James - Art of Fiction PDF
James - Art of Fiction PDF
destined t o suffe r i n an y wa y fo r havin g los t it s naivete i t ha s no w a n for th e existence of a novel is that it does attempt to represent life. Whe n
idea of making sure of the corresponding advantages. Durin g the perio d it relinquishes this attempt, th e same attempt tha t w e see on the canvas of
I hav e alluded to there was a comfortable, good-humoured feeling abroad the painter, i t will have arrived a t a very strange pass. I t i s not expecte d
that a nove l i s a novel , a s a puddin g i s a pudding , an d tha t ou r onl y of the pictur e tha t i t will make itself humble in order t o be forgiven; an d
business with it could be to swallow it. Bu t within a year or two, for some the analogy betwee n the art o f the painter an d th e art o f the novelist is, so
reason o r other, there have been signs of returning animationthe era of far a s I a m abl e t o see , complete. Thei r inspiratio n i s the same , thei r
discussion woul d appea r t o hav e bee n t o a certai n exten t opened . Ar t process (allowin g fo r th e differen t qualit y o f th e vehicle) , i s th e same ,
lives upo n discussion , upon experiment , upo n curiosity , upon variet y of their succes s i s the same . The y ma y l earn fro m eac h other , the y ma y
attempt, upo n th e exchang e of views and th e compariso n o f standpoints; explain an d sustai n each other . Thei r caus e is the same, an d th e honour
and ther e i s a presumptio n tha t thos e time s when n o on e ha s anythin g of one is the honou r of another. The Mahometan s thin k a pictur e an
particular t o say about it , and ha s no reason to give for practice or prefer- unholy thing, but i t is a long time since any Christia n did , and i t is there-
ence, though they may be times of honour, are not times of development fore th e mor e od d tha t i n th e Christia n min d th e trace s (dissimulate d
are times , possibly even, a little of dulness. Th e successfu l applicatio n of though the y ma y be ) o f a suspicio n of the siste r ar t shoul d linge r t o this
any ar t i s a delightfu l spectacle , bu t th e theor y to o i s interesting ; an d day. Th e onl y effectual wa y t o lay it to res t i s to emphasise th e analog y
though there is a great deal of the latter without the former I suspect there to which I just alludedt o insist on the fact tha t as the pictur e i s reality,
has neve r bee n a genuin e succes s that ha s no t ha d a laten t cor e of con- so the nove l is history. Tha t is the onl y general description (whic h does
viction. Discussion , suggestion, formulation, these thing s ar e fertilisin g it justice) tha t w e may giv e o f the novel . ^ ut histor y als o i s allowed t o
when they are frank and sincere. Mr . Besan t has set an excellent example represent life ; i t i s not, any mor e tha n painting , expecte d t o apologise .
in sayin g wha t h e thinks , fo r hi s part, abou t th e wa y i n whic h fictio n The subject-matte r o f fiction is stored up likewis e in document s an d re -
should be written, as well as about the way in which it should be published; cords, and if it will not giv e itself away, as the y say in California , it must
for hi s vie w o f the "art, " carrie d o n int o a n appendix , cover s that too. speak- with assurance , wit h th e ton e o f th e historian . Certai n accom -
Other labourer s in th e sam e fiel d wil l doubtles s take u p th e argument , plished novelists have a habit o f giving themselves awa y which must ofte n
they will give it th e ligh t of their experience, and th e effec t wil l surely be bring tear s t o th e eye s of people wh o take thei r fiction seriously. I was
to mak e our interes t in th e nove l a littl e more what i t ha d fo r some tim e lately struck , i n readin g over man y page s o f Anthony Trollope , with his
threatened t o fai l t o be a serious , active, inquirin g interest, under pro- want o f discretion i n this particular. I n a digression , a parenthesis or an
tection o f whic h thi s delightfu l stud y may , in moment s o f confidence, aside, h e concedes t o the reader tha t h e and thi s trusting frien d ar e only
venture to say a little more what it thinks of itself. "making believe." H e admits that the events he narrates hav e not really
It must take itself seriously for the public to take it so. Th e old supersti- happened, an d that he can give his narrative an y turn th e reader may like
tion about fiction being "wicked " has doubtless died ou t in England; bu t best. Suc h a betrayal of a sacred offic e seem s to me, I confess , a terribl e
the spirit of it lingers in a certain oblique regard directed toward any story crime; i t i s what I mea n b y th e attitud e o f apology, an d i t shock s me
