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Distraction: Mobile phones have become personal assistants. Mobile phones can distract us from our work and studies. Entertainment: Cyber Crime: Mobile phones provide entertainment like music, Mobile phones are used for cyber crimes like hacking, videos, games etc. cheating etc. In conclusion, while cell phones provide significant benefits like easy communication and access to information, they also have some drawbacks such as potential health issues and distraction. Overall, cell phones have become essential tools in modern life, so both their pros and cons must be managed carefully.
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D NG Advantages & Disadvantages

Distraction: Mobile phones have become personal assistants. Mobile phones can distract us from our work and studies. Entertainment: Cyber Crime: Mobile phones provide entertainment like music, Mobile phones are used for cyber crimes like hacking, videos, games etc. cheating etc. In conclusion, while cell phones provide significant benefits like easy communication and access to information, they also have some drawbacks such as potential health issues and distraction. Overall, cell phones have become essential tools in modern life, so both their pros and cons must be managed carefully.
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SAMPLE INTRODUCTION

DẠNG ADVANTAGES & DISADVANTAGES


What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet? Give reasons for your answer and include some relevant
examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

In recent years, the internet has been gaining its popularity at an amazing rate. Some people suggest that the internet
brings us a lot of benefits. But on the other hand, there are also many people who strongly advocate (ủng hộ) that
its drawbacks should not be ignored. In the following essay, both pros and cons of the
internet will be presented/ hoac analyzed in more detail.

DẠNG OPINION 1 PHÍA CÁCH 1: đi thẳng vào vấn đề.


Some people propose that smoking should be banned completely. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include
some relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences
Smoking is a social problem we are trying to solve. Some people suggest that the government should ban smoking
completely.They have the idea that smoking is harmful to people's health and it violates the right and freedom of
nonsmokers. However, in my opinion, smoking should not be totally banned for the following reasons- phan doi
Hoac ung ho: In my opinion, I completely agree with this point of view because of the following reasons
DẠNG OPINION 1 PHÍA CACH 2:
Nowadays, there are more and more advertisment. Some people think that they have a
negative influence on people, and therefore should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include:some relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences,

Everywhere, and almost at any times we find ourselves surrounded by all kinds of advertisements . Some people
suggest that there should be some restrictions on advertisements. But on the other hand, there are also many people who
strongly advocate that advertisements should not be limitted. In my opinion, hoac For my part, I absolutely agree with the
latter point of view ( quan điểm sau ) for the folowing reasons
former point of view: quan điểm trước

DẠNG OPINION 2 PHÍA:


Should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment? Explain your opinion and give your
reasons. Hoac Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include some relevant examples from your own
knowledge and experiences.
.
In recent years, the record of crime rate bas been constantly renewed . Quite a few hoac Some people have the idea
that we should send criminals to prison. Nevertheless towards the same issue,hoac On the other hand, many others
point out that the law offenders should be punished by paying back to public. In this essay, I will look at both sides of
such argument.
Hoac In the following essay, both sides of this argument will be further discussed in more detail.

DẠNG CAUSE & SOLUTION:


It is generally acknowledged that families are 'now not as close as they used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations, Give reasons for your answer and include some relevant
examples from your own knowledge and experiences.
In the past, family was a very important concept in people's minds, and it was the important concept of many people's
lives. Nowadays, however, the relationship between family members is. not as close as before. What factors lead to this
phenomenon and what we can do to solve the problem have become a concern to many people. In my opinion, the
following reasons need to be taken into consideration .
Hoac: The following essay will presents some causes of this phenomenon and suggest some useful solutions.
Nowadays it is difficul for university graduate to find a job. Analyze the individual and social reasons and offer
some solutions. Give reasons for your answer and.include some relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experiences.

The job market for college graduates is getting more and more depressing. The fact shows that not all college
graduates could find jobs that they are trained. It is crucial ( hoặc important) that we analyze the causes of this
disturbing issues and explore the effective solutions

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MỞ BÀI
2 câu – paraphrase lại đề thi bằng cách dùng từ/cụm từ đồng nghĩa.

Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they
cannot always expect job satisfacton, and a permanent job is more important. What is your opinion/ view?

Opinion One side- 1 phía

It is argued by some people that job security is not as important as how satisfied we feel with what we do, whereas
others believe that we should do a job that frees us from unemployment stress and ensures we have a stable income. I
am personally in favour of the viewpoint of the first group.- hoac

-hoac In my opinion, I agree with the former point of view because of the following reasons.
-Hoặc From my point of view, I am convinced with the latter idea (bị thuyết phục bởi quan điểm sau ) for the
following reasons (vì những nguyên nhân / lí do sau)

Opinion ( 2 sides)= Discussion

Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they
cannot always expect job satisfacton, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views/ sides and
give your opinion

Bát buoc thao luan 2 phía

It is argued by some people that job security is not as important as how satisfied we feel with what we do, whereas
others believe that we should do a job that frees us from unemployment stress and ensures we have a stable income. In
the following essay, both argurments hoac both views will be discussed in more detail. – 2 phía

Hoac In this essay, I will explore both sides of this argument. hoạc I will analyze both views.
Hoac: In the following essay, both sides of this argument will be further discussed in more detail.
. The following essay will analyze both sides/ views in more detail ( sẽ phân tích 2 khía cạnh hoac quan điểm chi
tiết hơn
(Một số người cho rằng sự đảm bảo, ổn định trong công việc không quan trọng bằng việc chúng ta cảm thấy hài lòng
như thế nào với những gì chúng ta đang làm, trong khi những người khác tin rằng chúng ta nên làm một công việc mà
giúp giải phóng chúng ta khỏi căng thẳng của sự thất nghiệp và đảm bảo chúng ta có thu nhập ổn định. Cá nhân tôi
ủng hộ quan điểm của nhóm đầu tiên.)

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KẾT BÀI

In conclusion, although some argue that a secure job is more important than a satisfying job, I am of the opinion that
we should always look for a job that brings us happiness and fulfilment rather than stability.

(Tóm lại, mặc dù một số ý kiến cho rằng một công việc an toàn quan trọng hơn một công việc khiến mình hài lòng, tôi
cho rằng chúng ta hãy luôn tìm kiếm một công việc mang lại cho chúng ta hạnh phúc và sự thỏa mãn hơn là sự ổn
định.)

Từ vựng
 job security: sự đảm bảo, ổn định trong công việc
 frees somebody from something: giải phóng ai đó khỏi cái gì
 a stable income: thu nhập ổn định
 today’s cut-throat labour market: thị trường lao động cạnh tranh gay gắt ngày nay
 face unemployment: đối mặt với thất nghiệp
 annually = every year: hàng năm
 switching jobs: chuyển đổi công việc
 the increasingly competitive job market: thị trường việc làm ngày càng cạnh tranh
 the most important consideration: sự cân nhắc quan trọng nhất
 experience temporary unemployment: trải qua thất nghiệp tạm thời
 a higher level of job satisfaction: mức độ hài lòng trong công việc cao hơn
 primary breadwinners: trụ cột chính
 a rewarding job = a satisfying job: một công việc khiến mình hài lòng
 a stable monthly paycheck: mức lương ổn định hàng tháng

THỰC HÀNH DẠNG ƯU NHƯỢC ĐIỂM


What are the advantages and disadvantages of social media?

1. In recent years, ………..has become a broad issue to the general public. 


hoac
Nowadays, ……….has become a popular widespread in modern society. 
2. Some people believe that…………..
2. On the other hand, some others may think that…………
2. In the following essay,  both pros and cons of…...will be be analyzed/ hoac presented in more detail. 

