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The document contains four essays discussing various topics such as the preference for self-employment versus working for others, the pros and cons of flexible working hours, the choice between long and short vacations, and the effectiveness of advertising on public transportation. It also includes email correspondence related to job applications and travel inquiries, as well as prompts for opinion essays and sentence writing based on pictures. Overall, the document explores themes of work-life balance, career development, and promotional strategies.

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Writing TOEIC

The document contains four essays discussing various topics such as the preference for self-employment versus working for others, the pros and cons of flexible working hours, the choice between long and short vacations, and the effectiveness of advertising on public transportation. It also includes email correspondence related to job applications and travel inquiries, as well as prompts for opinion essays and sentence writing based on pictures. Overall, the document explores themes of work-life balance, career development, and promotional strategies.

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Essay 1: Most people would prefer to work for themselves rather than

someone else. Do you agree with this statement?


Many people prefer being their own boss rather than working for the company.
In my opinion, working for someone else is a smarter option. There are many
advantages when being hired to work for another people such as expand
networking, learn more skill and knowledge and promotion oppportunity.
First of all, working at a company allows employees to meet many talented
people and expand their networking. This helps them feel meaningful work and
more love their work. So, employees will have many motivations to complete
their assigned tasks. For instance, my sister is human resources management
at the Vi Thinh company. Daily, she must meet and communicate with a lot of
employees or applicants but she feels that her managed work is meaningful
and supports a lot for the director as well as employees of the company. So,
she strongly loves her current work and good role in this position.
Additionally, employees will learn more about skills and knowledge from
colleagues and managers. So, they can improve their production and work
more effectively. For example, my friend worked at her store alone, she faced
many difficulties and her income was low. Therefore, she was hired to work at
another store, she learned how to attract many customers from her manager.
Her experienced manager supported her a lot, and as a result, her current
salary is very high.
Finally, if you work at the corporation, you will have promotion opportunities.
You will attend training programs, get promotions with the support of their
around people. You will have chances to reflect on yourself with everyone. A
structured work environment can help people succeed in their career. On the
other hand, self employed individuals must manage many things alone, so
they do not have much time to develop themself.
Inclusion, the right decision for working depends on individual preferences. For
those who want to meet many people, learn more things and clarify promotion
chances, working for someone else is the better option.

Essay 2:
Nowadays, flexible working hours has become a trend among many
companies. Some people believe that flexible working hours will give
employees more comfortable work time and increase productivity, while others
argue that it will break rules and regulations at the workplace and decrease
the work quality. In this essay, I will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of
this trend.

There are some benefits of flexible work hours. Firstly, it allows staff to work
with more comfortable time and environment. They have many options for
balance between work and life. As a result, they can decrease stress and
improve their work productivity. For example, when my friend works with fixed
hours at the old company. She was stressed with the huge workload and did
not have much time to take care of her family and herself. Therefore, she
quitted that company and moved to work at the current ABC company. At this
company, she
worked with flexible hours and could balance work with her life. This helps her
improve work productivity and complete assigned tasks well. So, she was
promoted to department head.

On the other hand, not having fixed working hours will lead to drawbacks. First,
employees will decrease their work quality. This is because they can work more
freely and are easily distracted by many things around them. For instance, last
year, I started studying Chinese language at the foreign language center, but I
learned with flexible hours because I was very busy. So, I did not study
effectively and missed out on a lot of knowledge. As a result, I did not pass the
examination with a very low score. I was upset and tried hard studying by the
disclipine. Finally, I passed the exam with the highest score in the class.
Second, working with freedom hours will allow the staff to break rules and
regulations at the workplaces. They are familiarized with flexible hours and do
not notice regulations of the company.

In conclusion, while flexible working hours can lead to a more comfortable


environment and improve productivity, it also has some cons such as non-
compliance with the rules and regulations and lower work quality.

Essay 3: Some people taking one long vacation each year. Others
enjoy taking several shorter
vacations. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to
explain your choice.
A lot of individuals want to take a long vacation every year, while other people
prefer taking several shorter vacations. In my opinion, I would rather have
several shorter ones because it allows us to decrease stress after hard working
days and can visit many famous destinations.