which doe s not mor e or les s admit tha t i t i s only a joke. Eve n the mos t every whit as much in Trollope as it would nave shocked me in Gibbon or
jocular nove l feels i n some degree the weigh t of the proscriptio n tha t wa s Macaulay. I t implie s that the novelis t is les s occupied i n looking for the
formerly directe d agains t literar y levity : th e jocularity doe s no t alway s truth (th e truth, o f course I mean , tha t he assumes , the premise s tha t we
succeed i n passin g fo r orthodoxy . I t i s stil l expected , thoug h perhap s must grant him , whatever the y may be), than th e historian, an d i n doing
people ar e ashame d t o sa y it, tha t a productio n which i s after al l onl y a so it deprives him at a stroke of all his standing-room. T o represen t an d
"make-believe" (fo r what els e i s a "story"? ) shal l b e i n som e degre e illustrate the past, th e actions of men, is the tas k of either writer , an d the
apologeticshall renounc e th e pretensio n o f attemptin g reall y t o re - only differenc e tha t I ca n se e is , i n proportion a s h e succeeds , t o th e
present life . This , o f course, any sensible , wide-awake story decline s t o honour o f the novelist, consisting as it does in hi s having mor e difficult y i n
do, fo r i t quickl y perceive s tha t th e toleranc e grante d t o i t o n suc h a collecting hi s evidence , whic h i s s o far from bein g purel y literary . I t
condition is only an attemp t t o stifl e i t disguised in the for m o f generosity. seems t o m e t o giv e hi m a grea t character , th e fac t tha t h e ha s at onc e
The ol d evangelica l hostility to th e novel , which was as explicit as it was so muc h i n commo n wit h th e philosophe r an d th e painter ; thi s double
narrow, an d whic h regarded i t a s littl e les s favourabl e to ou r immorta l analogy i s a magnificen t heritage .
part tha n a stage-play , was in realit y far less insulting. Th e onl y reaso n It is of all this evidently that Mr. Besan t is full whe n he insists upon the
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fact that fictio n is one of the fine arts, deserving in its turn of all the honours shall wish to jump ahead , t o see who was the my sterious stranger, and if
and emolument s tha t hav e hithert o bee n reserve d fo r th e successfu l the stole n wil l wa s eve r found , an d shal l no t b e detracte d ^ rom thi s
profession o f music , poetry, painting , architecture . I t i s impossibl e t o pleasure b y an y tiresom e analysi s or "description." J3u t the y would al l
insist to o much o n s o important a truth , an d th e plac e tha t Mr . Besan t agree tha t the "artistic " idea would spoil some of their fun - On e would
demands for the wor k of the novelis t may be represented , a trifl e les s hold i t accountable fo r all th e description, another wo u^ see ^ revealed
abstractly, b y sayin g that h e demand s no t onl y tha t i t shal l b e repute d in th e absenc e o f sympathy. It s hostilit y t o a happ y endin g woul d b e
artistic, bu t tha t i t shal l b e repute d ver y artistic indeed . I t i s excellent evident, an d i t might even in some cases render an y ending at al l impos-
that h e should have struck this note, fo r his doing so indicates tha t ther e sible. Th e "ending" of a novel is, for many persons , like that f a god
was nee d o f it, tha t hi s propositio n ma y b e t o man y peopl e a novelty . dinner, a course of dessert and ices, and the artist iu fi ctin i s regarded as a
One rub s one's eye s at the thought ; but the res t of Mr. Besant' s essa y sort of meddlesome doctor who forbid s agreeabl e aftertastes . I t i s there-
confirms th e revelation . I suspec t i n trut h tha t i t woul d b e possibl e fore tru e tha t thi s conception o f Mr. Besant' s of the nove l a s a superio r
to confirm it still further, an d tha t on e would not b e far wrong in saying form encounter s no t onl y a negativ e bu t a positive indifference . I t
that i n addition t o the people to whom it has never occurred tha t a novel matters little that as a work of art it should really be as little or as mucri f
ought t o b e artistic, ther e ar e a grea t man y other s who, i f this principl e its essenc e t o suppl y happ y endings , sympatheti c c tiaracters> an d a n
were urge d upo n them , woul d b e fille d wit h a n indefinabl e mistrust . objective tone, as if it were a work of mechanics: the association o f ideas,
They woul d fin d i t difficul t t o explai n thei r repugnance , bu t i t woul d however incongruous, might easily be too much f 0r i t if an eloquent voice
operate strongl y to pu t the m o n thei r guard . "Art, " in ou r Protestan t were not sometimes raised to call attention to the f ac t tha t it is at onc e as
communities, where so many thing s have go t s o strangely twiste d about , free an d a s serious a branch o f literature as any other .
