Keats Poem
Keats Poem
Structure
4.0 Objectives
4.1 Introduction
4.2 John Keats
4.3 A note on Keats’s Odes
4.4 Ode to a Nightingale
4.4.1 Text
4.4.2 Interpretation
4.5.2 Interpretation
4.0 OBJECTIVES
In this Unit, we shall discuss two odes of John Keats: Ode to Nightingale and
Ode to Autumn. After completing the study of this unit you will be able to:
• discuss the development of Keats’ thought in the two odes
• appreciate Keats’ sensuous imagery which is the characteristic feature of
his poetry and his poetic craftsmanship.
4.1 INTRODUCTION
In the earlier units of this block, we have discussed Romantic poetry with
special reference to Wordsworth, Coleridge, Byron and Shelley. In this unit
which is the last in the series on romantic poets, we shall discuss Keats’ poetry
which is marked for his skills in word painting, rich sensual imagery, and verbal
coinage. We shall also discuss the development of thought in the two odes.
We would like you to first read the poem. Then you should read it again with
the help of glossary, interpretation of lines and words given in the unit. After
you have followed the interpretation, read the note on poetic devices. After
you have read and understood the poem and critical comments, write down 187
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answers given by us at the end of the unit.
4.4.1 Text
My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains
My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk,
Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains
One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk:
Tis not through envy of thy happy lot, (5)
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Cool’d a long age in the deep-delved earth,
Tasting of Flora an the country green,
Dance, and Provencal song, and sunburnt mirth!
O for a beaker full of the warm South, (15)
4.4.2 Interpretation
Lines
1-4 express the poet’s longing to lapse into a state of forgetfulness so
that he can give up the world and its attendant pain and fly into the
world of the nightingale. Can you pick up the words that stress upon
the impulse to seek oblivion’? “heart aches”, “drowsy numbness”,
“pains”, “dull opiate”, “hemlock” (poison) and “Lethe-wards had
sunk”—all these express the poet’s wish for a state of oblivion and
192 thereof, for a movement into the world of the nightingale.
The physical sensations of aches and pains are juxtaposed with Keats: ‘Ode On A
the state of drowsy numbness and a drugged state. How does Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
To A Nightingale’
the poet reconcile a state of conscious pain with that of inertness
and insensibility? Why does he do so? Both the states—of pain
and numbness—have a common source in the ecstatic joy of the
nightingale. The poet’s mood is one of drugged languor and has
been occasioned by his empathetic response to the happiness of the
bird. The poet wishes to merge his identity with that of the bird.
In these opening lines, the identification is not total; he is aware
of his self (which explains his pains and aches), but gradually the
self-consciousness fades as a drowsy numbness overtakes him and
the possibility of total identification is on the rise as the later lines
in the stanza explain.
Lines
5-10 these lines explain what had given rise to these strange, morbid
feelings in the poet. The poet says that the feelings of depression
in him are not due to envy of the bird’s happiness, but because
he is “too happy” in its happiness. The poet’s earlier mood of
despondency seems to be perverse in the context of what gives rise
to it. The mood in the opening quatrain contradicts the latter mood
in the sestet.
7 “light-winged Dryad”: “light-winged” refers to the bird’s quickness
in flight. It also refers to a spirit of light-heartedness in contrast to
the heavy drugged feeling of the earlier lines.
“beechen green”: the green colour of the beech tree which carries
associations of freshness. “shadows numberless”: “shadows”
suggest thick foliage which caste the shadows.
“summer”:in England summer is associated with colour and
warmth (Recall Shakespeare’s use of the word in his Sonnet 18)
“full- throatedease”: is in contrast to the cares and pains of the
world as though the bird is immune to all suffering.
0-20 Here the poet seeks a prolongation of his happy state by asking for
a beaker of wine from the South (of France). But towards the end
of the second stanza (19-20) his wish for a fate of intoxication is to
forget his conscious self and thereafter to fade away with the bird
into the forest.
12 Do you recognise the alliteration here?
“deep-delved” almost suggests the strokes of spade digging the
earth. It also suggests the cooling effect on the wine made out of
grapes grown in the warm south as a result of storing it underground.
