Baby, You’re a Firework: Making Meaning through Metaphor (and Simile) in Songwriting

Writing the Community Lesson Plan

Teaching Artist: Lisa O’Neill

Theme: Breaking down metaphor and simile as tools for meaning-making in poetry and song
lyrics

Pedagogical Goals:
• Students look at songs they already know as a way to locate metaphors
• Learn about metaphor and simile
• Create their own metaphors and similes and work their way toward a song chorus or
verse.

Description: Some of the most effective literary devices used in song lyrics are metaphors and
similes. Songs are hotbeds of comparison. That’s how we make sense of complicated emotional
experiences like those outlined in songs.

Main Idea Notes Time

Introduce Concept For this lesson, I played one of my songs that use metaphors 10
of cages and walls to talk about someone who is emotionally
shut off or unable to engage honestly. Talked about why I did
that and what I was trying to get at. I also passed out copies
of lyrics and invited them to ask questions

Discuss Metaphors/ Look at definitions and examples from songs and talk 10
Similes together about why the writer chose that comparison
(handout: posted below)

Example I passed out copies of Katy Perry’s “Firework” (a song I 10

thought they would likely be familiar with)

After listening to the song, we broke down some of the

metaphors in it and talked about what she was trying to say.
For example: What does she mean when she says “there’s
still a spark in you?” What do we think of when we think of
sparks (enthusiasm, light, energy, etc.)? What about this being
paired with the word “still”? Maybe its been a hard time but
she’s trying to say you still have light inside you.

I also used this as an opportunity to talk about song structure:

Verse, Pre-Chorus, Chorus, Bridge and after we talked about
the characteristics of each part of a song, I asked them to
identify these pieces in “Firework”

We also identified the rhyme scheme in sections of the song.

Write I used another prompt I’ve used for poetry classes to get 10-15
students started with metaphors and similes

My heart is like
(3 lines)

My eyes are like

(3 lines)

My soul is like
(3 lines)

In pairs, see if you can write a chorus

Putting it together: I actually ended up doing this in the next class because of time 20
Collaborative writing constraints.

Although students had some metaphors and similes from the

last class, some were having a hard time coming up with
ideas so I did an exercise called: 5 “Things” Song Prompts (in
notes below)

I had them list, without thinking too hard, five things in a

bunch of categories.

Once students had some metaphors down, I had us

experiment with turning them into choruses and verses on the
board.

I gave them this form

My heart is like a __________
Always
My heart is like a __________
Always

Here is one we came up with:

My heart is like a broken vase

Always spinning water on the ground
My heart is a hurricane
Always spinning me around
Putting all the pieces After we wrote this together, I played some chords on my 5 mins
together guitar and put it to a melody as an example and students were
really impressed with how quickly you can shift lines to lyrics
to a melody.

We also made up a silly song about missing socks. And one

that was less silly where the socks really represented missing a
person (this was when we were exploring personification as
well).

Handout 1:

Metaphor: compare two dissimilar things for effect without using “like” or “as”

Simile: compare two dissimilar things for effect using “like” or “as”

Examples:

'Wind Beneath My Wings” sung by Bette Midler

''I can fly higher than an eagle.''

''You are the wind beneath my wings.''

''Love is a battlefield,” by Pat Benatar

''You ain't nothin' but a hound dog,” by Jerry Leiber and Mike Stolle

“Can’t Stop The Feelin” by Justin R. Timberlake / Martin Karl Sandberg / Johan Karl Schuster
''I've got that sunshine in my pocket”

“How Far I’ll Go,” Moana

“The line where the sky meets the sea? It calls me

And no one knows, how far it goes
If the wind in my sail on the sea stays behind me
One day I'll know, how far I'll go”

“Waterfalls” by TLC

“Don't go chasing waterfalls

Please stick to the rivers and the lakes that you're used to
I know that you're gonna have it your way or nothing at all
But I think you're moving too fast”

“Every Rose has Its Thorn,” by Poison

Every rose has its thorn,
Just like every night has it’s dawn,
Just like every cowboy sings his sad, sad song,
Every rose has its thorn

Notorious BIG
“Climb the Ladder to Success, Escalator Style”

“Firework” Katy Perry

“You just gotta ignite the light

And let it shine
Just own the night
Like the Fourth of July
'Cause baby you're a firework
Come on show 'em what your worth
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh!"
As you shoot across the sky”

Personification: giving human characteristics to something nonhuman, or the representation

of an abstract quality in human form.