is supposed i n certai n circle s to hav e som e vaguely injurious effect upo n Certainly this might sometimes be doubted in presence of the enormous
those wh o mak e i t a n importan t consideration , wh o le t i t weig h i n th e number o f works of fiction that appeal to the credulit y of our generation,
balance. I t i s assume d t o b e oppose d i n som e mysteriou s manne r t o for i t might easil y seem that ther e could b e no great character in a com"
morality, to amusement, to instruction. Whe n it is embodied i n the work modity s o quickly and easil y produced . I t mus t be admitted tha t ood
of th e painte r (th e sculpto r i s anothe r affair! ) yo u kno w wha t i t is : i t novels ar e muc h compromise d b y ba d ones , an d that th e fiel d a t larg e
stands there before you, in the honesty of pink and green and a gilt frame; suffers discredi t from overcrowding . I think , however* that thi s injury is
you ca n se e the worst of it a t a glance , an d yo u ca n b e o n you r guard . only superficial , an d tha t th e superabundanc e of written fictio n prove s
But whe n i t i s introduce d int o literatur e i t become s mor e insidious nothing against th e principle itself. I t ha s been Vulga^isedJ hk e all other
there is danger of its hurting you before you know it. Literatur e should be kinds of literature, like everything else to-day, and it has proved more than
either instructiv e or amusing , an d ther e i s in many mind s an impressio n some kind s accessible to vulgarisation . Bu t ther e i s ^s muc h differenc e
that thes e artisti c preoccupations , th e searc h fo r form , contribut e t o as there eve r was between a goo d nove l an d a ba d on^ ' the bad i s swept
neither end , interfer e indeed wit h both . The y ar e to o frivolou s t o b e with all the daubed canvase s and spoile d marble into s^me unvisited lim-
edifying, an d to o serious to be diverting ; and the y are moreove r priggis h bo, or infinite rubbish-yar d beneath the back-window^ of the world, and
and paradoxical an d superfluous . That , I think , represents th e manne r the goo d subsist s and emit s its light and stimulate s ou* * de sire fo r perfec -
in which the latent thought of many people who read novels as an exercise tion. A s I shal l take the liberty o f making but a single criticism o f Mr .
in skippin g woul d explai n itsel f if i t wer e t o becom e articulate . The y Besant, whose tone is so full o f the lov e of his art, I may as well have done
would argue , o f course, that a novel ought to be "good," but the y would with it at once . He seem s to me to mistak e i n attemptin g to say so
interpret thi s ter m i n a fashio n o f their own , whic h indee d woul d var y definitely beforehan d what sor t o f an affai r th e g ood j^ove l will be. T o
considerably from on e critic to another. On e would say that being good indicate the dange r of such a n erro r as that ha s been tl^e purpose of these
means representing virtuous and aspiring characters, placed i n prominen t few pages ; t o sugges t tha t certai n tradition s o n the subject , applie d a
positions; another woul d say that i t depend s o n a "happ y ending," on a priori, have already had much t o answer for, and that th e goo d healt h of
distribution a t th e las t o f prizes , pensions , husbands , wives , babies , an ar t whic h undertakes s o immediatel y to reproduc e hf e mus t deman d
millions, appende d paragraphs , an d cheerfu l remarks . Anothe r stil l that i t be perfectl y free . I t live s upon exercise, and tr^e very meaning of
would sa y that i t mean s being ful l o f incident an d movement , s o that w e exercise is freedom. The onl y obligatio n to whic h ir > advanc e we may
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hold a novel , withou t incurrin g th e accusatio n o f bein g arbitrary , i s rules in a manner wit h which it would certainl y b e unaccommodatin g t o
that i t b e interesting. Tha t genera l responsibilit y rests upon it , bu t i t is disagree. Tha t th e novelis t mus t \vrit e fro m hi s experience , tha t hi s
the onl y on e I ca n thin k of . Th e way s in whic h i t i s at libert y t o ac - "characters mus t be real an d suc h as might b e me t wit h i n actua l life,"
complish this result (of interesting us) strike me as innumerable, and suc h that "a youn g lady brought up in a quiet country villag e shoul d avoi d de -
as ca n onl y suffe r fro m bein g marke d ou t o r fence d i n b y prescription . scriptions o f garrison life, " an d " a writer whose friend s an d persona l ex-
They are as various as the temperament of man, and the y are successful i n periences belon g t o th e lowe r middle-clas s should carefull y avoi d intro -
proportion a s the y revea l a particula r mind , differen t fro m others . A ducing his characters into society;" that one should ente r one's notes in a
novel i s in it s broades t definitio n a personal , a direc t impressio n o f life : common-place book ; tha t one' s figures should b e clea r i n outline ; tha t
that, t o begin with, constitutes its value, which is greater o r less according making them clear by some trick of speech or o f carriage is a bad metho d
to th e intensit y of the impression . Bu t ther e wil l be n o intensit y at all, and "describin g the m a t length " i s a wo rse one ; tha t Englis h Fictio n
