A_PERFECT MURDER ~
Written by
Patrick Smith Kelly
Revisions by
Patrick Smith Kelly
  
1
|
|
Ann Biderman |
2ND_REVISED PRODUCTION DRAFT
October 10, 1997 |
|
|
\2)
 
vee
 
 
october 10, 1997
FADE IN:
4
OMITTED
EXT. BROOKLYN ROOFTOP - DAY :
Facing west, over a swathe of dilapidated warehouses
running all'the way to the river. The spires of lower
Manhattan punctuate the horizon.
ANGLE ON ROOPTOP
A century of undisturbed grime.
DESCENDING THROUGH the skylight, INTO shadowed gloom
INT. LOFT - ANGLE ON PAINTING
A brooding canvas honeycombed with dark compartments
Demonic things, maybe men, peek out from tiny lairs, eyes
bright with mayhem. A WOMAN SIGHS. The sound is deep
and unhurried, like a wave rolling up a beach.
WIDER
As the pattern Gecomposes toward the center, caving in
like bad cell tissue before disappearing down a sucking
vortex of atomized debris. The SIGH REACHES APOGEE,
BREAKS, then WASHES AWAY to dead silence.
WIDER STILL
REVEALING a vast loft, cluttered with a painter's tools
and abandoned machinery. The WOMAN'S VOICE comes through
the gloom, low with pleasure. It mingles with the voice
of a MAN. The talk is wordless and gentle, soft covering
around the involuntary GASPS of a hard fuck.
MOVING TOWARD a square waterfall of sun. A couple is
entwined on a bed under a huge four-pane skylight, the
man on top.
QUICK CUTS
A crummy TV. A good tennis racquet. A bicycle. Running
shoes. Serious travel books. And a wedding ring left on
the nightstand, flawless diamonds flashing.
(CONTINUED)October 10, 1997
CONTINUED: 4
ANGLE ON COUPLE
Pausing, eyes locked, hanging on by their fingernails.
He lowers his mouth, brushing her lips with the most
\proper of kisses. They shudder, then coil decisively,
going over the falls together.
ANGLE ON WOMAN
Arching, falling away, lost to it.
HER POV - ANGLE ON SKYLIGHT :
BACK UP, THROUGH the glass, INTO the blinding silver-
blue.
cE DISSOLVE TO:
INT. UNITED NATIONS - GENERAL ASSEMBLY - DAY “5
 
A speech in progress. The MAN is African. The language
is French.
MAN
:+. to say the global economy has
resulted in economic equality is
premature. A cursory glance at per
capita G.N.P. comparisons shows the
absolute unfairness of imposing
peacekeeping costs on the less
developed nations...
ANGLE ON GLASS TRANSLATION BOOTHS
Suspended above the main floor.
ANGLE ON TRANSLATORS
Converting the French into German, Chinese, Italian,
Malay, English, and so on.
ANGLE ON U.S. DELEGATION (MAIN FLOOR)
Led by Ambassador ANGELA WILLS. Wills is sixty, with
snow-white hair and a ramrod straight back. She has
headphones on, listening to an English version of the
speech.
(CONTINUED)October 10, 1997 3
CONTINUED: ;
ANGLE ON WOMAN SEATED DIRECTLY BEHIND WILLS
EMILY BRADFORD TAYLOR is twenty-nine, with short blond
hair and clean, angular features. She's wearing a
charcoal suit arid following the speech without the
benefit of headphones. The suit almost camouflages the
physique seen in the loft. She rises from her chair and
leans over Wills’ shoulder.
EMILY
Madame Ambassador...
Wills pulls one earpiece away from her head.
EMILY
: This is the same speech he gave in
Geneva three months ago.
WILLS
(turning toward
her; impressed)
You're quite sure? ne
EMILY
(nodding)
Word for word. So I think it's
safe to assume his position on
this issue hasn't changed.
Emily returns to her seat beside a dark-haired woman in
her 20s. RAQUEL MARTINEZ is all curves and energy. She
gives Emily a good-natured jab in the ribs.
RAQUEL
(under her breath)
Show-off.
EXT. MANHATTAN - DAY
Emily and Raquel emerge from the Secretariat, crossing
the fountain court toward First Avenue. It's late
afternoon.
RAQUEL
Let's grab a drink.
EMILY
Can't. I have to change and be at
the Met by eight.
(CONTINUED)6
os
 
