Republic of the Philippines
DON HONORIO VENTURA STATE UNIVERSITY
Villa de Bacolor, Pampanga
GRADUATE SCHOOL
Compliance Form
( ) Proposal ( ) Final
Title : Exploring The Living Conditions of Rainbow Elderly:
Inputs towards A Proposed Long Term Care Policy Plan
Name of Student : Emil Rey Paguio Albarda
Course : Master of Science in Social Work
Date :
Adviser : Atty. Ramsey Ocampo
Suggestions of Panel Member (s) Actions Taken
Panel A
1. Focus on deriving inputs which you will rate the Will focus on inputs of the study.
proposed for a long term care policy plan
2, In introduction just follow the sequence of the Followed the sequence of the variables in title.
variables stated in the title Like old age, living ( Introduction)
conditions including the output variable which is
about long term care policy, the output is not going
to be a actual long term care policy plan but simply a
list of inputs from your study.
3. Do not mention right away the focus of your Have not mentioned the focus of the research
research in the 1st sentence in the first sentence.
4. Spell out acronyms when 1st time that you mention LGBTQ+ spelled out- page 1
(LGBT)
5. If you can provide empirical evidence to establish Established the empirical data. Page 20
the research problem. What are the specific data
na masasabi na may problema.
6. Synthesize the reviewed literature and studies, Synthesized and highlighted the differences of
kindly mention what is the similarity of study with the RRL and Related studies for the novelty of
those of the reviewed ones. Pero highlight the the study.
difference. Because that the novelty of your study.
7. Theoretical framework: explain in the last Comprehensively Explained the appropriates
paragraph why this theory is appropriate of the theories in Theoretical framework.
P 14.
8. SOP: improve the phrasing of the general Use single variable each research question
statement; variables must be clear to the to avoid double barrel.
researcher, reminder not to include 2 variables/
items in one statement. Its like double barrel. Ex.
Challenges and coping mechanisms di pwede
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pagsamahin dpat magkahiwalay sila.
9. Significance of the study: include master of social Masters in Social Work included in SOS.
work students as one of the beneficiaries
10. Scope and delimitation:parang wala ako nakita limited to indigent LGBTQ elderly
delimitation, ano b yun possible delimitation ng individuals in Morong, Bataan,
study? Ano ang hindi focus ng study? Anong
possible variable ang di kasma sa study
11. Research design: what type of phenomenology? Hermeneutic phenomenology provides the
best fit for this study's purposes.
Heideggerian thought serves as the
foundation for this method which uses
lived experiences to interpret participants
through analysis of their specific contexts.
12. Participants: since it has inclusion criteria you Exclusion criteria for participants selection
may want to include exclusion criteria. is now included.
13.Financial need: can you qualify this? What do The words financial need was clarified.
you mean by financial need? There is no specific Page 32
parameters
14. Instrument: ano yun mga minemeasure? Also The living conditions of indigent LGBTQ+
describe the expertise of the validators, ex. Gad elderly individuals be described in terms of
focal person,research professor and language their physical, emotional, social, and
expert.
financial well-being.
15. Data analysis: explain the appropriateness of Thematic analysis has been explained and
chosen data anaylsis method. (contextualize) will be used to organize the data.
16. Please include a flowchart. What are the step by Flowchart included in data analysis
step na drawing s qualitative data analysis section.
17. Interview guide: follow format of DHVSU for the Followed the interview guide.
interview guide
Panel B
1. Highlight in the first paragraph in introduction Highlighted
what is the problem
2. Include more discussion on UN (united nation) in MORE DISCUSSIONS on UN about
defining LGBTQ LGBTQ +
P5
3. : Include discussion on SOGIE Bill: think it is Page 13, SOGIE Bill was discussed.
very important kase a lot of people look at
SOGIE bill as favoring the rainbow community
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GRADUATE SCHOOL
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when infact it is not. Basic of the sogie bill is Anti
discrimination bill it doesn’t favor any sector and
anti discrimination for everyone. Please id like
you to include discussion on this.
4. Remove the conceptual framework Conceptual framework already removed.
5. I Suggest to look at wellness wheel- it measures Suggestion declined because this study is
social physical mental and other dimensions- about the lived experiences of the Elderly
tignan baka kase yun living conditions is part or LGBTQ
included na sya on that dimensions
6. SWDI forms used by the pantawid program of SWDI were explained in chapter 1. p. 20
DSWD because it has many indicators that will
measure describes the living conditions. But on
your research, baka naman you want to go deeper
talking about essence na pinagdadaanan nila. If it
is phenomenology ang titignan mo dapat diyan is
the lived experiences.
7. Data collection: review statement on seek Replaced by MSWDO
permission to DSWD Morong, replace it by
MSWDO
Panel C
1. Follow the DHVSU way of doing research, Followed in the entire paper
esp. Grammar, the tenses etc
2. Difference of quality of life and well being. Focus of living condition
Liwanagin alin talaga ang magiging focus
of the study
3. Pwede mo sila (financially capable) Financially capable is not included
iconsider isama since may mga sarili din sila
opinion. But this is your paper you have to
own it and if ayaw mo ilagay pls put it in
exclusion criteria
4. Maybe I recommend it should be towards a Inputs towards a policy recommendation
policy recommendation. Maybe on local
legislations or other level of legislations.
And as social workers we only give
recommendations para maconsider nila in
making policy.
5. Review the existing laws that cover senior citizen Done .
and LGBT etc. Esp SOGIE Bill kase baka kaya
hindi ito na push through kase kulang ang
understanding o hindi klaro ang bill, because
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generally gender issues is human right issues
basically. Emphasized on this .
6. Well being is measured while quality of life as Researcher will not measure but gains
part of wellness can also be measured . Kaya insights on the live experiences of the
dapat whatever term you will use dapat may mga selected participants
certain indicators ito para ma-measure mo, kung
naimprove ba or na enhance depende from this
stage to what stage.to see and know as basis. Best
example is swdi tool of dswd.
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