King of Hearts
King of Hearts
by
Craig M. Tiede
Aaron draws a card from one of the piles. He flips over the
King of Hearts. He places it on top of the Queen of Hearts,
in another pile. He looks up at the guard.
The guard nods toward the door. Aaron collects the cards and
stands. He walks toward the door.
GUARD
Don’t forget.
The guard motions to a bag near the table. Aaron goes back
and picks it up.
DR. WARNER
We can’t let him leave.
DR. CARROLL
We can’t make him stay.
DR. WARNER
Do you know where he’s going?
Dr. Carroll searches the files on his desk and grabs one. He
opens it and reads.
DR. CARROLL
Ithaca.
DR. WARNER
And what’s in Ithaca?
2.
DR. CARROLL
I don’t know. We don’t need to
know. It’s his life now.
DR. WARNER
His brother. His brother’s in
Ithaca.
DR. CARROLL
I did. We’ve been over this. He’s
made remarkable progress. This
story has a happy ending.
DR. WARNER
He was waiting.
DR. CARROLL
Only for a chance to start over.
Dr. Warner sees Aaron outside. He watches Aaron walk down the
snowy road, carrying his bag away from the facility.
DR. WARNER
And he will.
A FATHER, 39, and his two young sons watch from a tree,
above.
The buck raises its head. The second son tumbles from the
tree and into the snow below. The father fires.
FATHER
Shit.
The first son leaps from the tree. He runs to inspect the
deer’s fresh tracks.
FATHER (cont’d)
You’re all right.
The father leans his rifle against the tree and yanks the
second son from the snow. The second son wipes his face.
FATHER (cont’d)
What are you crying for?
FATHER (cont’d)
Here. You want to hold it?
He replaces the safety and holds the rifle out. The second
son hesitates. The first son bounds back toward his father.
FIRST SON
I’ll hold it, Dad.
The father pulls the rifle from the first son’s grasp.
FATHER
You know how. I have to teach your
brother.
FATHER (cont’d)
Go on.
FATHER (cont’d)
How’s that feel?
FATHER (cont’d)
Listen, I’m gonna teach you this.
In this world you’re either the
hunter or the hunted.
4.
FATHER(cont'd)
Remember that. Now, look straight
ahead. Stay focused, strong.
Then...
FATHER (cont’d)
Boom!
The second son wriggles free from his father’s tight embrace.
The father stands, rifle at his side.
FATHER (cont’d)
Just like your mother.
Both sons’ faces flash with stunned sadness. The father heads
off beyond the thicket.
FATHER (cont’d)
Come on. Follow me.
The father closes the trunk, leans against the car and drinks
from his flask. The second son stares at him.
FATHER
Go grab me my pack of smokes.
FIRST SON
I’ll get ‘em!
The first son runs toward the car. He and his brother both
rush to the door, slamming into it simultaneously. The
father, taking another swig from his flask, is rocked by the
impact and spills alcohol all over his shirt.
FATHER
Would you two cut it out? You never
gave your mom this much trouble.
The father brushes the wetness from his shirt. The second son
looks back at him, angrily.
5.
The first son opens the car door and retrieves the pack of
cigarettes. He runs around and hands them to his father.
FATHER (cont’d)
My lighter, too.
The first son runs back around and peers inside the car.
FIRST SON
I don’t see it.
FATHER
It’s right next to--
(remembering)
Shit. I think there are matches in
the glove compartment.
The first son climbs inside the car and removes his gloves.
He opens the glove compartment and sees a matchbox atop a
pack of playing cards. He grabs both and jumps out.
The first son opens the pack. He shuffles through the cards
and sees that each bears a photo of a naked woman.
The second son grabs the matchbox from his brother and walks
around to the rear of the car. He stops and faces his father.
FIRST SON
Whoah.
The father turns and sees him ogling the pack of cards.
FATHER
Hey! Get outta those.
The father grabs the cards. The second son removes a match
and strikes it. It bursts into flame.
FATHER (cont’d)
Stop playing around and give me the
Goddamned matches!
The father reaches out to grab the box away. The second son
tosses the lit match toward his father. It catches the
father’s shirt, setting it on fire.
The first son screams and runs toward the father. The father,
ablaze and panicking, launches himself back onto the car,
smashing his head through the rear window.
FIRST SON
Dad!
The inside of the car fills with flames. The father kicks and
screams in agony.
Tim gets out of bed and goes to the window. He looks out from
his sixth-floor single-occupancy room at the sleepy college
campus below and sighs.
Tim gets into bed. He scoots all the way over to the wall,
pulls the covers up over his chest and stares at the ceiling.
MARY ANN, 20, looks up from her book. She is seated near the
middle of the bus. She looks toward the front at the other
passengers, all of whom are sleeping.
7.
She turns to review the rows behind her. Aaron is seated two
rows back, staring at her.
MARY ANN
Can’t sleep either, huh?
AARON
You can’t always tell by looking at
someone.
Mary Ann gets up from her seat and sits in a vacant seat
directly across from Aaron. She sees he is playing Solitaire.
MARY ANN
You’re a guy. You don’t understand.
What do you have to be afraid of?
AARON
I don’t. Just visiting.
MARY ANN
Who are you visiting?
AARON
My brother.
Tim runs along the campus’s main road. Though the parking
lots are full with cars, he is the only person in sight.
Tim runs. There are some lights along the path, but it is
much darker than before.
TIM
Shit.
Tim pushes himself up and blindly walks back toward the spot
of his fall. Rustling sounds emanate from the woods.
Tim feels something with his foot. He kneels and reaches out
his hand. The rustling gets louder.
Tim bolts up and rushes at the fawn. The fawn takes off into
the woods. Tim leaps over the dead doe and sprints back down
the path toward the light.
9.
GRIFFITH
I’m too old for this.
TIM
What’s going on?
GRIFFITH
An incident on your floor.
TIM
Brian?
TIM (cont’d)
What did he do?
TIM (cont’d)
Clay?
TIM (cont’d)
What happened?
CLAY
We were asleep. He got a phone
call. I figured it was one of his
teammates, or some girl. So I told
him to keep it down. Next thing I
know, he’s throwing the phone at
me, punching walls, going crazy.
GRIFFITH
His grandmother died.
10.
TIM
Are you OK?
CLAY
I’ve been better.
TIM
Come see me when you get back.
TIM (cont’d)
He lived with her. His parents
weren’t exactly--
GRIFFITH
Doesn’t excuse him going apeshit on
his roommate. Someone needs to get
you guys to understand that anger’s
not the only acceptable emotion.
Tim blushes. Griffith leads Tim toward the hall. The safety
car pulls out.
TIM
I’m sorry I wasn’t here.
GRIFFITH
Jamie’s on duty. She did a good
job. You are entitled to a life.
TIM
Yeah.
Tim exits the elevator. JOHN BARNUM, 20, KEN LONGNECKER, 20,
and ROBB WILLING, 18, are in the hallway.
KEN
Dude, you missed it.
11.
ROBB
Brian went berserk on Clay’s ass.
John pulled ‘em apart. It was
fucked up.
TIM
You guys should get to bed.
KEN
Where were you anyway?
TIM
Couldn’t sleep. Went for a run.
JOHN
Good thing someone with a clear
head was around to take control.
TIM
Good thing.
JOHN
Maybe I should be an R.A.
KEN
John...
TIM
Maybe.
TED RACE, 18, opens his room door, startling them all. He
peers out from his dark room.
TED
Could you keep it down please? I
think there’s been enough commotion
on this floor for one night and I
would like to get some sleep.
JOHN
Sure, bud. Sorry this floor’s cum
motion disturbs you.
Robb laughs. Ted slams his door and locks it from inside.
12.
KEN
Come on. Back to bed boys.
Ken yanks Robb’s shirt and leads him down the hall. John
remains intent on Tim.
JOHN
Can’t really run away when you have
to come back, can ya?
Tim closes the door behind him and slides to the floor.
MARY ANN
Hey! You forgot...
Aaron’s gone.
Ted screams.
Tim runs into the bathroom. He finds John, Robb and Ken
inside, laughing. Ken is holding a camcorder and Robb is
holding a plastic butcher’s knife and ketchup bottle.
TIM
What’s going on?
JOHN
We’re just making a little movie.
Our man Ted here is the star.
JOHN (cont’d)
My student film. I’m making a
slasher flick. Except instead of
all the victims being chicks,
they’re gonna be guys. Ted should
feel honored. He’s the first
victim. The first victim sets the
tone, tells you what it’s all
about.
Tim runs after Ted. Ted unlocks the door to his room.
TIM
Ted, wait!
Ted enters his room, slamming his door as Tim reaches it.