AT
 
october 10, 1997 4.
CONTINUED: 6
RAQUEL
Poor baby.
EMILY
Tomorrow definitely.
RAQUEL
You said that yesterday.
EMILY
(stopping, thinking
hard)
Really?
RAQUEL !
And you never used to give a damn
about those parties.
Raquel looks her friend in. the eye.
RAQUEL
So sooner or later you'll tell me
what's up, right?
A bus hauls over at the curb, disgorging passengers.
Emily digs through her purse for a token. We notice the
wedding ring. She looks up at Raquel, backing away,
getting in line.
EMILY
Sooner or later. I promise.
EXT. CENTRAL PARK - DAY aT
A geometric chunk of trees and grass, stretching from
Harlem to the luxury hotels of Central Park South.
EXT. PENTHOUSE. DECK - DAY UG
COMING UP BEHIND a man in a splendid tux. Channels of
grey have just begun to infiltrate his swept-back brown
hair. We GLIDE PAST good shoulders, INTO his face.
ANGLE ON STEVEN TAYLOR
The forehead is high and patrician, the eyes dark and
calibrated. Not a man to be crossed.october. 167 199) 5
STEVEN'S POV: 8
His gaze SWEEPS OVER Central Park, then DOWN the sheer
gorge of Fifth TO the cataract of cars and people. He
watches Emily round the corner, a particle carried along
by rush hour. She enters the building.
INT. PENTHOUSE - DAY 9
mnily enters through the front door. She stops,
surprised. Steven is standing in an art-filled living
room torn from the pages of Architectural Digest. His
eyes have shifted to an easy charisma. The picture of
charm and insouciance. He strolls over, moving like a
well-clad cat.
STEVEN:
How was your day?
She steels herself as he leans in, kissing her on the
mouth.
‘STEVEN
Any progress in saving the world?
EMILY
 
Working on it
(off the tux)
I see you changed your mind about
tonight .
STEVEN
Not really.
He retrieves a sweating silver shaker, pours two martinis
and hands her one.
STEVEN
I told you how much I hated to
miss it.
EMILY
What happ ned to dinner with your -
London people? You made it sound
0 unavoidable. ,
i STEVEN
Tt was. Thank God they missed
their plane...
(raising his glass)
To stolen moments.
Emily forces a smile, touching her glass to his, unable
to mask her gut reaction to the irony of the toast.
(CONTINUED)October 10, 1997
2 CONTINUED:
: STSVEN a
@ (checking his watch)
‘ Emily, shouldn't you be getting
dressed?
He disappears into his study without waiting for a reply.
10 INT. BEDROOM 10
Emily enters. She takes off her suit. She's wearing a
slip underneath. She glances back at the door, then picks
up the phone by the bed. She dials quickly, chewing her
lip.
All INT. STUDY ALL
Steven is standing in the middle of the room, absolutely
motionless, eyes fixed on something on the wall.
STEPHEN'S POV/INSERT OF PHOTO
Stéven and Emily on a fantastic white-sand beach, frozen
forever in a moment of sensual frolic.
 
a INT. BEDROOM a
Steven wanders in. Emily resists the urge to slam the
phone down. He settles into an overstuffed chair and
sips his drink, eyes roving her body in an appreciative,
husbandly sort of way. She waits a beat then hangs up.
STEVEN
Nobody home?
EMILY
The office. I left some Security
Council transcripts out on my
desk, but everyone seems to have
left.
STEVEN
Anything earth-shattering?
She turns away, reaching into a closet. -
EMILY
Important enough not to be left
out.
 
(CONTINUED)October 10, 1997 " a
31 CONTINUED: Fea
wSteven finishes his-drink. His voice drops a pointed
octave.
7 STEVEN :
You look incredible.
EMILY -
(pretending not
to hear)
We better hurry.
She yanks a simple black cocktail dress off the rack.
Steven rises from the chair. He knows damn well she
heard him. He reaches past her, into the closet, taking *
down something tragically chic and holding it against *
her body. *
STEVEN
I'd prefer you in this.
EMILY
(beat; then putting
the first dress back)
 
Right.
12 OMITTED 12
13 ANGLE ON EMILY a
Getting into the shower, turning the hot water on full
blast, grateful for the enveloping steam. a
14 INT. LOBBY - NIGHT 1
Steven and Emily step from the elevator, both now dressed
to the nines. They pass the concierge.
15 EXT. FIFTH AVENUE - NIGHT 3 ..
‘They emerge from the building. HARD RAIN POUNDS the
pavement. A doorman deploys his umbrella, waving the
limo forward.
Alé EXT. LIMO - TRAVELLING als *g
 
