Table of Contents

Just Let Me Write the Damn Song 2

Giselle Tran
Competition 4
Micayla Reed
Journey of A Thousand Miles 5
Aaron Thein
Melancholic Writing 7
Elizabeth Barrera
The Science of Getting It off Your Chest 9
Andrea Heine
Gimpgirladventures; A Dying Girl’s Blog 11
Nicole Bracciotti
Breaking Down the Fourth Wall 13
Victor Hernandez
The Shocking Truth 14
Michelle Guelff
Get in the Game: Video Game and FilmBased Writing 16
Andrew May
A Deaf Person’s Haven 18
Vanessa Mendoza Palencia
A Lonely, Early August Afternoon 19
Philip Perry
Textual Healing 21
Thao Nguyen

Staff Acknowledgments:
Managing Editor: Mark Thompson
Layout & Design: Laura Nguyen (Lead), Philip Perry, Robin Brown
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 Just Let Me Write the Damn Song
Giselle Tran

I
wish I spent all my time like my peers: writing short stories, I remember always getting in arguments with them over
poems, and nonfiction pieces that are ripe for publication, lyrics, debating what a song was and what we wanted it to be.
but the reality is most of my free time is spent writing We’d argue over rhyme schemes, the amount of words per line,
songs with my band. I don’t tell people I write songs, unsure diction, and whatever we could think of.
how to answer them when they ask what I write, hiding it away “We don’t need to rhyme,” the lead vocalist, my best friend,
as if our songs are some secret shame that doesn’t count as would insist.
real writing. Hell, when we started writing three years ago, our “But rhyming sounds good. It helps with cohesion,” I’d say.
songs weren’t even good writing. “I don’t care. I don’t want to rhyme all the time. I want to
It didn’t matter to me that our songs were bad (I knew be different.” We’d keep arguing until one of us would eventu-
everything took practice), but why the songs were bad trou- ally shut up from frustration.
bled me. Full of nonsensical lyrics lacking thought or pur- Arguing had always been a part of our process, beginning
pose, poorly chosen words, and clichés, our songs began as with our first song “Sunburned.” The hours of work we spent
something every writer hates, and even though I could see it trying to wrestle the song into a (well-suited in my opinion)
and knew how to make them better, my bandmates were too ABCBCA rhyme scheme with intricate metaphors is now hazy
stubborn to listen. in my mind, but the rejection the song ultimately received is
still vivid. At first, they seemed happy, but I quickly realized
they were just happy the song was finished. When they looked
at the lyrics again a week later, they immediately seemed un-
easy, dissatisfied. Another week after that, I was asked to help
them rewrite the lyrics to their liking, the original work labeled
‘too poetic’ for what they thought a song should be. And so I
did, hurt and begrudgingly.
It was a pattern that would continue over the next year
or so as I tried hard to stand my ground with the songs we
wrote originally before I had to rework them to fit their liking.
The arguing never stopped between the lead vocalist and me,
both bitterly and stubbornly insisting we were right until we
would get headaches; afterwards, we would spend some time
apart, and then reconvene to try again. It got to the point that
I would not even help with the lyrical process unless I was
asked, and even then I would ask what they wanted to the song
to sound like first, stifling my creativity and voice. I started
writing to please my bandmates instead of myself and was left
questioning everything I knew about writing and my compe-
tence as a writer.
Simultaneously, I was in school studying and learning all
about the careful craft of writing—rhetorical devices, meter,
sound patterns, poetic forms, grammatical structures—small
but powerful tools that subtly separated good writers from
M.C. Escher, Relativity

bad writers. There were songwriters in my literature anthology

books among the great poets, like Bob Dylan and Jim Morri-
son, that we barely discussed in class and that I explored alone
more intimately, and I remember an essay question that asked
me to analyze song lyrics once. It was evident to me my band-
mates were wrong, confused about how poetry and songwrit-
ing fit together, but my self-doubt drowned out my discontent.

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 I never left the band, too stubborn and loyal to give up be musicians, usually falling short on one side of the spectrum.
so easily. I loved the music but disliked the lyrics, and I was Often, the result is bad songs. It is rare that someone is both a
determined to change their minds as I got further along in musician and a poet at once; without classes that closely study
my studies. Then one day, without warning, we finally worked this sort of writing, a lot of young songwriters don’t know what
together instead of against each other. We called the song songwriting is and fall into the same trap of bad writing that
“Gears”—about the dependency of people on technology. Our my band and I did at the beginning. Three years later, I am
lead vocalist was getting bored with uninteresting, unoriginal just barely grasping the concept of what it truly means to be
lyrics and finally took the time to listen to my ideas as I guided a songwriter, a poet, and a musician, but I never would have
the band through the grand vision I had of the song, subtly understood it without my band and the constant arguing.
rhyming, using vivid imagery and metaphors, employing the Ultimately, Randall Man, a contemporary, formal poet,
effects of enjambment, and using interesting diction. captured my thoughts best, saying “I like to know where the
But more importantly, I realized I had been too strict in walls are, so I can punch up against them.” Knowing how poet-
wanting to follow poetic forms. I had to compromise things I ry and music works individually is great, but to be a songwriter
wanted—like meter and exact rhyme schemes—for the good you have to know how both poetry and music work together.
of the song, inventing forms to go with the music and varying I had to learn to see the wall dividing the two and punch up
them along with key changes for a more powerful experience against it until it was no more, until my identity as a songwriter
overall. To grasp what I mean, here is the last verse of “Gears”: became both the writer who writes songs as poetry, and the
musician who uses words for their sound and effect, their grav-
Walking. Automate. ity. Songwriting is, after all, a collaboration between music and
The best new shoes will step me poetry which demands compromise.
from place to place.
I’ll digitize my essence:
silicon fingers and copper strings.
Send out the tin man
for my experiencing
self. Automate.
That old food will be pre-chewed
and lectures a pill to take.
Machine in the routine.
Machine in the routine.

I learned that collaboration demands compromise, but

beyond that I started to think it was strange that I questioned
(and continue to question) my identity as a writer because I
write songs. Obviously songs are poetry and songwriters are
poets; I studied a few in school. But if that were so blatantly
obvious why would I question myself at all? Why would I hes-
itate to tell people I write songs? And why don’t we study more
songwriters in school?
Writers and professors say to be a great writer you must
constantly consume great writing, but how often do they rec-
ommend songwriters to students? This is not to say songwrit-
ers are not accepted in the world of poetry, but rather that they
are unconsciously considered a lower tier of writing. Consider
the fact that SJSU does not offer any classes for songwriting Giselle Tran
specifically, in either the Music or English departments, which
seems odd given the explosion of songwriting in the last hun- Giselle Tran is a junior at SJSU
dred years. There are classes that study humor, game narrative, with an interest in composition.
nonfiction, children’s literature, young adult fiction—all genres She writes songs, poetry, short
of writing that have also developed or became popularized
in the last century—but still there is not a single class for
stories and nonfiction essays.
songwriting. Perhaps then, I question my identity as a writer
because writers question my identity as a writer of value.
This is a problem directly related to what is happening in
the songwriting world right now. Songwriters are generally one
of two things: musicians trying to be poets or poets trying to

