Corrección
Introduction
Ultimately, my visit to Rio de Janeiro has been an enriching and enjoyable experience,
allowing me to immerse myself in its vibrant culture and stunning beaches. I have grown to
admire this Brazilian city, learning about its culture, traditional food, and location, while
also practicing the present continuous tense in writing about this wonderful experience.
Outline
Slide 1 : Introduction to Destiny
I’m going to talk about some places in Brazil. I’m visiting Rio de Janeiro, a beautiful city
that is the most popular worldwide.
I’m discovering its culture; it has incredible beaches. Rio de Janeiro is the second most
visited city in Brazil and is located in the southwest of the country on the western coast of
Bahía of Guanabara, near the tropic of Capricorn.
Slide 2 : Daily Activities in the Beach.
I’m walking through Copacabana and finishing in Ipanema. I’m enjoying the 45-minute
walk. I’m observing the landscape during the walk.
Cute people tanned trotting, riding in bicycles for the beaches as footvolley. The beaches
are identified by number, and I’m enjoying delicious açaí. I like to taste new flavors and
textures and usually is the sellest food on the beaches.
Slide 3 : The most popular beach and exclusive.
The beach Copacabana is more popular than the beach Ipanema, but observing that the one
is more exclusive seems calmer and has higher prices because it’s one of the most
exclusive, luxurious, and expensive neighborhoods in all Copacabana for its environment
than the beach Ipanema.
Slide 4 : The famous Păo of Acúcar Mountain of Rio de Janeiro.
I’m visiting the Păo of ącúcar Mountain; it’s particular and very emblematic in Rio de
Janeiro; its landscape is one of the most beautiful in the country, and I’m using this public
transport, including the electric train, is very efficient and economic.
Slide 5 : Delicious Traditional Food in Rio de Janeiro.
The traditional food is delicious dishes such as Feijoada, the Churrasco, and the Moqueca.
The Feijoada is composed for black beans, pork, rice, and mandioca flour and finishing by
eating with an orange that accompanies the dish. Another delicious food is prepared with
fish and a stew of veggies. The dish that I’m eating is Fejioada is the most delicious of all
Río de Janeiro.
Slide 6 : The Park most visited of all Río de Janeiro.
I’m visiting Park Large, which is a free and public park and is considered a historical
heritage of the city. This is one of the most visited places in the area. This park is a small
natural reserve and I’m seeing animals such as skunks, monkeys, and chimpanzees. I love
this place because inside there is a café the quite popular. Here, people usually take pictures
inside since it has an imposing structure.
I’m using Uber for moving by the city because is easier and cheaper than in my city,
Cúcuta.
Slide 7 : Cristo Corcovado.
I’m visiting the Cristo Corcovado and walking for the balcony of the viewpoint to see the
city from different angles. Approximately going up the tall part of the monument, I’m
lasting 45 minutes. It’s more crowded here than in Bogotá.
Slide 8 : Stadium of the Macaraná
I’m visiting the stadium of the Maracaná, knowing the history from soccer Brazilian, seeing
the old shirts of the selection, and the stands of the stadium. I’m using the public transport,
including the metro.
The stadium of the Maracaná is the most of all Brazil.
Slide 9 : The Museum of the Mañana.
I’m visiting in the morning, and it takes me approximately 20 minutes to walk there. It’s a
museum of futuristic belief, and it has architecture for outside flashy and particular, and
finishing, I’m visiting the Arcos of Lapa, which is the place biggest and most important in
the Colonial Constitutional of all Brazil.
Conlusions
Ultimately, my visit to Rio de Janeiro has been an enriching and enjoyable experience,
allowing me to immerse myself in its vibrant culture and stunning beaches. I have grown to
admire this Brazilian city, learning about its culture, traditional food, and location, while
also practicing the present continuous tense in writing about this wonderful experience.
