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Expert feedback
November 25, 2022

Hi Kamal,

I read your submission on your resume describing your professional experience. Below is a
brief critique of the assignment.

Nice work,
Your Chegg Expert

Overall Score: 3.5/5

Format/Appearance 4/5

Organization 4/5

Content 3/5

Grammar and spelling 3/5

Please note that the score provided above only represents the Expert’s judgment of your writing and in
no way makes any promises or assurances concerning your actual grade.
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Format/Appearance
You’ve made quite a good use of the white space. The details adequately fill the pages
of your resume without being overcrowded. Overall, the design elements are
appropriate. The paper begins with your personal information at the start, including
your name, contact information, email address, and other relevant details. However,
try to mention your qualifications before listing your professional experiences. Also, to
improve the appearance of your resume, write the headings in block letters. Good
luck!

Organization
The name and your contact information have been clearly listed at the top, are
organized well, and are clear and consistent. Professional experience has been
mentioned in reverse chronological order, with the most recent work experience
mentioned first. Good job! However, remove the unnecessary space between the
lines, and add enough space between each of the criteria. Good luck!

Content
The education section is quite complete. Most of the information about your
professional experiences, licenses, certifications, and professional affiliations has been
included. You have used effective verbs throughout, with descriptive and concise
wording. Words such as “Served”, “Utilized” indicate your past accomplishments.
However, consider rephrasing the words “Maintain” and “Perform” as “Maintained”
and “Performed”. Moreover, you could also include more information about the
languages you speak to let the employer learn more about you. Besides, consider
mentioning your qualifications as well. Keep it up!
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Grammar and spelling

Your paper reads well. However, avoid grammatical mistakes like “Visionary, data-driven, patient-
centric [,] and successfully accomplished versatile Clinical…”, “protocol design, and human
subject research[.]”, “business growth opportunities, protocol development, and resource
allocation[.]”, “clinical projects through an effective partnership with the study core team[.]”,
“and development of 30+ study coordinators and data managers[.]”, “hiring project managers,
and research assistant[.]”, “Quality Assurance, Monitoring [,] and Query Resolution. You can
also run a grammar check by reviewing your grammar cards in the writing editor.
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Next Steps
Fix what you agree with, ignore what you don't, and then resubmit to get another expert
check! The best way to improve your paper is to keep writing, revising, and considering
outside feedback.

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After you’ve got your paper reading just right, submit it for a Plagiarism and Grammar
check to add that final polish and catch any remaining issues!

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Your paper

Kamal Shazly, MBBCH

| shazlyk@gmail.com | 407-719 7054

Core Competencies

Clinical Research Design

Procedure Development

Continuous Process Improvement

Clinical Trial Operations

- Site Management

- Data Management

- Study Management

- Business Development

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- Team Building

- Operational Optimization

- Relationship Management

[][][]Visionary, data-driven, patient-centric and

successfully accomplished versatile Clinical Trial Manager
with vast experience in all aspects of managing Phase I-IV
clinical trials encompassing pharmaceutical and medical
devices. Adept at working effectively to achieve goals
either as a cross-functional team member or team leader and
individual contributor— progressive experience as a Clinical
Trial Manager, Clinical Operations Leader, and Site
Monitoring. Dedicated and detail-oriented with outstanding
written, oral, and interpersonal communications skills,
honed through several years of producing high-quality
documents and presentations on tight deadlines.

Professional Experience

Clinical Research Fastrack Training 07/2022 - Present

GCP Certification Refresher Course Covering Core

Competencies including

- ICH GCP E6 R (2)

- FDA Regulations, and the Common Rule 45CFR46

- Data Management

- Informed Consent Process

- Clinical Trial Operations from Feasibility through

Close-out

- GDP following ALCOA-C principles

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- Identification and reporting of AEs and SAEs

- Quality Assurance, Monitoring and Query Resolution

- Comprehension and Execution of Clinical Trial Protocols

- Maintaining a regulatory binder, housing essential

documents including but not limited to 1572, DOA, Training
Logs and other Investigator Site File (ISF) document

MPR Development Group LLC

Lead Clinical Research Manager– Farmington Hills, MI 2018 –

Present

- Successful in the coordination of feasibility, site

selection, coverage analysis, assignments, clinical trial
completions, timeline compliance, protocol design, and human
subject research

- Maintain and foster a strong working relationship with

the Research Director and Director of Operations for the
Clinical to communicate critical issues, business growth
opportunities, protocol development, and resource allocation

- Served as a liaison while interfacing with 50+ key

opinion leaders, investigators, IRBs/ECs, associations, and
university personnel to deliver assigned clinical projects
through an effective partnership with the study core team

- Utilized innovative skills during the establishment of a

centralized academic medical Centre research infrastructure;
supervised department growth and development of 30+ study
coordinators and data managers

- Perform HR-related duties, including recruiting, and

hiring project managers, and research assistant

Paradigm &Centinel Spine LLC

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Regional Manager –New York-New York 2012-2018

Consulted on support and oversight for partners and

licensees in the areas of facility launch, opérations, staff
training, and overall organizational operations

Spearheaded new market development in Turkey’s MENA regions

Developed and designed operational and procedural

implementation for Inspire Brand business model

Created growth opportunities through effective business

planning and

Established and maintained strategic business relationships

with spine surgeons and key stakeholders by providing
information, support, and continuous process improvement

Additional Professional Experience

Tsunami Medical, Managing Director of Middle East Region –

Modena, Italy 2010 – 2017

US Spine Inc., Regional Managing Consultant– Boca Raton, FL

2012 – 2013

Licenses and Certifications

Ministry of Health and Populations, Medical License Number:

104783 Active

Clinical Research Fasttrack GCP certificate July-2022

Clinical Research Professional Certificate July-2022

Professional Affiliations

International Society of Advancements of Spine Surgery ISASS

Active Active
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Middle East Spine Group – Active Active

Turkish Spine Society – Active Active

European Pan-Arab Neuroscience Society – Active

Egyptien Syndicate for Médical Doctorat Active