The use of cell phones (mobile phones) has increased rapidly in the twenty-first century. Additionally, cell phones can
now be used for many purposes besides making phone calls.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of cell phones?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Advantages of mobile Phones: Disadvantages of mobile phones:


Communication: Wastage of time:
It is the best source of communication. When we use mobile phones without limits then this
android phone waste our time.
Access Internet:
Cause of Cancer:
You can access internet service even in simple
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mobiles now. When we use android phones without limits then
radiation emits from android phones which became
Send text messages:
the cause of cancer.
You can send text messages with the help of
Cause certain Diseases:
android phone.
Mobile phone cause certain disease when we use
Call:
android phones without limit.
It is the best source of communication to call
Reduce focus in sports:
someone may be friend or family.
People play games online today which reduces the
Easy to use:
focus in daily real sports.
It is simple and easy to use.
Addiction:
The major problem of android phone is
addiction.People became mobile addicted when they
use android phones without limit.

Advantages Disadvantages;
 Brings you closer to the outer world
 Keeps you connected to your friends  You are not present mentally
and family whom you can’t reach  Keeps you distracted
 News about the world  You are busy recording the moment
 Keeps you entertained by movies, rather than living it
games, music etc  Lowers confidence in a way that you
 Gets your work done within a few get so stuck with only writing behind your
touches phone and not speaking up yourself
 Lets you record memories

Introduction
to the topic

Advantages There are several obvious benefits, such as ……….Itn fact,……..This means that…….For example,……In addition,…..

Another positive aspect is

Disadvatages
The impact has pot all been positive

The most criticsim is

Another negative effective is

A final drawback is

Summary/
To sum up/ In conclusion…
Conclusion and
own opinion
I believe…….

The advatage hoặc disadvantages outweigh the disadvantages hoặc advantages

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THỰC HÀNH DẠNG OPINION ESSAY-OPINION 1 PHÍA

MỎ BÀI
Over the past few years,………… .is becoming increasingly serious in many nations

(Trong vài năm ………………dần trở thành vấn đề gia tăng nghiêm trọng ở nhiều quốc gia.)

There is a popular belief that……………quan diem 1………………………………However, hoac On the other hand, others
claim that……………………quan diem 2………………………………………

(Hâu hết người ta tin rằng…………Tuy nhiên, những người khác kêu lên rằng………….)

In my opinion, I agree with this former (quan diem truoc) hoac latter ( quan diem sau) statement because the
following reasons. (Theo quan điểm của tôi, tôi đồng ý với quan điểm trước hoặc quan điểm sau vì những nguyên
nhân sau đây)

THÂN BÀI- ít nhất 2 lí do

First and foremost, people should recognize that (Điều đầu tiên và quan trọng nhất , moi người nên nhận ra rằng)
………

In the first place, (Trước tiên) ………………………………………………………………………..

In the second place, (Thứ nữa là)……………………………………………………………………

This is because of the fact that (Điều này là bởi thực tế là……………………………………………

On the other hand, there are several arguments supporting the statement that………(Mặt khác, có một vài sự lập
luận ủng hộ cho quan điểm rằng…..).

In fact, people have this opinion because……(Thực tế là mọi người có quan điểm này là bởi vì………………….

KẾT LUẬN

Considering all arguments put forward, it can be concluded that ……………

(Xem xét tất cả lập luận đưa ra, người ta có thể kết luân rằng……

The above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people discuss the impact of this problem

(Những sự thực đã được đề cập trên đã tạo ra một điều nan giải khi mọi người thảo luận sự ảnh hưởng của vấn đề
này.)

Hence, everybody should have further considered of this issue. (Chính vì vậy, mọi người nên cân nhắc thêm về vấn
đề này.)

Mobile phones have brought mostly benefits to our personal lives. Do you agree or disagree?

INTRODUCTION In recent years, the world has witnessed a booming number of mobile phones. They are
dramatically changing the way people contact to each other. It is apparent that mobile phones
has had a profound influence on personal lives. However, not all the effects of them have
been positive.
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POSITIVE To begin with, using mobile phones is one of popular methods for people to communicate, relax
ASPECT and do business. By using call or video phone, text message, we are able to keep in touch
together despite a long distance. These days, with the significant developement of cell phones,
they enable users to entertain such as surfing the internet, sending photos or downloading videos
and games. According to a research, the number of people accessing the web through mobile
phones is now accounting for well over 15% of worldwide internet usage. Furthermore, some
Office applications for mobile phones, for example, Miccrosoft Office are helping employees do
their business more effectively.

