Comma Splices
What are they and how to fix them
What Is a Comma Splice?
A comma splice happens when two independent clauses (complete sentences)
are joined only with a comma, which is grammatically incorrect.
● I finished my homework, I went out with my friends.
● She loves to draw, she wants to be an artist.
● The concert was amazing, the band played all my favorite songs.
Example 1:
Comma Splice:
I finished my homework, I went out with my friends.
Why it's wrong:
Both "I finished my homework" and "I went out with my friends" are complete sentences. A comma alone
can't connect them.
Corrections:
1. Use a period:
I finished my homework. I went out with my friends.
2. Use a semicolon:
I finished my homework; I went out with my friends.
3. Use a coordinating conjunction:
I finished my homework, and I went out with my friends.
Example 2:
Comma Splice:
She loves to draw, she wants to be an artist.
Why it's wrong:
Two full ideas (independent clauses) are connected only by a comma.
Corrections:
1. Period:
She loves to draw. She wants to be an artist.
2. Semicolon:
She loves to draw; she wants to be an artist.
3. Conjunction:
She loves to draw, so she wants to be an artist.
Example 3:
Comma Splice:
The concert was amazing, the band played all my favorite songs.
Why it's wrong:
Again, two independent clauses joined with just a comma.
Corrections:
1. Period:
The concert was amazing. The band played all my favorite songs.
2. Semicolon:
The concert was amazing; the band played all my favorite songs.
3. Conjunction:
The concert was amazing because the band played all my favorite songs.
Quick Tips to Avoid Comma Splices:
● Check if both parts of the sentence can stand alone.
● If they can, don't just use a comma.
● Use a period, semicolon, or a conjunction (like and, but, so, or, because).
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