First of all, having a few shorter vacations will help employees decrease stress
and relax after hard working days. This is because they have a lot of rest time
to restore energy and balance work and break. For example, my friend worked
at a big company as human resources management for two years. She had a
few shorter vacations in a year, so she could take care of her family and enjoy
her hobby. She could restore energy after busy days with work and balance her
work and rest. As a result, she completed excellent tasks and her work was
very favorable. Recently, she has been promoted to the department head at
that company.

Secondly, taking many shorter breaks allows staff to travel to a lot of famous
destinations. Because they have much more time and go on trips at different
times of year. As a result, they can expand knowledge and sightsee multiple
famous destinations. For instance, last year, I worked at the Software
Development Corporation and had four short vacations in February, May,
August and December. I traveled to many celebrated places in my country
such as Ha Long Bay, Phong Nha Ke Bang cave, Sam Son beach,... with my
family. We enjoyed a lot of local food and festivals. Therefore, We could learn
more things from this trip and take multiple photos together.

In conclusion, I would choose several shorter vacations over a long one every
year because it allows individuals to decrease stress, restore energy and visit a
lot of locations.

Eassay 4: What is the most important skills that a job applicant


should demonstrate to potential employers?

Many coporations promote their products by posting advertisements on public


transportation. In my opinion, I think that this way is efficient to promotion
because it helps many people know about that groceries, decrease cost and
can use to promote for a long time. This essay will discuss about efficience of
promotion on that vehicles.

First of all, one of the benefits of using the public transportation to advertise is
many individuals know about that products. This is because there are many
people using the punlic transport vehicles to commute to the school or
workplace. As a result, they can see it everyday and familiar with it. So, they
can know and purchase it more. For example, I did not any vehicle, so I used
the bus to go to my school everyday. I saw many advertisements about
products posted on the bus.

Secondly, the promotion on the public transport vehicles will help companies
decrease cost to advertise about their product beacause promotions on that
vehicles are very cheap, it cost some dollars for one time. For instance, last
year, my friend worked at athe software development company. Her company
using the promotion way on the bus and train. The cost of it very cheap only
10 dollars for one time. So, the company saved a lot of money from this way.

Finally, the last pros of promotion on the public transportation is use for a long
time. Posters or images pasted on the that vehicles are very durable and very
hard to take it away. Therfore, it can lie on it for a long time to promote
groceries to everyone.
In conclusion, posting advertisements on the public transport vehicles is vevy
efficient with the company because it allows save cost to promote, more
people know about it and can use to advertise for a long time.

Test 1 (7/7):

The man in a blue shirt is inserting a bank card into the ATM machine.

Some people are standing on the sidewalk of the street.


The woman is looking at the other side of the city

The man in a black suit is standing outside his car so that he can talk on the
phone.

Two boys are smiling while reading the newspaper.

Question 6
Directions: Read the e-mail below.
FROM: Susan Tucker
TO: Potential employee
SUBJECT: Job posting
SENT: July 20m. 2:30 P.M.
Marketing Specialist Americas — USA
We are searching for a Marketing Specialist to support a Global Marketing
Manager to execute strategies for generating new business leads, while
building
brand recognition. The Marketing Specialist will be a member of the Global
Marketing team with primarily responsibility for North-America events, media
planning, research and analysis of data. Thank you.
Yours truly,
Susan Tucker
Human Resources Manager

Directions:
Respond to the e-mail as if you are a job candidate. In your e-mail. Describe
TWO of your job qualifications and ask ONE question.
Dear Ms. Tucker,
My name is Lisa and I am writing to apply for Marketing Specialist position.
Thank you for your mail regarding this position dated July 20m. I am very
interested with this opportunity and would like to share some information
about my qualification.
Firstly, I graduated from National Economics University with a degree in
Marketing in 2016. So, I believe that this educational background makes me
well-suited for this role.
Secondly, I have 5 years of experiences in the fields of Marketing as Public
Relationship. I am confident that my experience will help me contribute
effectively to your global marketing team.
Additionally, I wonder when the application deadline is for this position.
This helps me to prepare all document necessary.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Best regards,
Lisa
Question 7
Directions: Read the e-mail below.
FROM: Rowena Kirn
TO: World-Wide Travel
SUBJECT: Travel information
SENT: May 10th, 4:20 P.M.

