Full Name : ANIMESH PRADHAN

Test Number : 01
Date of Attempt : 17/07/2023

S.No. Criteria Essay 1 Essay 2

1 Comprehension of the topic

2 Language and Expression

3 Structure and Organisation of thought

4 Objectivity and Biases. Balance of

perception.
5 Attitude whether learner or judgmental

6 Focus and attention

7 Content and Source matter, Knowledge

and information processing capability
8 Ability to forge links in an
interdisciplinary manner
9 Simplicity of disposition

10 Observational Skills

Total

Specific comments by the examiner

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42 year
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ck woman - Rosa Parks
Bla
ordinarg
denial to leave her
bus seat hte
Rigte marement
led to the Amerilan ciiecouty galiteian.
made he
and wltimateg ther sde
the

paned by but at
Sia decade n Swat vaey
a teenger
ok he wrtd, shoued
- Malaa Yousa7z
Pakitan coomen's
adocating for
imrnerse Couvape atuckad by
ispte o% beig
educatin,
tte Tal'ban fues acmDss
coninent
tales the
The two epmesentate o
generatbn ane women. But the
and tuo
spiit s
indoitable wDmen n Our
and
geatneu Yousefgi
measured
Can net be
osten ignored saoices
hercoism,
the
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eeta Yadav sho uns SmalL

ob San
ber jamg, by the undemte
ponlour to jeed
Sho beliees i
DSou 2a

dornestie chaes and

herc son wit
parentirg Ela Hayak
the reighteons atitde
o
schos
spreadu n be
hes Pime
that she
ane heoes too
Sangeeta, Marg cmd
menbbrned n tur
just do nst get real anehitecte sL
books t h are 4he
the socùe
Bhall indulge
Sn thi
Contbutis n
women's
undetandig
vams
making and loatsy understad
wit tes ezamples
Csues and challenges
essay ahall also
dorelspment The
temple ab the Souce
deste to
undestand
that es the
makes architec

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Wo MEN
BOlLDI NG LIVES, SHAPING SOCETY :
ACRos HORIZONS

as a
social institutis,
înitial Soci alisaton
Ts involned î
prinoily
child The valour s
Lod kishna
reality ithot
might not hare been a Maa Yayhodha

reigttons parenting t
the educate
sajd, 'èt you
Rightty edueate
bducate him tamy Ensung
educata the shote childhood fo
hamonibns mami ape , a hap pt that uperes
amicase
and the contibutisns o
here kds are a e
to foish camins sit aspizinp
tsectsat mothes, -da
an
undestanydautate-in
and chosma
daugaty witnesed the
has lobi
Histongand Padna shn
HiYabai
Mothe Teres a
care amd uplitment
whose contnbutinu f
Tnbe s qujarat
omd iddi
the diseased
t e heey ok soiety
nakes them the
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U.P.S.C. (Dont wete anyting
in tis part)

Since tone mmemoil, wmen hane

Led the path o snereignty demeerat

cweltane s the tae Be t Rani
and
pootect hastio
Lakshni Bais qit to
Aden, Neszedlands
Jacinda
emputhete poltial
miniutes
Jrmere pime bett and natned
wDmen
have

moden sfate, alike The fire

ernpines and
Sarpanchs s democratie
lakh woma
d Sndia's
me testament
Ondia ane
level vete . Not
Vibrant qras- ot
have costnbetzd
poitial jrzont, womey

ust at the producve cconeng

The
the
Pepd'regon stoted tu opeyatis t a
that
&mall
cwOmen
women
t modem cye
ike vineeta sing (Suggr
enbrepneneuns
cometis) and ndna Nosy enenpites
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in tis pat)

the tall atatue k women fn the

society
disasten,
9n case Sk erisu amd
been the fsreunney ok
wwDmen hane
bck the soiety
and beild
chapig women actiiste
The loeser knoun
Manpree în
n ehabilitatisn sk ane
Mavement
De lad chipho
to tmmta Vandana Shia
epitone a eofeminis and
convegenee s omen
wam
tne
the tme
PPptndty
enienmnenb
making
women
hre fourilad sfnge gendey
jut limted a
not raim
ventib
cuie's in succeu
Mame behtnd
intellect
Thomes unfathomete mind and
Tewg the hane
6k Shakuntala Den? wDmen