and therefor e n o value , unles s ther e i s freedo m t o fee l an d say . Th e should have a "conscious moral purpose;" that "it i s almos t impossibl e to
tracing o f a lin e t o b e followed , o f a ton e t o b e taken , o f a for m t o b e estimate to o highl y the valu e o f careful wo rkmanshipthat is , of style;"
filled out, i s a limitatio n o f that freedo m an d a suppressio n o f the ver y that "th e most importan t poin t o f al l i s th e story, " tha t "th e stor y i s
thing tha t w e ar e mos t curiou s about. Th e form , i t seem s t o me , i s to everything": these are principles with most of which i t is surely impossible
be appreciated afte r th e fact: the n th e author's choice has been made, his not t o sympathise. Tha t remark about the lower middle-clas s write r and
standard ha s been indicated ; then we can follo w line s and direction s and his knowing his place i s perhaps rathe r chilling? bu t fo r the res t I shoul d
compare tone s and resemblances . The n i n a wor d w e can enjo y on e of find it difficult t o dissent from an y one of these recommendations. A t th e
the most charming of pleasures, we can estimate quality, we can apply the same time , I shoul d find it difficul t positivel y to assen t t o them , with th e
test o f execution. Th e executio n belong s t o th e autho r alone ; i t i s what exception, perhaps , o f th e injunctio n a s t o enterin g one' s note s i n a
is most persona l t o him, and we measure hi m b y that . Th e advantage , common-place book . The y scarcel y seem t o m e to hav e the qualit y that
the luxury , a s wel l a s th e tormen t an d responsibilit y o f th e novelist , is Mr. Besan t attribute s t o th e rule s o f the novelistth e "precisio n an d
that ther e i s no limi t t o what h e may attemp t a s an executantn o limi t exactness" o f "the law s of harmony, perspective, an d proportion. " The y
to hi s possibl e experiments , efforts , discoveries , successes . Her e i t i s are suggestive, they are even inspiring, but they are not exact , though they
especially tha t h e works , ste p b y step , lik e hi s brothe r o f th e brush , of are doubtles s as much s o as th e cas e admits of : whic h i s a proof of that
whom we may always say that he has painted hi s picture in a manner bes t liberty o f interpretatio n fo r whic h I just contended . Fo r th e valu e o f
known to himself. Hi s manner i s his secret, not necessarily a jealous one. these differen t injunctionss o beautifu l ari d s o vagueis wholl y in th e
He canno t disclos e it as a general thin g if he would; he would be at a loss meaning on e attache s t o them . Th e characters, th e situation , whic h
to teach i t to others. I say this with a due recollectio n of having insisted strike on e as real wil l b e those tha t touc h an d interes t on e most, but th e
on th e communit y o f method o f the artis t wh o paint s a pictur e an d th e measure o f reality is very difficul t t o fi x. Th e realit y o f Don Quixot e o r
artist who writes a novel . Th e painte r i s able t o teach th e rudiment s of of Mr. Micawbe r is a very delicate shade ; it is a reality so coloured by the
his practice, an d i t i s possible, from th e stud y of good wor k (grante d th e author's visio n that, vivi d as it may be , one woul d hesitate-t o propose it as
aptitude), bot h t o learn ho w to paint an d t o learn ho w to write. Ye t it a model: one would expose one's sel f t0 some very embarrassin g question s
remains true , withou t injur y t o th e rapprochement, tha t th e literar y artis t on th e par t o f a pupil . I t goe s without sayin g that yo u wil l not writ e a
would be obliged to say to his pupil much more than the other, "Ah , well, good nove l unless you possess the sens e of reality; but i t will b e difficult t o
you mus t do it as you can! " It is a questio n of degree , a matte r of give you a recipe for calling that sens e into being. Humanit y is immense,
delicacy. I f ther e are exac t sciences , there ar e als o exac t arts , an d th e and reality has a myriad forms; th e m 0st one can affir m i s that some of the
grammar o f painting is so much more definite that it makes the difference . flowers of fiction have th e odou r o f it, and other s hav e not ; a s for telling
I ought t o add, however , that i f Mr. Besan t says at th e beginnin g of his you i n advanc e ho w you r nosega y shoul d b e composed , tha t i s anothe r
essay that the "laws of fiction may b e laid down and taugh t wit h as much affair. I t i s equally excellent and inconclusiv e to say that one must write
precision an d exactnes s a s th e law s o f harmony , perspective , an d pro- from experience ; t o ou r suppositio n aspirant suc h a declaratio n migh t
portion," h e mitigate s wha t migh t appea r t o b e a n extravaganc e b y savour of mockery. Wha t kin d of experience is intended, and wher e does
applying his remark to "general " laws , and by expressing mos t of these it begin and end ? Experienc e is never limited, and i t is never complete ;
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it i s an immens e sensibility, a kin d o f huge spider-we b o f the fines t silken its othe r merit s (includin g that consciou s moral purpos e o f whic h Mr .
