An Africa Thunderstorm
An Africa Thunderstorm
By: David Rubadiri
Pregnant clouds
Ride stately on its back,
Gathering to perch on hills
Like sinister dark wings;
The wind whistles by
And trees bend to let it pass.
In the village
Screams of delighted children,
Toss and turn
In the din of the whirling wind,
Women,
Babies clinging on their backs
Dart about
In and out
Madly;
The wind whistles by
Whilst trees bend to let it pass.
An African thunderstorm is a poem that deals with the theme man versus
nature and it is centered in a village in Africa. The poem is about a harsh
impending storm that is coming to strike the village. The children scream in
delight and due their innocence are completely unaware of the dangers of the
storm whereas their mothers dart with their children to find safety. The might
winds pass through the village even making nature bow to its power until the
storm hits.
Mood: Chaotic,
Tone: Somber
Repetition
"trees bend to let it pass" emphasizes on how powerful the wind was that
even nature itself bowed to it
Personification
"clouds came hurrying with the wind" - showing how fast the wind is moving
as a person moves if they are late
Simile
"here and there like a plague of locusts" comparing the wind to plague of
locusts that travel in groups and come all at once like the how the wind came
all at once in to the village.
Contrast
Imagery
"clothes wave like tattered flags flying off to expose dangling breasts"
Once Upon a Time
A parent is talking to his/her’s son and telling him how things used to be. The
parent tells the son that people used to be sincere, but are now superficial and
seek only to take from others. The persona tells the child that he/she has
learnt to be just like these people, but does not want to be like that anymore.
The parent wants to be as sincere as the son.
Tone: The tone of the poem is sad. The poet’s response to his nostalgia is
sadness.
Repetition
This phrase is repeated at the beginning and the end of the poem. This usually
signals the beginning of a fairy tale. Therefore, it is implied that the persona is
nostalgic about the past.
Metaphor
The people’s eyes are as cold as ice. This means that there is no warmth or
real feeling in the words that they say, or how they behave. This metaphor
literally allows you to visualize a block of ice, cold and unwelcoming.
Simile
Stanza 4, lines 20-21 emphasizes the constant changes in the persona’s face.
If you think of how often a woman changes her dress, then that is how often
the persona adjusts his/her’s personality to suit an audience. The list of faces
that follow this line emphasizes this point.
Stanza 6, lines 38-40 compares the persona’s laugh to a snakes. When you
think of a snake, words such as sneaky and deceitful come to mind. Therefore,
the implication is that the persona is fake, just like the people he/she despises.
BIRDSHOOTING SEASON
Birdshooting Season is a free verse poem seen through the eyes of a child. The
child takes the readers in a house where the women work contentless to
prepare for the men to Hunter in the morning while the men drink. In the
dawn the children and women stand on the doorstep of the house watching
the men leave, the little boys longing to grow up become hunters like their
fathers and the girls long for the birds to be free.
Metaphor
"the men make marriages with their guns" - hunting substitute their wives,
the women are displaced for their guns.
Contrast
"all night long contentless women stir their brews." the women prepare the
food for the men to hunt while the men drink "tonight the men drink white
rum neat" wives the secondary role of preparing the food
Imagery
The persona is travelling in a plane, looking down at San Juan, Puerto Rico, as
the plane descends. He is saying that this island is the wealthiest in the
Caribbean because it has won the jackpot, it has come up lucky. He then points
out that he, and others, had travelled to many Caribbean islands and received
a hint of the flavour of each island through it’s calling card, – its airport – all of
which fail when compared to plush San Juan. As they land, they are instructed
to stay on the plane if their destination is not San Juan. The persona takes
offence and states that America does not want blacks in San Juan, implying
that they might be a disruptive force. He notes the efficiency with which things
flow, enabling them to take to the skies once more. During the ascent, the
persona notes the contrast between the influences of the Caribbean and
America. He likens San-Juan to a broken TV, it looks good on the outside, but
broken on the inside.
Tone: The tone of the poem is slightly bitter, which is fueled by the sarcastic
atmosphere.
