Report: Jata Shankar

Jata Shankar
by Aaditya Prakash

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Jata Shankar

INTRODUCTION:
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Education plays an important role in the achievement of human potential,
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improving a common and simple society, encouragement of national growth.
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Furnishing comprehensive access to standard education is the key to India’s
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continued ascent, and direction on the global stage in terms of economic
growth, social justice and equality, scienti c advancement, national integration
and cultural preservation. The timeline of the global education enlargement
throwback in the 4th sustainable development goals of the 2030 Agenda
adopted by India in 2015 look about to ensure inclusive and equitable quality
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education and upgrade longstanding learning opportunities for all by 2030.To
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be recon gured to support and forward learning by the whole education system
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, there will be requirement of such towering goal, then the entire interpretative
targets and goals of 2030 document can be attained for credible development.
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Now-a-days assault charges have been taking places in the outlook of
knowledge. Indeed with the quickly changing employment scenery and global
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environment, it is becomingly a serious that children not only learn, but more
importantly know how to learn.
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The National Education policy, 2020 is the rst education policy of 20th century
and aims to address the many growing developmental imperatives of our
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country. This Policy proposes the revision and revamping of all aspects of the
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education structure, including the regulation and governance, to create a new
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system that is aligned with the aspiration goals of 21st century education,
including SDG4, while building upon India’s traditions and value systems.

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IMPACT OF EDUCATION POLICY:

ON ECONOMY:
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NEP 2020 has set the target to increase the public investment in the education
sector to reach 6% of GDP by the centre and the state.
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*A big positive is the focus on multi-disciplinary, holistic higher education with
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exibility in the choice of subjects and multiple entries and exit points for
students.
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*NEP 2020 will require huge infrastructure and change the orientation of all
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stakeholders to make it a success.
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*Public investment in education sector at 6% of GDP could have been set
higher.
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*The union cabinet on Wednesday approved the National Education Policy 2020
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with the aim for transformational reforms in school and higher educational
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systems in the country. This policy will replace the 34 year old National Policy
on Education, 1986.
ON YOUTH:
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The National Education Policy (NEP) 2020 introduced recently is set to change
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the face of education ecosystem in the coming time. In the coming time we may
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also hope to see bright adults with innovative approach towards work and life,
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instead of pawns obsessing over marks and mugging up bookish knowledge.
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Thirty-four years ago, in 1986 when the Rajiv Gandhi led government changed
the education policy, the focus was on ‘Operation Blackboard’ to strengthen
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the primary school system. Keeping in view the changing demands, the NEP
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2020 now aims to offer skill oriented education. “The transformation of
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education will modify the psyche of the coming generation as we will have an
educated populated armed with innovative thinking, aware of the skills needed
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in the local markets, research oriented with an ability to give potential output”.

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Change is possible if all the measures introduced in NEP2020 is implemented
in a structured way.
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ON PRIVATE SECTOR:
With over 55% of school education enrolled in private tuitions, a look at how the
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new education policy will impact the industry. The National Education Policy
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2020 wants to wean school children away from private tuition and coaching
classes. “Focus on regular formative assessment for learning rather than the
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summative assessment that encourages today’s coaching culture”, reads one of
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the objective in the policy document.
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The NEP has also revealed the government intention to make CBSE Board
exams easier, more exible that will test a child’s core capacities and
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competencies.If implemented correctly will these and many more measures
listed in the NEP, sound the death knell of India’s shadow education sector. The
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private sector earns a revenue of Rs.24000 crore a year. Its dominated by
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unorganized players who run hole-in-the- wall tuition centres in urban areas.
As per the Global Education Census Report 2018, 55% of school students in
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India have a private tutor outside the school.
CONCLUSION:

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The New National Education Policy (2020) is a good policy
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as it aims at making the education system holistic,
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exible, multi- disciplinary aligned to the needs of the
21st century and the 2030 Sustainable Development
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Goals. I would like to argue that the New Education
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Policy, 2020 appears to be truly visionary and the
comprehensive. Its success, however, lies in its effective
implementation. The government will not leave any stone
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unturned in this national rebuilding project. The intent of
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