Examples:

from “Careless Whisper,” George Michael:

“I’m never gonna dance again

Guilty feet have got no rhythm”

from “Concrete Jungle” by Bob Marley:

“No sun will shine in my day today

The high yellow moon won’t come out to play
I said darkness has covered my light,
And has changed my day into night, yeah.”

from “New York, New York,” Frank Sinatra

“These vagabond shoes

Are longing to stray
Right through the very heart of it
New York, New York
I want to wake up in a city
That doesn’t sleep,”

Handout 2:

Firework
Katy Perry

Do you ever feel like a plastic bag

Drifting thought the wind
Wanting to start again

Do you ever feel, feel so paper thin

Like a house of cards
One blow from caving in

Do you ever feel already buried deep

Six feet under scream
But no one seems to hear a thing

Do you know that there's still a chance for you

'Cause there's a spark in you

You just gotta ignite the light

And let it shine
Just own the night
Like the Fourth of July

'Cause baby you're a firework

Come on show 'em what your worth
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh!"
As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby you're a firework

Come on let your colors burst
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh!"
You're gonna leave 'em fallin' down down down

You don't have to feel like a waste of space

You're original, cannot be replaced
If you only knew what the future holds
After a hurricane comes a rainbow

Maybe a reason why all the doors are closed

So you can open one that leads you to the perfect road
Like a lightning bolt, your heart will glow
And when it's time, you'll know
You just gotta ignite the light
And let it shine
Just own the night
Like the Fourth of July

'Cause baby you're a firework

Come on show 'em what your worth
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh!"
As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby you're a firework

Come on let your colors burst
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh!"
You're gonna leave 'em fallin' down down down

Boom, boom, boom

Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon
It's always been inside of you, you, you
And now it's time to let it through

'Cause baby you're a firework

Come on show 'em what your worth
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh!"
As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby you're a firework

Come on let your colors burst
Make 'em go "Oh, oh, oh!"
You're gonna leave 'em fallin' down down down

Boom, boom, boom

Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon
Boom, boom, boom
Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon

Handout 3
5 “Things” Song Prompts
This list of “things” is a great way to start getting your brain working not only for songs, but poems as
well.

Step 1: Simply list, without thinking too hard, five things in each of these categories. If you get stuck on
one category, go to another. We don’t have to have every answer for every list but we are trying to get
ideas to work with.
5 Things In Your Closet 5 Things No One Uses Anymore

1. ________________ 1. ________________
2. ________________ 2. ________________
3. ________________ 3. ________________
4. ________________ 4. ________________
5. ________________ 5. ________________

5 Things You See Every Day 5 Things Your Mom/Dad/Sibling/

Grandma/Grandpa/Auntie Said to You
1. ________________ 1. ________________
2. ________________ 2. ________________
3. ________________ 3. ________________
4. ________________ 4. ________________
5. ______________ 5. ________________

5 Things/Objects That Have Special Meaning For You 5 Things You’ve Lost
1. ________________
2. ________________ 1. ________________
3. ________________ 2. ________________
4. ________________ 3. ________________
5. ________________ 4. ________________
5. ________________

5 Movies That Have Stuck With You 5 Things That Are Green
1. ________________ 1. ________________
2. ________________ 2. ________________
3. ________________ 3. ________________
4. ________________ 4. ________________
5. ________________ 5. ________________

Step 2: Circle the one item from each list that stands out to you.

Step 3: Write a verse or chorus to a song in which you talk about that thing and why it matters. You could
use metaphor/simile or not. You could make it rhyme. You can use repetition
Examples:
Mama said there'll be days like this Some days are diamonds
There'll be days like this, mama said Some days are rocks
(Mama said, mama said) Some doors are open
Mama said there'll be days like this Some roads are blocked
There'll be days like this, my mama
said Sundowns are golden
(Mama said, mama said) Then fade away
And if I never do nothing
(5 things a family member told you) I'm comin' back some day
Luther Dixon, Willie Denson
(5 things you see every day: door/sun/sunset/rocks/roads)
Tom Petty

Look at the stars I’m off to see the wizard in his castle on the hill
Look how they shine for you And I never once have known him and I do not know him still
And everything you do Because his face it is magnificent but you'll never see his hands
Yeah they were all yellow And the way he throws his voice around I don't know where he
stands
(5 things that are yellow)
(5 movies that stick with you)
Coldplay Kris Delmhorst