John, Robb and Ken exit the bathroom. Robb is still laughing.
Ken has regained his composure. They approach Tim.
KEN
We didn’t plan for it to be him. It
coulda been anybody.
14.
ROBB
Yeah. But he was so...
TIM
Apologize.
JOHN
Hey, Teddie. We’re sorry. But, it
could still get bigger when you hit
puberty.
KEN
You better get to your tour.
JOHN
We’ll film more when I get back.
TIM
Not here you won’t.
JOHN
You know, Tim? I’m starting to get
the feeling you don’t like us.
NINA
Men are idiots.
ROBB
Hey, Nina.
KEN
Hey, babe.
Nina goes to Ken and they kiss. She eyes Robb suspiciously.
NINA
Robb, what’s with the ketchup?
15.
ROBB
It’s for John’s movie. You shoulda--
NINA
Nevermind. It’s probably a guy
thing. And, I probably don’t care.
KEN
(to John)
When you comin’ back?
JOHN
Four. So, make sure you two are
dressed by then. I might get stuck
being an overnight host for one of
these tour brats. And I’m not gonna
be responsible for introducing
anyone to your sexual depravity. I
wouldn’t want to be a bad
influence.
NINA
Then we better get to it, big boy.
KEN
Sorry again, Tim.
Nina and Ken enter Ken’s room. Robb stares after them,
absentmindedly squeezing the ketchup bottle, dribbling some
onto the floor. Robb looks down at it, then back up at Tim.
ROBB
I’ll get that.
TIM
I realize today’s like your own
personal Christmas and everything,
but... I really need to talk. I’m
on duty tonight, so I can’t--
(sighs)
Just call me, all right? I’m kinda
freaking out.
LANA
What is wrong with you?
LANA (cont’d)
It’s gorgeous out. Let’s go.
LANA (cont’d)
You’re not gonna get that?
TIM
Who do I need to talk to? You’re
here.
Lana smiles. Tim exits his room, locking the door behind
them. His phone is silent, but lit.
DR. WARNER
This message is for Tim Adams. Tim,
my name is Dr. Warner. I’m calling
about your brother.
JOHN
I hope you all realize how lucky
you are to get the college’s finest
tour guide. For those of you who
scored below average on the SAT,
let me help you out. That’d be me.
JOHN (cont’d)
So what’s say we get started?
LANA
‘According to Descartes, doubt
alone, not just obvious falseness,
is enough to nullify a belief.
Noting that our senses may be
deceiving us in any given moment,
he came to discard his belief in
all things that he physically
experienced, conceived or
remembered, ultimately concluding
that perhaps nothing is certain. If
we can doubt even that which we
believe we know, including our
memories, in what can we
conceivably believe at all?’
Tim finishes the daisy chain as John’s tour group walks by.
Lana looks up.
LANA (cont’d)
Tim, are you listening?
TIM
Huh?
TIM (cont’d)
Yeah. We should doubt everything.
And lots of other big words.
LANA
This is important.
TIM
Maybe if it had pictures.
Lana shakes her head. Tim sits up and picks at the grass.
TIM (cont’d)
I’m just tired. Besides, a “B”
won’t kill you.
LANA
When was the last time you got one?
TIM
Lana, wait! I’m sorry. I just don’t
do philosophy is all.
Lana sighs.
LANA
I don’t know why I bother. I know
you’re no help with this stuff.
But, it’s due tomorrow. So, I
should go.
TIM
This is the last nice day we’re
gonna have. Tomorrow’s November.
It’s probably gonna snow. Stay.
LANA
I have to go. But, I’ll see you
later. You’re on duty tonight,
right?
LANA (cont’d)
Nina wants me to go with her to
this costume party off-campus.
Assuming she and Ken ever...
Separate. I’ll get out of it.
TIM
If you want.
LANA
You don’t want me to come over?
TIM
I just meant do what you want. You
don’t have to stay in just because
I do.
TIM (cont’d)
Like how I don’t have to be into
philosophy just because you’re
going to be the world’s greatest
thinker.
LANA
It’s a good thing you’re such a
good kisser, or I’d have no use for
you at all.
Tim smiles and watches Lana walk away. He looks down at the
trampled daisies beneath his feet.
TIM
You can’t take that inside.
MALE STUDENT
Why?
20.
TIM
Animals aren’t allowed in the hall.
FEMALE STUDENT
Did ya hear that? He says you’re
not allowed in the hall.
MALE STUDENT
She’s Alice.
TIM
Sorry.
TIM
Jed.
TIM (cont’d)
You didn’t get out.
JED
Oh. I’m going upstairs. I just
forgot to push the button.
JED (cont’d)
I hear you’re on duty tonight.
TIM
You guys are gonna behave, right?
JED
Don’t we always?
Tim exits the elevator. Jed remains inside. There are several
boxes piled by the elevator.
JED
That was weird.
TIM
I’ll call it in. Aren’t you getting
out?
JED
I’ll chance it.
The elevator doors start to close. Tim reaches his arm in and
stops them.
TIM
Just remember... I’m here all
night. And, I’m watching you.
Jed shivers in mock fear. Tim removes his arm. The elevator
doors close.
Tim considers the boxes and heads for room 603. The door is
open.
TIM (cont’d)
What’s your roommate doing in the
elevator?
22.
Jake grabs hold of the iron cord. He yanks it from the shelf.
JAKE
Fucker needs to stop putting my
shit on the top shelf.
JAKE (cont’d)
I don’t know, but he’s been in
there all afternoon. He’s up to
something.
TIM
Any plans for tonight?
JAKE
I was considering going trick or
treating as Shaq. But then I
remembered I’m white.
Tim smiles.
JAKE (cont’d)
Why?
TIM
I’m on duty.
JAKE
Like I’m gonna be any trouble.
TIM
No. But, now I know I have another
pair of eyes.
JAKE
Sure. Things get crazy around here,
you let me know. I’ll break out my
brass helmet, bust some kneecaps.
TIM
I’m very impressed that you iron.
JAKE
It’s all about the details, man.
23.
Tim smiles and heads back out into the hallway. Jake catches
his finger on the iron and smarts from the burn.
TIM
I’m taking a nap. Let me know if
there are any details I miss.
TIM (cont’d)
Brian? What’s going on?
BRIAN
Movin’ out.
Brian drops the box to the floor among the stack of other
boxes. He heads back toward his room, room 614. Tim follows.
TIM
Why?
BRIAN
I think they call it summary
suspension. Apparently the student
conduct code mentions something
about not pummeling your roommate.
TIM
They suspended you?
Brian enters his room and begins tossing the last of his
belongings into another box. Tim inches past the safety
officer to stand in the doorway.
TIM (cont’d)
Did you even have a hearing?
Brian uses his arm to sweep a shelf of empty beer cans into
the box. He pulls some photos from his bulletin board.
BRIAN
I did it. What do they have to
hear?
BRIAN (cont’d)
All he had to do was keep his mouth
shut. Give me a moment, you know?
BRIAN (cont’d)
But nobody will give a guy his
space.
TIM
I’m sorry about your--
BRIAN
My key’s on the bed.
Tim watches him walk down the hallway. The sounds of moaning
and the squeaking of bed springs emerge from Ken’s room.
Tim looks back into the now half-empty room and sighs.
Tim awakens from his nap. He rubs his eyes and looks at his
clock. It is 8:10 P.M.
TIM
Shit.
Tim grabs his phone and sees that he has two messages. He
turns the sound back on and dials.
JAMIE HOLMES, 21, hangs a key in the key box. The phone
rings. She answers it.
JAMIE
Tower Office, this is Jamie.
TIM
Jamie. I’m here. I just fell
asleep. And my ringer was off.
25.
Jamie considers the keys in the box. Many have been hung
facing in opposite directions. She sighs into the phone.
JAMIE
You’re confusing me for someone who
cares. I’m out of here at 8:30.
Just make sure you get the duty
keys by then.
Tim clicks off his phone and heads toward his door. He
glimpses his reflection in his room mirror and stops.
TIM
Great.
K
You look like shit.
TIM
You--
K
Just because I’ve decided to stay
in with my best friend who,
according the message he left me
earlier today, is ‘freaking out’ -
notice he mentioned nothing about
also looking like shit - does not
mean I’ve decided to forego all
that’s fabulous about Halloween
night. Hence, my costume.
TIM
What are you?
26.
K
A red state. More precisely, a
homosexual in a red state. I mean,
honestly, can you think of anything
more frightening?
K enters Tim’s room and flips on the light. He unzips his red
bag and takes out a stack of DVDs.
K (cont’d)
And since today is, as you so
appropriately called it, my
personal Christmas, I come bearing
gifts. My favorite scary movies.
