invention is patented, only the owner can make, sell or distribute the product; however, anyone else
who wants to profit from this item must get permission from the owner.
3. Novels, plays, newspapers, and other original printed materials are protected by copyright
law. However, visual images such as drawings, photographs, and cartoons are still illegally
copied off the Internet. / Novels, plays, newspapers, and other original printed materials
are protected by copyright law; however, visual images such as drawings, photographs, and
cartoons are still illegally copied off the Internet.
4. The U.S. Congress passed the Family Copyright Act of 2005 to counter piracy. In addition, the British
Parliament found it necessary to create the Digital Economy Act.
5. Many consumers try to keep up with modern technology. Nevertheless, this is almost impossible
because what is popular today becomes obsolete tomorrow.
Step 4: Editing Your Writing
Exercise 1 (p. 130)
Answers will vary.
2. Whereas some people like to go to a movie theater, others prefer to watch movies at home.
3. Even though soccer is the most popular sport in Argentina, baseball is the leading sport in the United
States.
4. While shopping online is very convenient, many people prefer to see the merchandise before they
buy it.
5. Although air travel is expensive, the time saved makes it worthwhile.
Exercise 2 (p. 131)
A
2. What they decided to do is ridiculous.
3. It is essential that you check the painting’s authenticity.
4. We advise that you buy jewelry only from a reputable dealer.
5. The board demands that the school hire master teachers.
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6. I don’t agree with what he said.
B
1. I believe that viewers have a right to use free, unauthorized cable service.
2. Time Warner complains that not only are they losing money, but the quality of service to their other
customers suffers.
3. Most importantly they insist that obtaining free cable is unlawful.
4. We feel that these companies have a monopoly.
5. In conclusion, I think that people should be allowed to use unauthorized cable service unless we have
reasonable options.
Exercise 3 (pp. 131-132)
2. The city residents recommend that the mayor lower the fare for public transportation.
3. Parents believe that the community should provide after-school programs for teenagers.
4. It is crucial that the government offer free health care for all citizens.
5. Most employers insist that their workers arrive on time.
Exercise 4 (p. 132)
Identity theft occurs when someone steals your name, social security number, or credit card
number and uses it for his or her own purposes. Although most people feel safe from identity theft,
thousands of people each year fall victim to this new form of crime. We recommend that you to protect
yourself from this hideous crime. Do not disclose personal information to strangers. Destroy all unused
bank and credit card statements. Keep an eye on your credit cards. Although credit cards make life
easier (1), you need to be cautious when using them. In case you become a victim of identity crime,
follow these steps. We advise that you (2) should file a police report as soon as you realize that
something is wrong. It is crucial that you (3) to notify your credit card companies and banks
immediately. We also suggest that you (4) could keep records of all your documents in a safe place.
Therefore, if you become a victim, you will have all the necessary information to facilitate the filing
process.
Review: Putting It All Together
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Exercise 1 (p. 134)
1. that
2. to
3. against
4. of
Exercise 2 (p. 134)
Answers will vary. Example:
In his article “Why Cell Phones and Driving Don’t Mix,” Lee Dye suggests that when we multi-task, both
actions cannot be done at the same level of competency. In fact, research from John Hopkins University
has proven that when we listen, our focus on visual cues is diminished. Therefore, talking in the car on a
cell phone—whether it is handheld or not—is still dangerous.
Exercise 3 (p. 135)
1. R
2. C
3. R
4. R
Exercise 4 (p. 135)
1. Many companies copy the ingredients found in famous perfumes. Furthermore/in addition/
moreover, other companies steal patterns for dishware, sheets, and towels. / Many companies copy the
ingredients found in famous perfumes; furthermore/in addition/moreover, other companies steal
patterns for dishware, sheets, and towels.
2. Many college students know that plagiarism is illegal. However/nevertheless, websites that sell essays
continue to grow. / Many college students know that plagiarism is illegal; however/nevertheless,
websites that sell essays continue to grow.
3. Writing a research paper takes time and patience. Furthermore/in addition/moreover, it takes
determination. / Writing a research paper takes time and patience; furthermore/in addition/ moreover,
it takes determination.
4. Media-related property theft has resulted in legal retaliation. However/nevertheless, the
number of individuals illegally obtaining media online has increased. / Media-related property
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theft has resulted in legal retaliation; however/ nevertheless, the number of individuals illegally
obtaining media online has increased.
Exercise 5 (p. 136)
Answers will vary.
1. Although people in Japan greet each other by bowing, Europeans greet each other by shaking hands.
2. While opponents say that television has too much violence, many people believe it can be an
educational tool.
3. Whereas many people go on vacation in the summer, I prefer to vacation in the winter when it’s less
crowded.
4. Even though cell phone users believe they have the right to talk whenever they want, many people
believe that cell phones should be banned from restaurants.
Exercise 6 (p. 136)
1. It is mandatory that cyclists in Australia wear helmets.
2. It is essential that a driver check the car’s oil and tires before taking a long trip.
3. The taxpayers propose that the mayor build a new highway.
4. Colleges recommend that students have their own computers.
Exercise 7 (p.137)
To complete a research project on the Internet, it is important that you (1) find must a good
search engine. There are many available (2) ;however, some are better than others. Once you have
chosen your search engine, it is essential that you (3) should narrow your search to a specific topic. Type
in the keywords for your search. We recommend that you (4) will check your spelling carefully. If you
misspell too many words, you will not get the right results. As soon as you have your list of websites, we
suggest that you quickly (5) to scan the list. Some people choose websites randomly, (6) while/whereas
others find that the first five to ten sites listed are usually the best. Be prepared to look at a lot of
websites before you find what you need. Open the sites and skim them to find out if the information will
work for your project. (7) Even though/Although it It is tempting to copy the material that you have
found, it is mandatory that you (8) to use your own words when you write your paper. You should
include the website address in your notes.
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