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Lo1 - Joe

The student's current grade for LO1 is Merit. The feedback provides suggestions to improve sections of the student's blog work, such as adding more details, images, and research. The student is asked to resubmit the work by clearly labeling new blog posts as "Re-Submission" instead of overwriting the original posts. Minor corrections or additions are needed to achieve the highest Merit grade. The deadline for resubmission is January 13th, 2017.

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Lo1 - Joe

The student's current grade for LO1 is Merit. The feedback provides suggestions to improve sections of the student's blog work, such as adding more details, images, and research. The student is asked to resubmit the work by clearly labeling new blog posts as "Re-Submission" instead of overwriting the original posts. Minor corrections or additions are needed to achieve the highest Merit grade. The deadline for resubmission is January 13th, 2017.

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LO1 FEEDBACK

Joe DAcinto LO1 Feedback. 5/12/16

Current Grade for LO1: Merit


LO1 Part
A. The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning


outcome is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are
any minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are
made.
Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
Advertising Types & Styles
Joe, can you re-add this, possibly as images. The link wont let me see the work.
LO1 Part B. What is advertising?
Some good work here. Ensure that you quote / footnote any research that you
find. Add in the ITV rate card and explain this also. Add more detail to the
advertisement job roles and agency section.
Lo1 Part C. Regulation
Expand on the Ofcom section, this is short. Try to add in more detail on how they
are funded and the communications act.
LO1 part D. Analysis.
Some good analysis here Joe. Well done.

The resubmission deadline is: January 13th 2017

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