Full of knife-weilding psychos to
scare you and big, perky tits to
scare me.
K (cont’d)
What? It’s dry.
TIM
I have to go lock up.
K
And then you’ll tell me what was so
God-awful serious that I had to
cancel my plans?
TIM
Please. How many times have you
seen “Rocky Horror”?
K
Sixty-eight. So tonight was going
to be special.
Tim exits his room. John, Jed and Robb are in the hallway.
Robb drips red food coloring into a bottle of corn syrup.
TIM
No way.
27.
JOHN
Chill. The next scene’s outside.
ROBB
And ketchup just looks like
ketchup.
JED
I get to be the second victim!
ROBB
Jesus. They’ve been at it all day.
JED
Dude’s my hero.
Jed grabs the corn syrup bottle and vigorously shakes it.
John approaches Tim.
JOHN
That kid ever come see you?
TIM
What kid?
JOHN
A kid on my tour today. He asked
about you.
JED
Dude, this isn’t working.
Jed hands John the bottle. John motions to Robb for the dye.
JOHN
(shaking his head)
Tweedle-Dumb and Tweedle-Dumber.
JOHN (cont’d)
He didn’t come by? Maybe I gave him
the wrong room number.
TIM
What was his name?
28.
JOHN
Tom Nethers.
JOHN (cont’d)
Didn’t say how he knew you.
TIM
I don’t really recognize the name.
JOHN
You gotta admit. My idea’s bomber.
TIM
So why’s he do it? Your killer?
JOHN
What do you mean why? ‘Cause he’s a
psychopath. Why does everybody need
a reason for everything? Sometimes,
shit just happens.
TIM
Nothing just happens.
The elevator doors open. Tim steps inside, but the elevator’s
not there.
Tim looks up. John, Robb and Jed appear in the open elevator
doorway above. K walks up behind them.
K
What the Hell?
Robb turns to see K and nearly falls into the shaft himself.
ROBB
Holy shit!
29.
TIM
I’m fine. Just go call Safety.
Robb and Jed run off. K kneels and peers into the shaft.
K
I think we can get you out.
K looks to John.
K (cont’d)
Can you hold my feet?
John stares at K.
JOHN
You’d like that, wouldn’t you?
K
Are all your residents knobs?
K reaches out to Tim. Tim reaches back, but their hands don’t
touch. John acquiesces, grabbing K’s ankles, allowing K to
reach farther.
Tim reaches out and grabs K’s arm. John tugs on K’s ankles,
pulling both out of the shaft. The three collapse on each
other. John uncomfortably wriggles from beneath them.
TIM
Dry, huh?
K
You’re welcome, bitch.
JAMIE
Why are men always late?
TIM
The elevator’s broken. I had to
make a sign.
30.
Jamie re-hangs the last key. She closes the key box and heads
for the door. Tim turns to leave. A group of costumed
residents walks by.
JAMIE
Tell Griffith to send that repair
bill to Jed Howland.
Jamie turns off the office light and Tim turns back.
JAMIE (cont’d)
Apparently, he was riding the
elevator all day, asking female
residents if they wanted to see
what he got at the mall. The
unfortunate, or lucky, ones who
said yes - depending on which
desperate co-ed was telling the
story - were then treated by Jed to
him pulling his penis out of a hole
he’d made in his pants’ pocket.
JAMIE (cont’d)
If I were his R.A., I’d cut it off.
Tell him that if he gives you any
shit.
JAMIE
I don’t know how you do it. If I
had to work on an all-male floor,
there’s no way we’d all live
through it.
Jamie starts toward the stairwell. Tim heads toward the main
entrance doors. Jamie stops and turns to him.
JAMIE (cont’d)
Do you wear sunscreen?
JAMIE (cont’d)
We had a guest lecturer today, in
my Human Sexuality class, who said
you guys are killing yourselves
because of an unending quest to
achieve hyper-masculinity.
JAMIE (cont’d)
Guys usually refuse to wear
sunscreen because lotion isn’t
masculine. Even though you’re at
greater risk for getting skin
cancer than women are for getting
breast cancer.
Tim takes a deep breath and turns back toward the main doors.
JAMIE (cont’d)
You have nothing to say to that?
TIM
Nope.
JAMIE
U-G-L- Why are you looking at me?
JAMIE (cont’d)
Do any of you wear sunscreen?
JAMIE (cont’d)
Fine. Be stupid. Kill yourselves.
See if we care.
Aaron bangs on the door, startling Tim. Tim turns back and
opens the door.
TIM
Elevator’s busted.
TIM (cont’d)
Around the corner.
TIM
So get this. Jed - the one you
think is too pretty to be straight -
spent the whole day pulling his--
LANA
K tells me you two have a movie
night planned.
LANA (cont’d)
(whispering)
I thought we were spending the
night together.
TIM
He just came over. We haven’t hung
out in a while and he--
33.
LANA
So tell him to go.
K
If you two wanna scrump, I got
movies. Go for it.
TIM
K...
Lana exhales.
TIM (cont’d)
It would be nice if my best friend
and girlfriend could get along.
LANA
It would be nice if your best
friend and girlfriend were the same
person.
TIM
Where are you going?
LANA
To the party.
LANA (cont’d)
Nina, I know you’re in there. The
whole floor knows you’re in there.
I’m going. Meet me upstairs.
LANA (cont’d)
You said I should do what I want.
Lana enters the stairwell. Ken opens his room door and steps
out into the hallway naked.
KEN
Somebody need something?
34.
TIM
Yeah, pants.
K
Finally. We’re alone.
K (cont’d)
She thinks we’re fucking.
TIM
She doesn’t think we’re fucking.
K
I hope not. Bagging straight boys
is so out these days. Besides, the
recruitment committee ran out of
toasters.
K (cont’d)
You called me, remember? What’s up?
TIM
It’s stupid.
K
This’ll work a lot better if you
let me be the judgmental one.
Tim turns to K.
TIM
The dream.
K nods.
K
You’re right. It’s stupid.
K (cont’d)
It’s not stupid. You lived through
some fucked up shit. But, you know
it’s just a dream.
TIM
Then why do I--?
K
Because tomorrow’s November. And
you’ve apparently forgotten that
this is an annual thing.
K (cont’d)
You should tell her, you know.
TIM
No way.
K
You told me!
TIM
Yeah, but--
K
But what?
TIM
I’m not in love with you.
K
And look at ya. All the worse for
it.
K climbs off the bed and sits beside Tim on the floor.
K (cont’d)
The truth shall set you free.
TIM
Whatever that is.
K
All right, then repeat after me.
Tim turns to K.
36.
K (cont’d)
I’m in love with you, K.
KEN
Have fun.
NINA
We will.
NINA (cont’d)
Hey. Do you have anything Lana
could use for a costume? I don’t
think she has anything.
KEN
Like what? She can’t exactly wear
my bong.
Aaron rounds the corner. He sees Nina and Ken and steps back.
NINA
Shut up. You want Tim to hear?
NINA (cont’d)
I feel sorry for him. Something
must have happened to him as a kid.
You don’t get that creepy by
accident.
KEN
So what would she want?
NINA
I don’t know... How about your
camo?
37.
KEN
Oh yeah. That’d be real sexy.
NINA
It’s a costume party, not a gang
bang.
Ken sets his beer in the hallway and disappears into his
room. Aaron watches Nina. Ken reemerges moments later with a
camouflage hunting jacket and pants.
NINA (cont’d)
Perfect.
KEN
Just don’t let any sorority girls
throw up on it.
Nina exits the stairwell and goes to Lana’s room. She knocks.
Lana opens her door. Nina holds out Ken’s hunting outfit.
NINA
Voila.
LANA
What is that?
NINA
Your costume. It’s Ken’s.
LANA
I’m not wearing that.
NINA
You need a costume, don’t you?
LANA
I figured something out.
Nina sighs.
NINA
All right. Half hour?
Lana nods and closes her door. Nina reenters the stairwell.
38.
Nina exits the stairwell and goes to Ken’s room. Ken’s door
is closed and his beer is still in the hallway.
TIM
What?
K
For no reason. He looks at the name
and for no reason starts reworking
the letters. The whole plot hinges
on this moment. It’s fucking
awesome.
TIM
(rolling his eyes)
Pass me my phone.
TIM (cont’d)
I’ll be back.
K
Want me to pause it?
K (cont’d)
Fine. But, look where you’re going
this time. I’m not rescuing your
ass twice.
Tim sees Clay in his room at the end of the hall. He goes to
Clay’s room.
TIM
Hey.
Clay looks up. His face, though cleaned up, is still marred
by cuts and bruises.
