THE PRODUCTION OF WOOL
In some northern countries, keeping warm is a matter of living and dead=> life
and death, which means people there need clothes that show efficient in keeping warm
and that usually is a wool jacket=> lengthy lead in, should put more emphasis on the
importance of wool jacket. The jacket has a warm thick wool that slows the heat
exchanging process and boosts the heating process. Because of their efficiency, the
process to make the jacket is quite complex, which will be scattered into two stages,
making wool and making jackets.
The first step of making wool stage is to take the fur by trimming the sheep in
what they called shavingshearing. the fur is then being transferred to a big pool of water
and cleaning chemical mixture to wash all the dirt and dust. Then the cleaned pelt is
moved into a dyeing pot to color and then dried by the sun. When the fur has become dry,
it is moved to a spinning extruder to extract the pelt into thread. which then the most
being made into wool and the redundance remaining parts is recycled into string. When
we have wool, the stage of making jacked jakets has begun. First, the wool is being
collected to make a tuff of wool. then that tuff is stored storaged in box and is naked
made into ball of yarn. when those fluffy ball had been made, people use it for knitting
and making the fur jacket that is important for people of northern country and making the
carpet in which laying inside houses.
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In conclusion, the process of producing wool is a lengthy process starting from
sheep- raising for wool to the final products of carpet and jackets.
Logical development: Process: Shearing → Cleaning/Scouring → Carding → Spinning →
Dyeing → Knitting/Weaving → Final Products.
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In some northern countries, keeping warm is a matter of life and death. People rely on clothes
that are effective at retaining heat, such as wool jackets. Because of their efficiency, the process
of producing woolen products is complex and can be divided into two main stages: preparing the
wool and manufacturing the final products.
The first stage begins with shearing the sheep to obtain the fleece. The raw wool is then cleaned
in a mixture of water and chemicals to remove dirt and grease. After being washed, the wool is
dried in the sun. Next, it is carded and spun into threads. Most of these threads are used to make
wool, while the remaining parts can be recycled into strings. At this point, the wool is ready for
further processing.
The second stage involves turning the wool into products. First, the wool is collected and stored,
then made into balls of yarn. These yarns are used for knitting and weaving, producing wool
jackets and carpets, which play an important role in keeping people warm in cold climates.
In conclusion, the production of wool is a lengthy process that starts with sheep shearing and
ends with useful products such as jackets and carpets, which are essential for people living in
colder regions.
