10- JADE ( PERSUASIVE ESSAY ) 10-EMERALD
(memorizing script about the Aged Mother, Japanese
Story)
Activity: Christmas Vacation Pl an Essay
Descriptive Essay.
In a descriptive essay, the writer focuses on providing detailed descriptions of events,
places, people, or experiences, helping the reader to visualize and understand the
subject. In this case, students are asked to describe their Christmas vacation plans,
including activities, how they will spend time with family and friends, and how they
plan to relax or engage in personal growth.
The primary purpose is to paint a vivid picture of the planned vacation, with specific
details that allow the reader to get a sense of what the vacation will be like.
Topic:
        What are your plans for the Christmas vacation, and how do you intend to make the most
         of it?
Instructions:
Write a well-organized essay explaining your plans for the upcoming Christmas
vacation. In your essay, describe the activities you will engage in, how you will spend
your time with family and friends, and how you plan to relax or learn during the
holidays. Be sure to explain why these plans are important to you.
Word Limit: 250-300 words
(Note: This word limit is chosen for ease of grading and to ensure students can
express their ideas clearly and concisely.)
Assessment Criteria (Total: 20 points)
             1.
         Introduction (4 points):
             2.
             o    Clear introduction to the topic.
             o    A brief outline of what the essay will cover (what the student plans to do during
                  Christmas vacation).
          3.
       Content and Detail (6 points):
          4.
          o     Detailed explanation of plans for the vacation (activities, family time, hobbies, etc.).
          o     Thoughtful description of how these plans contribute to relaxation, fun, or personal
                growth.
          5.
       Organization (4 points):
          6.
          o     Clear structure (introduction, body, conclusion).
          o     Logical flow of ideas with smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs.
          7.
       Language Use (4 points):
          8.
          o     Use of correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
          o     Varied sentence structure, and appropriate vocabulary for a grade 9-10 level.
          9.
       Conclusion (2 points):
          10.
          o     A concise summary of the plans.
          o     Clear closing sentence that wraps up the essay nicely.
          11.
       Creativity and Originality (2 points):
          12.
          o     The essay demonstrates original thinking, with unique or interesting plans for the
                vacation.
          o     Ideas presented in an engaging way.
Total: 20 points