threads suspende d i n th e chambe r o f consciousness, an d catchin g ever y Besant speaks) helplessly and submissivel y depend. I f it be not there they
airborne particl e in its tissue. I t i s the very atmosphere o f the mind; an d are al l a s nothing, and i f these be there , the y owe their effec t t o th e suc-
when the mind is imaginativemuch more when it happens to be that of a cess with which the author ha s produced the illusio n of life. Th e cultiva-
man o f geniusit takes to itself the faintest hints of life, it converts the very tion o f this success, th e stud y of this exquisite process, form, t o m y taste ,
pulses of the ai r int o revelations. Th e youn g lady livin g in a village has the beginnin g an d th e en d o f the ar t o f the novelist . The y ar e hi s in-
only to be a damsel upon whom nothing is lost to make it quite unfair (a s spiration, hi s despair, hi s reward, hi s torment, hi s delight. I t i s here i n
it seems to me) t o declare to her tha t sh e shall have nothin g to say about very truth tha t h e competes wit h life;'it i s here that h e competes with his
the military . Greate r miracle s hav e bee n see n tha n that , imaginatio n brother the painter in his attempt t o render the look of things, the look that
assisting, sh e should spea k th e trut h abou t som e o f these gentlemen . I conveys their meaning , t o catc h th e colour , th e relief , th e expression , the
remember a n Englis h novelist, a woman of genius, telling me that she was surface, th e substance of the huma n spectacle. I t i s in regard t o this that
much commende d fo r the impression sh e had manage d t o give in on e of Mr. Besan t is well inspired when he bids him take notes. H e cannot pos-
her tale s o f th e natur e an d wa y o f lif e o f the Frenc h Protestan t youth . sibly take too many, he cannot possibly take enough. Al l life solicits him,
She had bee n asked where she learned so much about thi s recondite being , and t o "render" the simplest surface, t o produce th e mos t momentary il-
she ha d bee n congratulate d o n he r peculia r opportunities . Thes e lusion, is a very complicated business . Hi s case would be easier, and th e
opportunities consiste d i n he r havin g once , i n Paris , a s sh e ascende d a rule would b e more exact , i f Mr. Besan t ha d bee n abl e t o tel l hi m wha t
staircase, passe d a n ope n doo r where , i n th e househol d o f a pasteur, some notes to take. Bu t this, I fear, he can never learn in any manual; it is the
of the young Protestants were seated at table round a finished meal. Th e business of his life. H e ha s t o take a great man y in order t o select a few,
glimpse mad e a picture ; i t laste d onl y a moment , bu t tha t momen t wa s he has to work them u p a s he can, an d eve n th e guides and philosophers
experience. Sh e had go t her direc t persona l impression , an d sh e turned who might hav e mos t t o say to him mus t leave him alon e whe n i t comes
out he r type . Sh e kne w what yout h was , an d wha t Protestantism ; she to the application o f precepts, a s we leave the painter i n communion with
also had th e advantage o f having seen what it was to be French, so that she his palette . Tha t hi s character s "mus t b e clea r i n outline, " a s Mr .
