due to an internalized issue. Another
form being externalizing behaviors which “can include aggression, acting out, disobeying, or
other observable behaviors” (Hoffman 2). Externalizing behaviors can be dangerous for both the
teenager as well as fellow peers. Lashing out, aggressive behaviors can all lead to a growth in
negative hobbies or being a part of the wrong crowd and could conclude in a rise of trouble. Both
forms of behaviors are unhealthy and are negative attributes on the minds of young adults. The
behaviors can be the causes and effects of cyberbullying within the media. The concept of
bullying on social media is not unfamiliar to teens. In a recent report, “8 Tips for Parents of
Teens with Depression” by researcher Michele Hamm, it was discovered that “a median of 23
percent of teens reported being targeted. About 15 percent reported bullying someone online
themselves” (Pappas 6). Not only are a noticeable portion of teens being victimized, but they are
also contributing to the online issues themselves. The percentage of teens being targeted is
disappointing let alone the other 15% who are also contributing to the bullying of others. This is
where the different behavior types come into play. Teenagers act out or respond in certain ways
on social media due to their internal and external behaviors. Social media overall has a huge
impact in the influence of cyberbullying and how it effects teenagers. But certain social media
platforms are at higher risk for bullying to occur.
       Snapchat, Instagram, and Facebook are all very popular social media platforms that have
teens hooked. Facebooks audience holds 72% of users to be between the ages of 50 to 64.
Instagram users tend to be used by young adults, 57% being ages 25 to 29. 90% of Snapchat
users are from the ages 13 to 24 which accounts for most teenagers. According to a Pew
Research Poll, “about 35% percent of 13 to 17 year old’s say they’re active on Snapchat more
than any other social media app” (Bennett 3). The constant activity has lead to tears in emotional
and physical health from teens due to the harsh words and foul treatment from other users.
Snapchat has allowed bullying through messages, photos, posts, etc. Instagram is also a main
place where bullying takes place. Whether it’s a comment, a post, or a direct message, Instagram
is slowly becoming well known as a bullying hot spot. Mentioned in the article, “Teens Are
Being Bullied ‘Constantly” On Instagram”, Instagram “provides a uniquely powerful set of tools
to do so. The velocity and size of the distribution mechanism allow rude comments or harassing
images to go viral within hours” (Lorenz 3). The idea that one post can be seen by millions,
possibly even billions in such a short time frame is terrifying on its own. The entire platform is
high speed and high risk. Users from left and right from all of the country can post, comment,
like and harm other users in an instant. Teenagers consistently ridicule others and are also being
harmed and treated unfairly themselves. These social networks are main causes of cyberbullying.
The idea of internet safety and cyberbullying awareness needs to be recognized and done about.
       In todays age, confidence is limited among teens and young adults. Magazines, TV, Ads
and commercials try to show the ridiculous expectations of teens and how they are expected to
dress, act, talk, look, and so on. The constant battle of self-image and who looks the best plays a
large role in surrounding cyberbullying. According to the journal “Cyberbullying and Self-
Esteem”, “bullying and self-esteem consistently finds that victims of bullying tend to have lower
self-esteem than non-victims.  It may be that the experience of being victimized decreases one’s
self-esteem, or that those who have low self-esteem are more likely to be targeted as
victims” (Patchin 3). Bullying can cause the low self-esteem, but low self-esteem can also
cause bullying. Upward social comparison is meant to be a beneficial ideal, but “it often causes
people to feel inadequate, have poorer self-evaluations and negative affect” (Marsh and Parker
6). Teens are constantly comparing themselves to other teens and other influential people. Teens
tend to tear others down on social media, text, calls, or any form of cyber communication in
order to make themselves feel better. Low self-esteem is a large factor in that having low self-
esteem cannot only make one the victim in a situation, but it can also allow for built up
aggression and self-hatred that leads to bullying others to feel justified.
               Parents, adults, and media companies need to pay more attention to the threats
that surrounds their children, students, and business. Cyberbullying is not and has never been a
joking matter. The issue should not be taken lightly and there should be safety methods in place
for teenagers and young adults. Even though all states have laws requiring schools to respond to
bullying, many states do not add cyberbullying within these laws. The common excuse used is
that it is hard for parents, adults, or even school faculty members to recognize and acknowledge
cyberbullying taking place. This is exactly why laws need to be enacted to protect and support
users and to raise awareness on the subject. When cyberbullying occurs, there are many possible
ways to handle the situation. One can block or report the bully. One can tell trusted adult or
police in case of emergency. There are laws and regulations on websites, media platforms and
within the community that have ways of handling cyberbullying. But there are not enough.
Knowing the signs and internal and external behavior factors of teenagers will help prevent
harm. Parents being involved and aware of their children’s online access will help prevent harm.
Staying alert and involved in the issue will help prevent harm.
       Cyberbullying is not a simple nor easy topic to discuss. It effects millions of people every
day from all over the world. This bullying harms teens and young adult’s mental health and is
caused mainly by social media and self-esteem issues. This problem has not gone away and will
not end unless more precautions and awareness are made.
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Bennett, Willa. “Teens Share Snapchat Bullying Stories.” Teen Vogue, Identity, October 23,
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Pappas, Stephanie. “Cyberbullying on Social Media Linked to Teen Depression.” Live Science,
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Patchin, Justin. “Self-Esteem and Cyberbullying.” Cyberbullying Research Center, September
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https://cyberbullying.org/self-esteem-and-cyberbullying