Keats is remarkable for his attention to concrete details in this
description of the vintage wine. He associates the wine with
Flora (goddess of vegetation and flowers), country green, Dance,
Provencal song (song of Provence in medieval France), the warm
South—all associations of warmth, high spirits and excitement.
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To drink off the Hippocrene is to get poetic inspiration.
Can you trace the progression of thought and imagery in these
two stanzas? “Throat” and “summer” from the preceding stanza
(1-10) lead to thoughts of wine produced in the South of France.
The longing for the “warm south” leads him backwards in time
to the song of the medieval poets of Provence and still back into
the classical age when the poets used to drink from the fountain
Hippocrene to get inspired. The poet desires that wine and poetic
imagination together might help him escape into the world of the
nightingale. Ode to a Nightingale is the supreme expression in all
of Keats’ poetry of the impulse to imaginatively escape that flies
in the face of knowledge of human limitation. (Stuart M. Sperry:
Keats the Poet).
This impulse finds concrete expression in Stanza IV (L.31-33)
Keats is one of the most sensuous of the English Poets. Here in
this description of the vintage wine from the warm south-cool
and heady, bubbling and purple-coloured, Keats is at his sensuous
best.
21-30 (stanza III) reiterate the poet’s desire to fade far away and forget
the fretful fever and stir of the world. Wine is sought as an opiate to
support him in his desire for oblivion so as to forget all the painful
experiences of life which include a poignant reference to his brother
Tom’s death (L.26) and “where but to think is full of sorrow” (27).
The poet imagines the bird to be happy because it does not belong
to the world of the humans. To be human is to experience “the
weariness, fret and fever” of existence.
The poet is also aware that he is human and therefore even if he
were to fly away into the nightingale’s world, he cannot forever
stay there in happiness. His depression is thus implicit in his
desire for escape. Keats is seen struggling against the inevitable
impermanence of human beauty, youth and happiness. He is striving
for some enduring principle of permanence which he associates
with the song of the nightingale.
31-40 (Stanza IV) The thoughts of sickness, old age and death make him
seek an alternative to wine in his search for a supporting aid to
wing him to the happy sojourn of the nightingale. The poet turns
to poetic fancy to bridge the division between him and the bird.
The creative activity arising out of his appeal to poetic imagination
limits itself to a three-line ornate composition at the end of which
Keats is back on the ground again, far away from the nightingale’s
habitation. Initially, he soars high on the wings of poetic fancy to
the tree tops where the nightingale perches, but before long he is
back on earth where there is no light other than what flickers of the
moonlight through the branches and the leaves of the trees.
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33 “viewless wings of poesy”: Keats speaks of the wings of poesy as Keats: ‘Ode On A
invisible, because the flight (of imagination) is too high for a vision Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
To A Nightingale’
of the earth to be visible. The poet expects to soar high into the far
distant, almost ethereal world of the bird aided by poesy.
“poesy”: Keats uses the word rather in an affected sense to
mean poetry. There is something of a self-conscious effort in the
description of the moon and the stars.
34 Human brain cannot take in the broad sweep of poetic fancy. Despite
its retarding effect, the poet’s imagination takes him swiftly to the
abode of the nightingale on tree tops.
38-40 But poetic fancy cannot last long. It is just as temporary as the effect
of wine on him. He is grounded on earth where there is neither light
nor darkness, other than whatever filters the moon and the stars
through the leaves of the trees.
41-50 (Stanza V) Keats’ response to sensuous beauty of the physical
world is at its best in this stanza. Despite the semi-darkness around,
he is able to imagine the flowers and their colours through their
sweet scent. Keats said that when the primary sense of sight is
absent, the other senses are intensified and provide “much room
for imagination”. In this stanza, you can recognise Keats’ olfactory
sense, his auditory sense and his sense of taste at work even as he
confesses that “I cannot see what flowers are at my feet”. (41) The
sound of the buzzing flies, caught by the auditory sense is expressed
through the employment of sibilant words like “murmurous”;
“Flies”, “summer” and “eves”. These words give the onomatopoeic
effect of the bees buzzing around.
