Orimi Dec 27TH
Orimi Dec 27TH
Written by
Avinash Annapragada
Mail : avinashavi360@gmail.com
Phone Number 9700700566 / 8125340690
1 INT. AJAY'S ROOM - EVENING 1
chesthadu...
CUT TO:
GIRL
Ammamma vaallu ocharu, assalu gap
dorakteldu...
RAM
eee saari enni days?
2.
GIRL
Maybe 2-3 days... a? ne birthday
time ki ocharana?
RAM
Emodhu le, vaallathone undu...
GIRL
sorry ram. nenu raalenane, gift
iddamani oka book courieer
chesanu...
RAM
Book huh?
RAM (CONT'D)
Edi me father raasinda?
GIRL
Hmm...
GIRL (CONT'D)
naku telsu kada ram neekem
kaavalo...
RAM
ina book evaru chaduthaare...
GIRL
Nu chadvalanna avi Out of stock
unnayi...
RAM
Out of stock huh?
(he remembers
something...)
naku pampinchindi me father personl
copy anaku....
GIRL
Mari nu alaa ummm ani unte naaku
nachatle...
RAM
Antha risk avsrama?
GIRL
Dad, 3 days ammamma vaallatho busy
untaru... nenu kuda... so book miss
(MORE)
3.
GIRL (CONT'D)
inattu thelidu... 3 days lo finish
it off ram... book jagratha...
RAM
book chadavadam pedha task a...
GIRL
Raaam... kathal padakunda chadu...
RAM
Adi kaaade...
GIRL
Inkem matladaku... only 3 days no
msg/calls. Once again happy
birthday ram, kalvaleka
pothunnanduku sorry... book matrm
jagrattha... Bye
RAM
Bye
FADE OUT.
AJAY
Arey venu! manam entha pichollam
ra... em telvani age la, life lo
ededo cheyalanukuntam. anni
telsinanka, silent ipothadm endi
ra?
Venu smiles...
VENU
ooke alochisthe dimak karab
ithadi.. ina em cheste emundi ra..
happy ga unnama leda anthe!
4.
RAM
Ledu nanna, bus rush ga undadam
valla... late indi...
Ajay's done he's coming towards venu and He's passing by...
RAM (CONT'D)
Aah anni theeskunna nanna...
VENU
Rey!
AJAY
Ram looks around, looks at venu..
venu asks him to come... as ram's
coming... in presence of ajay
again...
RAM
Sare nanna... nen malli chestha...
AJAY
entra nuvvu? Aah daddy la Valla
ikkada mem happy ga lekpothe...
AJAY (CONT'D)
nu matrm "aah nanna sare nanna"
anukunta... aaah?
RAM
Bhayya... odhu bhayya...
RAM (CONT'D)
odhu bhayya... adi naadi kuda
kaadu... bhayya, odhu bhayya pls...
VENU
Book aah?
AJAY
Needi kanappudu nedeggara enduku...
VENU
(whispering in ram's
ear...)
Nu daddy ani chaala pedha crime
cheshnv...
AJAY
mem happy ga lekpothe evvar undodhu
anthe...
VENU
Ekkaduntv ra nu aah?
RAM
Sri nagar colony
VENU
Edo pakkaki unnattu nadchukunta
etla pothunv ra?
AJAY
Daddy daddy ankuntu velthademo!
VENU
lite theesko... idi maa area kaadu,
ma gurinchi vethkaku.
VENU (CONT'D)
Inkosaari daddy ani road meeda
anaku...
AJAY
Happy daddy journey!
VENU (O.S.)
Arey monnatlaga inti mundhu odhu...
shop deggara idisheyi...
CUT TO:
Ajay on his bed.. saw that book of ram... thaagina danlo undi
book ni chusthu...
AJAY
andaru happy ga vaallaki nachindi
chesthu, life ni enjoy
chestunnaru...
(side smile..)
nenu..
AJAY
eeeemmm ledu... life lo emanna
cheddam ante support a undadhu...
(says by stressing it|^|)
...chi dinamma jeevitham.
FADE OUT.
antundi...
CUT TO:
FADE IN:
FLASHBACK - START
AJAY
nanna...
(Envelope isthadu...)
Entra idi?
8.
AJAY'S FATHER
(Ajay's father ventane
thana wife tho)
Emeee veedu job kottesaadu...
AJAY
naaku ee job cheyadam... istam ledu
nanna...
AJAY'S FATHER
Enti?
AJAY
Photography side veldamani...
AJAY'S FATHER
Manchi job ochindi, manchi---
MATCH CUT
TO:(AJAY'S FACE)
FLASHBACK - END
Present
9.
CUT TO BLACK.