To Whom It May Concern,


My name is Rowena Kim and I’m interested in receiving some information
about a tour package for this surnrner holiday. I would like to visit a foreign
country, but I don't have enough information about where I should go. Also, my
budget is very limited. If it is possible. Could you please send me information
about the tour packages you would recommend? Thanks for all your help.

Regards
Rowena Kim

Directions:
Respond to the e-mail as if you are an agent at World-Wide agency. In your e-
mail, gave TWO pieces of information about tour packages and ONE
suggestion.

Dear Ms. Kirn,


My nam is Lisa and I am an agent at Worl-Wide agency. We are very happy
because you are interested in our tour package. I would like to share some
information about this package with you.
Firstly, we offer tour packages to famous destination all over the world. Each
package includes travel tickets, comfortable accomadation and daily
breakfast.
Secondly, we are currently offering a 20% discounts for the first 20
customers register in this month. So, pleasae do not hesitate to book
your package as soon as possible.
Additionally, I would like to recommend our tour package to Thailand. This
package is very popular, fully arranged and suitable for customers with a
limited budget like yours.
Please feel free to reply to me at your earliest convenience,
Best reagrds,
Lisa

Question 8:
Directions: Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and
revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of
300 words.
Why should employees accept opportunities to learn overseas from the
company?
Support your answer with specific reasons and examples?
- Improve soft skill
- Gain more new knowledge
- Enhance foreign language communication

Nowadays, in a ever-changing world, learning and development are very


important for everyone, especially when learing in a international
environment. In my opinion, I strongly agree that employees should actively
in seeking opportunities to study abroad from the their corporation. In this
essay, I will discuss some reasons to support for my views.
First of all, Accepting opportunities to learn overseas will helps staff improve
soft skill such as communication, time management, adaptability… This is
because people have to work with many others from different regions who
have diverse culture and working styles. So, employees need to change to
adapt with these difference. For example, last year, I worked at a software
development company and I had a chance to join in an international project. I
woke up ealier to the work place because everyone was start at the 8 am., At
first, I was not familiar with this routine and felt very stress. Therefore, I
adapted with this chance and could work more efficiently. In addition, learning
overseas can individuals enhance foreign language communication because
they can communicate with native people. This makes increase their capacity
background in current competitive environment.

Secondly, this studying also allow people to gain more new knowledge and
experience. They can learn from experienced colleagues and managers in their
fields. For instance, my sister joined a overseas project about advertisement,
She worked closely with many specialists in the Marketing. They supported her
a lot during in the implementation process. She learned practical lesson
from this specialists and applied this knowledge to another Project of the
company. As a result, that project was very successful and she was promoted
to the head of the Marketing department after just one year.

In conlucion, studying in an international environment is very crucial because it


allow people to develop soft skills and gain more new knowledge and
experience. Therefore, I believe that employees should actively take evry
opportunity to study abroad if they have the chance.

The best choice depends on each person’s needs and preference.


Viết dàn ý cho những chủ đề sau:
1. Should employees have fun while at work?
2. Should companies offer stress management strategies to their
employees?
3. Choosing over travelling internationally hay friendly workers
4. These days, people think companies ought to do something extra for
their employees. What should a company do to ensure the loyalty of its
employees? Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.
5. Some people work for the same company for their entire career. What
do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of staying at one
company? Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Test 2 (8/7)
Questions 1-5: Write a sentence based on a picture
Question 1

Student/Project
Some students are giving a presentation on a project.
Question 2
Experiment / specimen
The man is doing an experiment with the specimen.
Question 3

Hold / look
A boy is holding a book and looking at the other books on the rack.
Question 4
Foundation / postpone
The construction of the foundation is postponed.
Question 5

Picnic / park
Two children are having a picnic in the park.
Questions 6-7: Respond to a written request
Question 6
Directions: Respond to the e-mail.
From: Mountain Valley Chamber of Commerce
To: New Mountain Valley Resident
Subject: Warm greetings from Mountain Valley!
Sent: November 1, 7:10 A.M.
Congratulations on your move to Mountain Valley! We understand that
relocating can be a challenging process, with lots of new things to learn and
do. Don't hesitate to approach us for assistance. We're here to make your
transition as smooth as possible.

