The line graph shows average annual expenditures on

cellphones and residential phone services from 2001 to

2010

The line graph compares average yearly spending by

Americans on mobile and landline phone services from 2001 to
2010.

It is clear that spending on landline phones fell steadily over the

10-year period, while mobile phone expenditure rose quickly.
The year 2006 marks the point at which expenditure on mobile
services overtook that for residential phone services. 

In 2001, US consumers spent an average of nearly $700 on

residential phone services, compared to only around $200 on
cell phone services.

Over the following five years, average yearly spending on

landlines dropped by nearly $200. By contrast, expenditure on
mobiles rose by approximately $300.

In the year 2006, the average American paid out the same
amount of money on both types of phone service, spending just
over $500 on each. By 2010, expenditure on mobile phones
had reached around $750, while the figure for spending on
residential services had fallen to just over half this amount.
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INTRODUCTION
The line graph compares/illustrates/demonstrates/shows lượng
tiền được chi trên 2 loại hình dịch vụ điện thoại hàng năm từ
2001-2010.
The line graph compares the amount of money which was
spent on two different types of phone services per year
from 2001 to 2010.

(n) the amount = the amount of money = the expenditures :

khoảng tiền.
(v) be spent on = be used for : chi trên, sử dụng cho.
(n) residential phone services = landline services : dịch vụ
điện thoại cố định.
(n) cellphones = mobile phones : điện thoại di động.
(adv) annually = yearly = every year = in a year = per year =
each year : hàng năm.
(adj) annual = yearly : hàng năm, thường niên.
The line graph compares the amount spent on two different
kinds of phone services annually from 2001 to 2010.
 
OVERVIEW
 Xu hướng chung
 It is clear that lượng tiền được chi trên dịch vụ cố định giảm
mạnh over the period shown, while/whereas/whilst/but
lượng tiền chi trên dịch vụ di động tăng đáng kể.
 It is clear that the amount spent on residential phone
services experienced a decrease over the period shown,
whereas cellphone expenditure jump quickly.
 It is clear that có 1 sự giảm mạnh trong lượng tiền được chi
trên dịch vụ cố over the period shown,
while/whereas/whilst/but lượng tiền chi trên dịch vụ di động
tăng đáng kể.
(v-Spast) increased = rose = grew = went up : tăng
(v-Spast) experienced an increase = showed an increase : thể
hiện 1 sự tăng.
(n) an increase = a rise = a jump = a growth = a climb : tăng
(v-Spast) decreased = dropped = went down = fell : giảm.
(v-Spast) experienced a decrease = showed a decrease = show
a drop = experienced a fall. : trải qua 1 sự giảm, có 1 sự giảm.
(adv) strongly = significantly = remarkably = dramatically =
substantially : mạnh.
(adj) strong = significant = remarkable = dramatic =
substantial : mạnh.
It is clear that spending on landline phones fell quickly over the
period shown, while mobile phone expenditure rose quickly.
It is clear that the amount spent on landline phones fell quickly
over the period shown, while mobile phone expenditure rose
quickly.
It is clear that there was a quick fall in the amount spent on
landline phones over the period shown, while mobile phone
expenditure rose quickly.
 So sánh chung.
Overall, nửa chu kỳ đầu cho thấy số liệu cao hơn cho dịch vụ
cố định, while/whereas/whilst/but nửa sau chu kỳ cho thấy số
tiền cao hơn được sử dụng cho loại hình dịch vụ còn lại.
Overall, the figure for residential phone services was
higher for the first half of the period, while the other kinds
of services illustrated more money spent on it for the
second.
Overall, the first half of the period indicated the higher figure for
the landline phone services, but the second illustrated .
Overall, the first half of the period indicated the higher figure for
the landline phone services, but the second illustrated the
higher amount used for the other.
Overall, the figure for the landline phone services was
higher/larger for the first half of the period, whereas the other
kind of services occupied more money spent on it for the
second.
Overall, a larger/higher amount was spent on the landline
phone services for the first half of the period, while the services
of mobile phone occupied more money spent on them for the
second.
 
BODY 1
 Liệt kê giá trị thời điểm đầu tiên - So sánh.
Năm 2001, khoảng dưới 700 dollars được trả cho dịch vụ điện thoại
cố định. The figure(s) for dịch vụ còn lại was/were lower, at khoảng
trên 200 dollars.
(adv) nearly = about = around : khoảng.
(adv) almost = approximately : xấp xỉ.
(adv) just over = just more than = just higher than : khoảng trên.
(adv) just under = just less than = just lower than : khoảng
dưới. 
(v) be spent on = be used for = be paid out for : chi trên, chi trả
cho.
In
2001, nearly under 700 dollars were paid out for
residential phone services. The figures for the other
services were lower, at just more than 200 dollars.
In 2001, just under 700 dollars were paid out for landline phone
services. The figures for the other services were lower, at just
over 200 dollars.
In 2001, there were just under 700 dollars paid out for landline
phone services. The figures for the other services were lower, at
just over 200 dollars.

In 2001, the amount paid out for landline phone services was just
under 700 dollars. The figures for the other services were lower, at
just over 200 dollars.

In 2001, landline phone services occupied just under 700 dollars.

The figures for the other services were lower, at just over 200
dollars.

 Liệt kê giá trị giữa chu kỳ - Xu hướng.

Năm 2006, việc chi tiền trên điện thoại cố định cho thấy sự
giảm đáng kể tới khoảng 550 dollars mỗi năm, while số liệu cho
điện thoại di động tăng mạnh tới cùng giá trị.
(v-Spast) increased = rose = grew = went up : tăng
(v-Spast) experienced an increase = showed an increase : thể
hiện 1 sự tăng.
(n) an increase = a rise = a jump = a growth = a climb : tăng
(v-Spast) decreased = dropped = went down = fell : giảm.
(v-Spast) experienced a decrease = showed a decrease = show
a drop = experienced a fall. : trải qua 1 sự giảm, có 1 sự giảm.
(adv) strongly = significantly = remarkably = dramatically =
substantially : mạnh.
(adj) strong = significant = remarkable = dramatic =
substantial : mạnh.
In 2006, the amount spent for landline phones
demonstrates experienced a fall to around 550 dollars per
year, to which the figures for cell phones showed an
increase to.
In 2006, the amount used for landline phones showed a
dramatic decrease to around 550 dollars every year, to which
the figure for cell phones experienced a significant increase.
In 2006, the amount used for landline phones showed a dramatic
decrease to around 550 dollars every year, while the figure for cell
phones experienced a significant increase to the same around 550
dollars.

 
BODY 2
 Liệt kê giá trị cuối chu kỳ - Xu hướng / So sánh.
Năm 2010, khoảng tiền chi trả hằng năm cho dịch vụ di động là
cao hơn. Khoảng 750 dollars được trả cho dịch vụ này,
compared to khoảng trên 400 dollars cho dịch vụ còn lại.
In 2010, the annual expenditure on landline services was
higher. Approximately 750 dollars were spent on them,
compared to just more than 400 dollars for the other
services.
In 2010, the yearly expenditure on cellphone services was
higher. Approximately 750 dollars were devoted to them,
compared to just over 400 dollars for residential services.