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Competition
Micayla Reed

Y
ou wake up at 3:19 AM with an smartphone. Along the way, you ask waiting to be found.
idea that you think would change many types of readers what they think This was the predicament I was
the history of all publications. of your writing, and it’s all positive. in about a year ago. I had a book that
After struggling to find a niche in the Your excitement is building, and it’s all was only partially completed and it was
writing sphere, you find it. The perfect coming together when, one day, your dying for my attention, but at this point
combination of food, science, and fun mom calls and tells you that Cameron it was already considered old news. I felt
has come to you in an easy-to-write idea. Diaz was on Ellen today and announced like my efforts were worth nothing, and
You spend the next few months putting the release of her new book. It’s got a dif- I became discouraged from picking it
spontaneous additions to your new book ferent title but, hey, that was your idea! up ever again. Every once in a while, I
on random surfaces: a quote in crayon Almost exactly! Has Cameron Diaz been would learn something new; something
on your little brother’s homework, a nice stalking you? No, she hasn’t. If you’ve that I could twist to fit into my book. I
conclusion to chapter four on the back had a good idea lately that you haven’t had many opportunities to fill the pages
of your Chipotle receipt, and a statistic followed up on because someone else with wonderful thoughts and theories
that you learned in your nutrition class has already published it, fear not. There that could have changed lives, but some-
on the Memos app in your smashed-up may be an even better idea out there just thing was holding me back.
I took a closer look at my situation
and decided that I needed to find an al-
ternate path. My job had little to do with
writing, as I was working on an increas-
ingly popular food truck in the South
Bay Area. Since I was working with
customers and had the chance to talk a
little, people were always asking me what
an English major was doing trying to get
a cook’s position. I would say something
silly like, “My professors tell me to keep
a stable day job.” I never gave a true
answer, until one couple wouldn’t walk
away without knowing the real story.
They were food writers that had been
especially interested in learning more
about our business’s background, as we
were frequently featured on their food
truck blogs. Since I had the best commu-
nication skills at the time, my boss asked
me to maintain a professional relation-
ship with this couple. I would let them
know when we had new additions to our
menu and set up days that we could pho-
tograph the items for their blogs. Once
I had built a good rapport with them,
their blogs had grown to be very popu-
lar. I was one of the first to know of their
plans to take a road trip to visit various
food trucks across the nation, and the
first to secure 2 two-page spreads in their

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book that was to follow. I couldn’t let this ing me back from finishing my original waiting for more inspiration and op-
book be the second one that got away. book. It turns out that something was portunities. It’s still a book of interest in
So I took a chance and sent my partial me. Somewhere inside myself, I knew the food truck sphere, but I have come
book to the writers. I had once poured that I could do better and that one day I across many new possibilities since I last
my passion into this book, and I knew would be able to use what I had to reach shared it, and I’m excited to see what else
that the right audience could understand my full potential. It’s not that I forgot comes of it. This book was just one lucky
it. People that would read a book about about my book, it’s that I found a way step in my career, and many great things
food truck recipes would appreciate the to use it to my advantage in new and have stemmed from it. I hope to use it
time and effort it takes to create a meal unexpected ways. From that, I was able to inspire writers to stick their necks out
that may be eaten in a short lunch hour. to create many new connections that for something they believe in. I may not
My confidence in my book must have broadened by writing application and have gotten the outcome I was expect-
shown because they loved my approach experience. ing, but I can’t expect to plan every step
and recruited me to be involved in the So, what happened to my book? in life. I’m glad Cameron Diaz stole my
development of their book. Well, it is sitting in my desk drawer idea.
Even though it seemed like my
book was a lost cause, I was able to
re-evaluate my situation and share Micayla Reed
my ideas with people who appreciat-
ed them. After learning that I had the
Micayla Reed is a junior majoring in Career Writ-
passion for food and the articulation to
share my knowledge, my boss was com- ing. She has strong interests in editing and food
ing to me for advice. I helped build our science.
company policies handbook, created a
few promotional flyers, wrote an article
about our feature in the food truck
road trip book, and even contributed a
couple of popular (and healthy!) items
to our menu.
I thought that something was hold-

Journey of A Thousand Miles

Aaron Thein

Y
ou make it to class just in time with a green book and want you to explore with me and see if we can come to same
pen in hand. You take your seat haphazardly and wait truth while keeping this question in mind: why is it difficult to
for your professor to hand you the writing prompt. start?
“You may begin as soon as you get the prompt,” he says. After One reason it may feel this way is because we aren’t sure
you fill in your name, class, and professor’s name, you open how to assess starts. For example, try to analyze the big names
your green book to a blank page, and soon your mind is blank that made it, like J.K. Rowling or J.R.R. Tolkien. If you’re like
too. me, you might address them with a face of amazement and
This often happens to me whenever I want to start writing. a hint of cynicism. This is, obviously, the incorrect way to
Whether it is for self-interest or mandatory for my classes, approach an analysis of anything for two reasons. The first
inside or outside the classroom, it becomes instinctual for my reason is we shouldn’t feel too amazed at the work. Sounds
mind to go blank. I wish that my mind could just turn on like disrespectful, I know, but when it comes to being amazed,
a phone or a computer with a push of a button. I want to write, I feel that the amazement alone is enough to stop me from
but more often than not, there is an obstacle I have to vault assessing the actual work. It’s almost like seeing a magic trick;
over before I can start. But I realize that there is a reason for we might ask the question, “How did they do that?” but never
my blank state; I know why it’s there and how it came about. I really go out to learn how to do the magic trick (which is

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 Journey, 2012 video game
mostly why magicians still have jobs today) because we want American Revolution now.” Nor was there a finish line that
to know, but we aren’t motivated to actually want to know. The signaled rebels exactly when the war would be over. Journeys
second reason concerns cynicism. Other than making you a can be spontaneous; marathons and races must have a distinct
disgruntled, disturbed, and dehumanizing human, cynicism starting and finish line. Journeys are just like us; they can start
stands as an obstacle when it comes to the analysis of a start, whenever, they’re ambiguous, they’re not mechanical or sys-
because instead of being distracted by how good something tematic. That is why it is called a journey. Like in the classroom
is, we become distracted by what bad went into making that exam example, I know what I will write about, but the begin-
something good. As much as the general population hates him, ning and ending are not clear. Not yet.
look at Justin Bieber: His start came from making videos on Journeys, however, still have a starting point; even if it isn’t
YouTube of himself playing a guitar and singing songs. This made known to the journeyer. We may know what kind of
lead to him having the second most viewed video on YouTube, journey we are taking, such as maturity or self-growth. So why
next to Psy’s Gangnam Style, despite, however, how he turned might it be the case that it is difficult to start? The realization
out today. came to me when I took not a step forward, but a step back. I
But why is it a “journey” of a thousand miles? Why not looked at my situation and I found myself in the middle. We
a marathon or a race? When colonists in America fought are in the middle of the journey. We see ourselves not at the
against the British Empire, it wasn’t done in a day; it took beginning, but at the middle of what seems to be a long and
days, months, and years to accomplish their goal of forming a daunting journey. Our parents hold ideals for us because they
more perfect union. There wasn’t an exact date that said “begin want us to be something or do something they couldn’t finish.
They passed the baton and said, “Go forth.” This is the predic-

“I focus not on the

ament I face every time I want to write. I focus not on the be-
ginning, but at the middle and the end. How will this pan out?
Will it work? How do I end this? Indeed, a burning question

beginning, but at
that applies to our situation. How can we end difficult starts?
I don’t know the answer. Actually, I can’t give you the
answer. I can’t give you the answer because the answer isn’t a

the middle and the

singular entity, rather it’s a multitude of several smaller compo-
nents enmeshed into one thing. The answer is like a building;
it looks like one thing, we grammatically reference “it” as a

end.”
singular subject or object, but it isn’t made of one single thing.
A building is made up of cement, structures, columns, chicken
wire, scaffoldings, foundation, glass, plastic, metal rebar, pipe-

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lines, a sewage system, concrete, ceramic, and much more. The
answer is like a building. Aaron Thein
Don’t fret; this isn’t an exam. We don’t have to know all the
answers to understand the answer, just like we don’t have to see
every part of a building to know that it’s a building. Over time Aaron Thein is a senior pursuing
and experience, we come to accumulate the pieces together a degree in English. He enjoys
until it forms into something we can understand. That is why reading and writing when he
it is called a journey. You may not know what day the answer
has free time, particularly dark
comes to you, but it will. I can only give a piece of advice;
don’t focus on the middle or end. Remove yourself from that humor. And yes, that is a T-shirt
position and place yourself in the beginning. “The journey of won from doing the Buffalo
a thousand miles begins with a single step,” Lao Tzu said. You Wild Wings Blazing Challenge.
may begin as soon as you receive the answer.

