There are several benefits of ……..
and the main benefit is that it will greatly improve
the health of people. so that they can work and study more effectively. As the result, they
can earn more money to support their family and themselves leading to an improvement
in the quality of life. People will became more happy and enjoy their life.
Having opportunity to meet and make more friends is the second benefit of this trend.
People can expand their cocial circle so that they can enhance their communication skills
and become more confident. It will allow them to achive their target in a short amount of
time and become more successful in the future.
On the other hand, the drawbacks of…………. are undeniable and the main draw back is
that it will create a financial burden for their family and themselves which can make them
suffer from stress and anxiety. More conflict will occur between family members and it
will create a distance between them.
The drawback of ……………. are undeniable and the main drawback is that it will create
a financial burden for the government which prevents them from investing money in
other necessary aspect's such as education and health. Consequently, it will lower the
satisfaction of the citizens toward the government and contribute to the instability of the
sociaty. This can have a negative effect on the development of the economy and the
country.
….. increase the member of incidents at the workplace since people lack of knowledge
and working experience. It can create a financial burden for their family and themselves
because they have to pay for the medical treatment.
…………Strengthen the bond
….have more motivation to reach to their full potential so that allow them achive their
target…..
…..Increase…. lack life experience which can increase their rish of making wrong
decisions. Consequently, it can give children it a feeling of boredom and frustration.
Therefore they will not have the motivation to work or study.
On the other hand, it is essential for the government to invest more money in other
necessary aspects such as enviroment, health or education. The number of environmental
problems will be reduced which the quality of soil, our and water will become more
better so that people can have a good mental health.
MỞ BAT - KẾT BÀI
Education is an important part in the life of people and society as a whole. Some people
believe that…………
From my point of view I partly agree with this statement and in this essay I will provide
futher explanations
+) In my opinion, there are several causes of this trend and I will provide some solutions
to address this problems
(1) In this essay I will discuss both of these view and provide futher explanations.