AT
a7
october 10, 1997 8
INT. LIMO - MOVING 36
Steven gazes out the window, chin on fist, watching the
wet city outside. He swivels toward Emily, taking his
time, studying her profile. She doesn't seem’ to notice.
Her eyes stay straight ahead, focused intently on
i something in the distance.
‘STEVEN
Emily.
EMILY
(turning, shaken
from her reverie)
Yes.
STEVEN
(taking her hand)
I don't believe I've ever seen you
so alive. So completely
: beautiful.
EMILY
(nervoiis laugh)
Of course you have.
STEVEN
(pondering that)
Yes. Maybe once. :
EMILY
When? :
He brings her hand up, examining it like some treasure
before brushing his lips across the dorsal flesh.
STEVEN
On our wedding day.
ANGLE ON EMILY
‘The recollection is potent. Her eyes soften. The sweet
sting of love lost. She squeezes Steven's hand, turning
away quickly, catching her own reflection in the rain-
swept glass.
EXT. METROPOLITAN MUSEUM OF ART - NIGHT ALT
Lit for the evening's festivities. Their limo arrives.
INT. MET - MOVING - NIGHT vw
DOWN a marble passageway, opulently decorated for the
occasion, TOWARD a cavernous space full of people.
(CONTINUED)oy
17
october 10, 1997 9.
CONTINUED: 17
INT. TEMPLE OF DENDUR - NIGHT
White-jacketed waiters glide by with exotic nibbles and
stands of fluted glasses. Champagne babble blends with
the string quartet in the courtyard. The crowd is sleek
and affluent, thé Met's power patrons on black tie
promenade.
ANGLE ON HORS D‘OEUVRE TRAY - MOVING
As it floats through the throng, balanced lightly on the
fingertips of a WAITER. A hand reaches out, snatching
two crab-stuffed pastries like nuts froma bowl. The
startled Waiter nearly loses the whole rig.
WAITER
Are you sure two is enough, ‘siz?
ANGLE ON DAVID SHAW
His face is open and vital. He's wearing a thrown-
together ensemble. Not regulation black tie but somehow
classy. He pops a pastry in his mouth, eyes flickering
with amusement. He looks different in’ clothes.
DAVID
For now.
‘The Waiter leaves in a huff. David snares a glass of
champagne off a passing tray. An older, somewhat EFFETE
MAN is trying to monopolize David's attention:
EFFETE MAN
As I was saying...
(waving a glass at
the temple)
The bulk of the temple's
hieroglyphics are supplications to
the gods of fertility.
DAVID
(looking over the
Man's shoulder)
Really.
DAVID'S POV
Steven and Emily make their entrance, his right arm
draped loosely around her waist. The body language is
subtle but unmistakably proprietary. Emily as the
ultimate accessory.
(CONTINUED)a7
a
 
