WRITING PART 4
PHOTOGRAPHY CLUB
You are a member of a photography club. You received this email from the club.
(Bạn là thành viên của câu lạc bộ chụp ảnh. Bạn nhận được email này từ câu lạc bộ.)
Dear member,
Last year, the club held a contest, but there was only one category. This year, the club will
be divided into several categories including women, men, and children under 16 years old.
Năm ngoái, câu lạc bộ đã tổ chức một cuộc thi, nhưng chỉ có một hạng mục. Năm nay, câu
lạc bộ sẽ được chia thành nhiều hạng gồm nữ, nam và trẻ em dưới 16 tuổi.
Lí do viết thư: bôi vàng
phải nối câu => thay dấu chấm bằng dấu chấm phảy và không viết hoa chữ đằng sau.
I have heard that last year, the club held a contest but there was only one category; this
year, the club will be divided into several categories including women, men and children
under 16 years old.
Opinions: (Quan điểm)
● I think that this is a good idea because more people could join the contest. (Tôi nghĩ
rằng đây là một ý tưởng hay vì nhiều người có thể tham gia cuộc thi hơn.)
● I believe that this is a good plan because more people could receive prizes. This may
make the contest more interesting. (Tôi tin rằng đây là một kế hoạch tốt vì nhiều
người có thể nhận được giải thưởng hơn. Điều này có thể làm cho cuộc thi thú vị
hơn.)
● I think that this idea will make the contest more attractive because more participants
can receive prizes. (Tôi nghĩ rằng ý tưởng này sẽ làm cho cuộc thi hấp dẫn hơn vì
nhiều người tham gia có thể nhận được giải thưởng.)
● I think this is a good idea because more categories bring more prizes, which is
appealing to participants. (Tôi nghĩ đây là một ý tưởng hay vì nhiều hạng mục mang
lại nhiều giải thưởng hơn, điều này hấp dẫn người tham gia.)
1. Write an email to your friend to give your opinion. Write about 50 words.
Hello Bao,
How are you?
I got an email that last year, the club held a contest, but there was only one category.
I felt happy when hearing about this notice.
I think this is a good idea because more categories bring more prizes, which is appealing to
participants.
Bye
Quang.
2. Write an email to the manager of the club to express your opinions. Write about 120
- 150 words
BÀI MẪU THƯ TRANG TRỌNG
(template 3)
Dear Sir,
My name is Huy. I have taken part in your Photography club since May. I appreciate the
club’s contribution to all of the members so far.
I am writing this email with a view to expressing my opinions about the club recently and give
some suggestions for you. I have heard that last year, the club held a contest but there was
only one category; this year, the club will be divided into several categories including
women, men and children under 16 years old.
I felt happy when hearing about the news.
I believe that this is a good plan because more people could receive prizes. This may make
the contest more interesting.
I believe that many other club members also agree with my ideas, which may help the club
develop more successfully.
I look forward to your swift reply.
Yours faithfully,
Nguyen Van Huy.
Dear the manager,
I am Ngoc Anh and I have been a photography club member for 4 years. I am writing this
email to express my feelings and opinions about the club contest held next month.
According to the email that club sent me last night, the club will organize the contest and
divide it into three categories including women, men, and children under 16 years old. I was
so happy when I heard that. I think it is a reasonable division.
That division of the club helps correctly evaluate the champion in each category. Participants
are equal in ability. The awareness of women, men, and children under 16 years old is
different so dividing participants into three groups is a wise idea.
I am excited for the upcoming contest.
Best regards,
Ngoc Anh.
BÀI MẪU THƯ TRANG TRỌNG
Dear Sir,
My name is Hoa. I have participated in the club since May. I have had many meaningful
activities in your club until now.
I am writing this email to express my thoughts about the club recently and give some
suggestions for you. I have heard that the music club will organize a concert in the evening,
therefore people living around that concert’s location complain.
I felt sad when hearing about the news.
I recommend that the club should hold the concert well so as not to affect the people who
are living around the location.
I think other people also have ideas like me, but they may be shy to tell.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Huy.
2. MUSIC CLUB Phiên bản thu hút cả người già và người trẻ
Câu lạc bộ gửi email cho các thành viên
The music club is planning to hold a concert. The club wants members to give
suggestions to attract both young and old people.
(Câu lạc bộ đang lên kế hoạch tổ chức một buổi hòa nhạc. Câu lạc bộ muốn các thành viên
đưa ra đề xuất để thu hút cả người trẻ và người già)
Yêu cầu:
1. Write a letter to your friend to give your thoughts and your suggestions. (thư
thân mật)
2. Write a letter to the manager of the club to give your thoughts and your
suggestions. (thư trang trọng)
(viết thư cho giám đốc câu lạc bộ để đưa ra suy nghĩ và đề xuất của bạn)
Đề xuất tham khảo:
● I think that the club should organize the concert on weekends so that both young and
old people can arrange time to join the concert.
● I recommend that the club should perform famous songs that both young and old
people like. Therefore, all people will like to go to the concert.
● I suggest that the club should invite a famous singer that both young and old people
like to the concert. Therefore, all people will enjoy the concert.
THƯ TRANG TRỌNG
Dear Sir,
My name is Huy. I have been a member of your Music club since June. I have got many
valuable experiences in your club, and I am so happy about that.
I am writing this email to express my feelings about the service recently and offer some
suggestions for you. I have heard that the music club is planning to hold a concert; the club
wants members to give suggestions to attract both young and old people.
I felt happy when hearing about the news.
I suggest that the club should invite a famous singer that both young and old people like to
the concert. Therefore, all people will enjoy the concert.
I think other people also have ideas like mine. I look forward to hearing from you soon if my
suggestions are acceptable.
Yours faithfully,
Nguyen Van Huy.
