I.
Đề bài: cho 2-3 maps, yêu cầu report sự thay đổi của địa phương qua các năm
II. Viết bài:
1. Intro: 1 câu paraphrase đề bài
2. Overview: 2 câu nêu 2 điểm nổi bật nhất của đề:
- Sự xuất hiện mới của một đặc điểm nổi bật: It is noticeable from the
maps that the most significant development/change/evolvement that
occurred/took place at … (địa điểm) was a construction of A … (Noun
phrase – cấu trúc xây mới)
- Viết sự biến mất hoàn toàn của một đặc điểm lớn: Additionally, B
completely disappeared by (year).
Cách chia đoạn: lấy 1 mốc là con đường, sông để chia đôi 2 maps: body 1 viết ½ cả 2
maps, body 2 viết phần còn lại của 2 maps. Có 1 cấu trúc mô tả cái có sẵn (map 1), 7 cấu
trúc mô tả sự thay đổi (map 2) -> hai bodies đều phải sử dụng đều cả 8 cấu trúc
3. Body 1: To the North/South/East/West of the …
- In + năm, 1-2 câu đầu mô tả cái có sẵn ở map 1 – các đặc điểm lớn có
liên quan đến sự thay đổi ở map sau
- In + năm, câu 3, 4 mô tả thay đổi ở map 2 – nhắc đến các đặc điểm có
sẵn viết ở câu 1, 2
- Câu 5: mô tả cái giữ nguyễn
4. Body 2: Lm khác đi 1 chút: To the … of the …, in + năm. Câu 1, 2 mô tả
cái có sẵn; câu 2 dùng mệnh đề quan hệ để nối sang map 2
- To the south of the cities, there were a wealth of residential houses
which were removed to make way for a military airport in 2014.
- Câu 3, 4 viết tiếp sự thay đổi ở map 2
- Câu 5 viết cái giữ nguyên
CẤU TRÚC:
1. Giữ nguyên
- In the northwest corner/area of the city
- To the south of the river
- Was located/situated
- There was an airport to the south of the lake
- There were residential houses which were located along the main road
2. Phá bỏ
- Was demolished/knocked down
- Were cut down/chopped down
- Disappeared
- Completely/partially knocked down
- Was destroyed
3. Sự xây mới
- Were built/constructed/erected
- Appeared
- There was a construction of
- Was constructed
4. Thay thế
- The airport was demolished to make way for a new hospital
- All the trees were placed by a stadium
- A stadium was built and replaced all the trees
5. Mở rộng/kéo dài
- The car park near the river was expanded/widened/extended
- The school became bigger
- The railway was lengthened
- The railway was lengthened to the north of the hospital
6. Thu nhỏ/rút ngắn
- Was narrowed
- Became smaller
- Was shortened
- The school was extended to the north, which forced/forcing the factory
to greatly shrink
7. Sự di chuyển
- Was moved/relocated
8. Giữ nguyên
- Still remained/existed
Chữa bài:
The given maps illustrate the developments that occur in a public park named Grange
since its grand opening in the year 1920 until today.
It is noticeable from the maps that the most significant change in the park was the
construction of an Amphitheatre for concerts. Additionally, Fountain has completely
disappeared by today. To the left of the Eldon Street Entrance, in 1920, there was a Stage
for musicians in the center of this areas. There were also two rose gardens opposite each
other with seats allocated in all the four corners of the areas. Today, the Stage was
demolished, making way for an Amphitheater. One Rose Garden and all the seats were
relocated in the center of the park, replacing the Fountain. The other Rose Garden
remains to the right of the Arnold Avenue Entrance.
To the right of the Eldon Street Entrance, in 1920, a glasshouse situated just next to the
Entrance with seats located on its right. Across the Glasshouse were a Rose garden and a
Pond for water plants which were, by today, replaced by a Café and a children’s play
area, respectively. In addition, the Glasshouse and seats were completely destroyed to
make way for the construction of a water feature and the entrance of an underground car
park.