NEGATIVE Although it is true that people are now getting a number of advantages from mobiles, these
ASPECT communication technologies also have several negative impacts. Firstly, using cell phones too
much will probably be harmful for human's health as it can increase the risk of brain cancer. In
addition, children are spending a lot of their free time on using mobiles with the purpose of
chatting or playing games. This is time consuming and affect negatively on their studies. Lacking
of face-to-face communication is also the result of using mobiles. Instead of going out or dating,
many people prefer to stay at home and use their cell phones to connect to others.
CONCLUSION In general, mobile phones have both pros and cons to our society. They make the people's lives
and works become more convinient. Yet, mobile phones still impact badly on health, time and
communication of individuals. To advoid these problems, each person should manage the time of
using mobiles reasonably. Besides, the awareness of people about the disadvantages of mobile
phones should be improved.
The use of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you
think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages? 
Từ đồng nghĩa, trái nghĩa:
          social media = social network = social networking/ site
          replace = substitute = supersede = take the place of
          face-to-face contact = real interaction

Advantages of social media Disadvantages

1. Social media has helped to connect with 1. Because of lots of fake users in social
our friends and families to share our events media there is an activity of sharing porn
and photos videos etc. images and vulgar comments.
2. Lots of lost family members has been 2. And also sharing wrong information in
returned by connecting through social social media in order to mislead the users.
media. 3. Fake Advertisements etc
3. It has given an opportunity for poor
people and talented people to show their
talents.
4. It has also helped small and medium scale
business to grow by promoting their brand
for small budget which is affordable for
them.
1. Its a great platform to get connected o different 1. Its addictive. Once you get comfortable
people around the world. with it , you get stuck.
2. To have conversations with your near and dear 2. You may loose your privacy by one or
ones. other means.
3. You may get tangled into flattering words
3. Share your views and check other’s opinions . of unknowns. Be aware ! .
4. Get the latest updates and happenings in the world 4. You get Isolated from the society. You
5. You may find that one person , you may be looking start giving more time to media than your
parents .
for . . 
5. It also causes many injurious health related
problems also Porn addiction is one of its sub
elements .
Gợi ý: Dạng bài Opinion, trong đó người viết PHẢI phân tích cả lợi ích và bất lợi của việc giao tiếp qua mạng
xã hội và các phương tiện truyền thông trước khi đưa ra quan điểm của mình. Bài gợi ý dưới đây thiên về
hướng tiêu cực của xu hướng này.

INTRODUCTION

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Đoạn 1: Lợi ích của Ý 1: Media technologies lift up any geographical barriers as people are enabled to interact
việc giao tiếp qua 24/7 with more people than ever before.
mạng xã hội và các
→ E.g. Facebook and Twitter have become so popular that over 3 billion people around the
phương tiện truyền
world can be connected with a click of the mouse.
thông 
→ Old friends who have been out of touch for ages can be linked on an international social
network and exchange pleasantries.
→ One can effortlessly find others sharing the same interest and thoughts regardless of where
they are, which was previously rather intricate.
(Các công nghệ truyền thông phá bỏ bất kỳ rào cản địa lý nào khi mọi người có thể tương tác
24/7 với nhiều người hơn bao giờ hết. → ví dụ: Facebook và Twitters đã trở nên phổ biến tới
mức hơn 3 tỷ người trên khắp thế giới có thể được kết nối bằng một cú nhấp chuột. → Những
người bạn cũ đã mất liên lạc của nhau trong một thời gian dài có thể được liên kết trên một
mạng xã hội quốc tế và trò chuyện. → Một người có thể dễ dàng tìm thấy những người khác
chia sẻ cùng một quan tâm và suy nghĩ bất kể họ đang ở đâu, điều mà trước đây là phức tạp.)
Ý 2: Social networking sites are powerful tools to accelerate the flow of information
→ E.g. Breaking news is up to the minute and available for free.
→ Keeping abreast of what is happening around us has never been simpler.
(Các mạng xã hội là công cụ mạnh mẽ để đẩy nhanh luồng thông tin → ví dụ: Tin tức được
cập nhật đến từng phút và miễn phí. →Việc nắm bắt được những gì đang xảy ra xung quanh
chúng ta chưa bao giờ đơn giản hơn)