FADE OUT.
10.
FADE IN:
Ajay sitting all alone... Putting his two hands on his head
while his bent downwards...
AJAY
andaru happy ga unntunnaru...
(shakes his head...)
nenu kuda vaallalo okarintlo
puttunte bagundedi.
CHARACTER_GUY
(smiles...)
Inkokari gurinchi alochinchadam
aape varaku...
(shook his head)
evvaru happy ga undaleru...
CHARACTER_GUY (CONT'D)
vaallu happy ga unnarani elaa
antunnav?
AJAY
Chusthene telusthundi...
AJAY
Nakela tel----
AJAY (CONT'D)
Ikkada prblm... relation perutho
katteyadam.
AJAY
mokkalanni thinesuntundi...
CHARACTER_GUY
Raithu, aah enugu ni matrame
kattesadu, kaani aah enugu...
12.
CHARACTER_GUY (CONT'D)
mental ga fix ipoindi, nannu
kattesadu... inka nenu
kadallenanani akkade undipoindi...
CHARACTER_GUY (CONT'D)
Nijaniki evaru evarni aapaleru...
alaa anukuntaru anthe...
(Version2 ends..)
looks at him...
silent chesthadu...
AJAY
avanni life lo gelavaalanukune
vaadki... nenu aah time line lo
lenu.. inthakante life lo odipoyedi
ledu...
CHARACTER_GUY
Nu kaalaanni patkuntunnv...
(shakes his head..)
kaavalsindi pattuko.
Venu smiles...
VENU (CONT'D)
ninna night edki poinv, phone kuda
ethale?
13.
AJAY
Adi... book chaduthunte late---
(ajay remembers, he has to
return that book)
Aah book manadeggare---
(i.v ^^ the above line...)
venu is blank... ajay got that he
doesnt remember...
AJAY (CONT'D)
Ade ra... monna road meeda okadni
aapi----
VENU
Aaah aah avnu... daddy gaadu...
Ajay nods...
AJAY
Papam ra, book important ani
annadu... chaah!
(feels bad...)
VENU
Return Iddam ante ekkada untado
kuda telidu...
VENU (CONT'D)
Ekkadki ajay?
AJAY
Athanni aapina chote wait
chestha...
VENU
Entha sepu ani wait chesthv ra?
AJAY
Oche daaka
VENU
Raakapothe?
AJAY
(as he walks)
Kanpade daaka vethukutha...
14.
VENU
Undu bey nen kuda ostha...
CUT TO:
GUY1
Endi ra idi?
(holding headphones...)
GUY2
Nu cheppina brand a kada anna...
GUY1
Adevado ninnu bakara ni
cheshindu... nak telvada original
entluntado...
CUT TO:
VENU
Ajay... ninne ra... asalosthado
raado kuda telvanodi kosm entha
sepu wait chesthm ra?
AJAY
Nu ellu...
VENU
Kathal padaku....
Looks at him...
VENU (CONT'D)
thinniki emina theeskostha..
CHARACTER_GUY
athani gurinche alochisthunnava?
AJAY
thaagi vellipokunda... na life
poindani andarni disturb
cheyalanukodm...
CHARACTER_GUY
ilantidi malli ithe?
AJAY
Avvadu...
CHARACTER_GUY
Enduku avvadu? Malli thaaguthav...
malli... kopm osthundi.. malli edo
okati avthundi...
AJAY
Ithe malli feel avtha, sorry
cheptha...
CHARACTER_GUY
Pakka vaalla gurinchi inni saarlu
alochistha antunnav, nee gurinchi
okkasaari alochincha leva?
AJAY
Intlovaallaki istm lenappudu...
(shakes his head...)
16.
CHARACTER_GUY
neeku nachani color rainbow lo
undani theeseyalev kada? Adi alaa
untene rainbow avthundi...
CHARACTER_GUY (CONT'D)
manaki istminavi inkokari kosam
odleyadam ante... aah rainbow lo
okko color theeseyadame...
AJAY
manam happy ga lenappudu, mana
vallani ina happy ga unchali---
CHARACTER_GUY
(smiles...)
Oka deepame inko deepaanni
veligisthundani chinnapudu vine
untav...
VENU
Ajay...
VENU (CONT'D)
athanu inka raademo ra...
VENU (CONT'D)
Ahaa... ekkada vethakalo alochiddam
antunna ra...
ram walking fast opposite from the road he's gone last time,
saw them from a distance, he smiled but they are driving
away, he shouted, screamed... then started running... but
they are gone by that time...
CUT TO:
17.
CHARACTER_GUY
chaala mandhiki life lo em cheyalo
thelika.. alaa bathikesthuntaru.