Directions:
Respond as if you have recently moved to Mountain Valley. In your e-mail to
the chamber of commerce, make at least TWO requests for information.
Dear Mountain Valley Chamber of Commerce,
My name is Lisa and I am a new resident of Mountain Valley. I am very happy
to receive your warm welcome and support. I am writing to request some
information about your services.
Firstly, could you please let me know the estimateds cost for moving from
Denmark to Mountain Valley? I need this information to plan my budget.
Secondly, we have a lot of heavy items that need to be transported. Could you
help me provide the equipment or assistnace to move large furnitures easier?
Finally, It is very hot next week, so, we have to move as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Best regards,
Lisa

Question 7
Directions: Respond to the e-mail.
From: ABC Electronic Store
To: Brown Jenson
Subject: Your Laptop
Sent: June 27th
Dear Mr. Brown,
On behalf Of ABC Store I sincerely thank you for your purchasing 01 laptop
SONY VAIO DXJ on June 25th.
Our policies Of Customer service are always applied for any customers with
any items bought from our store. So if you have any problems or questions you
don’t hesitate to inform us immediately by responding to this email.

Directions:
Reply to the email as if you are Mr. Brown. In your email, give TWO problems
concerning your laptop.

Question 8: Write an opinion essay


Question 8
Some people believe that living in a city provides more opportunities and
benefits compared to living in the countryside. Do you agree or disagree with
this viewpoint? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Test 3 (9/7)

Questions 1-5: Write a sentence based on a picture


Question 1

Teacher / classroom
A teacher is teaching in the classroom
Question 2
Repair / bicycle
A worker is repairing a bicycle
Question 3

Play / drum
A boy is playing the drums
Question 4

Meeting / while
A woman is giving a presentation in the meeting while others are listening
attentively
Question 5
Paint / mural
The man is painting the mural

The man is lifting a box to the top of stack

People are waiting their luggage because they have just arrived at the airport
Questions 6-7: Respond to a written request
Question 6
Directions: Respond to the e-mail. Respond as if you have recently moved to
Riverside.
From: Riverside Community Center
To: New Riverside Resident
Subject: Welcome to Riverside!
Sent: March 20, 2:00 P.M.
Hello and welcome to Riverside! As a new member of our community, we want
to ensure you find everything you need to settle in comfortably. The Riverside
Community Center is here to assist you with any information you might require
about our town.

Directions:
In your e-mail to the community center, make at least TWO requests for
information.

Question 7
Directions: Respond to the e-mail. Respond as if you are interested in the
membership.
From: Gourmet Heaven Deli
To: Food Enthusiasts
Subject: Special Gourmet Club Membership
Sent: March 21, 5:00 P.M.
Dear Gourmet Lover,
We are excited to introduce our Special Gourmet Club Membership at Gourmet
Heaven Deli. This membership includes access to exclusive culinary events,
cooking classes, and a monthly gourmet food basket. Join our club to
experience the finest delicacies and enhance your culinary journey.

Directions:
In your e-mail, ask TWO questions about the membership and make ONE
request.
Dear Gourmet Heaven Deli,
My name is Lisa and I am interested in becoming a member of the Gourmet
Club. I am very happy to have the opportunity to join your events at Gourmet
Heaven Deli. However, I still have some questions about the membership.
Firstly, how much is the registration free to join these events ? I need this
information to plan my budget.
Secondly, is there any dress code that the members should follow when
attending the events?
Additionally, could you please send me the timeline of your club? I may be
very busy at the end of next month.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Best regards,
Lisa
Directions: Read the e-mail below.
From: Ken Smith
To: Aaron Devlin, President, First Insurance Agency
Subject: Interview
Sent: March 29, 8:16 A.M.

Dear Mr. Devlin,

I have a job interview scheduled for next Monday at 3:00 P.M. However, I am
afraid there have been some changes in my current schedule, so I have to
work until late at night that day. Could you possibly reschedule my interview
date? I look forward to meeting you soon.