CLAY
Hey. Guess I got a single now, huh?
TIM
Looks like.
CLAY
I didn’t think they’d suspend him.
Thought they liked winning football
games too much.
TIM
You all right?
CLAY
It’s a good day to look like a
monster. Everybody just thinks it’s
make-up.
Tim laughs.
CLAY (cont’d)
I wish I’d hit him back.
TIM
No you don’t.
CLAY
Maybe not right now. But, tomorrow,
when this ain’t just make-up...
Yeah I do.
JAKE
Things goin’ all right? I need to
bust some knees?
TIM
All good. Except for Jed.
JAKE
Yeah I heard. Like anybody’d buy
that shit at the mall.
Tim flushes.
TIM
You wanna come watch bad horror
movies with me and K?
JAKE (O.S.)
Sure. If I’m not there in ten
minutes, check the pipes. I
probably got flushed.
Tim laughs.
TIM
Come in.
JAKE
Homosexual in a red state? Nice.
TED
Hey! This isn’t your--
41.
The Hunter smacks Ted aside, enters the room and closes the
door behind them.
Tim, K and Jake hear the door slam and banging next door. Tim
gets up, opens his door and peers into the hallway. There’s
nothing but silence.
TIM
I’m gonna go do my rounds now.
TIM
Not in the hall.
The guys pick up the balls. As Tim proceeds down the hall,
one mockingly swings at Tim with his stick.
Tim stops at the noisiest room on the floor and knocks. The
door opens at his touch. Inside, he finds a group of guys
encircling another guy funneling beer.
TIM (cont’d)
Hey!
TIM (cont’d)
Hey!
The hall’s fire alarm blares. The group turns to see Tim in
the doorway, as other residents of the floor exit their rooms
and head toward the stairwell.
42.
TIM (cont’d)
Out!
Tim ushers the group out of the room and enters the
stairwell.
Tim pokes his head around the stairwell door and calls out
into his hallway.
TIM
Everybody out. Let’s go!
Tim holds the doors open as the last few residents exit. He
ushers the mass of students out into the parking lot.
TIM
Everybody back!
TIM (cont’d)
Just a pull?
GRIFFITH
No. Activation. On your floor.
JAKE
How much does it suck to be these
guys and always have to act like
it’s a real fire?
K
What about when it is?
TIM
Holy shit.
K
That’s your floor!
43.
GRIFFITH
Make sure everybody stays back.
A safety car pulls into the parking lot. Griffith runs to it.
JAKE
That’s not your room is it?
TIM
It’s Ted’s.
TIM (cont’d)
Oh my God.
TIM (cont’d)
He’s in there! Ted’s in there!
K
Come on.
K (cont’d)
People are watching. Get up.
Tim looks up at K.
TIM
He lit himself on fire.
K
You don’t know that. It could have
been an accident. It could have
just happened.
Tim stands.
TIM
Nothing just happens.
Tim walks back toward the hall and looks up at the broken
window. The room is now dark.
JOHN
What the Hell happened?
K and Tim hold the doors for stragglers. Griffith pulls Tim
aside.
GRIFFITH
The counselor will be here in about
fifteen minutes. I’ll keep your
guys down here. Can you just do a
quick rounds of the building and
let anybody who looks like they’d
need it know that she’s on her way?
45.
K
You want me to stay?
K (cont’d)
Call me. Whenever you’re done.
Tim opens the stairwell door. The floor is vacant. Every room
door has been unlocked and propped open. Breeze from the
rooms’ open windows whistles through the hallway.
The burning stench is too much for Tim. He turns back into
the stairwell and almost vomits.
Tim leans for a closer look, scraping his arm against the
jagged glass. He jerks back, grabbing his bloody elbow.
JAMIE
She’s not there. I don’t think
she’s back yet.
Tim nods and heads toward the stairwell, holding his elbow.
JAMIE (cont’d)
Tim?
JAMIE (cont’d)
I know I have it easy. With the
girls. If you need anything...
DR. HARE
Go ahead. Say what you mean.
JOHN
OK. This is bullshit.
KEN
John...
JOHN
No. It is. Did anybody here even
like him? Not think he was fuckin’
weird?
JOHN (cont’d)
I don’t see why we’re supposed to
have feelings to process about a
guy who was obviously so--
CLAY
What? Obviously so what?
JOHN
Weak.
DR. HARE
Clay? What would you like to say?
CLAY
Ted was-- I mean, none of us really
knew him. But... If he did this...
I don’t see how that’s not, at
least a little bit, our fault.
DR. HARE
Blame is very--
JOHN
Our fault? Was it your fault that
Brian beat the snot out of you
yesterday for no reason? How is
some fucked up weirdo, choosing to
destroy himself, our fault? Why do
we have to sit here talking about
some... somebody none of us gave a
shit about when he was alive?
DR. HARE
John, while I appreciate your
feelings, I do have to remind you
of what I said at the beginning of
the conversation. We all agreed to--
JAKE
That’s exactly why! None of us gave
a shit. Not one of us.
JOHN
What are we? The fucking Girl
Scouts? We’re supposed to all be
best friends, braid each other’s
hair, tell each other all our deep
dark secrets?
48.
JOHN(cont'd)
You might want to look down and
remember that you have a dick.
We’re guys. None of us gave a shit
because none of us got paid to give
a shit. That was Tim’s job.
Everyone looks to Tim, who has tuned out the entire exchange.
DR. HARE
Tim?
TIM
John’s right. It was my job. I’m
supposed to...
JOHN
I’m going back to my room.
GRIFFITH
John, you should sit back down.
JOHN
And you should stop living your
college glory days by playing Den
Mother to this bunch of pussies,
Griff. Don’t take it out on us that
your life went nowhere.
John enters the stairwell. Jed and Robb quickly follow. The
others stay, uncomfortable.
TIM
Excuse me.
From the bathroom at the end of the hall, Tim hears someone
singing. He walks toward the bathroom.
K
‘I’ve tasted blood and I want more,
more, more! I’ll put up no
resistance, I wanna stay the
distance. I’ve got an itch to
scratch, I need assistance. Touch-a
touch-a touch--’
TIM
He’s out.
K
If you wanted to see me naked that
badly, all you had to do was ask.
K unlocks his room door. Tim stands and follows him inside.
K
They let him out two days ago.
K (cont’d)
Maybe we should go down to the
counseling center. You can--
TIM
(turning to K)
Did you hear me? They released him.
And he said he was coming here.
K
(turning to Tim)
I heard you. This is just a lot of
shit, all happening at once. I
think you need to stand still for a
minute and take a deep breath.
TIM
Are you coming with me or not?
K
I’ll go with you to campus safety
if you’re that concerned. But,
we're not driving all the way to
some juvie jail in the middle of...
K (cont’d)
If he was coming to see you, he’d
have been here already. You haven’t
seen him, have you?
K (cont’d)
It’s been eleven years. And they
let him out. Why would they do that
if he was still nuts? If you ask
me, this doctor who called you was
pretty irresponsible at best. At
worst, a little Planters himself.
TIM
It was exactly what... You think
it’s just a coincidence? Ted
burning to...
51.
K
What I think is that you--
TIM
What if it was Aaron? What if it
was Aaron trying to let me know
that he’s here?
DINAH
Oh my God. You hear about this?
She pulls a paper free from the stack and carries it back
behind the counter. She holds it up for LEWIS, 47, the chef
at the kitchen stove. Lewis squints to look at the paper.
LEWIS
Hear about what? You know I can’t
stand the liberal media.
She pulls the paper back and looks at the front page.
DINAH
A kid up at the college committed
suicide. Set himself on fire and
jumped out a sixth floor window.
LEWIS
That’s why I never went to college.
Too damn much stress.
DINAH
Yeah. I’m sure it had nothin’ to do
with repeatin’ the tenth grade
three times.
The eggs hit the griddle and sizzle as they fry. Dinah reads.
DINAH (cont’d)
He was a freshman from Jersey. Poor
family. Can you imagine?
52.
DINAH(cont'd)
(shaking her head)
What makes a person do something
like that?
Lewis slides the eggs onto a plate with toast and potatoes.
LEWIS
Order up!
DINAH
You’re a real softie, ya know that?
Dinah grabs the plate and tucks the paper under her arm. She
carries it to the end of the counter and drops the plate in
front of The Hunter.
DINAH (cont’d)
What’s this world comin’ to, huh?
She holds the paper out for The Hunter. The Hunter takes the
paper and looks at the front page. Ted’s college photo
appears next to the headline, “Freshman Takes Life, Tower
Terrorized.”
BACK TO SCENE
TIM
Which way am I supposed to go?
K
Depends which way you want to go.