sectos
ghoor theis proweu mesie and
throu iterony
has evoled and wDmen hane
Cultural esutin amd
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+oue achitec the same

the
underiabig the
Lata Mangeshken Vaishnae
Bhaki Movemet Miva Bi an
modem Litatue's JK
octistha
Andal to
and Mahade vema,, women's
costo butib

emamcipat
EMPOUERS THE
EMPOWERED WO MEN
WHOLE SocsTY
The wDmen arch for bread n
manch
Rusian Retutisn to
Petngad Soviet in
diaeiminty datret
meilient oppostsn t
tels by the tiba
Niyamgii
-ahiw în has neoutisneaed amd
womeny socaehyour and notues ok
womey

beilt the val

and hammy
When wonan

al he tendes
for all the
feminin the
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in this part)

women ights norement f sate akplae,

and pditica reprenentabo
equal capes
eata cn
to coeae on agalitien
is an atermpt to clase
all eerey end
to
- bene iinl t empowg the
Bi Phule' atempt
Saitt 1 anty
teenape metes n
w)dons am soctal
make Sndia -fee fom atempt
ws to Bhats
supestet one EJa
and
eilevevdutinise wllafe econemg throuph
to
Glebi Gmang's
ups and
sely help voie
to saue
un conrentibnd steps ane c l
dormesti ioence and comuçtbw
coomey
testarnente to pore
that empouig ta
them
the makoy
shal empowas
achitect ot t
true
BUILD THE SocA ETY NOT
TO
THE ROAD wITH THoRNS
BUT EILLED
JUSTOF
RosEC
eminent
Syia walby
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in tis part

accues patioehy
sociole gita namateu and
women. Be t npaid wok
to oppmee
vtene, loo wepee atînyond poke,
dometil
througs cultural spherre - women

ane subiugted to oppressiom

Globalisatin led Srace to the bottarn'

up emplayment oppotudhes
hare opened
naok and comy o underderelped
n the
ant
natis, but wDmen
hashes comditins.
Leadetel
and cork are
ike Doupadi Muomee and Sdhe

the non
eeistence chiet
Sroia eres
Tuwtie

2012 s henspapat
had tD adgacat
Jne co1
absut the sucCel o
ne
news headne to ccument
Bnolin re
as all-wome
Taii, the othey about
wd throupw INS
teenaer at Kathua
teenager
horriie vepe 67 a
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in this part)

Domeie vislence, honeus killing, Aooy tote,

acid attache, apey ond senual asalks
one need
ane the mones ot the
socidy
to tackle tjectve paentiy gendes
opptunite for
senctisation and equal enade the
steppy Stone to
womer ame tte societe a te t e anchtet
beauhu
to beild
UNSUNG HEROB of
SH THE
HE POR
SocEy
Kom e nt cunknszw
The hemie miledoe
the
to the wrd, neither
wr
Raziyasultantenuoe
k such bilince
Succe
But behind the contibuti
suppat and
unconditibnal tctmih that
ies aHehusban amd
tounih. Padman
Beve wDmen to

ensued ostibti
Muungathams
Aunachalam
pads aceenie
santeg
making
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acoss Sndia
l Sndia the tne stoy
u the t e

that emparert
'te f she
Vidyags a t Raja
Ssluonchamdra
wnaore abovt
Rammdnan's Ryob
ilone
aere true femnit
femihdtm the wUmaa.
cupla7tment fr the
ushe strod for the

not ahot makin

woman
Feminism
Sf's
sreng; they ane society's penspecthe to
ast chain
Such ttmih
The w
Rammeram Rat to netone soceby'
and
true
nealice the
vews
women