converted thes e idea s int o a concret e imag e an d produce d a reality . Besant sayshe feels tha t down to his boots; but ho w he shall make them
Above all , however , sh e wa s blesse d wit h th e facult y whic h whe n yo u so is a secre t betwee n his good ange l and himself . It woul d be absurdly
give i t a n inc h take s a n ell , an d whic h fo r th e artis t i s a muc h greate r simple if he could be taught tha t a great dea l of "description" would make
source of strength tha n an y acciden t o f residence o r o f place in th e socia l them so, or that on the contrary the absence of description and th e cultiva-
scale. Th e powe r t o guess the unseen from th e seen, to trace the implica- tion o f dialogue , o r th e absenc e o f dialogu e an d th e multiplicatio n o f
tion o f things, t o judge th e whol e piec e b y th e pattern , th e conditio n o f "incident," would rescue him from hi s difficulties. Nothing , for instance,
feeling lif e i n genera l s o completel y tha t yo u ar e wel l o n you r wa y t o is mor e possibl e tha n tha t h e b e o f a tur n o f mind fo r whic h thi s odd ,
knowing an y particula r corne r o f itthis cluste r o f gifts ma y almos t b e literal oppositio n o f description an d dialogue , inciden t an d description ,
said to constitute experience, and the y occur in country and i n town, an d has littl e meanin g an d light . Peopl e ofte n tal k o f these thing s as if they
in th e mos t differin g stage s o f education . I f experienc e consist s o f had a kin d of internecine distinctness, instead o f melting into eac h othe r
impressions, i t ma y b e sai d tha t impression s are experience, just a s (have at every breath, and bein g intimately associated parts of one general effor t
we not see n it ?) they are th e ver y air w e breathe. Therefore , i f I should of expression. I cannot imagine composition existing in a series of blocks,
certainly say to a novice , "Writ e fro m experienc e an d experienc e only," nor conceive , in any nove l worth discussing at all , of a passage of descrip-
I should feel tha t thi s was rather a tantalising monition if I were not care- tion that is not i n its intention narrative , a passage of dialogue that i s not
ful immediatel y to add, "Tr y to be one of the people o n whom nothing is in it s intentio n descriptive , a touc h o f trut h o f an y sor t tha t doe s no t
lost!" partake o f the natur e o f incident, o r a n inciden t tha t derive s its interest
I am far from intendin g by this to minimise the importance of exactness from an y othe r source than th e general and onl y source of the succes s of a
of truth of detail. On e can speak best from one' s own taste, and I ma y work o f artthat o f being illustrative . A novel is a livin g thing, all on e
therefore ventur e t o sa y tha t th e ai r o f reality (solidit y of specification) and continuous , lik e an y othe r organism , an d i n proportio n a s i t live s
seems to me to be the suprem e virtue of a novelth e merit o n which al l will i t b e found , I think , tha t i n eac h o f the part s ther e i s something of
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each o f th e othe r parts . Th e criti c wh o ove r th e clos e textur e o f a whether he intends the remarks in which he alludes to it to be didacti c or
finished wor k shall pretend t o trac e a geograph y o f items will mar k som e historical. I t i s a s difficul t t o suppos e a perso n intendin g t o writ e a
frontiers a s artificial , I fear , a s an y tha t hav e bee n know n t o history . modern Englis h as to suppose him writin g an ancien t Englis h novel: tha t
There i s an old-fashione d distinction between th e nove l o f character an d is a labe l which begs the question . On e write s the novel , on e paint s th e
the nove l o f inciden t which must have cost many a smile to the intending picture, of one's language an d o f one's time, and callin g it modern Englis h
fabulist wh o wa s kee n abou t hi s work. I t appear s t o m e a s littl e t o th e will not, alas ! make th e difficul t tas k any easier . N o more, unfortunately,
point a s th e equall y celebrate d distinctio n betwee n th e nove l an d th e will calling this or that wor k of one's fellow-artist a romanceunless it be,
romanceto answe r a s little t o an y reality . Ther e ar e ba d novel s an d of course, simpl y fo r th e pleasantnes s of th e thing , a s fo r instanc e whe n
good novels , as there are ba d picture s an d goo d pictures ; bu t tha t i s the Hawthorne gav e thi s heading to his story of Blithedale. Th e French , wh o