Melancholic Writing
Elizabeth Barrera

“T
he ocean waves begin to drown you. Little by little ercoaster ride intensified. Unfortunately, my grandfather and
the water consumes you, and you’re nothing but childhood friend passed away while I was in my second year
minuscule in this sea of life. Your presence is dying of college. Never had I experienced so much loss and anguish
while every other creature around you is ready for the attack. at the same time. Every time I look back at my older journal
Your movements are slow, yet the blows are rapid. Your sur- entries, I am astounded at how far I’ve come along. No longer
roundings are overwhelming, and you fight not to give in, but were words written down simply to finish an assignment or
to close your eyes is the best sensation you’ve felt in so long. So to feel comfort in knowing that I took the time to write in
you decide to give in, to let it consume you, to rip every part of my boring journal. I wrote because it was a necessity. My pen
you until there’s only a vague memory.” guided me through every line, while the thin paper listened to
That journal entry is dated from March 25th, 2013, which every word I wrote. At that moment in time, my work became
was when I began to take my creative writing more seriously motivational and positive, because that’s what pain and loss
by dedicating an hour per day to this journal. For some strange can do to us. We seek pleasure in keeping a happy life and
and inexplicable reason, writing became a method of coping telling others about how our journey led us to where we are
with pain for me. It provided itself as an outlet to express my now. We create work slightly exaggerated from our realities
thoughts and loathe at my own necessity. The beautiful thing and morph it into something worthwhile and compelling. At
about writing while experiencing hurt and pain is that there least, that’s what I did with my writing. It began with the hurt,
is no right or wrong answer. Creative writing comes from the and continued to develop until it was something happy—filled
heart and mind. Emotions are what create beautiful writing, with illusion and hope.
and slowly every piece of the puzzle begins to come together As humans, we find no need to talk because most of the
in order to form a poem or story. It begins with only a blank time others don’t understand us. Perhaps, our closest friends
space, where words will begin to cover it all. Choosing to write and family are hearing us, but not listening. We want to be
creative work while experiencing some form of depression can heard with no judgment, and just let the hurt out without hesi-
be essential to careers, because the writing can become more tation or fear of appearing vulnerable and pathetic. As writers,
elaborate and descriptive. In my experience, the language used we’re very critical of our own selves, as well as of others. We
is more colorful, meaningful, and imaginable. search for mistakes and analyze everything, when many times
Let me fill you in on how my writing has developed there’s nothing more than the simplicity of reality. So, how,
through this coping method. When I was twelve years old, I you may ask yourself, is it that I create such impactful work
began keeping a journal. I noticed that every time I wrote in out of essentially nothing? The answer is quite simple, because
it, it was whenever my parents and I had an argument. This I find my most sincere work to be written during moments of
behavior became consistent as time progressed, and the roll- loneliness, when all I want is to take a break from the realities

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of the world and put down on paper how it is that I truly feel. ry, stories, journal entries, you name it. They were all inspired
As humans, we naturally seek a comfort zone, and as writers, by him, even if they weren’t necessarily about moving forward
we focus on how to prevent our emotions from consuming us in life, or learning to value the people who surround us. No,
by writing creative pieces and sharing them with others. Now, thanks to him, I’ve written suspenseful work, I’ve tested the
I’ve always considered myself a happy person. No matter the poetic waters (though not quite as successfully), and embraced
situation I’m encountered with, I find a way to smile and learn the talent I’ve been given. If there’s one thing I’ve learned
from it. As a happy writer, every journal entry was about the through loss, it’s that death is inevitable and so is pain. Thus,
same thing. “Today in class, I caught a boy staring at me for we choose whether to embrace it with open arms, or neglect it
quite a long time. I looked away, shyly, but haven’t seen him and drown in our sorrows.
look my way since.” My writing was typically desperate and
based on illusion. It craved romance and all of the extra esca-
lated emotions of love that we gag at now.
However, when my grandfather passed away, I experienced
an array of emotions that fatigued my spirit and exhausted
every bit of me. Never in my life had I endured such a strong
set of emotions, even though I had my fair share of heartbreaks
that made me feel as if the world was ending. I took desper-
ate matters to the extreme and did things that don’t make the
stereotype of Latinas diminish any less. I cried and thought Elizabeth Barrera
that there was no greater loss than that of the one you truly
loved (romantically). Yet, losing my grandfather taught me Elizabeth is majoring in Techni-
how wrong I was about depression. It came so unexpectedly, cal Writing and minoring in Psy-
like a thunderstorm arriving immediately after days filled with chology and Business (for who
sunshine. There was no slow and easy transition. It came with-
out warning, without a moment to gain preparation—at least
knows what reasons). She enjoys
that’s what I continued to think. On the contrary, I disregarded frying her brain in sexy Netflix
the fact that my grandfather’s Parkinson’s was not getting any nights with Grey’s Anatomy
better, I ignored that he was aging, and that he could no longer and writing embarrassing stories
fend for himself—I was in denial because I knew the hurt in her journal and blog, while
would be new to me.
After my grandfather’s death, I began to write more; poet-
keepin it a hunnit.

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The Science of Getting It off Your Chest
Andrea Heine

“T his pouring of thoughts

out on paper has relieved
me. I feel better and full of
confidence and resolution.” This quote,
by author Diet Eman, perfectly captures
baker, has extensively studied the effects
of writing about personal and emotional
experiences—what he calls “expressive
writing”. He has found that yes, writing
things down really does help many of
gests is to take another person’s perspec-
tive when writing about our experiences.
For example, if someone is writing about
going through a divorce, they may take
on the perspective of the person they are
the experience many of us have when we us feel better. His research has shown divorcing. Pennebaker’s research shows
pour our thoughts and feelings onto a that writing about our major life events us that writing about things can help us
page. For many, writing is a therapeutic can improve immune system function, to process our emotions and heal from
tool. If we experience a death, a breakup, help us get better grades, and help us to major events. But it still leaves us won-
or a traumatic event, writing about it work through trauma and significant life dering why it is that the writing process
can help us feel better. The therapeu- transitions. According to Pennebaker’s helps us heal.
tic aspects of writing are why so many research, we get the most out of expres- Recent research from UCLA has
people keep journals, write poetry, and sive writing when we write about our used brain imaging studies to examine
even create stories. You don’t have to personal experiences every day for at the phenomenon of how writing helps
be a professional writer to benefit from least twenty minutes, and for at least four with healing from a neurobiological
the effects of getting things off your consecutive days. Surprisingly, however, perspective. This research has shown
chest through writing. But why is it that he suggests we stop not long after that. that when we write about our emotions,
putting things on a page makes us feel He feels that continuing to write about we actually begin to process them in a
better? Is there some sort of science to these events or traumas for longer than different part of our brain. In one study,
back this up? a week may suck us in to what he calls a researchers hooked participants up to a
A psychology researcher from the “cycle of self-pity”. brain-imaging scanner. The researchers
University of Texas, Dr. James Penne- Another useful tool Pennebaker sug- then showed the participants pictures of