THE PROCE S oF BUILD (NG THE SocIZTY

NEVER ENDS Y FoRUAR

the e t t hand that oety he

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cradle, och the wnd Aeos netin

bild Ashcka, sinstein
mothers shall contibtisn în
andela shee
and Nelson nermane
underated.
the to bheihd tha
women
Conditn for hamonbu wo deod
The pre
Cmitt
sociey and
ntemalidpetiseh?
chane, tody
legad demte islen
kahe accwatiu'
Atsu' unda
ad defed he
tamishes and
cases pet
btisne st
contn
încredeble ba a

of such leotlenech, sociey

and egalteian
to becone jut
tre potential
pot
to mealise theix
wormen
Enablig dreaml
to b the society males, females
the moal eaponibiy
aike. Today throu
and the stee, Talibanuled Atshanitani
content creatbu
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in tis part)

wDmen ave vajsine veiei, cla kitehen ang

becorne new avenes
Soial media hane
fnomeia mdepondence
for social and
The
billions sk mathen
ak
the tale 4 courae
siss sho tum oet to
dautnters and Pahs to
ad Rosa
Yousakzai
be Malala and shere
wcthout fear
cneate socety ath pde amd
held high
the head u
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in this par)

The youth u hopencident

e our utre
l422 cnd
The chauti chauna
Non-Cooperaton
withdrawal f
subseguent
cveated a polifal
Gandhij had Then
Moement by uggle
Vaccuum tndian feedon Si a beacom
n Sndian

heantand ef Punfab,
, from the the age ok 23
at
meoution wsho and eeated
hope and
o county repme
te
He iu the
mandyred for Bhagat sing theu hanbingen
oY apes. wsho ane the
hist
-entative youth ymbolism t
butueamd neceuanily towad
hepet natis
pogeu not
a

Sndependent
pogres. Thestuggeforshacklasof mistia,
feedem
a
a feedom fom inpeialismand
but abo eeslogial
oppresin,
ime,
and
frequali into
the pouer
Before deliS -the w

he gouth
in wnakingmust Conyes
prowea ue
iveîn, and hat
place to
beder
a about the futuc we aspire fr
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ntis par)

oB wotd the yothvst butlt. n

kind we must
the wode st Guu RN Tagore
cum t make a wold that
u 7ree form
wit estee
ohere head u helA
fear and
the tutne tu
and ide . The dream for
tor
beteen neh &pooy
the cîtadel
breaking haenste while tiumphy
hanenste
between hanes ond
treedono tougit
austainability,
fr eclegicad
nomiz darelap ment
and
let
immense pstenteal
anehitect usho hae
vealisiy
and ineredible mespons feodenneu
of teogn
Tagore's wod
and puide
THE CASTLE OF A
BUILDING
YoTH
BETTER FUTURE

to be
Youth must be enewuraped
inharatib cend lobad
forennnet of
the progpety
chage to bing Koki Anhaw
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in this part)

9lucidatiY threog trree eanples,

ne need to understaing the potential
git celebrated as he
anecdotz f a teenaper
Nobel Pielaurent - Malala Yoafza
goungest educetfbn nagie
adoated fr g s the
Taliban in
sho head by
shot at
a beng Pakutam
tertor s t a t
defiance to atlend
Secondly, the prstest, Greta Thenbe
schest a
s

chany' at the fotfant

brufut imate intentionl debate
ef poitiad conkerencs,
conversatine
wsehold
cnd ho a yeung
Rajawt
home, Chhai
doser to
t in Rafasthan
Soda vilae m
Sarpanch f reason
althe nfght
atentian for
gathercd marnrfae to cety
Frorn elimine
child
ATM in hes Rajent
epace is cond cne
proved that patical
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in tis pa)

and
to posctve change with înnoathe

The Yosnfi, Thunbeng

Rafawat echoes the aspivntan and
ard aco Apace
ot gouth Ehat ct
ambitin wDrmen

amd tome fom adocatiy to psitea

gobal aomig
to combatiy mal derelopmant - yoth
emponcsment R that bayed
cAn buiLd the fetune înclusiveneu
derelopment and
justia, pu Naoend
last visit o
Duing the state dinner
state,the
to Unied
-a Modi's media hoses
atenton of
captued the orgamisatbn. tmjut
Sntemational
and the cofoumder
the diplomatie glamaur. Sndia)
in
investment atotup
Zerodha an phstag
though he
Kamath Amiled those numeYDUA
NKhed one
Nikhil
vaphe.
-
succeskd enteprened fom the
communag
thcix ekyot
ther in makig
oho ane pieveerg?
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in tis part)

