静态柱图
The chart below gives information about the journeys to school by children aged
11 to 16 in the UK in a year.
Introduction
The bar graph illustrates
_____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________.
Overview
across all distances/ are mainly used for/ less favored / whereas/ the most popular
modes of transport
Overall, walking and cycling are __________________________________ for short
journeys (less than 2 miles), ____________ cars ________________________ longer
distances (over 5 miles). Cars are ___________________ _____________________.
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the figures for / Cars and buses/ traveling between 1 and 2 miles to school/at / with/
which was 40% higher than/ on foot / overwhelmingly popular/
For journeys less than 1 mile, walking was _____________________________, as
90% of children aged 11 to 16 chose to do so, _____________________________
that of cycling. ________________________ were less common, _________ less
than 10% of children using them. Meanwhile, the majority of students
______________________________________chose to go by bicycle (75%) and
___________________(60%), while ___________________ cars and buses were
considerably lower, _________________ 20% and 10%, respectively.
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remained the top choice/ compared to / less often/ no data was recorded for / topped
the list /accounting for / In the 2-to-5-mile category
________________________ , buses ________________________ at 50%, followed
closely by bicycles at 47%. Cars and walking were chosen ____________________,
_________________ approximately 31% and 25%, in that order. For distances over 5
miles, buses ________________________ , at 70%, __________ 21% for cars, while
________________________ walking and cycling.
The chart below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in three
different wards of a hospital. It shows what percentage of the patients replied
‘very good’ about various aspects of their hospital experience.
Introduction
three different wards / rated their hospital experience as 'very good'/ across four
aspects/ the percentage of patients
The bar chart illustrates ___________________________ who
____________________________________ in _____________________— Holly
Ward, Maple Ward, and Oak Ward — _______________________: hospital staff,
waiting time, quality of treatment, and quality of aftercare.
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had the lowest percentages/ while /in three out of them/ all four aspects/ received the
most positive feedback
Overall, it is clear that Holly Ward ____________________________________
____________________________________, _____ Maple Ward consistently
____________________________________ in _____________________________.
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Meanwhile/ received the most positive feedback/recorded/ in terms of/ roughly/
higher than/ regarding / rated
_______ hospital staff, approximately 83% of Holly Ward patients _______ this
aspect as 'very good,' noticeably __________ the figures for Oak Ward (around 65%)
and Maple Ward (roughly 45%). _________________ waiting time, Holly Ward still
_____________________________, at about 77%. _______, Maple Ward _______ a
slightly higher satisfaction rate (just over 55%) than Oak Ward (approximately 50%).
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Respectively/ the figures for/ lower/ expressed high satisfaction/ compared to
As to treatment quality, roughly 85% of Holly Ward patients rated this aspect as 'very
good,' ________________ around 75% in Oak Ward and 55% in Maple Ward.
Regarding aftercare, approximately 80% of patients in Holly Ward
___________________, while __________________ Oak Ward and Maple Ward
were ________________ , at roughly 65% and just over 50%, ________________ .