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people experiencing certain emotions, area. Perhaps when we process things in treatments. Along with Pennebaker’s
such as sadness or anger. In response the prefrontal cortex, we are able to look research, numerous studies have shown
to these images, an area of the brain at them from a more logical standpoint. that adding journal writing to an existing
involved in emotional reactivity, called Another study from the same UCLA therapy regimen can greatly improve
the amygdala, lit up. This is a normal re- researchers showed a similar phenom- successful outcomes. In one study, moth-
sponse. It’s already well established in the enon to that of the first, but this time ers of children with disruptive behavior
field of neuroscience that the amygdala the participants actually participated in disorders (like autism or ADHD) had
is linked to our processing of emotions. a writing activity. In one group, partici- the stress they experienced significant-
What’s interesting is what happened pants wrote about a neutral experience, ly reduced when they participated in
when the researchers told the partici- and in the other group participants an online journal program. In another
pants to attach an emotional word to the wrote about an emotional experience study, people in therapy who partici-
pictures they saw. they had recently had. The group writing pated in written emotional disclosure
In one group, participants were told about the emotional experience showed saw greater reductions in anxiety and
to give the person in the picture a name. some activity in the amygdala, but depressive symptoms than those who
This produced no significant changes in once again, the area in the ventrolateral didn’t. These studies show that writing
brain activity. But, when the participants prefrontal cortex showed a high level of can be an extremely useful tool for those
labeled the emotions represented in the activity. These findings imply something with mental health issues.
pictures, a different area of the brain, amazing; that when we put our emotions Even if you don’t have mental health
called the ventrolateral prefrontal cortex, into words, we begin processing them issues, these results apply to almost
lit up. Furthermore, the response in the in an entirely different area of the brain. anyone. Simply keeping a journal or
amygdala was reduced. Simply attaching Writing about our emotions literally writing poems or lyrics when we are
a word to the emotion in the picture re- changes the way our brain processes experiencing a difficult time in our lives
duced emotional reactivity in the brain. them. can have a number of health benefits
The prefrontal cortex, the area at Results like these are fascinating and can greatly improve our emotional
the front of the brain, is involved in the indeed, but there are further implica- well-being. Also, writers everywhere can
processing of higher-order thinking and tions from these findings. Not only can take comfort in the fact that the terrible
logical reasoning, whereas the amygdala writing be a therapeutic tool for the poetry they wrote after their high school
is found towards the base of the brain, average person, but it turns out writing break up really was an effective way to
often considered to be a more primitive may also help to augment psychotherapy help them deal with their emotions.

“[Pennebaker] feels that continuing to write

about these events or traumas for longer than
a week may suck us in to a ‘cycle of self-pity.’”

Andrea Heine
Andrea Heine is a senior majoring in Psycholo-
gy, with a Minor in Professional and Technical
Writing. She enjoys neuroscience, cats, books, and
espresso.

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Gimpgirladventures; A Dying Girl’s Blog
Nicole Bracciotti

A
lingering, dusty smell of old cardboard boxes filled the assistance of feeding tubes and a machine to breathe for her.
air. Put among the wreckage stood a lime green tech- Her motor neurons would slowly start dying and any muscles
nological innovation. A layer of dust slimmed across would lose voluntary control and cease to work. The brain,
my fingers as I rolled the computer screen towards me. The however, is perfectly intact and the same as it was before diag-
extendable pole on top of which the computer was attached nosis.
squeaked with the old movement. This piece of technology Even though she was 23 years old and fighting a diagnosis,
has a sensor that finds the pupils of the eye. The pupils then she didn’t lack a sense of humor. She expressed the uncommon
become the computer mouse and blinking becomes the right pair, humor and death, at a young age. Through her blog, Gimp
click. This technical innovation is an eye gaze system, the Girl Adventures, she posted about her illness through her com-
brand name, DynaVox. The eye gaze system, at 6 feet tall, had puter keyboard, at first with questions to God such as, “Now
not been turned on in over a month. A screech filled the air if I do get the golden ticket into Heaven, I have a few curious
as my mother pulled a piece of packing tape from its roll. We questions. Do I have access to dead celebrities?” and “Does the
were packing the communication system that was the most Chipotle franchise extend to heaven? I would give my left leg
prized instrument of my sisters writing. This piece of technol- for a steak burrito. I know that may not be much since my legs
ogy was being sent to another individual who was diagnosed don’t work to begin with.”
with A.L.S.: the disease that took my sister’s life. In high school, Even though after a few months her legs couldn’t work, her
Megan wanted to be a thespian; she loved dramas, plays, act- creative process still did. Now, every writer has an instrument
ing, all of it. As she aged, she studied nursing but soon dropped for writing to get his or her idea on paper or on screen. The
out to work full-time to make more money. At first, my sister most common of these are the keyboard, which is what I am
used a pen to start jotting down her experiences. Physical lim- using to type out the thoughts in my head right now, or a pen.
itations started to affect her though. What happens when the hand cannot write—not from writers
The first thing to go was her grip. block, but from limited mobility?
Megan was diagnosed with A.L.S. (also known as Lou A few blogs in, not only was the function of her grip un-
Gehrig’s Disease) at the age of 23. This diagnosis, for her, successful, so were a lot of other functions in her body. Tasks
meant that she had roughly six months to live without the became more difficult. She could no longer walk and breathing
was labored. She added many medical
technologies to her daily life such as a
vent, feeding tube, and DynaVox.
One of the most difficult deci-
sions made was to get “vented”. This
means to get a tube surgically placed
into the trachea through a dime-sized
hole. The tube coming out the neck
is attached to a breathing machine
that exudes a monstrous beeping if
there is a leak, or the very common,
detachment of the tube. This decision,
along with adding a feeding tube, gave
Megan another year with life.
With this extra year of life, Megan
turned solely to using her computer.
My sister had used her keyboard for
her blog in the beginning stages of her
disease. The problem a few months in
was that her mobility was falling fast.
The DynaVox, what she used to speak
with, started to constantly go off in a
Me, my sister, and my brother, Michael
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represent my sister’s: “Help! Help! There is a bug on my face!”
or “DEFCON 5!” I still am unsure as to how the word DEF-
CON originated, I just knew it meant she had to GO. As in, go
to the bathroom. As in, emergency status. As in, if the family
couldn’t help her make it in time to the bathroom, it would
be our sorry asses who had to clean up the aftermath. It was a
very interesting relationship my older sister and I had as you
can see.
With this relationship, I was able to experience the affects
of her blog, Gimp Girl Adventures. Megan had many sup-
porters, gave advice to people, and even got some negative
feedback for her word choice. For example, “At that moment
I knew what necessary task was about to commence...oper-
ation cork the cooter. I soon found myself tilted back in my
wheelchair with my legs propped up in the gyn position and
Jason with a tampon trying to achieve success in a task no man
should undertake. Failure was not an option.”
It seems some did not like her diction, such as when she
used “cooter” (one of the many slang words in our household
for the vagina). As her writing grew, so did her knowledge.
While she helped a lot of families, she also got a silent judg-
ment that I was able to see from afar.
The blog post she made titled, “A Dose of Humility, Peri-
od” (see above quote) was what taught her to be careful with
her audience. They would not always be so accepting, even if
her body was progressing into a state of immobility.
Imagine a blog or any piece of writing with substance in it.
That piece would have a 500-word count or more. Now, imag-
ine being unable to move any part of your body except for your
eyes and eyelids. Using these two tools of the human body to
write out a 500 or more word blog. Each character individually
selected for hours in order to get a message out. My sister, me, and my brother
A big motivational reason for Megan when it came to writ-
ing her blog was her family, who she believed was in denial.
You see, A.L.S. has two forms. It comes sporadically, meaning struggles of not being able to express themselves, either be-
any individual can get this disease. The reason, unknown. The cause of culture, a parent’s judgment, or the feeling that peers
second form is genetically, meaning that the gene within an will not understand. Writing is our outlet from that world.
individual’s DNA has a mutation or flaw. This flaw is passed Writing is our freedom and our message. All writers have
down, generation by generation. My sister had the second type. limitations.
Her family, a large part of it, was in denial that this disease It may not be easy to be a writer, but it is damn well
could affect them, even though the chances of getting A.L.S. is worth it.
50% if you have a parent with this gene. While it is up to inter-
pretation if this blog helped her family come out of denial, it
did help bring together a community all on its own. Strangers, Nicole Bracciotti
people scared at their fatal prognosis, families tormented and
with no options, and people from out of the country read this
blog. I invite you to go see for yourself how she incorporated Nicole Bracciotti is currently
humor into a humorless disease (http://gimpgirladventures. majoring in English with a con-
blogspot.com/).
centration in Technical Writing,
Her story, how she used writing in her life as an outlet, as
a way to express herself when her physical body shut down and minor in Spanish. She is also
on her, when she couldn’t express her personality, was shut pursuing a career in publishing
off due to the inability to choose what clothes to wear, or how and editing for LGBT, women’s,
she wanted her make-up done, and how she wanted her hair and cultural texts.
to look in the morning. Everyday people go through a similar