TIM
I don’t care--
K
Then it doesn’t matter--
TIM
As long as we get there.
53.
K
You still haven’t told me where
this place is.
TIM
Essex.
K
(consulting the atlas)
You didn’t tell me it was this far.
TIM
You didn’t ask. So how do I get
there?
K
By driving forever.
K (cont’d)
Take 90 to 87.
K looks at Tim, who does not avert his gaze from the road.
K (cont’d)
For the record, I think this is
mad.
TIM
(turning to K)
For the record, your brother didn’t
set your father on fire in front of
you.
K
Look out!
Tim pulls the car over. The car behind them races by, horn
blaring. He looks into the rear view mirror. The skunk lies
dead near the edge of the road.
K (cont’d)
Too bad evolution didn’t take into
account cars.
TIM
Can’t protect yourself from
everything.
She looks over at Ted’s room. The door is closed, but the
caution tape remains.
She sees burn and water marks along its edges. She doesn’t
notice the sound of the stairwell door opening and closing.
Lana steps back from Ted’s door and into Aaron. She screams.
AARON
Whoah.
LANA
(regaining her composure)
Sorry. You scared me.
AARON
Didn’t mean to.
(nodding toward Ted’s
door)
You know him?
LANA
Not really.
LANA (cont’d)
You live here?
AARON
Nah. I’m looking for Tim Adams.
55.
LANA
Funny, me too.
LANA (cont’d)
I don’t think he’s here.
LANA (cont’d)
You are?
AARON
Tom Nethers. A ghost from his past.
The maintenance men lean the window against the hallway wall.
One of them unlocks Ted’s door, leaving the key in the lock.
They carry the window inside.
AARON (cont’d)
I was here for the Discovery Day.
Thought I’d... pay him a visit.
LANA
It’s probably not the best time.
AARON
Yeah.
AARON (cont’d)
What’s that mean? R.A.?
LANA
Resident Assistant. Tim’s
responsible for all the guys on
this floor.
LANA (cont’d)
Want me to tell him you came by?
56.
AARON
Nah. I’ll just catch up with him
some other time. You know where the
bathroom is?
Lana motions down the hall. Aaron heads toward the bathroom
and enters. Lana grabs the dry erase marker from the board on
Tim’s door and considers leaving a message. She doesn’t.
Aaron peeks out the bathroom door. The stairwell door closes.
Tim places the phone in his pocket and walks over to the car.
TIM
Still no answer.
K
Griffith’s OK with you taking off
like this?
Tim nods.
TIM
Just for the day. Said he
understood that I’d need to get
away.
K
Did you tell him about--?
TIM
No.
K
Answer the phone. She’s gonna keep
calling. Just tell her.
57.
K grabs a new handful of fries. Tim turns his cell phone off
and looks disdainfully at K.
TIM
You almost done?
Tim gets back into the car. K drops the fries back into the
bag and hops off the hood.
K
Time? Isn’t that a little...
Inappropriate?
DUCHESS, 35, emerges from an office down the hall and walks
to the reception desk. She sees Tim.
DUCHESS
Can I help you?
TIM
I’m here to see Dr. Warner.
58.
DUCHESS
Do you have an appointment?
TIM
No, I--
DUCHESS
One moment.
DUCHESS (cont’d)
Hello?
WILLIAM
Is this question legal?
K
‘Have you ever physically
restrained anyone?’
K looks up at William.
K (cont’d)
Why would that be illegal?
WILLIAM
I thought they couldn’t ask about
your sex life.
K
No, I think they--
K (cont’d)
Yeah, leave that one blank.
DUCHESS
I told you. You have to be Mama’s
big boy today. I’m working.
59.
DUCHESS (cont’d)
I can’t really talk now. Bye.
DUCHESS (cont’d)
I’m sorry. Who are you?
TIM
My name’s Tim Adams.
DR. WARNER
Tim?
TIM
Yeah. Are you--?
DR. WARNER
You’re late. Let’s go to my office.
ROBB
But, I’m the killer!
JOHN
No, your arm’s the killer. And
Jed’s arm will look the same as
yours.
Jed grabs Robb and makes slicing motions against his throat.
Robb wriggles free.
ROBB
No way! Why can’t you be a victim?
JOHN
‘Cause I’m the director. I’m in
charge. The guy in charge is never
a victim. Stop being such a pussy
and let’s just plan the scene.
60.
ROBB
But how come I have to die?
JOHN
‘Cause you’re young and stupid. The
young and stupid always die.
NINA
Are you seriously still making that
movie? After what happened?
JOHN
The show must go on.
NINA
You’re depraved.
JOHN
Don’t get your crotchless panties
in a bunch because I didn’t ask you
to be in my flick. No chicks die in
it. And if chicks aren’t gonna die,
I don’t see what the point is in
having them around.
(grins)
In the movie, I mean.
NINA
Is this a guy thing? Being
completely oblivious to the world
around you? Is it in your genes?
JOHN
You’re screwing my roommate, Nina.
So, I think you asking me what’s in
my jeans is a little out of line.
JOHN (cont’d)
He’s not there. Went to get your
bitchy ass some weed.
NINA
I have nothing against your fantasy
world, John. But, somebody really
died. Somebody we knew. Forget
directing for one second. Try
acting. Like a human being.
JOHN
I don’t know about Ken, but I think
I prefer her when her mouth’s full.
DR. WARNER
When your brother came to us, he
was completely withdrawn. We
weren’t sure he even knew what had
happened.
K returns the Queen. Dr. Warner takes a folder from his desk
drawer.
TIM
What does that mean?
DR. WARNER
In the drawings, there were always
three figures. Your father, your
brother, and--
TIM
Me.
DR. WARNER
No. The third person is someone he
called ‘The Monster.’
K
How does something like that
happen?
DR. WARNER
No one’s sure. There’s very likely
a biological component.
TIM
Then why didn’t that happen to me?
63.
DR. WARNER
I can’t say. But, the dissociation
is often so effective in those who
employ it, it becomes automatic.
Your brother didn’t know he was
responsible. It wasn’t that he
simply forgot. He remembered the
events clearly. As they didn’t
happen. His mind placed all the
blame for what he’d done on the
shoulders of someone else. The
Monster.
TIM
So he never knew what he did?
DR. WARNER
It took years. But, eventually
Aaron did come to know that he was
The Monster. That he was the person
responsible for what had happened
to your father.
Tim stands and walks to the window. He looks out at the snowy
road leading away from the facility.
K
And why is this a bad thing?
DR. WARNER
Most people, if they were to learn
that their memories were wrong, and
they were responsible for a
terrible death, would be horrified.
Often suicidal.
64.
DR. WARNER(cont'd)
For Aaron, it was as if the
knowledge cured him. My colleagues
believe that moment of revelation
was the end of his dissociation,
resulting in a synthesis of his
memory and actual events. I don’t.
TIM
Then why did you release him?
DR. WARNER
Because his time was up. Because
there are more troubled young men
than there are beds in a facility
like this one. And, because I was
the only one convinced that he was
not better.
K
I still don’t understand why you
think he’d come after Tim now.
DR. WARNER
After the breakthrough, your
brother began mentioning you
incessantly. Wondering what you
were doing, if you were happy...
Making plans for what you two would
do together when he was released.
TIM
Do you think he could harm anyone
else?
DR. WARNER
If, as I believe, the monster is
still within him, yes. Have you
seen him?
65.
TIM
It’s been eleven years. I wouldn’t
know him if I did.
DR. WARNER
You know now. And you have. Haven’t
you?
K
Just because he was there, doesn’t
mean--
TIM
Stop.
K
(turning to Tim)
So he came there looking for you.
That’s what he said he was going to
do. But he never said he was going
to hurt you.
K (cont’d)
I heard all the same stuff you did
back there. But, I don’t buy it. It
was eleven years ago. It isn’t
possible that he really does just
want to start over? You’re the only
family he has left. Why wouldn’t he
seek you out?
TIM
I said stop.
K
He admitted your brother was never
violent in all the time he knew
him. Only that he could be. Well,
Hell Tim, any of us could be. But,
you’re not sitting there thinking
that John or one of your other
missing link residents killed Ted.
Because it doesn’t make sense. Ted
was weird and pretty obviously
socially isolated. Probably
severely depressed. When that’s
stuff’s going on you--
TIM
Don’t change your calendar.
K
Huh?
TIM
(turning to K)
I was in his room. Last night,
before everyone was let back on the
floor. His calendar was already set
to November. Why would he change
the month if he was gonna kill
himself?
K
I don’t see what that has to do
with--
TIM
You think it’s just a coincidence?
Why would he burn himself alive?
K
Because he didn’t have a gun, or a
knife or a bottle of pills. He
obviously wasn’t thinking clearly.
And, neither are you. You’re
letting your past, and your dreams,
affect--
Tim suddenly veers the car to the road’s shoulder and brings
the car to a stop. Trucks pass. Snowflakes accumulate on the
windshield.
67.
TIM
It was exactly the same. It was
exactly what he did to our father.
He was there. In the building.
Looking for me.
Tim turns on the wiper blades and watches them brush the
windshield free of snowflakes.
TIM (cont’d)
He did it, K. Just like before.
What if he does it again?
JOHN
I can’t believe I had to get killed
in my own movie. You’re a fuckin’
girl.
ROBB
I’m sorry. I didn’t wanna do it,
all right?
JOHN
You’re a massive, fucking vagina.
ROBB
I told you I’d be the killer. But,
I’m not gonna let Jed strangle me.
Who knows where those hands have
even been?
JED
Dude, I let you kill me. What’s the
big deal?
ROBB
You ever think maybe Nina’s right?
I mean it hasn’t even been twenty-
four hours since--
Jed laughs.
68.
JED
So this is all about Ted?
ROBB
Forget about it.
JOHN
Seriously, Robb. People die. In
tragic ways. All the time. But, Ted
did it to himself. I’m sorry, but I
don’t have sympathy for that.
Besides, this is a movie. It’s not
real. Get a grip.
JED
Yeah, Robb, you give your mother
this much trouble when you were a
little girl?
Robb’s face turns red. He enters his room and slams the door.
JOHN (O.S.)
Open up.
ROBB
What?
JOHN
I’m sorry. Jed doesn’t know about
your mom.
ROBB
Whatever.
Robb goes to close the door. John blocks it with his hand.
69.
JOHN
You wanna be the killer, you can be
the killer. I just thought your
pretty screaming face would make
all the girls go wild.
ROBB
Can we just take a break? It’s a
little weird right now.
JOHN
Sure. As long as you agree to be
the fourth victim.
ROBB
I thought I was a fucking massive
vagina. Why you being so nice all
of a sudden?
JOHN
I happen to like fucking massive
vaginas.
JOHN (cont’d)
And, fucking with assholes. So
what’s say we go fuck with Jed?
John and Robb are standing outside room 603. Jake exits the
room carrying a book bag. He looks up at them.
JAKE
Do I wanna know?
JOHN
Your roommate’s a bit of an
asshole.
JAKE
Oh. So I already know. Well, have
at him. He’s taking a nap and I’m
heading to the library.
70.
JAKE(cont'd)
Don’t fuck with my shit or you’ll
have one motherfucking angry dwarf
to deal with.
Jake heads toward the stairwell, leaving his room door open.
JOHN
No problem, little man.
JAKE
Call me that again and you’ll be
eligible for the Vienna Boys’
Choir.
Jake enters the stairwell. John and Robb quietly sneak into
Jake’s and Jed’s room.
Jed is asleep on his bed, face up and mouth wide open. Robb
starts to laugh. John quiets him with a look.
John removes the marker cap and points the marker tip at
Jed’s forehead. He looks back at Robb. Robb nods.
John and Robb exit Jake’s and Jed’s room and double over with
laughter. They proceed back to Robb’s room.
Jed softly moans and rolls over onto his stomach. The door
opens. The Hunter steps inside.
The Hunter closes the door and walks over to Jed’s bed.
The Hunter turns back toward the door and notices the iron on
Jake’s desk. The Hunter goes to the desk, picks up the iron
and plugs it in. The iron’s orange light comes on. The Hunter
holds it and turns back to Jed.
The iron’s orange light goes off. The Hunter unplugs the iron
and walks back to Jed’s bed.
Jed moans again, clears his throat and stops humping the bed.
The Hunter presses the iron’s steam button, and a burst of
hot, wet air is released.
The Hunter quickly presses the iron down onto Jed’s face. Jed
immediately awakens and tries leaping out of the bed. The
Hunter holds Jed’s head firmly in place with the iron. Jed’s
attempts at screaming are muffled by the iron.
The Hunter grabs Jed’s pillow and drops the iron. Jed tries
to cry out, but chokes on his own saliva. The Hunter presses
the pillow down onto Jed’s scarred face and holds it firmly
in place until Jed’s body stops writhing.
The Hunter removes the pillow and looks down at Jed. The
first “E” and “A” have been burnt off. The “T,” “M” and
second “E” remain.
The Hunter notices the red marker on the floor. The Hunter
picks it up, removes the cap and writes an “I” in between the
“T” and “M” on Jed’s forehead.
The Hunter picks up the iron, which has burned its impression
into the carpet near Jed’s bed. The Hunter again presses it
to Jed’s forehead, burning off the second “E.”
The Hunter steps back from the bed and tosses a Two of Hearts
playing card onto Jed’s bed.
JOHN
Who falls asleep during porn?
The sex sounds from the porn tape compete with the sex sounds
coming from John’s and Ken’s room next door.
JOHN (cont’d)
Jesus.
ROBB
Cut it out. I’m tired.
John turns the volume down. Ken’s and Nina’s moaning next
door gets louder.
JOHN
Must be nice having a double to
yourself.
ROBB
If I ever had it to myself.
Robb closes his eyes and rolls over. John sits up, disgusted.
JOHN
I gotta piss.
John enters the hallway. The Hunter rounds the corner and
sees John walk to the bathroom and enter. Sex sounds from Ken
and Nina and the porn tape echo in the hallway.
The Hunter walks to John’s and Ken’s room. The Hunter stops
briefly, listening to Ken and Nina, then continues on to
Robb’s room.
73.
The Hunter stops, looks in and sees the porn on TV and Robb.
JOHN
Please tell me this means you’re
done.
JOHN (cont’d)
Shit.
JOHN (cont’d)
Ken, seriously man. Your dick’s
gonna fall off.
JOHN (cont’d)
What the fuck? Lemme guess. Nina’s
playing Bambi?
The Hunter pulls John’s head up. John gags, gasping for air.
The Hunter slams John’s head down, smashing it against the
toilet seat. Blood gushes from his head and runs into the
toilet bowl.
The Hunter thrusts John’s head back into the bowl, holding it
there until John stops struggling. The Hunter steps back and
considers John’s limp body.
TIM
I didn’t think you’d be here.
GRIFFITH
Yeah, well... I don’t really have a
life of my own. According to John,
anyway.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
Did getting away help?
Tim enters.
TIM
Actually, I need to--
GRIFFITH
What?
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
Talk to me.
Tim reaches into his pocket and removes the photo of Aaron
Dr. Warner gave him. He looks at it, but shields it from
Griffith’s view.
TIM
I don’t really know how to begin.
TIM (cont’d)
I don’t think Ted killed himself.
Griffith sighs.
GRIFFITH
He did, Tim. They found alcohol and
matches in his room. And, a note.
TIM
A note?
75.
GRIFFITH
It wasn’t in the best of shape.
But, yeah. In Ted’s writing.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
Apparently, he had a pretty
extensive history. Was on and off
numerous meds. His mom thinks he
stopped taking them. If we’d have
known--
(leaning in)
But, we didn’t. What happened to
Ted was not your fault.
TIM
You’re sure?
Griffith nods and leans back. Calm washes over Tim’s face.
GRIFFITH
The funeral’s on Monday. After last
night, I wasn’t sure any of your
guys would want to go, but... We’re
making a van available in case.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
I know it seems like they don’t
need you right now. But, they do.
Guys are just... It’s harder for
us. And I know it seems like you
have no idea what to say or do.
But, you do. You’ll make it through
this. You just have to do it
together.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
Oh. One other thing.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
Brian’s back. Or, he will be. Seems
someone was able to talk the Vice
President out of his summary
suspension. Just in time for this
weekend’s game.
76.
Tim exhales.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
I already talked to Clay. So, he
knows. Try to get some sleep.
Tomorrow’s a new day.
The Hunter exits the bathroom and goes toward Ted’s room.
The Hunter peers out and sees K at Tim’s door. Robb rolls
over and sees The Hunter standing in his doorway.
ROBB
Hey. Where’d ya get that?
Nina and Ken are in Ken’s bed. Nina is on top of Ken, bucking
like a rodeo cowboy. They both cry out and she collapses on
top of him.
Ken rolls out of bed, from beneath Nina, and grabs his bong.
He fills it with weed, lights it and returns to the bed.
KEN
Yeah, yeah.
77.
KEN (cont’d)
You’d think he’d be happy for me.
KEN (cont’d)
I’m happy for me.
Ken sets the bong aside and leaps on Nina before she can
button her shirt.