only distinctio n in whic h I se e any meaning , an d I ca n a s little imagine have brough t th e theor y o f fiction to remarkable completeness , hav e bu t
speaking of a nove l of character a s I ca n imagin e speaking of a pictur e of one name for the novel, and hav e not attempted smalle r things in it, that I
character. Whe n on e say s picture on e say s of character, whe n on e says can see , for that. I ca n thin k of no obligation t o which th e "romancer "
novel on e say s o f incident , an d th e term s ma y b e transpose d a t will . would no t b e hel d equall y wit h the novelist ; the standar d o f execution is
What i s character bu t th e determinatio n o f incident ? Wha t i s incident equally hig h fo r each. O f cours e it is of execution tha t w e are talking
but th e illustration of character ? Wha t i s either a picture or a novel that that bein g th e onl y point o f a nove l tha t i s open t o contention . Thi s is
is no t of character? Wha t els e do w e see k in i t an d fin d i n it ? I t i s a n perhaps to o ofte n los t sigh t of , only t o produc e interminabl e confusion s
incident fo r a woma n t o stan d u p wit h he r han d restin g on a tabl e an d and cross-purposes . W e mus t gran t th e artis t hi s subject , hi s idea , hi s
look out at you in a certain way; or if it be not an incident I think it will be donnee: ou r criticis m is applied onl y to what h e makes of it. Naturall y I
hard t o say what i t is . A t th e sam e tim e i t is an expressio n o f character. do not mean that we are boun d t o like i t or find it interesting: i n case we
If you sa y you don't se e it (characte r i n that allons done! 1), thi s is exactly do no t ou r cours e i s perfectly simpleto le t i t alone . W e ma y believ e
what th e artis t wh o ha s reason s o f hi s ow n fo r thinkin g h e does se e i t that o f a certai n ide a eve n th e mos t sincer e novelis t ca n mak e nothin g
undertakes t o sho w you . Whe n a youn g ma n make s u p hi s mind tha t at all , an d th e even t ma y perfectl y justify ou r belief ; bu t th e failur e will
he ha s no t fait h enoug h afte r al l t o ente r th e churc h a s h e intended , have bee n a failur e to execute , an d i t i s in th e executio n tha t th e fata l
that i s an incident , though yo u ma y no t hurr y t o the en d o f the chapte r weakness is recorded. I f we pretend t o respect th e artis t a t all , w e must
to se e whethe r perhap s h e doesn' t chang e onc e more . I d o no t sa y allow hi m hi s freedo m o f choice , i n th e face , i n particula r cases , o f in -
that thes e are extraordinar y o r startlin g incidents. I d o no t preten d t o numerable presumption s tha t th e choic e wil l not fructify . Ar t derive s a
estimate th e degre e o f interest proceeding fro m them , fo r this will depen d considerable par t o f it s beneficia l exercise fro m flyin g i n th e fac e o f
upon th e skil l o f the painter . I t sound s almost pueril e t o sa y that som e presumptions, an d som e of the mos t interesting experiments of which it is
incidents ar e instrinsicall y muc h mor e importan t tha n others , an d I capable ar e hidde n i n th e boso m o f common things . Gustav e Flauber t
need no t tak e thi s precaution afte r havin g professe d m y sympath y fo r has written a story about th e devotion of a servant girl to a parrot, and the
the major one s in remarking that th e onl y classification of the novel that production, highl y finishe d a s it is , cannot o n th e whol e b, e calle d a suc -
I ca n understan d is into that whic h has lif e an d tha t whic h has it not . cess. W e ar e perfectl y free t o find it flat, but I thin k it might hav e bee n
The nove l and th e romance, th e novel of incident and tha t of character interesting; and I , for my part, am extremely glad h e should have written
these clumsy separations appear t o me to have been mad e b y critics and it; i t i s a contributio n t o ou r knowledg e of what ca n b e doneo r wha t
readers fo r their ow n convenience , an d t o hel p them ou t o f some of their cannot. Iva n Turgenief f ha s written a tal e abou t a dea f and dum b ser f
occasional queer predicaments , bu t t o have little reality or interest for the and a lap-dog, an d th e thing is touching, loving, a little masterpiece. H e
producer, fro m whos e point o f view it i s of course that w e are attemptin g struck th e not e o f life wher e Gustav e Flauber t misse d ithe fle w i n th e
to consider the art o f fiction . Th e cas e is the same with another shadow y face o f a presumptio n an d achieve d a victory.
