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The Big Deep

The document narrates the experience of a miner working at Kalgara Deep, detailing the dangerous and isolating nature of underground mining. After a significant geological event, the protagonist finds himself trapped in a refuge chamber, confronting the mine's haunting presence and his own buried memories. The story culminates in a chilling realization of the mine's power and the loss of a fellow miner, leaving the protagonist to grapple with the silence and the possibility of being haunted by the mine's echoes.

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The Big Deep

The document narrates the experience of a miner working at Kalgara Deep, detailing the dangerous and isolating nature of underground mining. After a significant geological event, the protagonist finds himself trapped in a refuge chamber, confronting the mine's haunting presence and his own buried memories. The story culminates in a chilling realization of the mine's power and the loss of a fellow miner, leaving the protagonist to grapple with the silence and the possibility of being haunted by the mine's echoes.

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I’m a miner. I dig holes for a living. ‘Dig’ is a generous word, really.

I blow
things up so we can go deeper. Drill, charge, blast then bog it out. Then
repeat. It’s loud, dirty, and dangerous. But it’s honest work, and there’s a
rhythm to it, one that makes sense. Until the day it didn’t

The mine is called Kalgara Deep, carved beneath the sun-blasted hills of
Western Australia, three hours from the nearest servo, and six from
anything you could call a town. It’s not on any tourist map. Just a dot
behind a red dirt road lined with scrub and ghost gums, baking under the
kind of heat that feels like a punishment.

Above ground, there’s nothing but flat country, shimmering mirages, and
the low growl of LandCruisers kicking up clouds. Below, it’s another world
entirely. Black, hot, pressurized. Like working inside the lungs of a sleeping
beast.

The decline spirals down like a corkscrew, levels branching off like
arteries. On the walls, streaks of ironstone and quartz run like veins,
whispering of wealth. But all I see is rock. Rock that hates us.

We live in its shadow, day in, day out. The walls we drill into are older than
time, but they shift and breathe when they think we’re not looking. Miners
don’t talk much about it, but we all feel it. The weight of the mountain
above. The way it presses down on your shoulders. The way the ground
moans when no one’s talking.

The crew, well, they’re part of the mine too. Worn, thick-skinned, most of
them. Sun-cracked knuckles, tattoos faded by lime dust and sun. We come
from everywhere—Kalgoorlie, Perth, Darwin, Broken Hill. Some from
Zimbabwe, the Philippines, Fiji. All of us pulled in by the promise of cash
and a kind of brutal peace. Down here, nothing matters except the job. It’s
simple. Honest.

It’s The Deep.

It started like any other swing. Seven-on, seven-off, twelve hours at a


time. I’d had my coffee on the bus in, made the usual groggy jokes with
the crew, and geared up for the pre-start. Another day, another meter into
the rock.

No Shortcuts.

No Shit.

This wasn’t my first rodeo. I’ve been charging faces for over a decade. You
get a feel for the place after that long. The way the ground breathes, the
way it creaks and pops when it’s restless. That morning felt normal.
Almost too normal. The kind of quiet you don’t notice until later, when
you’re trying to remember what warning signs you missed.

The headings were deep, past 1000 meters. Hot, humid, still. My offsider,
Davey, had cracked a joke about the air being thick enough to drink. We
were loading up the cut at the end of the 5065 decline, getting ready for
the next blast. The drillers had done a clean job. I was priming the holes
while Davey stood back, leaning against the wall and fanning himself with
his helmet like an idiot.

“You reckon if we keep going down, we’ll pop out in China?” Davey asked,
grinning through the dust.

I slid a booster into place and didn’t look up. “We’ll hit hell first.”

He flicked a bit of rock off his glove and leaned back against the wall. “You
ever think we’re not meant to be down here?”

I glanced over. “What, spiritually?”

“Nah,” he said. “Biologically. Evolution and all that. We’ve got fur, lungs,
daylight eyes. We’re built for the surface.”

I wiped sweat from my eyes and smiled. “Speak for yourself. I reckon
we’re cockroaches. We’ll outlast everything.”

He let out a short laugh, and I joined him. It wasn’t really a joke, but
sometimes down here, you laugh to keep your hands steady.