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 Breaking Down the Fourth Wall
Victor Hernandez

I
like to believe that my group of friends and I are people with Humbert.
with the ability to talk about any sort of topic. We often The way people often see metanarrative today is through
converse with a cunning, sharp wit that requires quick the form of humor, most notably breaking the fourth wall. This
thinking to respond to one another in a snappy way. Unfortu- is when characters acknowledge the audience as a form of en-
nately, not every day is like that. There are just days where none tertainment. A common example would be when the character
of us have anything interesting to say. Our conversations tend directly talks to the viewer to confirm something, while all the
to follow a linear pattern and, on the worst days, conversations other characters are confused at who that person is talking to.
are so skeletal that it sounds like this: “News headline. Dark In a video game, you would often see:
humorous joke. Controversial opinion. Topic shift.” When this “Press the ‘A button’ to jump!”
happens, my mind is so dull that it begins to wander and think ”What’s this ‘A button’ you’re talking about?”
that this conversation is a reflection of our society right now. The problem here is the original intention of fourth wall
Then, I realized that train of thought actually had some sense breaking. It was used to shock the audience and offer them
to it. a new type of entertainment. Deadpool was one of Marvel’s
Today, we have embraced the ideals and concept of the most popular characters, mainly due to his ability to play
metanarrative, albeit a more lazy and twisted version of it. with the metanarrative. His conversations with the writer and
Metanarrative is going beyond the story as written to fur- artist of the comic book were new and refreshing. However,
ther tell the story. It involves being aware of the medium you it’s becoming difficult for Deadpool to stand out now when so
use and utilizing said medium, such as a book or a film or a many other Marvel films have small jokes that break the fourth
game. When Vladimir Nabokov wrote Lolita, he knew that his wall. Even completely serious movies are poking fun at their
protagonist, Humbert Humbert, wouldn’t exactly be the most metanarrative, even when it negatively affects the experience.
likable character. He’s a pedophile, he manipulates others, and Avatar, a Hollywood blockbuster that seeks to immerse its au-
he doesn’t feel any shame about his actions. However, Nabokov dience, calls the unobtainable element of the Na’vi world “Un-
writes the entirety of Lolita from Humbert’s perspective, forc- obtainium.” Excellent use of immersion there, James Cameron.
ing the reader to enter his twisted way of thinking. Humbert Since we often use metanarrative for humor, we often for-
often talks directly to the reader, eloquently justifying his ac- get to use metanarrative as a storytelling tool. This is especially
tions and occasionally showing bouts of empathy. Through this true when I played the popular 2014 indie game, The Stanley
perspective, the reader can understand and even empathize Parable. In this game, players are frequently given two very
M.C. Escher, Drawing Hands

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clear options: take the left path or the right path. The decision Tarantino was able to make his point using metanarrative and
decides how the game is played, sometimes going places that without breaking the fourth wall.
are unexpected. In one ending, the narrator traps the player These are the types of stories and messages we get when
into playing a dumb mini-game 100 times, questioning the properly using metanarrative. I would much rather see and
possession of any free will at all. Parable goes in both direc- experience a film like Pulp Fiction than go through 100
tions, saying that free will is meaningless in games and that one-liners of fourth-wall breaking. I have always been in love
free will can change how the player will view and experience with metanarrative and it hurts to see its potential go misused.
the game. Many reviewers applauded Parable’s deconstruction Ultimately, my feelings can be summed up by the 2012 horror
of free will and determinism in a video game. Admittedly, I film, Cabin in the Woods. Director Joss Whedon breaks the
also thought it was a wonderful game, at first. Upon reflecting, fourth wall multiples times through the storyline. His movie is
however, I find that this game lacked a coherent message. Yes, considered to be both a love letter to horror movies and a plea
it had themes, but the game never did anything with those to stop the making of them. So, like me, while he enjoys the
themes. The creators simply presented it in an entertaining fourth wall breaking and the humor, he also believes it harms
way. It was a game to entertain, not a game with a story in the creativity of storytelling.
mind. When I finished, I enjoyed myself—but only on a sur-
face level.
A story that uses metanarrative correctly can truly be a
masterpiece for ages. Pulp Fiction’s use of metanarrative made
viewers see crime-life in an entirely different aspect. Instead
of high-speed car chases or ideas of betrayal floating around,
we see two lowly henchmen talking about cheeseburgers
before their next hit. Not everything needs to be spectacular.
Another point in the film is that there are no protagonists or
antagonists; there are just simply people. Vincent Vega, the Victor Hernandez
so-called protagonist of the movie, eventually gets killed by the
other protagonist, Butch Coolidge. His death was completely Victor Hernandez is a senior ma-
inconsequential. Butch did not care about his death, for he
was simply another henchman. Director Quentin Tarantino
joring in History and minoring
did not care about Vincent’s death, as they filmed the scene as in Technical Writing. He enjoys
if it was just another fight in the movie. The only people who all types of genres, as long as it’s
cared were in the audience, as they observed and empathized something that’s well-written.
with Vincent’s life during the first half of the movie. Using the
film’s overall narrative and the filming of Vincent’s death scene,

The Shocking Truth

Michelle Guelff

A
Marine convoy is making its way down the dusty Then silence.
streets of Iraq. Up on a rooftop watching over them is The American Sniper trailer sent chills through viewers this
a bearded Bradley Cooper looking through the scope holiday season after seeing the trailer play on their televisions
of his sniper rifle. He spots an Iraqi man on a cell phone and many times. The anticipation of wanting to know what happens
zeros in on him. Could he be a threat? The man steps away out next sends many people to the theater to find out for them-
of sight. Moments later, a woman and a young boy step out of selves and to learn the story of the most lethal sniper in U.S.
a house and begin walking towards the approaching convoy. military history: Chris Kyle. However, many did not have to
Cooper sees this and watches as the woman pulls a grenade wait to see the trailer to know that they wanted to see it. Amer-
from beneath her clothes. She proceeds to hand it to the young ican Sniper is Chris Kyle’s autobiography, recounting his many
boy. The boy graciously takes it and runs towards the Marines. tours in Iraq and the stress it put on his family. It is also a #1
Through the scope, the child is seen getting closer and closer. New York Times Best Seller, having sold millions of copies.