CHARACTER_GUY (CONT'D)
neeku em cheyalo clarity ochaka
kuda alaane unte...
Standing all alone in the corner leaning onto the wall... his
conversation with his father comes into his mind...
AJAY
chepthe elaa react avtharo ani
bayamestundi...
CHARACTER_GUY
Istamina life kosam okka saari ina
dhairyam cheyaleva?
AJAY
Nanna...
AJAY'S FATHER
enni rojulindi ra nu phone chesi...
nen phone chesthe ethav.. intiki
rammante raavu...
AJAY
Adi project works valla nanna...
AJAY'S FATHER
kaburlu me office vaallaki cheppu
ra...
(smiles...) Elaa unnav?
AJAY
(closed his eyes...)
Job maneddham anukuntunna nanna?
AJAY'S FATHER
emindi ra?
AJAY
satisfaction ledu nanna...
photography side veltha..
AJAY'S FATHER
Malli adguthunna... atu side velthe
nilabadathavani enti nammakam?
AJAY
Manchina chedina, naku nachina
field lo work chesthe happy ga unta
anpistundi nanna...
AJAY'S FATHER
all the best ra nanna… idi eppudu
chepthava ani inni rojulu
chusanu...
AJAY'S FATHER
Mari urikeppudu bailderthunnav?
AJAY
Repu evening ki ochestha nanna!
19.
MATCH CUT
TO:(AJAY BACK
SHOT)
Beside him his bag and book inside it, he holds it...
smiles... looks around and there are 2 guys who used to take
selfie holding pollution board(like symbol)... they are
taking photos, looking for someone to take photos of them...
AJAY
Aah pic naaku share chesthara?
AJAY (CONT'D)
Adi naa first pic, so i just want
to remember...
They smiled at him and ajay did the same nods and as he
walks... something popped up... called venu... venu came to
that place...
VENU
Enti ra urgent ga rammanv?
AJAY
Aah book athanu ekkada untado
gurthochindi ra...
VENU
Ekkada ra?
CUT TO:
AJAY
ninna gurthochina ipoyedi... Papam
manakosm ekkada ekkada
thirguthunnado...
VENU
ninna nu intha hyper active laga
lev ga... Edo theda godthunnv ra
CUT TO:
CUT TO:
Ajay and venu been to the colony and look for him in every
house... as ram mentioned earlier "near to the park" they are
searching...
VENU
inni unte.. ekkada ani vethukutham
ra...
VENU (CONT'D)
evarnina adgudam.. ikkade untad
kada telse undochu...
she called again... ram cuts the call... ram is dull looking
on how to convey that news to her...
CUT TO:
21.
Ajay and venu walks in... ajay going towards ram and venu
signals that he's gonna take a walk...
AJAY
Bro
AJAY (CONT'D)
sorry bro...
RAM
etla react avvalo ardm ithale
bhayya! ippudu nu ravadm inkchm
late ithe na love---
(shakes his head...)
AJAY
Seriously sorry bro...
AJAY (CONT'D)
Eee book neku evaricharu bro?
RAM
Na lover ichindi bhayya
AJAY
Neeku kuda same problm huh bro?
RAM
Same problm enti bhayya?
AJAY
Ade career prblm huh? Intlo no
anadam....
Ram turns his face, looking away from ajay... He changed his
way of looking and ajay takes it as a yes...
AJAY (CONT'D)
(Smiles)
Problems kuda update avthunnayi...
Inthaku mundhu love problem
undedhi.. ippudu career...
Ajay looks at him..
AJAY (CONT'D)
anukunnadi avvalekapothunm, manalni
evaru ardm cheskotledu ani...
(nods and looks forward)
ippudu nu unna mindstate lo nenu 2
years nundi unna bro...
AJAY (CONT'D)
Naa life ni marchesindi bro idi...
AJAY (CONT'D)
Hope it works for u too... once
again sorry bro...
RAM
Book chaduthunna, anduke cut
chesanee...
(snaps a photo of him with
book...)
Kavalante chudu....
guy will be going with ajay and one goes to the ram after he
touching the book and sat with the alone guy on the bench...
AJAY
book chadhuthadantava?
23.
CHARACTER_GUY
a hope lenappudu.. edoka point lo
dennoka danni nammali...
AJAY
Avnu... book ichesa kada, inka
naatho unnav?
CHARACTER_GUY
(version 1)
Mammalni book lo matrame chuse
vaallaki adi kaavali...
(poins head)
ikkada petkune vaallaki adi
avasaram ledhu...
(version 2)
andaru book chadviesaka vaalla rack
lo petkuntaru .. chaala thakkuva
mandi vaalla memory lo
petkuntaru...
THE END