By mid-shift, I was heading back to the charge-up ute to grab more leads
when I felt it.

The ground didn’t rumble. It lurched. Like something beneath us had


rolled over in its sleep. My knees buckled and I hit the wall, arms
outstretched. Dust dropped from the backs and ribs like flour off a sieve.
The lights flickered, once, then held steady. The hum of the vent fans
dipped in pitch for a second… like they were choking.

Davey radioed me immediately. “What the hell was that? You feel that?”

I did. And I didn’t answer right away because I was waiting—listening for
the aftershock. You get little shifts underground all the time. Some you
feel, some you don’t. But this… this was something else.

“I’m heading to the refuge chamber,” I said, already turning on my heel.


“Get moving.”

Refuge chambers are lifelines down here. Sealed, pressurized shipping


containers stocked with air, water, and food. They’re what you run to
when everything else goes to shit. And on that day, everything was
starting to smell like shit.

I reached the chamber before the second shift hit. This one wasn’t a lurch
—it was a roar. The walls groaned like a sinking ship. Somewhere up the
drive, I heard rock shearing—snapping—like bones under strain. I
slammed the chamber door shut, twisted the handle, and felt the chamber
pressurize around me. Safe.

Or at least, that’s what I told myself.

I sat. Waited. And in that silence, I realised something: This place—this


metal box, buried a kilometre underground…. it remembers things.

The scratched initials on the wall. The tally marks carved into the edge of
the bench. The corner where someone drew a heart and a date: M + C,
2021. All little echoes of people who’ve waited here before, not knowing if
they’d ever see the surface again.

Time does weird things in a refuge chamber. The chamber’s small, maybe
four meters across. Pale walls. A metal bench. Oxygen cylinders stacked
like spare coffins. A scrubber that hisses and sighs. A manual on the wall
with cheerful diagrams and colour-coded instructions that assume you’re
calm and not seconds from losing your mind. There’s no natural light. The
air is dry, recycled, slightly metallic. At first, I kept busy. I radioed control,
checked supplies, monitored the CO2 scrubber. But when I stopped
moving, my thoughts started. It wasn’t supposed to happen this way.

I think that’s when the mine became a person to me. Not just a jobsite. A
presence. A memory-keeper. A judge.

It knew me. It knew the way I swore under my breath before every
ignition. It knew how I sang stupid 80s songs while laying emulsion just to
keep my nerves steady. It knew I’d missed my daughter’s birthday last
week. Knew I hadn’t called my mum in over a month. Knew I was tired. So
goddamn tired.

I lay back against the wall and closed my eyes. Outside, the earth shifted
again. A soft tremble, like a stomach rumble.

The mine was hungry.

I wasn’t supposed to be the one stuck down here, waiting to see if the
mine would collapse or hold. I was supposed to finish my shift, catch the
bus back to camp, microwave some shitty pasta, and fall asleep watching
old footy highlights. That was the plan.
Instead, I was alone. Sweating through my overalls. Trying not to think
about the hundred thousand tonnes of rock above me. Wondering if Davey
made it to another chamber. Wondering if he was dead.

I started counting things.

There were seven oxygen cylinders.

Fourteen ration packs.

Three jerry cans of water.

One toilet bucket.

No windows.

No clocks.

And a growing sense that time was bending in here. Ten minutes felt like
an hour. An hour felt like nothing at all. The only measure was the LED
panel, which blinked its green reassurance over and over: SAFE -
PRESSURISED - STABLE.

I didn’t feel stable.

I started talking to myself. First out loud, then inside my head. It was a
trick I’d learned in my first year underground—keep talking, keep sane.
But it didn’t help this time. Not when the quiet was so loud it felt like it
was pressing in through the walls.

I laughed. Actually laughed. The kind that sounds too loud in a sealed
room. “Losing it already,” I said out loud, just to test if I still could. My
voice came back strange. Flattened. Hollow.

The lights flickered again. Just once, like an eye half-blinking.

I pressed my back harder to the cold chamber wall. Tried to focus on the
things I could see. The metal. The bench. The laminated evac sheet.
Anything solid. Anything real.

But the mine… it had other plans.