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 Being one of the millions, I went into the movie expecting
to see the story I read in the book. However, there were facts
changed between the book and the movie that seemed to serve
no other purpose than to create a bigger reaction from the
audience. Kyle’s first kill was only the woman whose intentions
were to kill dozens of Marines. The movie changed that to a
child and the woman. Killing someone is shocking enough,
why make this change? Why do the screenwriters have the au-
thority to twist the truth and get away with it saying it is “based
on the book,” yet writers have to fact check numerous times
before they go to print?
A nonfiction writer and a screenwriter seem to play with
a different set of rules. Screenwriters are allowed to spin the
truth a little to get a larger audience; yet, if a nonfiction writer
exaggerates the truth a bit in order to sell more books, there is
a larger risk of being sued for libel. When Kyle’s autobiography
came out, there were some people that weren’t happy with the
outcome of how scenes and people were represented. Jesse
Ventura, Navy veteran and former Minnesota governor, claims
a bar fight that resulted in Kyle punching a celebrity in the face
(Ventura says it was him) never occurred. Kyle never stated in
his book who the person was, nor was it in the movie. How-
ever, in several interviews before Kyle died, he said that it was
in fact Ventura. Kyle didn’t even publish his side of the event,
yet his estate is being sued. The consequences for nonfiction
writers are more detrimental than they are for screenwriters,
who have a movie studio backing them. market manipulation and a penny stock scam. Belfort’s mem-
There is more risk in writing an autobiography or memoir oir was adapted into a movie in 2013 of the same name and
than any other genre, because even though it is being told from sent shockwaves throughout many viewers. Sex, drugs, money,
the individual’s point of view, there will be someone who is not and crime; the recipe of The Wolf of Wall Street leaves many
happy with how the events were portrayed. What is considered people wondering if the events portrayed actually happened.
“real” can be skewed by a person’s perception and their view- The story and its events are controversial, and several people
point. This is because no two people look at the world the same have come out stating how a lot of it is either exaggerated or
way. You could go to a baseball game with hundreds of other not true at all. However, Belfort stated that the movie version
people and ask them to describe the events that occurred, yet doesn’t exaggerate the use of drugs and outrageous sex enough;
you won’t receive two of the same responses. So can reality be he claims his life was even worse than the film portrayed.
captured in literature? I say no; capturing every perspective Belfort had a say and authorization of a lot of changes
that encompasses the reality of a situation is impossible. that were made for the movie; yet, after the release, he says the
So what happens when the author of an autobiography movie doesn’t accurately portray what happened. So that leaves
is perceived as being an unreliable narrator? Jordan Belfort’s us to wonder what was truer, the book or the movie. Belfort
memoir, The Wolf of Wall Street, is a great example of an has admitted to being on a ridiculous amount of drugs during
unreliable nonfiction narrator. His book is his version of what this time in his life, so how is he a reliable narrator to recount
occurred during his time of committing fraud through stock the events that took place? The truth is, he isn’t. He is simply
telling his story the way he thinks will sound more dramatic

“When I go to see a and interesting to people, even though he probably doesn’t

accurately remember the details of that part of his life. He
wants the attention. Through his comments, Belfort has turned

movie that is ‘based on a himself into an unreliable narrator, flipping his memoir into a
work of fiction.
When I pick up an autobiography, I expect the words I’m

true story,’ I know not to about to read to all be true. However, when I go to see a movie
that is “based on a true story,” I know not to believe a lot of
what I see. But why not tell the truth all the time? Audiences

believe a lot of what I see.” love a true story, but definitely do not appreciate being lied to.
If it comes out that one thing was a lie in nonfiction literature,
it makes everything else also look like a lie. Stating the absolute

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truth with every fact of what occurred when writing about true
events is tricky.
Creating a reaction from readers of nonfiction has become Michelle Guelff
more important than fact checking. Emotions sell more books
and more tickets to movies. People want to see if Kyle takes the Michelle Guelff is an English
shot on a young boy. They want to watch Leonardo DiCaprio, major with an emphasis in Pro-
playing Belfort, flail around as if on drugs as he tries to get into
fessional/Technical Writing. She
his expensive car. These are stories that are merely “based” on
reality. Yet, audiences will never be able to grasp the full story enjoys writing short stories and
because reality cannot be accurately conveyed through the critiquing films.
written word.

Get in the Game: Video Game

and Film Based Writing
Andrew May

O
Romeo, Romeo! Wherefore art thou Romeo? Sorry Juliet, scholastic community—teachers and students alike. Video
Romeo is in another castle, leveling up in the latest games, especially, get looked down upon in society as being for
story-rich, role-playing game. Or maybe he is watching basement dwelling, antisocial shut-ins. The problem with these
a critically acclaimed movie with Mercutio. Those two love stereotypes is that they inhibit creativity in learning situations.
hanging out, after all. But what about the REAL world? Why This article will focus specifically on writing classes, but it is a
do they make knaves of themselves with such drivel? Juliet, this much broader topic than just that. The benefits can reach into
isn’t the 16th century anymore! Video games and movies are pre-college computer sciences, graphic design, traditional art,
considered multimedia and have huge teaching potential. or even marketing.
Poor Juliet. She doesn’t grasp the latent learning value of A diverse setting, complex characters that are involved in
multimedia. Yet, sadly, neither does most of the traditional dramatic plots and subplots, well-written dialogue, captivating

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imagery; these aren’t just the marks of a good book. These are game, which jumpstarted his still-burning passion for reading.
the hallmarks of good video games and movies, as well. Yet, for Previously, video games that featured large amounts of reading
some unfathomable reason, the latter two aren’t worked into were for a niche market and did not have mass appeal. Today,
reading and writing curriculum. though, many big-budget, role-playing games involve a pleth-
As it turns out, some video game development companies ora of readable content. Players of Skyrim or the Dragon Age
take existing popular literature and turn it into games. One series will be able to tell of the immense quantity of scrolls and
company, Telltale Games (an apropos name if ever there was texts, scattered throughout the maps, with flavor text. Whole
one), used the ultra-famous book series, Game of Thrones, and works of poetry, creative fiction, history, and political intrigue
remodeled it into a video game series, replete with known and are kept in these items for players to discover and read. And
new characters, new plots, and retconned background lore. that is on top of being engaged in the “true” story of the game.
And, of course, it would be impossible to neglect mentioning What is so commonly forgotten about movies, video
the fact that the same book series was made into a mega-pop- games, and books is that they are all cut from the same cloth;
ular television show. Both of these artistic mediums require a one may be fashioned into a shirt, another a jacket, the last as
slightly different form of creativity that is not being fostered or socks, but they all serve a similar purpose. Video games and
practiced in the average school. movies are the interactive and visual representations of a book.
The average school is only using traditional creative If book reading is looked at as a meaningful and enriching
writing, which is, in essence, limited to writing short stories pastime, why should the other two be vilified? The other two
in class. Perhaps later in a student’s school career they will should be celebrated for their unique applications and advan-
be challenged to write a longer story. Fine. But what about tages.
challenging students to write game synopses with ultra-detailed As a culture, we need to stop pushing against “deviant
crafted worlds and deep characters that have meaningful inter- media” when it comes to education. So many students (likely
actions with the player character? What about asking students a portion of you readers, too) have experienced a video game
to write movie scripts with industry standard formatting, heavy with a captivating story. I daresay, everyone has seen a movie.
use of dialogue, camera angle write-ups, and descriptions of Students can build off their preexisting knowledge and use it
the perfect character attributes? Tasking a student to write in in school. Remember, curriculum is presented to the student
new genres helps them to be more adaptive and balanced, and and the student either chooses to engage in it, or not. In many
it helps them to possibly realize their full potential as creative cases, students don’t do good work because they don’t feel an
writers. attachment to the curriculum. They simply don’t feel motivat-
Writing isn’t the only skill benefiting from multimedia ed- ed to start trying. Video games or movies can be a pathway in
ucation, though. It is not uncommon for a youth to get a large for these unenthusiastic pupils. Now, more than ever, is the
portion of their daily reading through video games. A student time for all of us to lay down our swords pointed against “nerd
in a past English class of mine told of how he didn’t become culture”, and to pick up our pencils aimed against eight-foot
a proficient reader until he played through a Final Fantasy tall orcs.