October 10, 1997 10.
CONTINUED: (2) -
Steven is flagged by a group of men with careful tans and
predatory features. Merchant princes in full display
plumage, wives. included.
ANGLE ON STEVEN AND EMILY
Joining another couple, JASON and ANN GATES.
JASON
(off Steven and
Emily's entrance) :
At last, the beautiful people have
arrived
ANN
(off Bmily)
Fantastic dress.
Emily glances at Steven’who can't resist a tiny smile.
EMILY
‘Thank you.
JASON
(leaning in close
to Steven)
Didn't think you'd make it
tonight, what with Greenspan
and all. Figured you'd be up to
your ass in alligators.
ANGLE ON EMILY
Breaking away from Ann, scanning the room.
EMILY'S POV
PAST a montage of faces until her eyes clinch with
David's. He starts forward, big grin on his face.
ANGLE ON EMILY
She shakes her head, very slowly, very emphatically.
Danger. -—
(CONTINUED)october 10, 1994 1.
_ 17° CONTINUED: (3) a7
ANGLE ON DAVID
He stops in his tracks, looking past her, locking on
Steven. ‘The grin vanishes. He turns on’a dime and
meanders off.
ANGLE ON EMILY
She glances back at her husband. He's deep in
conversation, oblivious to the wordless exchange. She
walks after David. :
Al8 "ANGLE ON DAVID - ANOTHER ROOM als *
Pretending to study a photo of the temple on its original
perch above the Nile, a spot now 200 feet underwater
thanks to the Aswan Dam. Emily drifts over, feigning
. interest in the same photo.
DAVID
I thought he wasn't coming.
: EMILY
He changed his mind. I tried to
call you.
tH (nervous beat) *
Now what do we do? *
DAVID
Relax and enjoy the evening. He *
doesn't know who I am, right? *
David turns, slowly, into her face. They stare at each
other, mouths straining to collide.
DAVID
(swallowing)
Lunch tomorrow?
EMILY ae
And tomorrow and tomorrow.
Steven's voice falls around them like a cordial trap.
i
STEVEN
‘There you are.
Steven is standing ten feet away. He strolls over with
two glasses, handing one to Emily.
(CONTINUED)Als
October 10, 1997 22.
CONTINUED:
als
: STEVEN of
I turn my back for thirty seconds
and she elopes with a younger man.
EMILY
(forcibly composing
herself) -
Steven, I'd like you to meet David
‘Shaw.
STEVEN
(shaking David's
hand) :
A pleasure.
DAVID
(still thrown)
Yes, sir.
‘EMILY
David's a painter.
STEVEN
Not houses, I hope.
DAVID
(little grin)
Not yet. But you never know.
EMILY
I saw some of his pieces downtown.
I thought they were amazing.
STEVEN
Really. And what brings you all
the way uptown, to our inbred
little soiree?
DAVID
(deciding to tell
the truth)
Well... actually, Emily was kind
enough to wrangle me an invite.
STEVEN
(genial nudge to
David's rib)
Me, too. -
Steven's appeal is insidious. David laughs.
(CONTINUED)October 10, 1997 23.
A18 CONTINUED: (2) Ale
oO = People cdl me a risk taker
because I gamble on currencies.
But compared to a man who gambles
his life to create art...
(raising his glass
to David) :
Here's to real risk taking.
They all drink.
‘STEVEN
It's: David, right?
(off his nod)
Now tell me about your work.
‘DAVID
A couple of small galleries carry
me when there's space. Things
are starting to happen.
STEVEN
Becoming. The most exciting time
| of life. Did you study formally?
 
| DAVID
Berkeley. Almost formally
graduated.
STEVEN
Good man. Too much training
pollutes the soul...
(to Emily)
And he's good?
EMILY
{almost stumbling)
He's... wonderful.
STEVEN
David, did my wife happen to
mention that I'ma bit of a
collector?
DAVID
Nope.
Steven cocks his head toward Emily, charm vaporizing into
cold steel.
STEVEN
Then why do I have the distinct
( feeling that I'm being set up?
 
(CONTINUED)October 10, 1997 14.
 
lg. CONTINUED: (3) Als 1
EMILY
(unsure, then
biting)
Steven, honestly, I had no
\ intention...
She stops herself. Steven slides his arm snugly around
: his wife:
 