Simile
Lines 7-8: San Juan’s glitter is compared to a maverick’s gold ring. The word
maverick implies non-conformist, an individualist. This implies that San Juan,
Puerto Rico is in the Caribbean, but not a part of the Caribbean. It belongs to
America.
Lines 10-11: Airports are compared to calling cards. This means that, like a
calling card, the quality of the airport gives you an idea of the island’s
economic status. The airport is also compared to a cultural fingerprint. A
fingerprint is an individual thing, therefore the airport gives the traveler an
idea of the island’s cultural landscape.
Line 39: The road is compared to twisted wires. This means that the roads,
from above, look both plentiful and curvy. This does not carry a positive
connotation, but implies confusion.
Contrast
The contrast in this poem is found in stanza 5. The American cars etc, against
the pushcarts. The American culture versus the Puerto Rican culture.
Composed upon Westminster Bridge
The first eight lines present a view of the city as it wears the sunlit morning
like a garment and its edifices glitter beneath the sky. The last six lines then
boldly declare that this man-made "formation" is just as beautiful in the
sunlight as any natural formation, such as a valley or hill. Moreover, it is just
as calming to the observer, for even the houses seem to sleep, like the people
in them.
Imagery
Simile
Personification
'The beauty of the morning', 'The river glideth at its own sweet will', 'The very
houses seem asleep'
Contrast
Metaphor
lines 1-2The persona compares her experience over a five week period with
boxes that she uses to pack her belongings in.
The Woman Speaks To The Man Who Employed
Her Son
By: Lorna Goodison
The persona in this poem is telling the story of a mother who loved her son.
The mother became aware of the child’s presence when she experienced
morning sickness. She placed all her hopes in the child and raised him as a
single parent because his father was indifferent to the child’s existence. The
mother had set no barriers on what the child could become, but is told that he
has an employer who values him so much that he is given his own submarine
gun. The son tells his mother that his employer is like a father to him, but the
mother wonders at the father figure who purposefully endangers his child.
She prepares for her son’s death by going downtown to buy funeral apparel.
The mother feels powerless, so she prays for her child and says protective
psalms for him. On the other hand, she reads psalms of retribution for the
employer and weeps for her son. Her situation does not look good and is
likened to a partner system in which she draws both the first and the last
hand.
Simile
Lines 1-2: The persona emphasizes that the mother placed all her hopes in
her son. When you are poor, generally, you have no prospects, you only dream
and hope. Therefore, the persona uses this metaphor to emphasize the
mother’s dependence on her son’s success.
Sarcasm
The persona appears to praise the child’s father by referring to him as ‘fair-
minded’. She is, however, chastising him for not only ignoring his son, but all
of his other children.
Irony
The son innocently tells his mother that his employer values him so much that
he gave him a whole submachine gun for himself. The irony in this situation is
that if you really care about someone, you do NOT give them a gun due to the
negative results that are bound to occur.
It is the Constant Image of your Face
By : Dennis Brutus
The persona reflects on the image of someone he cares for. This love interest
accused him, with their eyes, of breaking their heart. The persona admits that
both of them (he and the love interest) can make no excuses for his behaviour
because the love interest does not take precedence over his land, or country.
Despite this fact, the persona begs for mercy, pleading guilty for being
seduced by his love interest’s beauty. This person protects him dearly and he
admits that, as a result of this, he has committed treason against his country.
He hopes that his country, his other dearest love, will pardon him because he
loves both his country and his love interest.
Personification
Lines 4, 6-7: The love interest’s eyes constantly accuses and convicts the
persona. This device highlights the extent to which the persona has hurt this
person.
Lines 18-20: The persona hopes that his country, his other dearest love, will
forgive him for the treasonous act of loving another. This highlights the
patriotism that defines the persona’s relationship to his country.
Oxymoron
The term heart’s-treachery implies that the heart, something so vital and
indicative of love, has committed a terrible crime. It highlights the heartbreak
that the persona has caused his love interest.