CINEMA CLUB
Part 4:
Dear members,
As you know, our weekly film shows are very popular. However, we have had a
number of complaints about people using their mobile phones during the film. We
have started asking people to turn off their phones before the film starts but this
hasn't solved the problem. We are thinking of banning mobile phones from our
cinema in the future and would be interested to hear your view on this. Do you have
any other suggestions?
(Thân gửi các thành viên,
Như bạn biết, buổi chiếu phim hàng tuần của chúng ta đang rất phổ biến. Tuy nhiên, chúng
ta có một số lượng phàn nàn về việc mọi người dùng điện thoại khi xem phim. Chúng tôi đã
bắt đầu yêu cầu mọi người tắt điện thoại trước khi bộ phim bắt đầu nhưng cách này đã
không giải quyết được vấn đề. Chúng tôi đang nghĩ về việc cấm mang điện thoại vào rạp
trong tương lai và rất muốn nghe quan điểm của bạn về vấn đề này. Bạn có đề xuất gì
không?)
1. Write an email to your friend who is also a member of the club. Tell your friend what
suggestions you will make and why? Write about 50 words. Recommended time: 10
minutes.
2. Write an email to the manager of the club. Write about your ideas and what you
think about the situation. Write 120-150 words. Recommended time: 20 minutes.
Lí do viết thư của thư thân mật thì mình chỉ chép lại một câu hoặc một vài câu vì đề
bài dài quá.
Đề xuất:
● I think the club should ban mobile phones so that other people can watch the film
comfortably.
● I think the club should not ban mobile phones because using phones is their right.
Bài mẫu:
Dear Hoa,
I am writing to let you know that the club are thinking of banning mobile phones from our
cinema in the future and would be interested to hear your view on this.
I felt happy when hearing about the news.
I think the club should ask people to turn off their phones so that other people can watch the
film comfortably.
Bye,
Lan.
THƯ TRANG TRỌNG
Dear Sir,
My name is Huy. I have been a member of your Cinema club since May. I have got many
valuable experiences in your club, and I am so happy about that.
I am writing this email to express my feelings about the service recently and offer some
suggestions for you. I have heard that our weekly film shows are very popular. However, the
club has had a number of complaints about people using their mobile phones during the film.
I felt sad when hearing about the news.
I think the club should ban mobile phones so that other people can watch the film
comfortably.
I think other people also have ideas like mine. I look forward to hearing from you soon if my
suggestions are acceptable.
Yours sincerely,
Nguyen Van Huy.
SOCIAL CLUB
You are a member of a social club. You received this email from the club.
(Bạn là thành viên của câu lạc bộ. Bạn nhận được email sau từ câu lạc bộ)
Dear members,
We would like to organize some monthly face-to-face meetings. We would like your
suggestions about when and where we could meet. It suits both young and older
people. Please send us your suggestions and your reasons.
(Thân gửi các thành viên,
Chúng tôi thích tổ chức một vài cuộc gặp mặt trực tiếp hàng tháng. Chúng tôi muốn nghe đề
xuất của bạn về việc chúng ta có thể gặp khi nào và ở đâu. Việc này phù hợp cho cả người
trẻ và người già. Hãy gửi chúng tôi đề xuất của bạn và lí do của bạn.)
ĐỀ XUẤT THAM KHẢO
● I think that we should meet at a hotel in the center of the city. This place is very easy
to find, so it suits both young and older people.
● I think that we should organize meetings in the park. Everyone can easily find this
place, so it suits both young and older people.
1. Write an email to your friend. Write about your feelings and what you would like to
do. Write about 50 words
2. Write an email to the manager of the club. Write about your feelings and what you
think the club should do about the situation. Write about 120 - 150 words.
Dear Sir,
My name is Huy. I have participated in your Social club since May. I have had many
meaningful activities in your club until now.
I am writing this email to express my thoughts about the club recently and give some
suggestions for you. According to the notice from the club, the club would like to organize
some monthly face-to-face meetings; the club would like your suggestions about when and
where we could meet.
I felt happy when hearing about the news.
I think that we should organize meetings in the park. Everyone can be easy to find this place,
so it suits both young and older people.
I think other people also have opinions like mine, but they may be shy to tell.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Nguyen Van Huy.
MOVIE CLUB
You are a member of a movie club. You received this email from the club.
Dear members,
The club will be repaired. Please suggest an alternative meeting or activity.
(Câu lạc bộ sẽ được sửa chữa. Vui lòng đề xuất một cuộc họp hoặc hoạt động thay
thế.)
Lí do viết thư:
I have heard that the club will be repaired; the club told us to suggest an alternative meeting
or activity.
Đề xuất:
● I think the club should organize some team games to make people interact with each
other.
● I suggest that the club should hold a party for people to socialize and share
interesting stories.
● I recommend that the club organize a field trip, so everyone can have beautiful
memories and become close together.
BÀI MẪU THƯ THÂN MẬT
Hello Trang,
How are things with you?
I’ve got an email that the club will be repaired; the club told us to suggest an alternative
meeting or activity.
I felt happy when hearing about the news.
I suggest that the club should hold a party for people to socialize and share interesting
stories.
Best wishes,
Huy
BÀI MẪU THƯ TRANG TRỌNG
Dear Sir,
My name is Quang. I have participated in the Movie club since May. I have had many
meaningful activities in the club until now, and I am happy about that.
I am writing this email to express my thoughts about the service recently and offer some
suggestions for you. I have heard that the club will be repaired; the club asked us to suggest
an alternative meeting or activity.
I felt happy when hearing about this notice. (như thư thân mật)
I think the club should organize some team games to make people interact with each other.
I think other people also have opinions like me, but they may be shy to tell. I look forward to
hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Quang.