Đoạn 2: Bất lợi của Ý 1: A new set of communication barriers has been unexpectedly created by the employment
việc giao tiếp qua of social media.
mạng xã hội và các
→ A number of people in present age often interact via messages with icon showing their
phương tiện truyền
emotions rather than actual tone of voice
thông 
→ Misunderstanding is more likely to occur or anyone can hide behind the text.
(Một loạt các rào cản truyền thông mới đã vô tình được tạo ra bởi việc sử dụng các phương
tiện truyền thông xã hội. → Nhiều người ngày nay thường tương tác thông qua các tin nhắn
với biểu tượng thể hiện cảm xúc của họ chứ không phải giọng điệu thực tế → Sự hiểu nhầm
có nhiều khả năng xảy ra hoặc bất cứ ai có thể giấu mình phía sau những dòng tin nhắn.)
Ý 2: Social media equipment presents an unprecedented paradox. With all the powerful social
technologies at our fingertips, we are more connected and also potentially more disconnected.
→ As everyone is approachable online, it is no longer a demand for visiting friends and
relatives to get updated of one another.
→ An increasing number of people face loneliness in today’s widely connected world.
(Các thiết bị phương tiện truyền thông tạo ra một nghịch lý chưa từng có. Với tất cả các công
nghệ xã hội mạnh mẽ trên tay, chúng ta được kết nối nhiều hơn và cũng có khả năng bị tách
biệt hơn. → Vì mọi người đều có thể được tiếp cận trực tuyến, không còn nhu cầu đến thăm
bạn bè và người thân để cập nhật tin tức của nhau. → Ngày càng nhiều người đối mặt với sự
cô đơn trong thế giới kết nối ngày nay.)

CONCLUSION

SAMPLE WRITING

INTRODCTION Nowadays, the constant growth of technology has given rise to social media applications such
as Facebook and Twitter. Consequently, there is now considerable concern for face-to-face
interaction. However, I believe the benefits overshadow the drawbacks of the rise of
social media.

NEGATIVE POINT It is apparent that more time spent on social media equals less time for social interaction. In
other words, people whose social media’s usage is heavy face shortage of real human face-to-
face contact, which causes negative impacts to their emotional development. A recent
experiment from New York University has proven this. The experiment involved two starved
groups of people who frequently used social media apps and those who rarely used them.
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There was 35% of the people who constantly used social media apps refused to share their
assistance food to others, but there was 80% of the people who rarely used social media apps
agreed to share. This experiment should indicate that social media can negatively affect
people’s emotional intelligence, especially their sympathy and empathy.

POSITIVE However, the benefits that social media users earn are countless by eliminating the major
constraint the world has faced for a long time: geographical distance. First, people from over
the world are brought closer together, which is the base of relationship formation. For
example, Pew Research Center reported that in 2017, there were 40 million Americans using
online dating websites like Tinder and OKCupid. In economic context, social media promotes
online sales activities. Let’s consider Amazon, the company that is so successful with online
sales. It started with the social media habits of most people in America, encouraged online
shopping routines and generated a lot of profit.

CONCLUSION All in all, it is explicable to say that the advantages of the rise of social media outweigh the
disadvantages. Although there might be some negative influence on users’ social behavior,
but the benefits are tremendous and able to compensate that.

Positives of Public Transport Negatives of Public Transport


 We need to reduce our dependence on cars;  Public transport if often slow and unreliable;
 Parking a car can be extremely difficult in big  Metro systems and trains are often dirty and
cities; crowded;
 Well-designed transport systems are comfortable  People feel like sardines in a can;
and convenient; Cars are much more comfortable
 Modern public transport can be fast and cheap;
 Public transport can help to reduce pollution in
cities;
 Investment in buses and trains will ease traffic
congestion;
 Buses can be given special lanes to avoid traffic.

