7 节课（14 课时）学术英语课程大纲（学生雅思分数 6 分）

课程名称：学术英语写作进阶
Class No. Class Content
1 第一课：学术写作基础
Lesson 1: Academic Writing Fundamentals
Pre-session: Bridging IELTS Writing to HK Academic Writing and Small Talks
1. 英文简介及学术写作概述
- 中文：在本节课中，我们将介绍学术写作的基本概念和重要性，以及如何开始进行学术写作。
- English:In this lesson, we will introduce the basic concepts and importance of
academic writing, as well as how to get started with academic writing.

2. 基本学术写作原则
- 中文： 我们将学习学术写作的基本原则，包括准确性、清晰性、逻辑性和客观性等。
- English:We will learn the basic principles of academic writing, including
accuracy, clarity, logic, and objectivity.

3. 语法和标点符号规范
- 中文：掌握正确的语法和标点符号使用是学术写作的重要基础，我们将重点讨论常见的语法错误和标点符号的正确应
用。
- English:Mastering proper grammar and punctuation usage is crucial for
academic writing. We will focus on common grammar errors and the correct
application of punctuation marks.

4. 英文学术文献阅读技巧
- 中文：阅读英文学术文献是提高学术写作水平的重要途径，我们将介绍阅读和理解学术文献的技巧和方法。
- English: Reading English academic literature is essential for improving
academic writing skills. We will introduce techniques and methods for reading
and understanding academic literature.

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Conclusion

通过本节课的学习，学生将对学术写作有一个全面的了解，并掌握基本的写作技巧和原则。
Through this lesson, students will gain a comprehensive understanding of
academic writing and master basic writing skills and principles.
2 第二课：论文结构与组织
Lesson 2: Paper Structure and Organization

1. 论文结构概述：引言、方法、结果、讨论等
- 中文：我们将介绍学术论文的基本结构，包括引言、方法、结果和讨论等部分，以及每个部分的主要内容和写作要求。
-English: We will introduce the basic structure of academic papers, including
introduction, methods, results, and discussion sections, as well as the main
content and writing requirements for each section.
 2. 如何组织段落和句子
- 中文：学会有效地组织段落和句子对于论文的清晰度和连贯性至关重要。我们将探讨如何编写清晰、连贯的段落和句
子，以提高论文质量。
- English:Learning to organize paragraphs and sentences effectively is crucial
for the clarity and coherence of a paper. We will discuss how to write clear,
coherent paragraphs and sentences to improve the quality of the paper.

3. 逻辑连贯性与段落过渡
- 中文：论文中的段落之间需要有逻辑上的连贯性和过渡，以确保整篇论文的连贯性和流畅性。我们将介绍如何确保段落
之间的逻辑关联，并使用过渡句来增强段落之间的连贯性。
- English: There needs to be logical coherence and transitions between
paragraphs in a paper to ensure the coherence and fluency of the entire paper. We
will introduce how to ensure logical connections between paragraphs and use
transitional sentences to enhance coherence between paragraphs.
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Conclusion

本节课的学习将帮助学生更好地理解论文的结构和组织方式，并提高他们的写作技巧，使他们能够撰写更具逻辑性和连贯性
的论文。
This lesson will help students better understand the structure and organization of
papers and improve their writing skills, enabling them to write more logically and
coherently.
3 第三课：论文写作技巧（上）
Lesson 3: Writing Techniques for Papers (Part 1)

1. 文献综述的撰写方法
-中文：文献综述是论文中至关重要的一部分，我们将介绍如何撰写高质量的文献综述，包括文献搜索、筛选、总结和分
析等方面的技巧。
- English: Literature review is a crucial part of a paper. We will discuss how to
write a high-quality literature review, including techniques for literature search,
selection, summarization, and analysis.

2. 有效引用和引文格式
-中文：在论文中正确引用文献是必不可少的，我们将学习如何进行有效的引用，并介绍不同的引文格式，如
APA、MLA 等。
- English: Proper citation of references is essential in a paper. We will learn how
to cite references effectively and introduce different citation formats such as APA,
MLA, etc.

3. 编写清晰的问题陈述和假设
- 中文 问题陈述和假设是论文研究的基础，我们将讨论如何清晰地表达研究的问题和假设，并确保它们与研究目标和方
法相一致。
 - English: Problem statement and hypothesis are the foundation of a paper's
research. We will discuss how to clearly express the research problem and
hypothesis, ensuring their consistency with the research objectives and methods.

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Conclusion

本节课的学习将帮助学生掌握论文写作的关键技巧，包括文献综述、引用和问题陈述等，为他们撰写高质量的学术论文奠定
基础。
This lesson will help students master key writing techniques for papers, including
literature review, citation, and problem statement, laying the foundation for them
to write high-quality academic papers.
4 第四课：论文写作技巧（下）
Lesson 4: Writing Techniques for Academic Papers (Part 2)

1. 数据呈现与图表设计
- 中文：数据可视化在学术论文中起着重要作用。本课程将介绍如何有效地呈现数据，并设计清晰、易读的图表和图形。
- English: Data visualization plays a crucial role in academic papers. This
lesson will cover how to effectively present data and design clear, readable charts
and graphs.

