WALT insert speech correctly. New speech starts on a new line. Use marks.
Complete two - three more paragraphs. Try and include a simile and or metaphor.
All I need is a cherry exclaimed Zoe. Zoe exclaimedall I need is a cherry.
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She had resided at Raven Cliff Crag for hundreds of years, perfecting her art,
honing her skills.34
Her concoctions bubbled and frothed in front of her; she let out a hearty laugh.
Not long now she muttered under her breath. Her creation was almost
complete
Long ago in a town called Mistericle falls where witches, genies,
wizards,vampires, shadow hunters, devils, and lots of other
supernatural things lived there were the most powerful Gods of the
underworld and the land where guardians watch over the humans to
protect them from such evil called the Hollow dark, evil spirit that
was known as one of the five brothers.
The five brothers were just normal villagers from a very small village
called Mistericle falls until the five brothers went into the enchanted
forest to hunt for food for their family. Just then the eldest brother
Deran found a very powerful spell book that contained the most evil
spells, but Deran didn't know that so he took it back to his small
house and he told his four other brothers about the book. They
thought it was dangerous but Deran spoke the most evil enchanted
spell that could ever be let out.
He formed into something that looked like a medium tornado that
was very dark and disappeared into the forest never to be seen
again.
Many centuries ago all supernatural things were bound to hide or
they would be sent to death dungeons where you get sent to a place
where humans would keep you from hurting their families.
A very evil dark magic witch found her way from a loophole to Mistericle
falls where she once lived many centuries ago on a cliff called Raven
Cliff Crag, her name is Davina. Davina was helping the Hollow come
back to Mistericle falls to take away his banishment and become more
powerful than the God Anorah, she used her power to help people.
The Hollows only way to connect with Davina is the enchanted mirror
He told her she needed a steam flower, wand of one of the most
powerful salem witch, stone of nophisle from encanta the realm of
death and ghost, a God's weakness potion from the realm of the
underworld where devils hide the most powerful items mantendo Hell
fire leaf and a ogers poison to complete the spell.
Davina jumped off the edge of Raven Cliff Crag landing straight on her
feet as she casted a spell on a human in the woods, so she could jump
into the human's body so she wasn't noticed as a witch. She became
closer to the town until the Hollow appeared in the dark stormy clouds
to tell Davina that she needs to get the items or she will be sent to devil
vil where she would get burnt alive by Hell fire.
Davina angrily said I need a human body to get through the realms
she was banished from taking the soul sword, The hollow said you
have three days if you haven't got the spell done by then you will be
banished from any realms and get hung by a witch hunter. The Hollow
disappeared and a realm bean that could take you to fifty four realms all
you had to do is steep on the bean and think where you want to travel
and youll be there in a blink of an eye.
Davina had every item but she had no idea how dangerous jumping
into human bodies was. God Anorah was watching over the human she
heard was in danger. The human Davina jumped into and in a flash
Anorah appeared into the woods. Anorah turned around and saw that
the human had the soul sword but then Davina formed back to herself
Anorah angrily said I banished you along time ago and I can do it
again Davina just stood there and laughing she said do you really
think you can overthrow me the one and only Davina?
Then a battle started. Anorah clicked her fingers and Davina cast a
shield bubble over her and she didn't get hit. Anorah made the shield
bubble and burst her and it popped! Anorah flew up high yaaaa!
Davina drifted into the sky and all the items dropped like a rain drop.
Davina quickly spoke the spell and the spell was done oh no Anorah
shouted.
All of a sudden a dark evil spirit arrived, HaHaHaHa! Hello mother,
said the Hollow. Anorah clicked her fingers and the Hollow along with
Davina were banished forever. Commented [1]: This is a fantastic narrative Mizyrah.
Great use of vocabulary, punctuation and
paragraphing.
The End... Please upload this to your blog.
You are a talented author!