“Sorry Juliet, Romeo is in another castle, leveling

up in the latest, story-rich role-playing game.”

Andrew May
Andrew is a Technical Writ-
ing Certificate student. He got
his BA in English Education at
Chico State. He hopes to work
as a technical writer for a high-
tech company. He is also an avid
video gamer (who is console
agnostic!).

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Writing: A Deaf Person’s Haven
Vanessa Mendoza Palencia

I
once heard that food is the way to as they began to clap their hands and sions or teacher lectures. More than that,
a man’s heart. But I’ve also heard of chant along to a catchy beat of gibberish reading allowed me to experience an
some of the best cooks being dumped words. My little five-year old self never alternate world in which I was a normal
by their lovers, so I’m not sure if I can once thought that I was the only one hearing character. Whether it was in the
vouch for that. However, the belief that who wasn’t able to make out the words form of a ghost story or a summer ro-
writing (aside from sign language) is the being sung. With time came the reali- mance novel, the authors wrote in such
way to a deaf lover’s heart is something zation that I wasn’t like the other little a way that permitted me to communi-
that I can speak for. boys and girls in my classroom. Feeling cate mentally with the other characters
I was diagnosed at the tender age of exposed and vulnerable, I tried to find in the story. In essence, reading was an
four with complete hearing loss in my another means of gathering information. outlet for me; a temporary time frame
left ear and a mild to severe hearing loss I stumbled upon the art of lip reading that allowed me to forget the reality of
in my right. After finding out about my early in my elementary school years my hearing impairment. I loved how
hearing loss, my mother enrolled me in and learned to become proficient at it, normal I would feel during my reading
a deaf school. While there I learned to but even then I was still left with blank experiences, so naturally my love for
communicate with others via sign lan- spaces in everyday conversations. reading led to my passion for writing;
guage, which involved a lot of interpre- It wasn’t until I was given my first thus, my writer’s soul was born.
tation from body language and visuals. book that I realized that I could read as As I grew older, I realized that
More than halfway through my first year a way of gathering information. Instead despite being connected to the hearing
there, my teachers and audiologist con- of straining every day in the classroom world by being able to hold an oral con-
ferred with my mother and agreed that I to hear the teacher talk about adjectives versation with people, I found it more
had more than enough hearing to attend and pronouns, or how Abraham Lincoln comfortable to converse through writing.
a regular public school. emancipated the slaves, I could turn Whether it was writing a letter to some-
That first day in kindergarten is to texts that explained in detail how to one, typing up an e-mail, or sending
nothing but a distant memory but I can word a sentence or how events led up to a text, writing was the more effective
remember hearing my teacher’s voice the Emancipation Proclamation. I be- mode of communication for me. Not
and not being able to clarify what she came so immersed in the reading world only was I able to read the words on the
was saying. The next thing I knew, my that I figured out that by gaining what page in front of me, I was able to soak
classmates and I were sitting in a circle information I could, I was able to fill in in the meaning of every letter and feel
and I remember watching them in awe the blanks when it came to class discus- the emotions behind every word. With
writing, there are no blank spaces. There
are only words and the connotations
you associate them with, and that’s what
makes writing such a beautiful subject
for me.
While I have met people who share
my passion for writing, our reasons tend
to differ. They generally love writing
because of the power that words hold. I,
too, believe that words can be empow-
ering; however, my passion for writing
stems from its simplicity. Writing has
the ability to bridge the gap between me
and the blank spaces. Just as braille is
a communication haven for the blind,
writing is bliss for the deaf. The art of
writing is a sanctuary for the hearing im-
paired because it connects us to the rest
of the world. It appears that sometimes

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 people get so wrapped up in dissecting provides that to those who have a barrier all that writing is able to convey, it truly
the meaning of a piece of literature or to oral communication. In my world, is the way to a deaf lover’s heart, lest one
searching for that perfect word, that the writing is the perfect bridging tool; a tool forget that.
value of the precious connection between that many tend to take for granted. With
different worlds writing possesses is
often overlooked. You can try to concoct
a luscious lemon-roasted chicken to win
over your sweetheart, but writing is an
Vanessa Mendoza Palencia
invaluable skill that can help expand
your knowledge of communication with Vanessa Palencia is a junior majoring in English
those who have limited access to oral with an emphasis in Technical Writing. She enjoys
communication. I have garnered many writing lyrics, blogging, and maintaining a healthy
friends over the course of the years, but
it was those who learned to pass me
lifestyle. She just recently received the opportunity
notes in class or text rather than call me to have one of her lyrics professionally produced
every day that grew closer to me, not the and hopes to continue to contribute her lyrics and
ones who whispered inaudible words or one day positively impact her listeners. A mother of
ignored the importance that writing held one, she loves having her son by her side and strives
in my life. Communication is the key
in a successful relationship and writing
to teach him everything she knows along the way.

A Lonely, Early August Afternoon

Philip Perry
Louis Dyer, The Apparition of Escapism

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A “He used writing to
llow me to be blunt with you, dear reader; none of us
inherently deserves to be happy. However, we can earn
happiness by striving for it and by doing all we can to
create situations where happiness can be obtained. Being an
adult in our world is difficult; retaining a sense of magic, joy,
and childhood is often impossible. But efforts to preserve it
become something he
should never be abandoned.
Personally, I know how much of a struggle it can be to
retain the child in my heart now that I’ve begun to finally grow
wanted to be, and that
up. Sure many of us easily find happiness as young adults, yet
finding happiness and becoming whole as a person can be
monumentally confusing. We have to retain our childhood
made him happy.”
wonder in adulthood, and for some it’s the only way to stay
alive. For me, it was an emotional, ghostly, and existential reality granted him power and freedom. The character, named
moment that made me understand. If I have remained unclear, Ryden, now stood confidently in the doorframe, smile unwav-
and now that this tirade has come to an end, allow me to illus- ering, hair hanging effortlessly, and eyes sharper than tacks.
trate my point with a story. Ryden was an allegory for everything the Young Man wanted
Once upon a time there was a desperate Young Man who to be.
dreamt of becoming far more than he thought he could be “But…I can’t make him go away,” said the Young Man.
(though to be fair saying ‘once upon a time’ is quite ironic in “I’ve tried so many times. I just want to be you.”
this context). He would sit in his room and dream that it was Ryden smirked, “But you are.”
a box containing a separate reality; a reality where not only “Only in this room! Out there…I can’t live my dreams.
anything was possible, but everything was encouraged. As a There just isn’t any time.”
boy, the Young Man would turn on video games and get lost in “You want to know something? That world out there,”
realms filled with light and dark as the driving forces. He might Ryden said coyly motioning to the rest of the house, “is just
have also built forts with his best friend and his brother, and as real as the room you’re sitting in now. After all, it’s only a
the three of them would invent games outside of convention. It room. There isn’t a difference on the opposite sides of this door.
was truly a magical time where he didn’t have to be anything. The question you should be asking is what you think the room
But now that boy was a Young Man-or at least he looked really is.”
like one. As he sat in his room, he could not help but think of “I suppose…ugh…I know you’re right,” the Young Man
the reality outside of his box. A reality where he had two crap- whispered to himself. “So what do I do? How can I be more
py jobs, a girlfriend who would soon leave, breaking his heart, like you more often? How can I…get rid of him?”
and a mountain of overwhelming choices that were constrain- “You can’t be more like me. You are me.”
ing his dreams. The Young Man had just turned 21, but he did The Young Man closed his eyes in confusion, and squeezed
not celebrate like many of his peers. He thought that he was his temples as though a migraine had come instantaneously.
better than them, even though he knew he was no different. He When he looked up once more, Ryden had disappeared. The
was pathetic, alone by choice, and he felt lost. As the remaining Young Man ran out of his room as quickly as he possibly could,
weeks of summer waned on, he continued to isolate himself and stared down the hall; but he saw nothing. The Young Man
out of stupidity. turned back into his darkened room and looked to the corner.
Then came a lonely, early August afternoon, when he And there, where the apparition had come to haunt him, he
stopped for a moment. It was a particularly memorable and only saw a corner.
infinite moment as he looked around the room where he once And then, on his computer screen, a familiar title had
fought monsters and flew with unrestrained magic. The Young become clear, made visible by his breaking the illusion. He
Man felt anger welling up once again. It was a familiar and walked over tentatively and saw the title of his novel, Arthin-
unwanted anger. ian, sitting there waiting for him. The Young Man realized that
Either to haunt him or just out of spite, an apathetic he had opened the file many times before, but had not focused
apparition appeared in front of him. The Young Man stared at enough to write anymore; however, Ryden had different plans
his old self across the room. It was just a mirror, but it showed for him.
someone he hated. Suddenly, he heard a voice he had not heard Even though the Young Man had not written a single word
in many years. of his story in months, the Young Man somehow found himself
“Come on now, don’t let this clown beat you.” smiling. He opened up his bedroom windows, sat in front of
The Young Man turned to the door and saw another the screen, and began typing at a rapid pace. The words came
image; a man standing in the doorway. The man was, in fact, pouring out of his mind and onto the screen as if the dam of
the main character of the fantasy novel the Young Man had frustration had been obliterated.
started writing years ago. He belonged to a reality created out The next day, the day after that, and every day until the be-
of the Young Man’s desire to escape his own teenage trials. That ginning of a new school semester, one which would see a great