Road Safety

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 Driving while tired or drunk is extremely dangerous;

 Mobile phones can be a dangerous distraction for drivers;

 They draw the driver’s attention away from the road;

 The use of phones while driving has been banned in many countries;

 Punishments are becoming stricter;

 Television campaigns are used to remind people to drive safely;

 Speed cameras have become more common;

 Speed bumps are another form of traffic calming;

 Many streets are designed with the aim of slowing traffic down.

C. Từ vựng cho chủ đề Transport

 Pedestrian (n): người đi bộ;

 Dangerous drivers: những người lái xe nguy hiểm;

 Raise people’s awareness: nâng cao ý thức con người;

 Pose a serious threat to…: gây ra sự đe dọa nghiêm trọng cho…;

 Congestion pricing = congestion charges: việc thu phí ùn tắc giao thông;

 Licence suspension: việc tịch thu bằng lái;

 Reduce traffic accidents: giảm thiểu tai nạn giao thông;

 Cycle lanes = bike lanes: những tuyến đường dành cho người đi xe đạp;

 Pedestrian (n): người đi bộ;

 Run a red light: vượt đèn đỏ;

 Commute/travel long distances to…: đi quãng đường dài tới… .

THỰC HÀNH VIẾT BÀI LUẬN OPINION DẠNG 2 PHÍA


The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you
think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

INTRODUCTION Social media has long been regarded as the technological innovation in the mordern world.
Today, people tend to spend most of their time on social media and the way they interact with the
whole community may be altered. The following essay will discuss the pros and cons of this
phenomenon in depth.
ADVATAGES To begin with, depending too much on mass media may not totally free from drawbacks. The
primary problem is that lacking some essential skills such as communication and problem
solving may result from this tendency. To be more precise, when addicted to social media,
people may lose their interaction with the genuine world. As the certain result, people may have
difficulties in expressing their mind and emotion. On the other hand, this trend may also lead to
the meaningless life in the long run. In other world, hardly can people realize the true meaning of
their life without life experiences that virtual world cannot bring to them. Hence, although social
media is the great innovation with many convenience but it cannot replace the role of face-to-
face conversation
DISADVATAGE It is, however, evident that the mass media also brings enormouse benefits for us if used
properly. Firstly, media plays the vital role in helping people keep up with the wheel of life. In
fact, thanks to technological innovations as social media, people may not get into trouble with
the unceasing change in the fast changing world. Besides, social media has the ability to bridge
the gap between people. To be more specific, with these innovations, people can communicate
with each other in easier ways regardless of distance so that they can mantain long distance
relationship. Therefore, if using social media with adequate awareness, people can receive many
advantages from them.
CONCLUSION To sum up, all things contain within them both merits as well as drawbacks and social media is
not the exception but it seems that the disadvantages may far outweigh its advantages. No matter
what innovations appear, they cannot change the traditional method people use to communicate
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to each other. 
Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also had negative effects.Do the disadvantages of
having mobile phones outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your own knowledge and experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Introduction Nowadays, the development of mobile telephones gives people many advantages. However, there are a
lot of disadvantages brought when people use mobile phones. In this essay, I am going to examine
this question from both points of view and then give my opinion on the matter.
Positive On the one hand, there are several positive effects on using mobile phones. Firstly, the cutting-edge
technology like mobile phones can offer opportunities for people to be better educated. This is because
that people are able to study online subjects on websites in their domestic or another country. Besides,
documents can be found easily through the mobile phone connected the Internet. Secondly, some
functions on mobile phones can assist people to relax. People can listen to music or watch videos
whenever they desire.
Negative On the other hand, this idea has a few fundamental drawbacks. One problem is that the
concentration can be decreased. For example, the person who is working or studying cannot focus on
what he is doing if his phone bell ring many times. Another issue is that having mobile phones can
make people lonelier. This is due to that most people contact with each other through their phone.
Hence, the face-to-face communication is not usually used. In addition to this, many children and
teenagers who are addicted game online stay at their home regularly instead of meeting or going out
with their friends.
Conclusion In conclusion, having mobile phones does not only bring convenience but also negative influences.
Overall, I believe that there is a balance in benefits and drawbacks when people use mobile phones.
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THỰC HÀNH DẠNG DISCUSSIVE ESSAY

Introduction The world has witnessed a significant growth of mobile phones in the recent years, which changed the
way people contact remarkably. However, there has been much debate about the positive and negative
impacts of mobile phones on users. It seems to me that mobile phones have greatly affected its users
in both sides and this essay will grant us a chance to discuss both sides in detail.

