教师点评 Teacher Comments
学生姓名 Student Name: Ivy 任课老师 Instructor: Scarlett
日期 时间 课目 课程进展 完成课时
Date Time Subject Curriculum/Textbook Unit Completed hour
12-16 2-4 IELTS Speaking 2
复习与 是否按时完成:是
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Review 待提升:拿到问题,可以从自己的身边情况入手去讨论。
儿童与成人的不同:表达比较句式 In contrast to, Compared with, Unlike, While..
关注点不同 Children focus on play, while adults focus on responsibilities
依赖性 Children depend on others, while adults are self-reliant.
天真与现实 Children are innocent and carefree, whereas adults are realistic and cautious.
情绪控制 Children are more emotional, while adults manage their feelings better.
学习方式 Children learn quickly, while adults excel at critical thinking.
对待新事物 Children are eager to try new things, while adults stick to routines.
目标 Children focus on short-term goals, while adults prioritize long-term plans.
价值取向 Children value happiness, whereas adults emphasize responsibility and
achievement.
课堂内 Children are expected to learn, while adults are expected to contribute
社会期望
容
In-class
Content 学生成功的评估回答结构: 引入-观点-解释-总结
开头引入--用社会现象做引入
These days, most people judge a child's success by their academic performance, like getting good
grades or high test scores. But I think this is not enough to define success.
自己的观点+ 举例细节
Success should also include other areas, like personal growth, social skills, and emotional health.
For example, a child who is kind, confident, and good at solving problems is just as successful as
one with top grades.
解释原因
If we only focus on grades, children might feel too much pressure and miss out on developing
important qualities like creativity or empathy. These skills are really important for life, not just
school.
总结
So, while good grades are important, they shouldn't be the only standard. A more balanced way to
measure success would help children grow in all areas of life.
加蓝色高 2 亮的是逻辑结构词,绿色高亮的是复杂句型
提出普遍观点,然后反驳
1. 经典对比句型 - Many people tend to think that..., however, in my opinion...
2. - While it is true that..., I would argue that... - Some people believe that..., but I think...
3. 转折强调句型 - People often assume that..., but the reality is...
- Although many people think that..., I feel that... - It is often said that..., yet I believe...
3. 让步+反驳句型 - While I understand that..., I still think...
- I agree that..., but we cannot ignore... - There is some truth in the idea that..., however...
4. 质疑普遍观点句型 - Is it really true that...? I would say that...
- Does...always mean...? In fact, I believe... - Can we truly say that...? In my view...
5. 大多数人+我认为句型 - The majority of people believe that..., yet I would argue that...
-Most people think that..., but I see it differently. -A common belief is that..., however, I feel that.
6. 普遍观点并非完全正确句型 - It is commonly believed that..., but this is not entirely accurate.
- There is a widespread belief that..., however, this overlooks...
- The idea that...is popular, but I think it’s an oversimplification.
课堂表 优点:目前大部分的技巧与句式都补充完了,我们就根据课堂的一些话题,去给 Ivy 补充
现与有 一些思路,与句式。儿童与成人的对比是一个考察重点,除了学习与教育方面,还有一些
待进步 情绪与性格,与社会角色的方面,Ivy 参照一下。Ivy 表达的流利度增加很多,目前去增加
方面 一些背景的引入方法,先展示对普遍观点的认知,再有逻辑地提出反驳或补充,这不仅让
In-class 表达更全面,也能展示批判性思维能力。
Performa
nce and
待提高:整节课其实强调了很多对比的句型,Ivy 课后去挑几个句型用,除了 but 之外,
areas to
improve 也知道能用一些复杂句。还有被动语态的句型,也是很好用的加分句型。
作业布
置 作业:11-12 月
Assignm part 2&3 所有人物类题目规划思路,写笔记
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