2. 结果与讨论部分的写作技巧
- 中文：结果和讨论部分是学术论文的核心。本课程将讨论如何撰写这两部分，包括如何清晰地陈述研究结果，以及如何
对结果进行深入的讨论和解释。
- English: The results and discussion sections are the core of academic papers.
This lesson will discuss how to write these sections, including how to clearly
present research findings and how to discuss and interpret the results in depth.

3. 撰写精炼的结论与建议
- 中文：结论部分总结了研究的主要发现，并提出了未来研究的建议。本课程将探讨如何撰写简明扼要但又有力的结论和
建议，以结束论文。
- English: The conclusion section summarizes the main findings of the study
and provides suggestions for future research. This lesson will explore how to
write concise yet impactful conclusions and recommendations to conclude the
paper.

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Conclusion

通过本课程学习，学生将掌握学术论文写作的关键技巧，包括数据呈现、结果讨论和结论撰写，从而能够撰写出具有学术水
平和影响力的论文。
Through this lesson, students will master key writing techniques for academic
papers, including data presentation, results discussion, and conclusion writing,
 enabling them to write papers of academic caliber and influence.
5 第五课：学术语言风格
Lesson 5: Academic Language Style

1. 学术语言的特点与表达方式
- 中文： 学术语言具有其独特的特点和表达方式，本课程将介绍学术语言的特点，并探讨如何有效地运用学术语言来撰
写论文。
- English: Academic language has its unique characteristics and expression
methods. This lesson will introduce the characteristics of academic language and
discuss how to effectively use academic language to write papers.

2. 避免常见学术写作错误
- 中文：在学术写作中，常见的错误可能会降低论文的质量。本课程将讨论一些常见的学术写作错误，并提供避免这些错
误的建议。
- English: Common errors in academic writing can lower the quality of papers.
This lesson will discuss some common academic writing errors and provide
advice on how to avoid them.

3. 提高写作流畅性和清晰度的技巧
- 中文：写作的流畅性和清晰度对于传达思想和观点至关重要。本课程将介绍一些提高写作流畅性和清晰度的技巧，帮助
学生写出更加优秀的学术论文。
- English The fluency and clarity of writing are crucial for conveying ideas and
viewpoints. This lesson will introduce some techniques to improve the fluency
and clarity of writing, helping students produce excellent academic papers.

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Conclusion

本课程将帮助学生理解学术语言的特点和使用方法，避免常见的学术写作错误，并提高写作流畅性和清晰度，从而提升其学
术论文写作水平。
This lesson will help students understand the characteristics and usage of
academic language, avoid common academic writing errors, and improve the
fluency and clarity of writing, thereby enhancing their academic paper writing
skills.
6 第六课：审阅与修改
Lesson 6: Proofreading and Editing

1. 论文审阅的基本原则
- 中文：论文审阅是确保论文质量的重要步骤。本课程将介绍论文审阅的基本原则，包括审阅的时机、内容和方法等。
- English: Proofreading is an essential step in ensuring the quality of a paper.
This lesson will introduce the basic principles of paper proofreading, including
the timing, content, and methods of proofreading.
 2. 语言和逻辑错误的识别与修正
- 中文：在审阅过程中，需要识别和修正论文中的语言和逻辑错误。本课程将讨论如何有效地识别和修正这些错误，以提
高论文的质量。
- English: During the proofreading process, it is necessary to identify and
correct language and logic errors in the paper. This lesson will discuss how to
effectively identify and correct these errors to improve the quality of the paper.

3. 提高写作质量的审稿技巧
- 中文： 作为审稿人，有一些技巧可以帮助提高写作质量。本课程将介绍一些审稿技巧，包括如何提出有建设性的建议
和评论，以及如何保持客观和公正。
- English: As a reviewer, there are some techniques that can help improve the
quality of writing. This lesson will introduce some review techniques, including
how to provide constructive suggestions and comments, and how to maintain
objectivity and fairness.

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Conclusion

通过学习本课程，学生将掌握论文审阅和修改的基本原则和技巧，提高自己的审阅能力，从而撰写出更加优秀的学术论文。
Through this lesson, students will master the basic principles and techniques of
paper proofreading and editing, improve their proofreading skills, and write more
outstanding academic papers.
7 第七课：学术写作实践与反馈
Lesson 7: Academic Writing Practice and Feedback

1. 学生提交自己的学术写作作品
- 中文： 在本节课中，学生将有机会提交他们自己的学术写作作品，包括论文摘要、段落或整篇论文等。
- English: In this lesson, students will have the opportunity to submit their own
academic writing pieces, including abstracts, paragraphs, or entire papers.

2. 教师指导并提供反馈
- 中文： 教师将对学生提交的作品进行指导和评价，并提供详细的反馈，包括语言、结构、内容等方面的建议和改进意
见。
- English: Teachers will guide and evaluate the works submitted by students,
providing detailed feedback including suggestions and improvement ideas on
language, structure, content, etc.

结束
Conclusion

通过学生的实际写作作品和教师的指导反馈，学生将有机会在实践中巩固所学的学术写作技巧，并不断提升自己的写作水
平。
Through the submission of students' actual writing pieces and the guidance and
feedback from teachers, students will have the opportunity to consolidate the
academic writing skills they have learned in practice and continuously improve
their writing proficiency.