STEVEN
(grinning)
Sweetheart, you've become an easy
mark in your old age.
Emily forces a smile
STEVEN
I'd love to see some of your
pieces. When can that be
arranged?
David looks at Emily. No help there.
DAVID ’
anytime. :
STEVEN
ah Does my wife have your number?
DAVID *
You can get it from the gallery. .
Emily knows which one.
STEVEN
Pine. and if you're as gifted as
my wife suggests, I'll pass the
word to my more acquisitive
friends.
DAVID
That's very generous. Thank you.
STEVEN
Nonsense. I'm a man who believes
in taking chances on talented
people...
(parting smile)
Nice meeting you.
Steven turns, gracefully guiding Emily toward his
friends.
{ (CONTINUED]18
18
19
october 10, 1997
CONTINUED: (4)
ANGLE ON DAVID
Watching them stroll away, greeting couples of similar
socio-economic ilk. He looks like his dog just got run
over.
INT. PENTHOUSE - NIGHT
Steven and Emily come home. She scans the stack of mail
and magazines on the hall table, then disappears toward
the bedroom.
INT. BEDROOM
Emily is getting undressed. Steven walks in, removing
his Jacket, loosening his collar. He embraces her from
behind.
STEVEN
Could I interest the lady in a
nightcap?
‘EMILY
(weary)
Just bed, thank you.
‘STEVEN
Even better.
She turns into him. They kiss. At first it's sweet and
tender and.lingering but then it escalates, heat surging
down from their mouths. Steven pivots, guiding her
toward the bed. They reach a point of no return, ready
to topple onto the sheets. Emily stiffens for a micro-
beat, then surrenders, as if her soul just flew so it
wouldn't have to watch what's next.
ANGLE ON STEVEN
He felt it. He loosens his hold on her.
STEVEN
Where'd you go?
‘EMILY
I'm sorry. I'm just dead on my
feet.
(CONTINUED)
15.
Als 1
18
19ag
October 10, 1997
CONTINUED:
16.
19
STEVEN
(matter-of-fact)
That's not really true...
(beat)
And sooner or later we're going t~
have to talk about this.
EMILY :
{anguished breath,
knowing what's :
coming)
About what? :
STEVEN
‘The fact that my wife doesn't want
to make love to me anymore. !
EMILY :
Steven, we've talked about this...
STEVEN
Don't bullshit me, Emily. Tell me
the truth. Break my heart. Just
don't lie to me...
(off her silence) — ~
Something's missing. Or something
has been added. It has to be one
or the other, so which is it?
EMILY
Has to be one or the other? Like
it bas to be this dress? Because
you say 50? Do you even see what
you do to me, Steven?
STEVEN
You tell me. Have I hurt you in
some way. Have I neglected you?
Have I ever done anything but take
care of you?
EMILY
I don't want to be taken care of.
Children need to be taken care of.
‘Things need to be taken care of.
I need more than maintenance.
STEVEN
(stung)
That's the word you'd use to
describe our marriage?
EMILY
T just did.
(CONTINUED)|
4
(
 
19
B20
B20
20
A21
october 10, 199% 17. *
CONTINUED: (2) 19
Steven stares at her, pain flushing across his face, then
he turns to leave. Emily grabs his arm.
EMILY
(imploring) -
Steven...
He stops and looks at her.
EMILY
I'm sorry.
STEVEN
(gently pulling
free of her grasp)
So am I.
ANGLE ON EMILY
Seeing herself in the mirror, and beyond that, Steven
walking away.
cur TO:
EXT. WALL STREET - AERIAL - DAY 20
WALL ST. B20
SWOOPING DOWN to find Stever's limo navigating the sheer
canyons of the financial disvrict.
INT. LIMOUSINE - CLOSE ANGLE ON STEVEN 20
Brooding, watching his world slide by.
INT. U.N. GENERAL ASSEMBLY BUILDING’- DAY (FORMERLY A35) A221
Double oak doors fly open. ‘There's an air-burst of
Italian, French, En’lish, and Spanish. Emily and Raquel
emerge with a group of dark-suited diplomats that
includes Ambassador Wills. Emily is between a Frenchman
in mid-diatribe and Wills. *
i
 
EMILY
(translating from
French to English)
.. contrary to popular opinion in
your country... the European Union
was never conceived... solely to
benefit... Anglo-American trade
policies
 
 
(CONTINUED)R21
22
October 10, 1997 1B.
 
‘CONTINUED: a21
WILRS :
Perhaps it should have been...
Emily clicks into French. : *
ANGLE ON RAQUEL = ,
Wedged between a fast-talking Italian woman and a Spanish *
man, switching seamlessly from Italian to Spanish *
(subject to be determined) . *
INT. CENTRIST CAPITAL - MOVING - DAY 7 21
DOWN a sleek hallway, WITH Steven and Techie One (HANSEN).
HANSEN
Greenspan surprised us. Based on
inventories, we thought the fed
was on hold.
STEVEN
We'll be fine.
They pass through a foyer and into Steven's office.
INT. STEVEN'S OFFICE - DAY
A comer overlooking the Brooklyn Bridge. CNBC, CNN,
Bloombergs, and wall of market “feeds provide an
avalanche of security’symbols. Techie Two (STEIN) and
Techie Three (NOLAN) are waiting. The mood is grim.
HANSEN
Spread products are blowing out.
The action on your receivers in
Europe could be a bloodbath.
STEVEN
So what are we talking? :
STEIN
Looks like at least a hundred-
fifty basis points.
HANSEN :
‘The Bundesbank will have to tag
along. That'll hammer your yen
and mark positions.
(CONTINUED)21
22
A23
23
B24
October 10, 1997 18.
CONTINUED: