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Sustainable development, which aims to balance economic growth, social

equity, and

environmental protection, cannot be achieved without the active participation

of women.

Across the globe, women play vital roles in fostering sustainability, particularly

in environmental conservation, social equity, and economic development. In

many

regions, women are key agents of environmental stewardship, especially in

rural and

marginalized communities. As primary caregivers and resource managers,

women hold

valuable knowledge about local ecosystems, sustainable agricultural practices,

and

biodiversity conservation. Their involvement in agriculture is pivotal to ensuring

food

security, as they are responsible for much of the world’s food production.

However, they

often face barriers such as limited access to land, credit, and technology,

hindering their full

potential in contributing to sustainable agriculture.

Socially, women’s empowerment is intrinsically linked to achieving sustainable

development

goals (SDGs), particularly those focused on education, health, and gender

equality.

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Empowered women are more likely to improve their families' economic

status, invest in
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education, and advocate for better health outcomes. Additionally, gender

equality is a

foundational pillar for realizing sustainable economic development, as women’s

active

participation in the workforce, leadership, and entrepreneurship drives

innovation and

economic growth. Furthermore, women’s leadership in governance and policy-

making is

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crucial for advancing sustainability agendas. When women lead, decision-

making becomes

more inclusive and reflective of diverse community needs. Increasing women’s

participation

in political processes and sustainability initiatives can help address climate

change, promote

social justice, and create economic systems that are equitable and resilient.

In conclusion, women's role in sustainable development is both

foundational and

transformative. Recognizing their contributions, empowering women, and

ensuring their

voices are heard at all levels of society is essential for achieving the

Sustainable Development

Goals and creating a sustainable, equitable future for all.

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Key Terms: Sustainable Development, Economic Growth, Social eqity and

Environmental

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Protection.

Introduction:

Women play a crucial role in ensuring the effectiveness and efficiency of

sustainable

development efforts. Their full and equal participation in decision-making and

policy

development is essential to create and maintain this pathway. Mainstreaming

women’s

greater participation in these roles is also crucial in ensuring the achievement

of the UN

Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs). Sustainable development, which aims

to balance

economic growth, social equity, and environmental protection, cannot be

achieved without

the active participation of women. Across the globe, women play vital roles in

fostering
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sustainability, particularly in the domains of environmental conservation, social

equity, and

economic development. In many regions, women are key agents of

environmental

stewardship, especially in rural and marginalized communities.

However, restricted opportunities for women to access education, employment,

leisure, and

political participation reinforce gender-based social and economic

inequalities. According to
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UNESCO, approximately 132 million girls do not attend school worldwide.

Moreover,

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gender stereotypes and biases in educational materials and teaching practices

remain

pervasive, often discouraging girls from pursuing science, technology,

engineering, and

mathematics (STEM) studies. This disparity further translates into women’s low

representation in critical sectors such as healthcare technology, environmental

fields, and top

executives in private companies.

Gender equality is a right. Fulfilling this right is the best chance we have in

meeting some of
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the most pressing challenges of our time—from economic crisis and lack of
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health care, to
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climate change, violence against women and escalating conflicts. Women are

not only more

affected by these problems, but also possess ideas and leadership to solve
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them. The gender
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discrimination still holding too many women back, holds our world back too.

The 2030

Agenda for Sustainable Development and its 17 Sustainable Development

Goals (SDGs)

adopted by world leaders in 2015, embody a roadmap for progress that is

sustainable and

leaves no one behind.

Achieving gender equality and women’s empowerment is integral to each of the

17 goals.

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Only by ensuring the rights of women and girls across all the goals will we get to

justice and

inclusion, economies that work for all, and sustaining our shared environment

now and for

future generations.

This editorial package showcases UN Women’s 2018 flagship report, “Turning

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promises into
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action: Gender equality in the 2030 Agenda.” It features data, stories, videos
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and publications

that illustrate how and why gender equality matters across all the Sustainable

Development

Goals, and how the goals affect the real lives of women and girls everywhere.

Towards Economic Development:

Women make significant contributions every day from bringing an income to

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her household
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as an employed wage earner, to creating jobs as an entrepreneur, to taking care
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of her family

and elders. She plays a crucial role in ensuring the effectiveness and efficiency

of sustainable

development efforts. Gender equality is a right. Fulfilling this right is the best

chance we

have in meeting some of the most pressing challenges of our time—from

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economic crisis and
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lack of health care, to climate change, violence against women and escalating

conflicts.

Women are not only more affected by these problems, but also possess ideas

and leadership

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to solve them. The gender discrimination still holding too many women back,
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holds our

world back too. Their full and equal participation in decision-making and policy

development is essential to create and maintain this pathway. Mainstreaming

women’s

greater participation in these roles is also crucial in ensuring the achievement

of the UN

Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs).

The 2030 Agenda for Sustainable Development and its 17 Sustainable

Development Goals

(SDGs) adopted by world leaders in 2015, embody a roadmap for progress that

is sustainable

and leaves no one behind. Achieving gender equality and women’s

empowerment is integral

to each of the 17 goals. Only by ensuring the rights of women and girls across

all the goals

will we get to justice and inclusion, economies that work for all, and sustaining

our shared

environment now and for future generations. This editorial package showcases

UN Women’s

2018 flagship report, “Turning promises into action: Gender equality in the 2030

Agenda.” It
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features data, stories, videos and publications that illustrate how and why

gender equality

matters across all the Sustainable Development Goals, and how the goals

affect the real lives

of women and girls

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Role of Sustainable Development: With special reference to Un women:

SDG:1 UN Women Ethiopia is supporting the Government of Ethiopia to

accelerate rural

women’s economic empowerment. The Rural Women Economic Empowerment

program which was

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launched in 2012 at global level and 2014 in Ethiopia, aims to secure rural

women’s livelihoods and

rights in the context of sustainable development and the post MDGs. The
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programme is being

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implemented in Guatemala, Kyrgyzstan, Liberia, Nepal, Niger, Rwanda and now

in Ethiopia. Each
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country has defined its specific detail programme implementation plan based

on the local context, in

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partnership with government and other national stakeholders in line with

government priorities. The

Joint Programme on Rural Women’s Economic Empowerment aims at

accelerating rural women

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economic empowerment in the context of the country national policy priorities,

as defined by

Ethiopia’s Growth and Transformation Plan 2011-2015, and in contributing to

the Millennium
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Development Goals (MDGs), as well as, to the emerging Sustainable

Development Goals (SDGs).

SDG 2 Ending Hunger, Achieving Food Security and Improved Nutrition and

Promoting

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Sustainable Agriculture To accelerate rural women’s access to agricultural

technologies, UN

Women, in partnership with the African Union (AU), the Food and Agriculture

Organization (FAO),

the International Fund for Agricultural Development (IFAD), and the World Food

Programme (WFP)

hosted a regional Sharefair for Rural Women’s Technologies in ESA coinciding

with the International

Day of Rural Women and World Food Day 2014. The Sharefair gathered more

than 100 innovators

from 14 countries showcasing their technologies displaying affordable ways to

accelerate

productivity, enhance value addition and income, improve nutrition, save

women’s time, and reduce

postharvest losses. In addition, more than 300 registered participants attended

the event. The Share

fair promoted technologies and innovations that support rural female

smallholder farmers in the ESA

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region and brought together rural women farmers/ innovators, policymakers.

SDG:3 UN Women Country initiatives to ensure healthy lives and promote well-

being for all at all

ages In August 2014, UN Women ESARO in partnership with its regional partner

“LVCT
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Health” and other capacity building institutions working in the health sector,

collaborated in
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the development of training materials and in the facilitation of a training
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programme which

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utilized capacity-building, peer-to-peer and mentorship models and tools,

towards
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strengthening the leadership, management and advocacy skills of networks

and associations

of WLHIV and HIV/AIDS Caregivers. The training materials borrowed from

existing
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training models and tools, and the in-puts of experts within the region. The

training also

borrowed from the lessons the successes of the global HIV and AIDS movement

which

successfully advocated for the development of national HIV/AIDS policies and

strategies,
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and HIV- responsive business practices.

SDG:4 UN Women Eastern and Southern Africa Country Office Selected

Initiatives on ensuring

inclusive and equitable quality education and promoting lifelong learning

opportunities for all

Malawi Country Office is working with the Ministry of Education in Malawi and

Girls and

not Brides to influence the implementation of the girls’ education strategy in

Malawi. UN

Women also supported the National Girls Education Network in implementing

the National

Girls Education Strategy in the country.UN Women helped develop an advocacy

plan

focusing on ending child marriage and early pregnancies in Malawi which will

then

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contribute to access, retention and completion of schooling by girls in Malawi.

Traditional
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and religious leaders have been consulted, trained and lobbied to implement

and monitor

action plans to engage traditional leaders in support of girls’ education as well.

Best practices

in the support of the development and implementation of bylaws promoting

girls’ education
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have been documented, shared and disseminated with communities for future

replication. A
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National Girls’ Education Conference was also held in 2015.

SDG:5 UN Women Eastern and Southern Africa Country Office Selected

Initiatives on

Gender Equality and Women’s Empowerment. UN Women is grounded in the

vision of
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equality enshrined in the Charter of the United Nations, works for the

elimination of

discrimination against women and girls; the empowerment of women and girls;

and the

achievement of equality between women and men as partners and

beneficiaries of
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development, human rights, humanitarian action and peace and security. UN

Women’s
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Regional focus varies in different countries depending on country specific
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needs but are not

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limited to (i) expanding women’s leadership and participation; (ii) enhancing

women’s

economic empowerment; and (iii) ending violence against women. In addition,

UN Women

in Eastern and Southern Africa also actively participates and contributes to

various UN inter-

agency processes and collaborates with UN organizations around specific

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programme areas

and governments within the UNCT frameworks to support and build

development

interventions feeding into the localization of SDGs at country and regional

levels. In 2015,

for example, UN Women in Kenya supported the National Gender and Equality

Commission

(NGEC) in improving the ability of the Commission to carry out its mandated

role to allow a

transformative gender equality in Kenya to take place,

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SDG: 6 UN Women Eastern and Southern Africa country office selected

initiatives on
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Ensuring access to affordable, reliable, sustainable and modern energy for all

In partnership
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with the UN Foundation, WHO, UNICEF and UNFPA, UN Women Uganda country

office
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systematically engaged the media in raising awareness of policy makers on

women’s health

and energy service provision in health institutions. The project was aimed at

bringing to light

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the challenges that women face in accessing health services, especially

maternal and child

health services in light of inadequate power and energy supply to health

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centres in Uganda.

The media with support from UN Women visited health centres in selected

districts and
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produced many moving challenges experienced by women especially during

pregnancy. The

documented challenges have continued running in different media, with the

result that
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Government has adopted several resolutions to improve energy services in

health centres for

the benefit of women and children. A multi-stakeholder consultation workshop

was also held

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which helped in forming thematic networks for collaboration, partnerships and

advocacy for

action.

SDG: 7 UN Women Eastern and Southern Africa country office selected

initiatives on

Decent work and economic growth for women Since 2012, UN Women has

invested heavily

in building the capacity of women entrepreneurs in the area of public

procurement so that

they have the practical skills and knowledge to submit winning bids for

government tenders.

In 2015, UN Women in Kenya continued working in this area with a deeper focus

at the

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county level. Redirecting capacity building forums to the county level was

needed due to

lower awareness levels than in Nairobi. In addition to working with MSE

suppliers, UN

Women also supported dialogue platforms that brought together the buyers (i.e.

Procurement
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Officers from Public entities) in order to sensitize them on their role in the

implementation of

Preference and Reservations. Scheme (2011 and subsequent amendment

regulations) as well

as Financial Institutions to discuss the critical issue of access to trade finance.

Trade finance

continues to be a big barrier for disadvantaged groups who need access to

affordable capital
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in order for them to service government contracts within the stipulated time.

SDG: 8 UN Women Eastern and Southern Africa Country Office/ Regional

Initiatives on

Reducing Inequalities among Countries In 2015, UN Women Eastern and

Southern Africa

significantly contributed to generating credible evidence and knowledge on the

positive
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impacts of investing in gender equality and women’s empowerment and to

building capacity

for development impact. This led to successful advocacy that influenced the

development

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discourse, policies and actions in the region specifically, in agriculture and

extractive

industries (EI). UN Women has been able to demonstrate with evidence and

data the

substantive losses from inequality through its study in the ‘Cost of the Gender

Gap in
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Agriculture in Malawi, Tanzania and Uganda’. The study documented that the

gap between

male and female farmers is large: 28-31% and represents a significant amount

of money: $67-

105 million which can only be closed through smart(er) interventions and

subsequently take
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up to 400,000 people out of poverty in Malawi, Tanzania and Uganda. Africa

needs to close

the gap premised on the fact that for Africa to achieve its 2063 vision and SDGs,

it is

important to bring women to the heart of Africa’s development and

transformation and

address inequalities affecting women in diverse sectors of the economy.

Conceptual Framework on Sustainable Development:

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Conclusion: Finally its concluded that, Without women we cannot achieve the

goal of
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sustainable development. They play a important role for achieving our

sustainable

development in the ways of promoting gender equality in the form of equitable

rights,

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responsibilities , and opportunities is not just a precursor for human –rights –
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led social justice
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but it’s imperative for all –around development and not just women
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empowerment. Here few
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cases UN Women’s efforts put women at the centre of the means of

implementation through

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global leadership of the drive to adopt gender-responsive budgeting, a tool to

realize
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commitments to women’s rights. Globally, regionally and nationally, the

organization backs

innovations extending the collection of data that make women’s issues visible

and influence

policies delivering on gender equality. UN Women helps women access

technology,
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including to achieve the double dividend

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