Positve On the one hand, mobile phones increase the speed of communication, which allows people to get
connected, relax and do business with ease. As a result, cell phones users are able to keep in touch
with their relatives and friends at a great distance. Moreover, the significant development of
smartphones and its applications provide users with a plethora of entertainment such as, gaming,
surfing the Internet, along with listening to music. Last but not least, a further advantage of using
mobile phones in business is that its office application (Microsoft Office) helps employees do their
business more effectively and professionally

Negative On the other hand, it is acknowledged that mobile phones have numerous negative effects on users.
From a medical point of view, frequent exposure to radiation created by high frequency could be
harmful to human’s health, or particularly increase the risk of cancer. Also, it is believed that if
children spent more time on their phones to chat or play games rather than study, their performance at
school would drop notably. Finally, although mobile phones increase the speed of communication, the
lack of face to face communication due to the excessive use of mobile phones can worsen certain
relationships.

Conclusion In conclusion, mobile phones bring both pros and cons for the users. It is my belief that every phone
user should use them wisely to take full advantages.

THỰC HÀNH VIẾT BÀI LUẬN PROBLEM-SOLUTION


The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed but it has also created problems that did
not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you
suggest?

INTRODUTION The enormous growth in the use of the internet over the last decade has led to radical changes to
the way that people consume and share information. Although serious problems have arisen as
a result of this, there are some effective solutions
PROBLEMS
One of the first hoac main problems of the internet is the ease with which children can

access potentially dangerous sites. For example, pornography sites are easily accessible to

them because they can register with a site and claim to be an adult. There is no doubt that this

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affects their thoughts and development, which is a negative impact for the children and for

society. Another major problem is the growth of online fraud and hacking. These days, there

are constant news stories about government and company websites that have been hacked,

resulting in sensitive information falling into the hands of criminals.


SOLUTIONS
It is important that actions are taken to combat these problems. Government should

ensure that adequate legislation and controls are in place that will prevent young people from

accessing dangerous sites, such as requiring more than simply confirming that you are an adult

to view a site. In addition, parents also have a part to play. They need to closely monitor the

activities of their children and restrict their access to certain sites, which can now be done

through various computer programs. Finally, companies must also improve their onsite its

security systems to make fraud and hacking much more difficult by undertaking thorough

reviews of their current systems for weaknesses.


CONCLUSION
In conclusion, the internet is an amazing technological innovation that has transformed
people's lives, but not without negative impacts. However, with the right actions by
individuals, governments and businesses, it can be made a safe place for everyone.
Traffic Problems
 Traffic congestion is caused by commuters travelling to work;
 Most people live in the suburbs outside city center;
 Commuters tend to travel at the same time of day;
 They tend to travel alone;
 Cars and road space are not used efficiently;
 This causes traffic jams during the rush hour.
Traffic Solutions
 In order to reduce traffic we should change our working habits;
 The internet can now be used to connect people;
 More people could work from home;
 Meetings can be held as video conferences;
 Workers could be given flexible timetables;
 Another solution would be to tax drivers;
 Workers should share their cars and travel together;
 In London, for example, there is a congestion charge;
 This helps to raise money for better public transport;
 Public transport needs to be reliable and efficient.
THỰC HÀNH VIẾT BÀI LUẬN CAUSE-SOLUTION
In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some
possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
The divorce rate is a problem, but it can be solved.
OUTLINE YOUR WRITING
Introduction
S Breakdown of the extended
Past – family help with
child care
Past – family help with
expenses
Now – people don’t
have this
Stress in the workplace
Less time with family
Feel tired and irritable