The Hunter drops a Four of Hearts playing card onto the bed.
Tim enters from the stairwell. Ken and Nina moan in tandem
from inside Ken’s room.
Tim approaches his door and finds K sitting beside it, with a
pillow and sleeping bag.
K
If he comes back here, I’m gonna be
here, too.
The Hunter opens Robb’s door and sees K enter Tim’s room.
The Hunter steps back from the door and reaches out for the
“R.A.” placard. With brute force, The Hunter pulls it from
the wall.
78.
He sees the iron mark in the carpet and turns to look at his
desk. The iron is not there. He looks up at the closet and
sees the iron on the top shelf.
JAKE
Fucker.
Jake hops up into his bed and cracks the window nearest him.
He pulls his covers up over his head.
Tim slides down the bed toward his desk. He removes the
prescription bottle from his desk drawer. He removes two
pills and considers them. He places the pills back in the
bottle and tosses it back into the drawer.
Tim lies back down, takes a deep breath and closes his eyes.
BRIAN
I’m back.
Brian pushes the door open and tosses the duffle bag onto his
empty bed. Clay shuffles back to his bed.
BRIAN (cont’d)
I’m sorry.
CLAY
I know.
BRIAN
I don’t suppose you wanna help me
bring my stuff in from the car...?
CLAY
I wanna kick the crap out of you.
So, let’s say I don’t and we’ll
call it even.
Brian exits the hall and jogs out into the parking lot. Snow
covers the ground and flurries fill the air.
Brian pulls two boxes out of his trunk and sets them on the
snowy pavement. He rearranges the boxes still in the trunk,
pulling out a smaller box near the back.
BRIAN
Fuck, bro.
Brian kneels and begins putting the items back into the box.
He notices The Hunter isn’t moving. He looks up.
BRIAN (cont’d)
Can I help you with somethin’?
80.
The Hunter kneels and picks up the beer funnel and tube.
Brian stands, still holding the smaller box. He holds it out
for The Hunter.
The Hunter punches Brian hard across the face. The box flies
into the parking lot and Brian grabs hold of the trunk door
to gain his balance.
The Hunter wraps the tube around Brian’s neck and begins
choking him with it. Brian tries twisting around to face The
Hunter, but can’t get his footing on the snowy pavement.
Brian claws at the tube, trying to clear his air passage. The
Hunter thrusts him down into the open trunk and quickly slams
the trunk door down onto Brian’s back.
The Hunter lifts the trunk door and yanks on the tube around
Brian’s neck. Brian kicks and flails his arms, managing to
twist around to face The Hunter.
The Hunter stuffs Brian’s body into the trunk, noticing a gas
container inside. The Hunter removes it, closes the trunk
door and takes the car keys from the trunk’s lock.
Tim unlocks and opens the door. Lana stands in the hallway.
LANA
Where have you been?
LANA (cont’d)
I’ve been worried--
She sees K.
LANA (cont’d)
Oh my God. I’m an idiot!
TIM
Lana, wait.
LANA
Have you two been in there all
along? I haven’t been able to eat
or sleep or think about anything
else since Jamie told me about Ted.
Thinking about you and how... How
you had to be feeling. I kept
calling you. You didn’t answer. I
practically camped out in front of
your door.
TIM
I’m sorry. I--
LANA
Save it.
TIM
You don’t understand.
LANA
And I don’t want to anymore.
K
And they think people choose to be
straight.
TIM
(sighs)
Don’t you have class?
82.
K
Excuse you? I ooze class.
TIM
No, I mean... Don’t you have to go
to class?
K
Mm. I suppose.
(turning back to Tim)
But, it’s just sports psychology.
Losing sucks. There, I pass.
TIM
You don’t have to baby-sit me.
K
I’m not. You couldn’t afford me.
Tim goes to his window and looks out at the snowy parking
lot. Brian’s boxes sit beside an empty parking space.
K (cont’d)
I can go if you want. To class.
But, I’m coming right back.
TIM
You were right. I was just letting
the dreams... Ted left a note. My
brother didn’t do it.
Tim turns to K.
TIM (cont’d)
So, go. I’ll be OK.
KAT, 45, removes a rifle from a locked glass case. She holds
it tenderly, turning around to show it off to the person in
front of the counter.
KAT
This one here’s a beaut.
83.
KAT (cont’d)
It’s a Cheshire. Custom B2. One
blast with this and boom! Off with
their heads!
Kat chuckles.
KAT (cont’d)
I’ll let ya hold it if ya promise
to treat it special.
The Hunter takes the rifle and aims it at her. Kat chuckles
again, this time nervously.
KAT (cont’d)
Now, now. I ain’t your prey.
KAT (cont’d)
So what do ya say? It wouldn’t be
opening day without it.
Clay rolls over in bed and opens one of his eyes. His room
door is still ajar. Brian’s duffle bag sits alone on his side
of the room.
Clay gets out of bed, eyes closed, and scratches his head.
CLAY
Sorry.
Clay proceeds to the next stall and enters. He pulls down his
boxers and sits on the toilet.
Clay peers beneath the stall wall at the feet of the person
in the first stall. They are John’s.
84.
CLAY (cont’d)
Brian?
CLAY (cont’d)
Who’s there?
There’s no response.
CLAY (cont’d)
Oh. That’s right. Only girls can
talk to each other in the bathroom.
Whatever.
The Hunter goes toward the exit with his new rifle.
KAT
Don’t stay out there too long. They
say a storm’s comin’.
Tim heads for the stairwell. Clay exits his room, wearing
only a towel and carrying a shower caddy.
CLAY
Hey, Tim. Have you seen Brian?
TIM
No. Why?
CLAY
He came back this morning and--
TIM
Griffith said he talked to you.
CLAY
Yeah, yeah. It’s all right. I
just... It’s weird. He dropped off
one bag, said he was going back to
his car and... I haven’t seen him
since.
TIM
Did he have football practice?
CLAY
Not this early.
TIM
I don’t know.
TIM
There’s something I have to tell
you.
NINA
John must be pissed.
KEN
Ah, who cares? Robb’s got an extra
bed. It’s not like he had to sleep
on the bathroom floor.
86.
NINA
Go get him.
KEN
I’m all about threeways, but not
with John. I’ve seen him naked.
NINA
No. I mean, we’re done. For now.
Ken yanks her back into the bed and kisses her.
KEN
We don’t have to be.
Brian’s car drives along the main campus road, past groups of
students braving the snow on their way to, or from, class.
LANA
Oh my God. So that’s why you...?
Why didn’t you tell me?
TIM
Because I was afraid.
Lana goes to her bed and wraps her arms around Tim.
87.
LANA
But, I love you, you idiot.
TIM
I love you, too.
LANA
But, you saw him. Here.
TIM
Yeah. The other day. I didn’t know
it was him, but--
LANA
Wait. What does he look like?
TIM
Why?
LANA
Because. Yesterday, when I was
running up and down the stairs to
your room and back, this guy... He
was looking for you. Said he was a
ghost from your past.
TIM
Who?
LANA
Here.
LANA (cont’d)
Tom Nethers. I wrote it down, so I
could tell you.
TIM
No. His name’s Aaron. This is the
guy that was on John’s tour.
Somebody from my--
TIM (cont’d)
Wait a minute. Gimme a pen.
Lana grabs a pen from her desk and hands it to Tim. Tim walks
the post-it and pen back over to Lana’s desk. He starts
crossing off letters in the name and rewriting them in a
different order below it.
He crosses off “M”, then “O,” then “N,” then “S,” then “T,”
then “E,” then “R,” writing “MONSTER.” All that remains above
from the original name are “T,” “H,” and “E.”
Tim steps back from the desk. Lana reads the note.
LANA
The Monster?
LANA (cont’d)
Who’s that?
Clay opens his room door and K leaps back from Ken’s door.
Clay nods toward K and K half-waves.
K
So much for October. It’s
definitely November out--
K (cont’d)
Why are all the cute ones psycho?
K drops Aaron’s photo back to the desk, face down. The movies
from the other night are also sitting on Tim’s desk. K grabs
them and goes to his bag.
Tim’s door opens. K has his back to the door, trying to stuff
the movies into his bag.
K (cont’d)
Where’d ya go?
Tim’s door closes. K turns, holding the movies, and finds The
Hunter standing inside.
K (cont’d)
What the... You do realize
Halloween’s over?
The Hunter does not respond. K sees the rifle The Hunter
holds. His expression changes.
K (cont’d)
Who are you?
AARON
Don’t tell me you forgot?
Aaron swings the butt of the rifle toward K’s head. It makes
impact, smacking K into the wall.
Tim runs across the lobby from the residence hall office.
Lana runs after him, lagging behind.