God's Grandeur
And wears man's smudge and shares man's smell: the soil
And though the last lights off the black West went
World broods with warm breast and with ah! bright wings.
Summary
Metaphor
Simile
Line 2: “flame out, like shining from shook foil”; the world is temporary and
will hence wear out like a flame.
Line 3-4: “it gathers to a greatness, like the ooze of oil”; it implies to the
temporary nature of earth, where once it reaches its peak will definitely fall.
Personification
Line 7: earth has been personified by the use of the word “wear”.
A Stone's Throw
By : Elma Mitchell
We shouted out
'We've got her! Here she is!
It's her all right '.
We caught her.
There she was -
We walked away
Still holding stones
That we may throw
Another day
Given the urge.
Summary
This poem is about men who caught a prostitute and since prostitution is a sin
their punishmentfor her was stoning. When they caught her, they roughed her
up but still had their ownintentions. They taught they weren’t doing anything
wrong as it wasn’t the first time she’d feltmen’s hands greedy over her body.
The prostitute who was Mary Magdalene was dead scared because she was
assaulted. She knew that her fate had in store for her.But then, Jesus squatted
down to her level and wrote something in the dust and looked at her. The men
couldn’t understand what he wrote until he turned to them. They realized
their mistake and walked away; still holding their stones waiting to use day
another day given the urge to do so.
Mood: reverent
Sarcasm
The persona is making the point that the lady was in fact NOT decent looking.
Personification
This device is particularly effective because the word ‘kisses’ is used. Kiss
implies something pleasant, but it is actually utilized to emphasize something
painful that has happened to the lady; she was stoned.
Contrast
Lines 13-15: These lines show that the men who were ‘holding stones’ believe
they are more morally upright than the other men with whom the woman
associates.
Irony
One would think that men with ‘virtuous’ hands would have only pure
thoughts, but these men intend to stone the woman , who seems utterly
defenseless. Also, images of cruelty are used, such as ‘bruised’, ‘kisses of
stone’, ‘battery’ and ‘frigid rape’.
Test Match Sabina Park
By: Stewart Brown
The persona, a white male, proudly enters Sabina Park to watch a cricket
match between England and the West Indies. The persona notices that the
game is slow and that the crowd is not reacting well. He is, in fact, initially
shocked that there is a crowd at all because this is usually not the case at
Lords. By lunch, England is sixty eight for none, and the crowd gets abusive.
They even state that maybe they should borrow Lawrence Rowe. The persona
tries to explain the reason behind the slow pace of the British side, but fails to
convince even himself. His embarrassment at England’s performance has
hieventually skulking out of the venue.
Tone: The tone of the poem is one of frustration (West Indian) and
embarrassment (English man).
RHETORICAL QUESTION
Stanza 2, lines 6-7: This question reveals that, despite the fact that cricket is a
popular sport in England, the venues for the matches are not crowded. This
question could also point to the fact that Sabina Park was very crowded.
Stanza 3, line 10: This question represents the general frustration of the West
Indians in the crowd. They are annoyed that the cricket match is progressing
so slowly.
Stanza 4, lines 16-18: These questions imply that the West Indian crowd’s
level of frustration has escalated.
ALLUSION
The allusion to Lawrence Rowe, a very colourful and successful West Indian
cricketer, emphasizes the fact that the match is slow and boring.
SARCASM
The persona’s lecturer gave him an assignment to write a page that reflects
‘him’, or his character. The persona wonders if this is a simple task, and begins
to think about his life. Things like his age, place of birth, race and place of
residence. Based on these musings, he surmises that he is confused due to his
youth. He guesses that he is what he feels, sees and hears, which is Harlem,
New York. He continues his musing about what he likes, and concludes that he
likes the same things that people of other races like. On this basis, he
questions whether or not his page will be influenced by race. He concludes
that it will not be white. He admits that his instructor, as well as the fact that
this instructor is white, will have some influence on his page. He states that
they both influence each other, that is what being American is about. He
believes that both of them might not want to influence each other, but it
cannot be helped. He concludes that both of them will learn from each other,
despite the fact that the instructor has the advantage of being older, white and
‘more free’. All of these musings and conclusions become his page for English
B.