A vibration ran up the soles of my boots. Subtle. Musical, almost. Like a


low note struck on a cello. Then another. Louder. Closer. I felt it not in my
ears, but in my ribs. Like it was playing me.

I stood, heart hammering, trying to guess if it was another tremor. But it


wasn’t. The floor wasn’t shaking. The walls weren’t shifting.

The sound was.


It was like the mine was breathing again. Slowly. In. Out. The air moved,
not from the scrubber, but from the very rock itself. A warm current, like
an exhale from deep within the stone.

I pressed my hand to the wall.

It pulsed.

Just once.

I pulled away fast, stumbling back. Dust sifted down from the seams in the
ceiling, catching in the emergency light.

And that’s when I heard the tap.

Just once. Sharp. Deliberate.

It came from the outer wall, right by the air vent. I froze.

Another tap. Closer.

I moved to the door, pressed my ear against the seam.

Nothing.

Then—tap tap tap.

Three, in rhythm. Like knuckles on metal.

I grabbed the radio. “Is anyone outside? This is Chamber 5. Hello?”

Nothing but static.

The tapping stopped.

I stared at the door for a long time. Too long. Long enough that the silence
afterward felt like mockery. Like the rock was laughing at me.

I didn’t sleep. Couldn’t.

The taps didn’t come back, but the idea of them did. Echoed around my
head like ghosts of sound. Maybe it was the air getting to me. Maybe
someone else was outside, trapped, lost, dying. Maybe I was the one who
didn’t make it out, and this was what the afterlife looked like—metal walls,
stale oxygen, and the creeping certainty that none of it mattered.

I don’t know how long it had been, but suddenly I heard it again. The
tapping. But this time it was different. It was faster. Aggressive.

The light changed.

TAP TAP TAP.

And then I heard footsteps.


Not boots on metal. Bare feet on stone. Deliberate. Slow. Coming from
inside the mine. From the sealed corridor beyond where the door stood
firm.

That was when I stopped thinking like a miner. Stopped thinking like a
man. Started thinking like part of the place. Like a cell in a body that had
decided to grow around me.

like a cockroach.

The footsteps stopped just outside where the door should be.

Silence. Then..

TAP TAP TAP.

A voice, low and calm, that didn’t echo but landed directly in my chest:

“You came too deep.”

I backed away, heart clawing at my ribs. “Who’s there?” I asked, though I


didn’t want an answer.

“You don’t remember,” it said. “But the mine does. It remembers


everything you bury.”

TAP TAP TAP

I blinked. Rubbed my eyes.

When I opened them again, the door was gone.

Not blown open. Not caved in.

Just… gone. Replaced by a solid, seamless, rock wall. No seam, no handle.


No escape.

TAP TAP TAP.

Thick cracks appeared in the bare stone wall, I saw movement, shapes
forming in the rock, pressed faces in the ore, hands reaching through
seams in the stone. They weren’t ghosts, exactly. More like fossils trying to
come back.

One of them looked like Davey.

One looked like my father.

One looked like me.

The mine was showing me things. All the things I’d buried. Arguments.
Accidents. That one time I skipped checking the heading bolts to catch
smoko early. The lie I told to keep the bonus. The way I joked when that
kid got airlifted out after the charge misfire. My regrets were etched in
these walls. Preserved in strata like core samples.

And the mine was reading them.

The voice came again.

“Do you want out?”

I didn’t answer.

“DIG.”

——————-

I don’t know how long I was down there before the rescue crew arrived.
Could’ve been five hours. Could’ve been twenty. When the chamber door
finally opened, the light from their helmets was blinding.

They told me I was lucky. Said the geo event collapsed the main haulage
drive. Some didn’t make it to chambers in time.

I asked about Davey when I reached the surface. They found his helmet.
Nothing else. Like the mine swallowed him whole.

Management called it a “displacement event.” Said he was likely buried


beneath twenty meters of rock. No chance of recovery. I didn’t argue. Just
nodded.

They didn’t mention the tapping.

Neither did I.

I’m back on shift now. Few weeks later. Same cycle. Same crew… Short a
few names.

But sometimes, when I’m loading charges alone, I catch myself listening
to the silence again.

Just in case it taps back.

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