Identify the sensuous imagery in this stanza. What are the adjectives
Keats employs to evoke sensuous excitement? Phrases like “soft
incense”, “dewy wine”, “ white hawthorn”, “pastoral eglantine”
and “fast-fading violets” convey concrete physical details of the
flowers.
Stanza VI
The colourful flowers, the musk-rose and dewy wine conjure up
thoughts of luxury and inebriation which for Keats are portentous
signals as they once again lead him towards thoughts of death. The
line of thinking in this stanza bears a close resemblance to stanzas
II and III. As he listens to the bird’s song in darkness, he feels that
it is the opportune time to die, “to cease upon the midnight with no
pain”.
He says that it seems rich to die at that very moment when he
is at the heights of ecstasy, experiencing a rich and sensuous
excitement. To descend from that state of total bliss will be only
painful, analogous to a death-in-life state. (You can now recall his
earlier description of a state of numbness in stanza I.) Hence the
poet seeks an alternative life-in-death state where to be dead at
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Line
62 “half in love”: Why does Keats say that he is only half in love with
death? Read through the stanza. You will discover Keats’ offer of
explanation in the last two lines. Keats is painfully aware that after
his death, he shall not be able to listen to the bird’s song which will
continue to be heard in the world. Who is dead will be no more
than a requiem.
“easeful death”: (1) Painless death
(2) death that releases him from pain and gives him peace
and rest.
At this moment of total surrender to sensuous excitement, Keats becomes aware
of his separateness from the immortal bird.
Line Stanza VII
71-80 the stanza begins with an ambiguous statement when Keats
addresses the nightingale as the “immortal bird”. But he corrects
himself in line by turning attention to the voice of the bird for it
is the voice that had been heard in the past and shall continue to
be heard in the future even as it is presently heard by the poet.
Tracing the perennial voice of the nightingale, Keats moves from
the present to the past (“emperor and clown”) through the Biblical
times (“Ruth”) and then to remote world of fairies (‘charmed....
faery lands’). The generations pass, but the nightingale’s voice
continues.
76 “The sad heart of Ruth”: Reference to the Old Testament story
of Ruth, the kind and devoted daughter-in-law of Naomi of Moab
near Jerusalem- Ruth instead of turning to her father and mother
after the death of her husband, accompanied her widowed mother-
in-law to the land of Bethlehem. She worked in the field of Bo’az
to earn her living and ultimately was rewarded for her devotion and
kindness to her mother-in-law. Keats reference here is to Ruth in
the fields of Bo’az where she stood gathering the sheaves of corn.
She is sad and lonely having moved far away from her native land
to work in alien fields.
79 Keats opens up the world of the legends, of fairy tales—a world
that is in the subconscious and present in all of us.
80 “forlorn”: Why does the poet describe the faery lands as “forlorn”
These faery lands are forlorn because they are not for men. They
have become inaccessible for no man can ever return to them. The
word “forlorn” connects this stanza to the next and the final one.
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STANZA VIII Keats: ‘Ode On A
Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
81-90 With the anguished expression of being “forlorn”, he is back to To A Nightingale’
his state of painful awareness that the earthly and the eternal can
never be bridged. All his efforts at identification with the bird have
proved to be of temporary value. As the bird flies to the next valley
and as its song fades, the illusion of oneness with the bird dissolves.
The song that Ruth had heard reminded her of her separation from
her home and the song that had thrilled Keats reminds him of his
separation from the bird. As the song recedes, the poet moves
towards his forlorn self. The poem ends with a question about the
validity of such a heightened experience when it leaves him with a
sense of loss and depression. Keats raises a question that operates
on two levels. It can pertain to the genuineness of that thrilling
experience which the song had given him. He wonders whether it
was all a vision or a dream. He sounds sceptical thinking that the
song had given him just an illusion of ecstasy. On another level the
question may relate to the poet’s perception of the just idle a symbol
of permanence. Such a conception may be just idle whimsies on his
part.