Themes: Racism, places
RHETORICAL QUESTION
Stanza 2, line 6: The persona ponders the ease of what he is asked to do. This
question, in turn, actually highlights the difficult nature of the task.
Stanza 4, line 32: The persona is wondering whether his race will affect what
he writes on the page. This is despite the fact that he concludes that race does
not hinder people, in general, liking the same things.
REPETITION
This repetition emphasizes the profound impact that Harlem, New York,
has had on the personality of the persona.
Dreaming black boy
By: James Berry
The poem is about a black boy who wishes that he could have regular things in
life. Things such as a congratulatory hug, to be educated to the highest level
and to travel without harassment. The persona yearns to stop fighting for the
basic right to be successful and to rise above societal expectations.
Mood: sadness
REPETITION
The constant repetition of the phrase ‘I wish’ points to a yearning, a
desperation even, for the basic things that life has to offer. The repetition gives
credence to the idea that the persona might believe that his wishes are
actually dreams that might not come true.
ALLUSION
Stanza 1, lines 6 and 7, alludes to slavery, the state of lacking control over
one’s own life and destiny. The fact that reference is made to this hints to how
the persona feels about his life. He does not feel as if he has control over it.
Stanza 4, lines 22 to 25, alludes to the klu klux klan. Burning lights refers to
the burning of crosses and the pyjamas alludes to their white outfits that look
like pyjamas. The persona wants them to leave him alone, find something else
to do other than make his life difficult by contributing to his wishes remaining
in the realm of the dreams.
My Parents
By: Stephen spender
The poem is about the desire to belong and fit in. though the persona partly
blames his parents as the title suggests, he in fact laments the fact that he does
not fit in with the other boys. on one hand he hates the bullies for their cruelty
but also envies their fitness and physique.
Themes: childhood, isolation, interaction between the boys and poet, poet's
attitude towards the boys
Imagery
Imagery is used to make readers perceive things involving their five senses.
For example, “Who threw words like stones and wore torn clothes”; “Their
jerking hands and their knees tight on my arms” and “Their thighs showed
through rags they ran in the street.”
Simile
Contrast
The verbs applied to the lower class children are full of action (‘threw’, ‘ran’,
‘climbed’, ‘tripped’, ‘sprang’) while the narrator’s verbs are passive an weak
(‘feared’, ‘longed’ and ‘pretending’)
Dulce et Decorum Est
By: Wilfred Owen
Wilfred Owen, the poet, tells of his first hand experience in war. He tells the
tale of tired and wounded soldiers walking through dirt and sludge. Suddenly,
there is a warning about gas, which the soldiers hurriedly and awkwardly
heed by donning their helmets. Unfortunately, one soldier is too late in
donning the helmet and his companions watch him ‘drowning’ in the gas. The
unfortunate soldier was thrown in the back of a wagon, where it is implied
that he was left to die. The persona points out that if you (the reader/ listener)
could have witnessed these events, then you would not tell children the old
lie: dulce et decorum est pro patria mori (It is sweet and honourable to die for
one’s country).
Mood: reflective
SIMILE
Stanza 1, line 1: This simile introduces the exhaustion of the soldiers. Stanza 1,
line 2: This emphasizes not only the tiredness of the soldiers, but the fact that
they might be sick as well.
Stanza 2, line 19: This device gives a visual image of how the soldier physically
reacted to the gas. Floundering implies flopping about, therefore, the soldier
was flopping about violently. We know it was violent because fire and lime
illicit excruciating pain.
Stanza 4, line 39: This device gives a visual image of the expression on the
soldier’s face. This is a particularly grotesque image that highlights the soldier
in the throes of death.
Stanza 4, line 39: Cancer is a horrible disease that takes many lives on a daily
basis. Therefore, to compare this dying soldiers face to this disease is to
emphasize the agony that the soldier was going through, which was reflected
on his face.