90.
LANA
Tim? What’s going on? Was it him?
Was it your brother?
TIM
What did it say?
GRIFFITH
Huh?
TIM
Ted’s note. What did it say?
GRIFFITH
Oh. Um. Well, it didn’t really make
much sense. Why?
TIM
I need to know what it said.
GRIFFITH
Can this wait? I’m free after my
judicial meeting at two. Come by
the office.
TIM
I need to know now.
GRIFFITH
I don’t--
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
I don’t really remember everything.
I know it didn’t make much sense to
his mother.
TIM
Why?
91.
GRIFFITH
It said something about how his
father’s death was his fault. But,
his father’s not dead. They’re just
divorced.
Tim steps back into the wall opposite the apartment door.
TIM
Oh my God.
GRIFFITH
What?
LANA
Tim, what?
TIM
He thought Ted was me.
TIM (cont’d)
But, he came back. Because he knows
he was wrong.
AARON
Write it.
K
I’m not him.
AARON
Write it or I’ll kill you right
here.
BACK TO SCENE
AARON
Good.
AARON (cont’d)
Time to change.
Clay exits his room, carrying a book bag, and starts toward
them. Aaron shifts nervously. K looks at Clay and mouths the
word “Help.”
CLAY
Huh?
CLAY (cont’d)
Hey. You can’t have that in here.
JAKE
What the fuck was that?
JAKE (cont’d)
Didn’t you fucking hear that?
NINA
It sounded like a gun shot.
KEN
Inside?
NINA
No, wait!
LANA
Tim, wait!
JAKE
Wake up, fucker. Didn’t you hear
that?
94.
Jake bends down and peels back Jed’s covers. He sees Jed’s
charred face and the written message on his forehead.
Tim exits the stairwell door and immediately comes upon the
bloody sight. Clay’s body is slumped against the hallway
wall, a trail of blood displaying its path to the floor.
Tim rushes toward his room as Ken opens his door. He steps
out, with Nina behind him as Lana and Griffith arrive from
the stairwell.
KEN
What the fuck?!
Tim opens his room door and finds his room empty. He hears
Jake screaming from his room down the hall. Tim runs toward
Jake’s room.
KEN (cont’d)
John! John!
Ken enters the hallway and quickly steps around Clay’s body
to Robb’s room. He bangs on the door and it swings open. He
sees Robb lying in bed.
KEN
Robb, where’s John?
Nina runs out into the hall, leaping over Clay’s body. She
sees Ken on Robb’s floor and the look of absolute terror on
his face.
95.
TIM (O.S.)
It’s me! Tim! Open up!
JAKE
Did you do this?
TIM (O.S.)
Jake, please open the door!
Jake jumps off Jed’s bed and runs to the door. He unlocks and
opens it. Tim rushes in.
TIM (cont’d)
Did I do what?
Jake points to Jed. Tim goes to Jed’s bed. He sees Jed’s body
and stares at it in horror.
LANA
Tim! Robb--
Lana enters and sees Jed. They hear Nina scream from the
bathroom.
Tim, Lana and Jake rush into the bathroom, toward Nina’s
screaming. She is kneeling in front of one of the stalls.
As they approach, they see what Nina has seen: John’s body,
propped up on the toilet in the stall, blood and toilet water
dripping from his head, down his body and into a puddle of
Nina’s vomit, partially obscuring the Three of Hearts playing
card at John’s feet.
96.
TIM
Where’s K?
GRIFFITH
Yes! There are at least three.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
I don’t know! Yes! Right in the
hallway!
Tim stands and notices the note pad on his desk. He walks
past Griffith and picks it up.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
I will. Please hurry!
Tim looks up and out the window. He sees Brian’s car peel out
of the snowy parking lot.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
We have to get everyone out of
here.
GRIFFITH (cont’d)
I don’t understand. What’s going
on? Who did this?
TIM
The Monster.
Tim exits his room. Ken stumbles out of Robb’s room and looks
over at Clay’s body. He sees the playing card at Clay’s feet.
97.
JOHN
What’s that?
Tim snaps out of his stupor and looks down at the floor. He
bends over and picks up the card. As soon as he sees what it
is, he drops it and runs into the stairwell.
AARON
Here.
Aaron points the rifle at K and nods toward the trunk. K goes
to it and unlocks it. He sees Brian’s body. He screams and
falls to the ground.
Aaron walks around to the rear of the car and removes the now-
full gas container, which had been wedged between Brian’s
head and one of the boxes.
Aaron uses the gas container to swing the trunk door closed.
AARON
Follow me.
Tim runs along the campus’s snowy main road. Though there are
several other students walking across campus, he’s the only
one running and the only one not wearing a coat.
K
I’m not Tim.
AARON
Still a liar. After all this time.
Good thing I didn’t learn how to be
a man from my big brother, huh?
AARON (cont’d)
Stop.
AARON (cont’d)
What are you crying for?
K turns back to face away from Aaron. Aaron lowers the rifle
and walks up tightly behind him.
AARON (cont’d)
Looks like you still have a few
things to learn.
AARON (cont’d)
In this world you’re either the
hunter or the hunted.
AARON (cont’d)
How’s that feel?
K
I’m not your brother. I wasn’t
there. I’m not him.
99.
Aaron jerks the rifle back, jamming the butt end into K’s
chest. K whimpers and doubles over. Aaron yanks him back up
to his feet.
AARON
Pay attention. I’m gonna teach you
this.
AARON (cont’d)
Now, look straight ahead. Stay
focused, strong. Then...
AARON (cont’d)
Boom!
Tim nears the dirt path leading into the woods as the gun
shot echoes through the trees. He takes off like a bullet
into the woods.
K
Why are you doing this?
AARON
You never were a quick learner. Or
much of a hunter.
Aaron lights his cigarette and tosses the match into the
snow. He takes a long drag on the cigarette.
AARON (cont’d)
But, you still got me. Got me good.
Aaron tosses the cigarette at K. The lit end hits K’s neck. K
winces and reaches toward the burn.
100.
As K’s blood drips into the snow, Aaron empties the gas
container on top of him.
AARON (cont’d)
Your turn.
TIM (O.S.)
Aaron!
Aaron turns, lit match in his hands, and sees Tim running
down the embankment and into the clearing.
K
Tim, no!
Aaron flicks the match behind him and reaches for the rifle.
Tim charges toward Aaron, but stops when Aaron raises the
rifle, pointing it straight at him.
TIM
It’s me, Aaron. It’s me you want.
K
No!
AARON
Well, bro. I’m glad we got that
figured out.
AARON (cont’d)
He’s still an eyewitness. And he’s
not an eight year-old. Somebody
might actually believe him.
K shivers uncontrollably.
AARON (cont’d)
Were you just hoping that I’d never
figure it out? That I’d never
remember?
AARON (cont’d)
I’d ask why you did it, but I had
lots of time to figure that one
out. While everybody thought it was
me.
TIM
What? What are you--?
AARON
Either the hunter or the hunted.
Either you or me.
AARON (cont’d)
And when the cards were down, it
was you.
Aaron tosses the cards up into the air. They rain down on
Tim, the car, and K.
FIRST SON
Dad!
The inside of the car fills with flames. The father kicks and
screams in agony.
The first son turns to the second son, catatonia sinking in.
The second son does not look away from the fiery car,
entranced by his father’s continued screams.
The second son looks back at the car, as if for the first
time. When he sees the flames, he screams and runs toward his
father, trying to pull him from the car.
The flames are too much for the second son. He stumbles back
from the car as his father’s screams cease. He stares at his
younger brother with an expression of horror.
103.
AARON
The Monster wasn’t me. It was you.
TIM
It was me?
K
Tim! You know that’s not true! It
was him! Remember what Dr. Warner
said.
AARON
Dr. Warner? Really? So you didn’t
forget about me? How sweet.
Aaron walks past K and goes to the car. He yanks Tim up and
forces the rifle into Tim’s hands.
AARON (cont’d)
It was you.
AARON (cont’d)
Still is.
Aaron releases his grip on the rifle. Tim cries out in a mix
of agony and horror.
AARON (cont’d)
You were my brother. You were
supposed to protect me. You were
supposed to protect all of them.
104.
AARON (cont’d)
But you did us one better. You just
protected yourself.
AARON (cont’d)
Either the hunter or the hunted. I
know which one I am now. Which one
are you?
Aaron walks off into the woods as the sound of the sirens
grows closer.
K lifts his head and looks back toward Brian’s car. He sees
that Aaron is gone and he jumps to his feet.
K
Tim? Tim, are you OK?
K (cont’d)
You’re all right.
K (cont’d)
You’re all right.
FADE OUT.