The mlte
gndia a Ds $stilm ecenemy
-oyo, the sominute
-natibnat hotlay tompng
dulreng atotup-iegti r the conamar
economic
al are the
electia - Boat', al
dyramie penaralitg
brainchild f yeung R not
abot
jet
Bat t's
ike Nzkhil Kamat metro
n ubam
goode in
mateials
mateials and
and
u also beildin
selling
ames,
-psuta comer o
the connt
and
dream at
at nok
ettecient
concentrated with hintand
statups cltune in
Frem
to klon tibal aotefact
peduct
milk
f truhachal o making
acceseble rnainstreans eeonomg-
în the
'stet Up Sndia ane being
the wt
see
wamt t
change thy
the dean
Ayiumphig Navte?
Johar Case
With
Sectin
deciminalizing nighte fr LGBTS
homese,xualitt, legal persiat .
-M taboo
are
bt sociay
enpandiny
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intis pat

Youth în panticulad have been the maqo

adtro cate for qeTS t igt and
and
to make wnkspacea, puslic
propounling more TnclusineThe
areas amd socict 9ndia empoien
clonial
feudal and dater ayeten and gendy
caste
the nuisance a
Fotinately ynt todag
diseiminatan. portiulestie
tranaomed foN a
has
t uninemaliate Aochety that fpeus
meit any
prgetias
achierement amd

praulege
THE
YoUTH To B0ILD
BOILDING THE
PUTURE

Nelsn Mandala
of
gnyte wnde stet wit
-ehonge the
wndd,
want to chamge the împresimabe mind
1". t
chiden
childen hae the greatest potoyt alf
Gandhiii elterata
socialisatisa . Ac
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in this par)

and
heore is no beter schod tham famiy
thom parent bizhlgna
no be ter teacher
postre parenting on
the impotance ot studia nste the
vepdogil
children. Arth
'enionmentl wwellene' atetnde

continuing
Bishns? commur
peramsunt in7uence o
the
*ymtolising Communig buiuda
communal aig nyot ho funstee
and Malale
Geta therr
leaders like beterment
he

comnenitiey "we nigt ndt

Roosevelt nda "we
youtt lot cam
futuse by
the ttue'
bettee
build a yout fr a
bidd the
kuely becone
înstitutions
amd
The rele of state makethem
facilitatiy gouth to
cucial in
Said that futne
wsthy leaders. Rigthty
but hn the for waL
ho matim u
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in tis part)

ineasng aces îbilihy ant qauality g

educatibn New Sducathb
i c c l . wth
20o, the dream a loo / qoos
Prlily, overanbits. At
enresment at u not
igitad apotseld' and
the same time,
-gender- castedzhtomce mst hot

clas
make educatio has the
social inequaltes Suneyeealute
As NEHS- 5
3s/stuntiny
cruo
diheartening undarweigtt prolem among
wnd B2/- s fes
nutntonal
age
chiten unde hyan and
toough PosHAN sehemo
Supprt Aerelop ment
child Misin Sndradhand
Integrated
alonp with succen
becomas
immundsatlh
undesal
frr
health
hat can a
the
cimidog
not taught fying?im
sklled to adapt
healthy out' nust be
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in tis pat)

tubulent eccnomic chançes. with 24/.