Stanza 4, lines 39-40: This is another graphic comparison that compares the
soldier’s face to incurable sores. ‘Sores’ is a disgusting visual image of
degradation which, in turn, highlights the soldier in the throes of death.
ALLITERATION
Stanza 1, line 7: This device points to the level of fatigue that the soldiers were
undergoing. Stanza 1, lines 7-9: This highlights not only the fatigue that the
soldiers were feeling, but the fact that they were injured as well. Stanza 4,
lines 29-30: This device highlights a visually graphic death mask. The soldier
is in the throes of impending death.
This is the Dark Time, My Love
The persona speaks to someone that he cares for. He tells this person that this
is the dark time, which is, in essence, a time of sadness. It is implied, by certain
key terms; such as ‘dark metal’, that it is a time of war. The persona warns his
‘love’ that it is a dark, sad time.
REPETITION
Stanza 1, line 1 & stanza 2, line 7: The repetition of this phrase highlights that
there is something seriously amiss. The persona is telling his ‘love’ that this is
a sad and terrible time.
ALLITERATION
This device literally draws the reader’s’ visual attention to the sentence. The
sentence implies that everything that is good and positive is hidden away, or
gone. This alliteration sets a sad tone at the very beginning of this poem.
PERSONIFICATION
This device emphasizes the sad tone of the poem. This is the case because
flowers are usually associated with feelings of happiness and cheerfulness.
Therefore, if the flowers – ambassadors of joy – are sad, then it highlights
how really sad the times have become.
METAPHOR
The contrast in this device is startling. The terms ‘festival’ and ‘carnival’ not
only describes fun and festivity, but also a large amount of each. Both words
are associated with huge crowds. This emphasizes how terrible the times have
become because guns and misery are plentiful.
RHETORICAL QUESTION
Stanza 3, line 13: This device informs the reader/ audience that a threat
exists and that it comes in the dark of night.
Stanza 3, lines 14 – 15: It is implied that the threat is a soldier through the
term ‘boot of steel’. The ‘slender grass’ is the innocent youth who is cut down
and trampled by these ‘boots of steel’. The fact that we are given this
information through the use of rhetorical question adds mystery and intrigue
to the poem.
Ol' Higue
By: Mark McWatt
In this poem, the Ol’ Higue / soucouyant tells of her frustration with her
lifestyle. She does not like the fact that she sometimes has to parade around,
in the form of a fireball, without her skin at night. She explains that she has to
do this in order to scare people, as well as to acquire baby blood. She explains
that she would rather acquire this blood via cooked food, like every-one else.
Her worst complaint is the pain of salt, as well as having to count rice grains.
She exhibits some regret for her lifestyle but implies that she cannot resist a
baby’s smell, as well as it’s pure blood. The ‘newness’ of the baby tempts the
Ol’ Higue, and she cannot resist because she is an old woman who fears death,
which can only be avoided by consuming the baby’s blood. She affirms her
usefulness in the scheme of things, however, by claiming that she provides
mothers with a name for their fears (this being the death of a child), as well as
some-one to blame when the evil that they wish for their child, in moments of
tired frustration, is realized. She implies that she will never die, so long as
women keep having babies.
Mood: reflective.
Theme: Supernatural
SIMILE
Cane-fire has a very distinct quality. It burns very quickly and its presence is
felt through it’s pungent smell. Therefore, when the Ol’ Higue compares
herself to cane fire in her fireball state, it implies that she uses a lot of energy
quickly, and is very visible.
RHETORICAL QUESTION
Stanza 1,line 4: This rhetorical question highlights the scant regard that the
Higue has for the average person. She is thoroughly annoyed that she has to
literally waste her energy on them.
Stanza 1, line 5: This highlights the fact that, again, she is annoyed that she
has to expend so much energy to obtain a few drops of baby blood.
Stanza 1, lines 6-8: The Ol’ Higue is emphasizing the fact that regular people
ingest blood too, just in a more palatable manner. She would not mind if she
could ingest it in the same manner as well.