The conflicting tendencies towards mortality as expressed in stanza VI- of
attraction and fear are developed in the last two stanzas. Each one of
them is given prominence separately. Stanza VII pays tributes to the
immortality of the song and thereby stresses the poet’s fascination
for death so that he can remain in that ecstatic moment of identity
with the bird. Stanza VIII contradicts this desire for death as it
registers man’s limitations that can never give him permanent joy
as he imagines to have experienced. The poem thus maintains the
dramatic debate between two voices of the poem. It completes a full
circle as it begins with the experience of the heart and ends with the
questioning of the heart. The exciting song sounds no more than a
“plaintive anthem”, keeping in line with the earlier description of it
as “high requiem’ (L.70).
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Literature III good example of this is seen in the phrase “full-throated ease” (L.10). The
song of the nightingale is described in visual imagery. Yet another example
is in the description of the wine in terms of “the blushful Hippocrene” and
“Purple-stained mouth”—where the taste is expressed in visual terms.
Other examples of his skill in verbal coinage include “leaden-eyed” (28)
“Viewless wings of Poesy” (33) “embalmed darkness” (43).
3) Alliteration: “Deep-delved”, “beaded bubbles”...”the fever and the fret”.
4) Diction: Stanza V is remarkable for Keats poetic diction. You can notice the
contrast between such homely words as “the seasonable month” and “soft
incense’’, “dewy win” “embalmed darkness”. Though Keats is literally
referring to the scent of the flowers, these words conjure up thoughts of
luxury and wine.
We can see a similar kind of contrast in stanza VII between the enchantment
and mystery suggested by “charm’d”, “magic”, “faery” and the emotionally
disturbing associations of “perilous” and “forlorn”. All these are in close
link with the homely word “casements”, a word that returns the poet (and
the reader) to reality.
In lines 71-72, out of 18 words that Keats employs, only two have more
than one syllable. The succession of monosyllables is intended to produce
flat, prosaic reality.
Check Your Progress I
1) Give examples of Keats’ skill in word painting and verbal coinage with
reference to Ode to Nightingale. (50 words)
2) Discuss the development of thought in Ode to Nightingale?
4.5.1 Text
Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness!
Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun;
Conspiring with him how to load and bless
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eaves run;
To bend with apples the moss’d cottage-trees,
And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core;
To swell the gourd, and plump the bazel shells
4.5.2 Interpretation
Lines 1-6 The first line recalls the cold of the mists and briskly leads to a
description of fruit, the flowers and the bees constituting a lush
and colourful picture of Autumn. Sense of ripeness, growth is
suggested by “maturing sun” reaching its climax as the strain
of the weighty fruit bends the apple trees and loads the vines.
“Bless”further states the richness and fertility with a properly
religious implication. Thereafter Keats moves to the landscape.
The soft ‘f’s’ and ‘r’s’ of—“And fill all fruit with ripeness to
the core” make the images bulge softly in the language like the
fruit itself.
Lines 6-11 Line 6 curves the lushness of “swell and gourd”. “Plump” is a
verb solid enough to touch and puts a restraint on any excess
that Keats might have committed after “swell the gourd”.
The autumn of first stanza is description of a process and an
agricultural conspirer, plotting secretly with the sun to bring
ripeness to a state of saturation. Can you pointout words that
suggest this process?
As process autumn loads, blesses, bends, fills, swells, plumps
and sets budding.
Line 9-11 The only receptive consciousness of all this activity is that of
the bees who sip their aching pleasure to such a glut that they
think “warm days will never cease”, for the honey of harvest
pleasure has “over brimmed” their natural store houses. The
fullness of nature’s own grace, her free and overwhelming gift
of herself is the burden of this stanza. The low sibilants and
thrice repeated ‘mm’ of the last line bring activity into play.
Though the sound of bees is drowsy, their work is not.
If you read the final three lines of the first stanza, you notice
implications about the passage of time. Can you figure out
the words? You must have noticed that the flowers are called
“later”, the bees are assumed to think that “warm days will
never cease” and there is a reference to the summer which has
already passed.