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Family life is unhappy

Solution:Ways to solve this


problem
Live closer to extended
Find a less demanding
job

Conclusion

SAMPLE
Introduction The divorce rate is increasing in many places. I believe that the breakdown
of the extended family and the stresses of work are the major causes of this
situation. Fortunately, although these issues have led to a rise in the
divorce rate, there are ways we can solve this problem.
Breakdown of the extended The biggest cause of divorce is the breakdown of the extended family. In
the past, a family was made up of parents, grandparents, children, and
Past – family help with child
other relatives. This meant that there was always somebody available to
care
help with child care. It also meant that expenses could be shared in times
Past – family help with expenses of financial difficulty. These days, people often don't have this kind of
support from their families, and this puts more stress on a marriage. Stress
Now – people don’t have this in the workplace is another cause of divorce. These days, people are often
Stress in the workplace expected to work longer hours than they did in the past. This means they
spend less time at home with their families. It also means that when they
Less time with family are at home, they are tired and probably irritable, too. All of this adds up to
Feel tired and irritable an unhappy family life.

Family life is unhappy


Ways to solve this problem Fortunately, there are things that can be done to solve some of these
problems if people really want to. People can decide to live closer to their
Live closer to extended
extended family. They can invite their elderly parents to live with them or
Find a less demanding job look for a job closer to their relatives' homes. People can also look for less
demanding jobs or decide to have one parent stay at home instead of
working. These things require changing one's lifestyle in some big ways,
but they can lead to a happier marriage and family life.
Conclusion To sum up, there are a lot of demands in modern life that place stress on a
marriage and lead to divorce. However, people can choose to make
changes to their lifestyle that can result in a better, stronger marriage.

THỰC HÀNH VIẾT BÀI LUẬN CAUSE-EFFECT


What are the cause and principle effects of the increase in fast-food consumption in the big cites. ?

This is the pattern This is how the sample outline looks

INTRODUCTION
Introduction of general topic -Background of traditional diet and recent changes in big cities
Specific areas to be covered in this essay -This essay will cover first causes, then effects.

CAUSES Causes of increased fast food consumption


Cause 1 Changes in commercial practice
Cause 2  Power of advertising
 Loss of local shops
Changes in lifestyles

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 Longer working hours
 Two working parents

EFFECTS Effects of increased fast-food consumption


Effect 1 Vitamin deficiencies
Effect 2 a)
Effect 3 b)
Obesity (beo phi)

Loss of food culture

CONCLUSION Increase in fast food consumption generally=negative


(summary of main points and look to future) Possible changes to impove diet in the future.

SAMPLE WRITING

In the past, people in the big cities used to eat healthy, freshly prepared food with their
INTRODUCTION
familes at home Today, however, many people, in particular, young people prefer to eat
Background of
fast food such as hamburgers, fried chicken, or pizza. There are many reasons why this
traditional diet and
change has occurred, but fast food also has some serious effects on individuals and
recent changes in
society.
big cities
CAUSES There are many reasons for the popularity of fast food. One of the main reasons is the
change in lifestyle. In fact, many people in big cities are working long hours, shifts, or
extended school days. They, therefore, don’t have time to find ingredients or prepare good
food. Moreover, women are now starting to work in big cities, and this can result in less
time being available for preparing family meals.. Another factor is advertising. Big
cities are very modern, free market, with all forms of media, such as the Internet and
satellite televison, and people like to try new products and different kinds of fast food.

EFFECTS On the other hand, / However, this change in diet can have some serious effects. One
effect is on health. There is a fact that many individuals in big cities are becoming obese.
That is, these people will be less productive and have conditions, such as heart disease and
diabetes. A clear illustration is that children and adults rarely eat together now, and thus
get less opportunity to talk. A further impact is economic. Although fast food is not very
expensive, it is more expensive than cooking properly for yourself. In addition to this,
many of the fast food companies are franchisees of foreign cooperations, so profits leave
the country.

CONCLUSION In conclusion, fast food, although it is convenient and a tasty addition to a diet, can have
serious health and social effects. People should learn to choose fast food carefully and
remember the pleasure of eating good food in good company.

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