Stanza 3, lines 22-23: At this point the Ol’ Higue is making excuses for her
presence, claiming that she serves an actual purpose in the scheme of life. If a
child dies of unknown causes, she can be scapegoated for it.
Stanza 3, lines 24-25: ‘The murder inside your head’ refers to the moments,
when out of pure frustration and tiredness, a mother might wish ill on her
child. The Ol’ Higue is implying that, again, she can be used as a scapegoat if
something unfortunate happens to the child. The mother is relieved of bearing
the burden of guilt.
REPETITION
The repetition of the word ‘soft’ emphasizes the fact that the call of the child’s
blood has captured and beguiled the Ol’ Higue’. She implies that she cannot
resist that call.
Mirror
The mirror first describes itself as “silver and exact.” It forms no judgments,
instead merely swallowing what it sees and reflecting that image back without
any alteration. The mirror is not cruel, “only truthful.” It considers itself a
four-cornered eye of a god, which sees everything for what it is.
Most of the time, the mirror looks across the empty room and meditates on
the pink speckled wall across from it. It has looked at that wall for so long that
it describes the wall as “part of my heart.” The image of the wall is interrupted
only by people who enter to look at themselves and the darkness that comes
with night.
The mirror imagines itself as a lake. A woman looks into it, trying to discern
who she really is by gazing at her reflection. Sometimes, the woman prefers to
look at herself in candlelight or moonlight, but these are “liars” because they
mask her true appearance. Only the mirror (existing here as lake) gives her a
faithful representation of herself.
Because of this honesty, the woman cries and wrings her hands. Nevertheless,
she cannot refrain from visiting the mirror over and over again, every
morning. Over the years, the woman has “drowned a young girl” in the mirror,
and now sees in her reflection an old woman growing older by the day. This
old woman rises toward her out of the mirror like “a terrible fish.”
Tone: Melancholic
Mood: Sadness
Metaphor
In the first stanza the mirror declares:
I am not cruel, only truthful,
The eye of a little god, four-cornered.
Simile
The final few words (like a terrible fish) constitute a simile.
South
by Kamau Braithwaite
But today I recapture the islands
bright beaches: blue mist from the ocean
rolling into the fishermen's houses.
By these shores I was born: sound of the sea
came in at my window, life heaved and breathed in me then
with the strength of that turbulent soil.
Stanza 1
The poem begins with a description of a child crying. However, his cries seem
harsh and fierce “Your laughter metamorphosed into howl”. This also
suggests that the child is normally a happy one and something happened to
have changed his happiness. The last line in the stanza informs us that the
reason why the child is crying is because he has been beaten “the quick slap
struck”. The little boy is also staring at the parent hoping that he might be
feeling guilty for hitting him. This might mean that the child is trying to play
on the parent’s emotion “you stand there angling for a moment’s hint”.
Stanza 2
It is important to note that the stanza is giving the point of view of the parent.
The parent is imagining that the child is demonizing him for hitting him “The
ogre towers above you, that grim giant,// empty of feeling a colossal
cruel”. From this, we can understand that the parent thinks that the child
believes that he is cruel and evil for hitting him and therefore is thinking of
ways to overcome or get away from the parent.
Stanza 3
Poet makes it clear that the father loves his son. However, he is slapping him
for is own good. He also suggests that the father is hurt by the son’s tears and
would do anything to make him stop crying. “This fierce man longs to lift
you//……” Yet, the lesson must be taught.
Stanza 4
Maybe this stanza suggests that no matter that there are often important
behaviour or lessons children must learnt by children.
The ogre towers above you, that grim giant, Empty of feeling, a colossal cruel,
Soon victim of the tale’s conclusion, dead At last. You hate him, you imagine
Chopping clean the tree he’s scrambling down Or plotting deeper pits to trap
him in.
Imagery
Your mouth contorting in brief spite and Hurt, your laughter metamorphosed
into howls, Your frame so recently relaxed now tight With three-year-old
frustration, your bright eyes Swimming tears, splashing your bare feet, You
stand there angling for a moment’s hint Of guilt or sorrow for the quick slap
struck.