Writing a Strong Hook
A hook is the first sentence of your essay. It grabs the reader’s attention.
Good hooks make people want to keep reading!
Different kinds of Hooks
1. Ask a Question
How many people check their phones before getting out of bed?
2. Use an Interesting Fact
Type II diabetes is the fastest-growing disease in the world.
3. Write an Interesting Observation
European economists are not sleeping well these days.
4. Start with a Quote
“I have a dream.” — Martin Luther King Jr.
5. Use a Short Story or Scenario
Traveling at 100 miles per hour, he felt as if he was flying.
Practice: Underline the hook in each sentence. Then write which type it is: (question, fact,
observation, quote, scenario).
1. Have you ever wondered why so many people skip breakfast every day?
Type: _______________
2. “The only thing we have to fear is fear itself.”
Type: _______________
3. Millions of plastic bottles are thrown away every hour around the world.
Type: _______________
4. Teenagers today spend more time on their phones than with their families.
Type: _______________
5. Walking alone at midnight, he heard footsteps behind him.
Type: _______________
Practice: Rewrite the following hooks
Boring: “This essay is about pollution.”
Better: ______________________________________
Boring: “This essay is about exercise.”
Better: ______________________________________
Boring: “This essay is about social media.”
Better: ______________________________________
Boring: “This essay is about fast food.”
Better: ______________________________________
Boring: “This essay is about online learning.”
Better: ______________________________________
Practice: Hook Challenge!
Write a different kind hook for each of the following topics
• Cancer Risks
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• The Urban and Rural Life
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• Overcoming the Rising Cost of University Studies
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