Lines 12-22 The second stanza is a sensuous observation of the consequences
of the process initiated in the first stanza. Autumn is now seen
not as setting the flowers to budding but as a woman amid her
store taking care of the over abundance of harvest. Autumn
is no longer an active process, but a female overcome by the
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careless”, “hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind”. She is a Keats: ‘Ode On A
passive embodiment of the earthly paradise, a place of repose Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
To A Nightingale’
after the sexual and productive activity hinted at by her having
been “close bosom-friend of the maturing sun”. But she is also
the peasant girl drunk with the odours and efforts of gathering,
winnowing, reaping and gleaning. The final four lines of the
stanza take us to the very end of the harvest, the gleaner bearing
her laden head so steadily as to suggest motionlessness even as
she moves. The language catches the gestures and enacts them.
The faint breeze ruffles hair in the soft ‘‘Ts’’ of the line and
sounds in the repeated syllables of “winnowing wind”. The
first seven lines are replete with extended vowels—“drows’d”,
“sound”, “fume” and there are no heavy stresses so that leisurely
movement is suggested.
The final image, autumn as lingering and passing is suggested
in “patient look” with which she watches the last oozing hours
by hours. “Oozing”, or a steady dripping, is, of course, not
unfamiliar as a symbol of the passage of time.
Lines23-33 We have post-harvest sounds, heralding the coming on the
winter. The poet’s attitude towards transience and passing
beauty is implicit in “Where are the songs of Spring” but is
immediately abandoned in “Think not of them, thou hat thy
music too”. The late flowers and poppies of stanzas 1 &2 are
replaced by the barred clouds that bloom the twilight and touch
the stubble-plains with rosy hue. And though the small gnats
mourn in a wail-filled choir, the sound of their mourning is
musically varied by the caprice of light and wind. The poet’s
rendering of the wail is light. The “full grown lambs” are now
ready for their harvest having completed the cycle. The voice
of their bleat comes from a distance “hilly bourne”. So also
the hedge crickets are heard across the exhausted landscape,
the winter singer, the red breast adds his soft treble and the
departing birds close the poem. This is acceptance of process
beyond the possibility of grief. The last stanza looks back to
the concluding lines of Coleridge’s Frost at Midnight, where
we hear: “The red breast sit and sing Betwixt the tufts of snow
on the bare branch Of mossy apple-tree, while the high thatch
Smokes in the sun-thaw.”
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Keats’ poetic diction is marked for precision like a molten ore sublimed by Keats: ‘Ode On A
enormous pressure. “Barred cloud” stubble-plains, “rosy hue”, “wailful choir”, Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
To A Nightingale’
“full-grown, lambs”, “gathering swallows” in the third stanza are concrete
images of life unaffected by any thought of death. The mind is free to associate
with the “wailful” mourning of the gnats with a funeral dirge or the swallows
gathering for immigration, but these sounds are more confined to autumn than
to any lament on death. The diction in Keats retains a restraint on thought.
And yet there is no dissociation between senses and the intellect. It is a perfect
integration. His nerve ends maintain contact with the intellect, the thinking goes
on through these images and receives its precise definition and qualification
from images and yet retains a classical restraint on Keats. His Ode to Autumn
does not carry a palpable design on us. The poet is himself completely absent,
there is no “I”, no suggestion of the discursive language in this ode. The power
of self absorption, wonderful sympathy, identification with things he called
“negative capability” he saw as essential to creation of poetry.
Check Your Progress II
1. The ode is objective and descriptive. Comment in not more than 150
words.
2. In this ode, Keats’ pictorial power finds its fullest expression. Comment in
not more than 150 words. )
3. Comment on Keats’ “negative capability”—(50 words)
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Literature III 4.7 LET US SUM UP
In this Unit we have discussed two odes of John Keats—To Nightingale and To
Autumn with a view of familiarising you with
• the development of thought in the two odes
• the comprehensive and sensuous imagery which is the hall mark of Keats’
poetry and
• features of Keat’s poetic craftsmanship particularly his negative
capability,
• varied allusions, myth making, verbal coinage, and alliteration and
assonance.
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