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deal of adulthood and heartbreak, the Young Man continued to ing his childhood in a package he could revisit as he grew. The
write and smile. Young Man used writing to become something he wanted to
The room was still only a room. But what the room had be, and that made him happy. How you will happiness if you
been—though it had never truly been anything else—became have not already found it is a question you must ask yourself.
his imagination. And he took it with him wherever he went.
The Young Man finished his book on November 25, 2014, and
he was finally proud of himself. It is not difficult, dear reader,
to decipher who the Young Man in the story is. It is also not Philip Perry
difficult to understand that the room, and the visions that ap-
peared within it, were not real-though the Young Man did see Philip Perry is a 21-year old
them. What is important is the smile. From the end of August junior majoring in English with
until Christmas, the Young Man would suffer. But unlike all
those times before, he was not unhappy or alone. He learned
a Concentration in Technical
to trust others with his dreams and his joys. And when he was Writing. When he isn’t writing,
all by himself and thinking of Ryden, he continued to smile no Phil is usually playing with his
matter how hard life could be. Ryden was who he was becom- band or collecting games to play
ing. with friends. His goal in life is to
The man no longer saw the apparitions of what once was.
He simply continued to write, and it saved his life.
succeed with his creativity and
And that, dear reader, is how you earn happiness—or at make it his career, whether that
least that’s how the Young Man did. He earned it by writing, be music, writing, movies or any-
letting the words on the page become his reality, and envelop- thing else.

Textual Healing
Thao Nguyen

“P
alms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy/ there’s tears would be forgotten, the stickiness on my cheeks the
vomit on his sweater already” (Eminem, “Lose only clue that they were ever there. Of course, back then my
Yourself ”). Nobody aptly describes the physical outbursts were merely the result of having fought with my
manifestations of anxiety like Eminem, and as somebody who sisters or having gotten in trouble at school. But as I got older,
has suffered from anxiety and mild depression, I am more and my anxieties and depression grew stronger, I always turned
than familiar with what he is describing. Unfortunately, that to books. A.A. Milne, C.S. Lewis, G.K. Chesterton, Lemony
is where our similarities end. Unlike The Real Slim Shady, my Snicket, and Anthony Burgess have all been my therapist at one
head spinning, cold sweat inducing, stomach at my knees, point or another. It was as though the spines of their books
there-is-no-hope anxiety that affected me was not assuaged were soaked with magic.
by losing myself in the music (or in Xanax for that matter). It was incredibly easy for me to get lost in the books I read,
Instead, I found solace between the pages of books. and I have taken my fair share of trips through Middle Earth
Anxiety attacks and bouts of depression have taken over and Pemberley. These books showed me that hiding from my
my life several times. When this happens I shut people out, problems would not make them go away. The Ring of Power
stop eating, cry uncontrollably for no reason, and stay in bed did not lose power by being hidden in an envelope, and Eliza-
until there is a Thao-sized indent in the mattress. In these beth Bennet did not find happiness by staying in Longbourn.
instances of gloom, reading became the only thing that could The novel that influenced me the most in this aspect was The
stop my downward spiral. Smelling the papery sheets and Screwtape Letters. I remember thinking to myself, “Worm-
seeing the black type marching across the pages became the wood and Screwtape persistently worked to bring this man to
panacea to the chokehold that stress had over my life. damnation. However, this man prevailed in the end; he made
I noticed that books made me feel better at a young age. it through by getting through each day.” I began to think that
By the time I was six, I had gotten into the habit of crying over like Wormwood, I had to consistently work at calming myself
everything. My parents would hand me a book, often times down, but I also had to be like his Patient and overcome all
from the Ramona or Junie B. Jones series, and within seconds of the dark thoughts that were crowding my mind. Reading
my crying would subside. By the end of the first chapter, my taught me not to use my anxiety and depression as an excuse

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to find fault with myself. It taught me to not to allow these means of escape from my worry and tension. They taught me
illnesses to cripple me. to work through my problems, rather than against them.
These feelings of doubt and fear that inhibited me were of- Many of my favorite books, especially The Lord of the Rings
ten magnified by my own criticisms. I hated myself for feeling and Pride and Prejudice, are one anxiety attack away from
the way I did, and especially for not being able to fight back. crumbling completely. There is something comforting about
The books I read allowed me to get away from that. When that. They remind me that I have gotten through countless
I was reading, I did not feel lonely, or scared, or hopeless. ordeals and have the tools to get through many more. As
Instead, I would get swept up in the action of the novels and Eminem said, “I just can’t seem to get out of this slump/.../ But
all of those feelings would go away. My brain would stop the I need something to pull me out of this dump/.../I just can’t
constant whirlwind of thoughts running through it and focus sit back and wallow/ in my own sorrow” (“Beautiful”). He
on the action of the story. Reading allowed me to feel calm in summed up exactly what reading has done for me. Reading has
the midst of the chaos that took over my mind. However, the gotten me through some of the hardest times of my life, while
books I read were not just a haven from these overwhelming also teaching me that I already have everything I need to get
feelings. They also taught me to stop hating and judging myself through anything that comes my way.
for these feelings that were out of my control.
The clearest memory I have of my first real encounter with
anxiety is also a memory of a realization that would change
the way I viewed my anxiety. I had just spent days in my room
staring despondently at the wall. In an attempt to make me feel
better, my parents had bought me a first edition printing of The
Lord of the Rings trilogy. My eyes were bleary from crying and Thao Nguyen
from reading. My stomach felt sick. What made it worse was
knowing that my discomfort was all in my head. In addition to Thao is a majoring in Technical
feeling self-pity, I was mad at myself for letting my desolation Writing. She likes big butts and
get the best of me. I had believed that my response to my dis-
tress was a sign of weakness. But then J.R.R. Tolkien, or rather
she cannot lie, and planning fake
Gandalf said, “I will not say, do not weep, for not all tears are weddings to soccer players (with
an evil.” Reading that line immediately lifted the suffocating big butts).
haze of misery that had settled around me. I began to under-
stand that I did not have to hate myself for feeling the way I
did. It was then that I truly began to understand what books
were capable of doing for me. They became more than just a

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