b he
pgulati, in he brackat
of Sndias
we
the bene+
24 yeas,
I5 - 29
dandend to make ou
dermopraphie onde'
o tosty
strongcst aset.
YojamaHimayat in
Kaushal kas ain
PM Roslhi in lett
Kashmiy norel appa
Jammu 4 the
exhemist stala are fewoy
the sare
chey to acheere knaoineto
the bene it
What's to carder anoue
Sy whey there's
empaynent
ceating mge to apace
simidody, piultse
encouvapiry
otunity - f hour.
opp need ot the
must be he 'Atal Thinkin
gung entegeneusthrauh we make
and FTBI Socubatsu
bd ob make
fob taker'
goutt notjut
foy mut be
Additionally,
powes nbldine) moden
thin
to ererag
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intis part)

techndagg, hety in gonah f senitelitsate

utilisethe powe f
cconemg and constmethe
entetainment to ineulcate
and mepoductve and
personalty foc paramaunt înteret
mentl health
ot teenge pmegnance
cases
with
STDS
the
mast and shall
We reality
bt let'r do a
powet o mth,
te yout beilay
check are

catatrzphe damage 2
astte o dream
MAKING A BETTER FUTURE:
IRRITANTS IN
OF yoUTH POWER
THE 0RDEAUS
are

'consumerism
hare corme up
t inguence 4 obali!
Smate,ialism too. The
)

capctaln hare engulted the

-aton and
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in his part)

4pend on 'sneaken' ot isooD

youth to similo
healh înuahce of
ket not fr
Jamount youth tuns fnto e
The
\ansme eshen the
and n tum,
soialisatibv feils
health caves
mental
the rise are hot jut
sses
health
Mental mateyialletie cutune

because ot roing aca

Smendins rat
becathse q
but
caste/clas bwed disonminatbn failae
abuse
and iein
educatinssten' commt
asteent
eeals thet Helt
NCRB data STminuta. Mental
erey KIRAN
iide '2yx
initeathey ike
& 201 and initeathey
kety hare broaght potal change
and Namodarpan edjed
a doule
Social media is ie
hare been the
bwod: Yodk toda
podasa, coial medie
change ho y
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ntis par
Lrees an shosta' educating averape 9ndian
gendes sensitiatin and
abeet finance, me youty veti
he name
addietn
sexua abuse, yber bolyf
of
Social media, cB1's Operetin
child pornogmphy nd
Gamda'
on nercot
Chetre'
Operaty Megh
NCRB
ne
rereal the sa mere
eren
Youtt have beCome
tundamentlism and
radiealas ed wit
wih

Commun ale
Bi7uatig eveg
hane

' sho become

'ava
belome
bant psit'
t diiste vtt
puppet
The indugence subpar
polits u
NEOS amd electal
shere Sndian detnocay
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in this par)

REALIZING
FUTURE
THE HOPE OF OUR
YoUTHs PowER
chinee enteprened
Jack Ma,famas
under 30 and
noa innest o people
amd cee
canpanes under 30
better
the w d changiy for
yout - phyaiel,
gomig challeges for
occup
educatnl and
mertal, cutu
ef soco-
the davex
hey fom ecelegs
economy to
chamges. From he mact
shal veap
youth
investment lite Pocs COD
results legslatisne
pyztasle alonp
At
Javenile outtu t o h Mooa
and educatin
ike Onehe
rehonm
and 'skill Sndia
Sndia u fnvestirg
6n botk

Condy în atranat
a nelgmate way se militee
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intis par)

the oceam count

Eveny daop

commund to împat
family, scha ond attude to make
qualitatire ignteous dneod
ho is
Rang De Bajanti
yaut o amd nat He
tatristis
totnotism
in spisitt o
Parfas', deled ait
youtho Udtae
abue Wt reoter
sebstane
drug amd
bility
mespani
So

greatr
powe, comes tulfl tte
dnes to
yout mest
whie he tutune,she
betey
hope f « deann ok th
realise the deine
atent o Dalit and
pornest,omtion st
amaisn s a
t build
Semethan

Bhagt singh's
n 9ndia wetyaf sk
23

at the tunder ae
Aacnkie