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The narrator and their mom clean the attic, where the narrator discovers a mysterious box containing a key and a message that leads to a magical garden. Inside, they meet a talking hamster named Chocolate Berry, who reveals the kingdom is under the tyrannical rule of an evil king, prompting the narrator to join a rebellion against him. After rallying other animals and confronting the king, they succeed in overthrowing him, and the narrator returns home, reflecting on the adventure and finding a book that resembles their experience.

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The narrator and their mom clean the attic, where the narrator discovers a mysterious box containing a key and a message that leads to a magical garden. Inside, they meet a talking hamster named Chocolate Berry, who reveals the kingdom is under the tyrannical rule of an evil king, prompting the narrator to join a rebellion against him. After rallying other animals and confronting the king, they succeed in overthrowing him, and the narrator returns home, reflecting on the adventure and finding a book that resembles their experience.

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"MOM WHERE ARE THE CLEAN RAGS?!!!!

" Today, as you can tell, is clean-up


day. My mom and I decided to clean up the attic. We haven't paid attention
to it for the past few years. Everything went pretty okay, just like the last few
times we've done cleaning days, until mom went downstairs to get a new
scrub, leaving me alone in the attic sorting books, files, and old pictures out
when I found an old dusty box....

"Hmmm, I don't recall having anything like this. Maybe it's dads?" I should
probably ask Mom before I open it. " But Mom's taking forever. " While I
looked down at the unopened box, I wondered: wouldn't hurt to take a peek,
right? As I was saying, I started opening the box. At this moment, curiosity
controlled me. In the box lay a key alongside a line spelling "Unlock your
story. "

"What is this?" Something appeared right after I finished questioning if my


eyes were fooling me or did, I got a good sleep yesterday. A door popped
out, nearly making me jump at this sudden change. Something was telling
me to move on and see what was waiting behind those doors. Atlas, I caught
up on what had just happened in front of my eyes. I picked up the key and
inserted it into the lock.

The door swung open, revealing a garden like those found in palaces. I
looked around, examining the place, when I realized that my pajamas had
turned into a blue gown. At the corner of my eye, I saw a small figure of what
looked like a hamster bruised and cut up. I slowly walked towards it, trying
not to scare it away. "Are you ok?" I started. The hamster turned around
looking frightened "Who are you?" This question stopped me from talking,
"Why is a hamster talking?!" Although I was panicking from the inside, I
showed little. I acted calmly "How did you get like this?" The hamster hearing
this question burst into tears, "You must be new here, this place used to be
wonderful and welcoming but recently our king passed away, before any of
the princes or princesses could act, the evil sorcerer took down our kingdom,
now people who were loyal to the previous king were treated poorly... I am
one of them. That's how my injuries came." The hamster started telling me
about what awful things the king's done with his powers. I covered my face,
terror appeared on it. "How could they do such disgusting things?"

At that moment, I decided to help. I was sure I wouldn't find a way back in a
long time, so why not? From the hamsters mumbling, I put together what
was going on. This kingdom is called the Kingdom of Triffles where many
homeless animals come together and find warmth. The hamster's name was
Chocolate Berry, and he got lost with his family during the war. We planned
to fight against the king, and our first step was to unite those who opposed
the current king. On the first day of applying our aim, nothing went well.
Animals were too scared to tell the truth because of what they'd heard that
many others who had tried to fight against the new king were slaughtered.
We didn't plan on giving up, so we continued the second day, but nothing
changed, the animals were still afraid to join this continued until one day I
decided to maybe try another way, something came to mind right away, we
can promise them to not tell anyone about this! Or simpler keep this a secret
between us.

As expected, the next day people were willing to join! We set our first
meeting in a forest to the north of the castle, right next to the valley of
Choco's house. Although a few of the promised ones showed up, it was. As
time went on, there would definitely be more people. There were five of us:
me, Choco, Pansey (Bernese Mountain dog), Cherry (Persian cat), and Oral
(Spotted wood owl). Every one of them had a background story of why they
wanted to oppose the new king. Some said they wanted their friends and
family back, others said that they missed the freedom they shared across
the kingdom when the old king ruled.

We settled down for a few days and made sure that no others wanted to join
before we moved on to our second step. On the third day, a rabbit knocked
on the door. It was a Netherland Dwarf Rabbit; we explained our plans again
and decided the following day was the perfect day to apply our second step
to our plan. As we all gathered together on that chilly Tuesday and headed
toward the castle. Side by side, we entered the castle and demanded to see
the King through challenges and obstacles. We finally met the king. We
worked for weeks just for this moment.

"You shouldn't have done this having a King was to unite the animals and
bring peace, animals are suffering under your control. Do you even care for
your citizens?" The king stared into my eyes. "And what if I don't? Those who
supported that pathetic king of the past are all just pests that don't know
how to look further into the future and are trapped in their own little fairytale
lives. I ask for more and better power." Certainly, the soft talk wasn't
working. We all knew that the only way to find peace and justice was to fight.
I notified the others that we were going to fight. As I counted down, we all
stroked at once, leaving the king with no time to react. Atlas, we took down
the king and brought back the crown, as the sun went down hills I walked
around the castle pointlessly after the celebration I kind of missed home I
wondered what mom was doing if she had dinner yet, if dad was home from
work yet and if I was still cleaning in the attic. Just as I was thinking about
how to get home, a door appeared in front of me again.

I opened the door this time without a key walking through and seeing the
familiar smell of my house; I was back home. I heard someone calling for me
and realized it was Mom. She was calling me to ask if I wanted to go to the
library. It felt true to life; I shook my head and convinced myself that it was
all a dream. "I'm coming, mom!" I called back. I don't want to miss any
chances of going out for books might as well check out if there are any new
ones. As I walked into the store, heading to my usual corner, something
caught my eye. It was a book with a garden like those found in palaces, and
in the center of the art stood a girl in a blue gown titled "For Us."

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