Best regards,
Ken Smith

Directions: Respond to the e-mail as if you are Aaron Devlin. In your e-mail,
suggest TWO possible times for holding the interview and request ONE item
that Ken Smith should bring with him.

Type your answer here:


DeaR Mr. Smith,
Thank you for your mail regarding the interview dated March 29. I am happy
because you are interested in this position of our company and I understand
you situation.
Firstly, I would be happy to reschedule your interview. I am available either
Friday at 2:00 PM or Tuesday at 10: AM next week. Please let me know which
time is more convenient for you.
Additionally, to help us process your application smoothly, you need to photo
a copy of your identifition papers for us. This will help us verify about your
information quickly.
If you have any questions or need any futher assistance, feel free to contact
me any time. Please reply at your earliest convenience.
Best regards,
Devlin
Question 8: Write an opinion essay
Question 8
 Some people think that teenagers should have jobs while they are still in
high school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of teenagers
having jobs? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, there are many way for students to prepare for brighter careers in
the future, such as studying abroad, having a part-time job or participating in
academic research. In my opinion, university student should have a part-time
job or internship to prepare for their future careers. In this essay, I will discuss
several reasons to support my view.
First of all, an internship can help students improve soft skills such as
communication, time management and solving problem skill,… This is because
they can encounter in a real and professional environment. They have the
chance to meet many new people and expand their network, which helps them
communicate more confidently with new collegues. For example, when I was in
university, I started working part-time very early as a human resources intern.
Before internship, I felt very anxious about giving presentations at school and
often trembled when speaking in front of people. However, the internship
helped me enhance my communication and time management skill. As a
result, I can confidently share my opinions with classmates, colleagues and
managers at the company.
Additional, having a part-time job when studying at schools allows students to
gain more experience. Experiened colleagues and managers can support them
at work and teach them more valuable knowledge that they may not learn at
school. For instance, my sisters tried to find a flexible part-time job when she
was a college student. She learned mamy useful knowledge and gained
experiences from her manager. Her manager, who with more than 10 years of
experiences, supported her in tasks such as computer skills, contract drafting
and projects planning. Therefore, she was able to improve herself and was
offered with higher wage. As a result, she was promoted to a full-time
employee after only 3 months.
In conclusion, students should have a part-time job to prepare for future
careers because it allows them to improve soft skills and gain more practical
experience. However, he best choice depends on each person’s needs and
preference.

✅ Q11 – Speaking
If you are a student, would you prefer taking a long vacation for
getting a job or focusing on studying? Give reasons and examples.
Sample Answer (Speaking):
Personally, if I were a student, I would prefer to take a long vacation to get a
job rather than just focusing on studying all the time. I believe that having real
work experience is very important for my future career.
For example, when I was in university, I worked as an intern during the
summer holiday. This helped me learn many practical skills that I couldn’t get
from books, like how to communicate with customers and how to manage my
time better.
Also, having a job during vacation helps students earn some money to support
their studies or daily expenses. Besides, it can make our CV more impressive
when we apply for jobs after graduation.
In short, I think taking a vacation to get a job is more useful because we can
gain valuable experience and prepare better for our future career.

✅ Q8 – Writing
Which is more important for a business owner’s success: being able
to motivate or being well organized? Give reasons and examples.
Sample Answer (Writing):
In my opinion, being able to motivate employees is more important for a
business owner’s success than just being well organized.
First of all, motivated employees tend to work harder and are more loyal to the
company. For example, when workers feel encouraged and valued, they are
willing to put in extra effort and help the company grow. A well-organized
owner may have clear plans, but if their employees are not motivated, the
plans may not be successful.
Secondly, motivation creates a positive working environment. When a leader
can inspire people, the whole team feels happier and more connected. For
instance, my uncle runs a small restaurant. He always motivates his staff by
giving them praise and small rewards. As a result, they treat customers better
and the restaurant has many loyal customers.
Of course, being organized is also important because it helps manage time and
resources effectively. However, without motivation, even the best plans can fail
if employees do not feel like working hard.
In conclusion, I believe that the ability to motivate others plays a bigger role in
a business owner’s success than being well organized. Motivated people are
the key to any successful business.

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