category which Mr . Besan t apparentl y i s disposed t o se t uptha t o f th e Nothing, o f course, wil l eve r tak e th e plac e of the goo d ol d fashio n of
"modern Englis h novel" ; unles s indeed i t b e tha t i n thi s matter h e ha s "liking" a work of art o r not liking it: the most improved criticism wil l not
fallen int o a n accidenta l confusio n o f standpoints. I t i s not quit e clea r abolish tha t primitive , tha t ultimat e test. I mention thi s to guard myself
1 Oh, com e now ! from th e accusation o f intimating that the idea, the subject, of a nove l or a
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picture, does not matter . I t matters , t o my sense, in th e highes t degree , repetition o f a few familiar cliches, cuts short its development, and lead s us
and i f I might pu t u p a prayer i t would b e that artist s shoul d selec t non e straight up to a dead wall . Catchin g the very note and trick , the strange
but th e richest . Some , a s I hav e alread y hastene d t o admit , ar e muc h irregular rhyth m o f life, tha t i s the attemp t whos e strenuous force keep s
more remunerative tha n others , and it would be a world happil y arrange d Fiction upo n her feet . In proportio n as in what she offers us we see lif e
in whic h person s intendin g t o trea t the m shoul d b e exemp t fro m confu - without rearrangemen t d o w e fee l tha t w e ar e touchin g th e truth ; i n
sions and mistakes . Thi s fortunate conditio n wil l arrive only, I fear , o n proportion a s we see it with rearrangement d o w e fee l tha t w e are bein g
the sam e da y tha t critic s becom e purge d fro m error . Meanwhile , I put of f with a substitute , a compromis e an d convention . I t i s not un -
repeat, w e do not judge th e artist with fairness unless we say to him, "Oh , common t o hea r a n extraordinar y assuranc e o f remark i n regar d t o thi s
I gran t yo u you r starting-point , becaus e i f I di d no t I shoul d see m t o matter of rearranging, whic h is often spoke n of as if it were the las t word of
prescribe to you, and heave n forbid I shoul d take that responsibility . I f art. Mr . Besan t seems to me in danger of falling into the great error with
I pretend t o tell you what you must not take, you will call upon me to tell his rather unguarde d tal k about "selection. " Ar t i s essentially selection,
you the n wha t yo u mus t take ; i n whic h cas e I shall b e prettil y caught . but it is a selection whose main car e is to be typical, to be inclusive. For
Moreover, it isn' t til l I hav e accepte d you r dat a tha t I can begi n to many people art mean s rose-coloured window-panes, and selectio n means
measure you . I hav e the standard, th e pitch; I hav e n o right t o tampe r picking a bouquet for Mrs. Grundy. The y will tell you glibly that artistic
with your flute and the n criticis e you r music . O f course I may not care considerations hav e nothin g t o d o wit h th e disagreeable , wit h th e ugly ;
for you r idea at all; I may think it silly, or stale, or unclean; in which case they will rattle of f shallow commonplace s abou t th e provinc e o f art an d
I wash my hands of you altogether. I may content mysel f with believin g the limit s o f art til l yo u ar e move d t o som e wonde r i n retur n a s to th e
that yo u wil l no t hav e succeede d i n bein g interesting , bu t I shall , o f province an d th e limit s of ignorance. I t appear s t o me tha t n o one can
course, not attempt t o demonstrate it, and you will be as indifferent t o me ever have made a seriously artistic attempt withou t becoming conscious of
as I a m t o you. I needn' t remin d yo u tha t ther e are al l sort s of tastes: an immens e increase a kin d o f revelationof freedom . On e perceives
who can know it better ? Som e people, fo r excellent reasons, don't like to in that caseb y the light of a heavenly raythat the province of art i s all
read abou t carpenters ; others , fo r reasons eve n better , don' t lik e t o read life, al l feeling , al l observation , al l vision . A s Mr . Besan t so justly inti-
about courtesans . Man y objec t t o Americans . Other s ( I believ e the y mates, i t i s al l experience . Tha t i s a sufficien t answe r t o thos e wh o
are mainl y editors and publishers ) won' t loo k at Italians . Som e reader s maintain tha t i t mus t no t touc h th e sa d thing s o f life, wh o stic k into it s
don't lik e quie t subjects ; others don' t lik e bustling ones . Som e enjo y a divine unconsciou s boso m littl e prohibitor y inscription s o n th e en d o f
complete illusion , other s th e consciousnes s o f larg e concessions . The y sticks, suc h a s we see in publi c gardens"I t i s forbidden t o wal k o n th e
choose their novels accordingly, and if they don't car e about your idea they grass; i t i s forbidden t o touc h th e flowers ; i t i s not allowed t o introduc e
won't, a fortiori, car e abou t you r treatment. " dogs or to remain afte r dark ; it is requested t o keep t o th e right." Th e
So that it comes back very quickly, as I have said, to the liking: in spite young aspirant i n the lin e of fiction whom we continue to imagine will do
of M. Zola , who reasons less powerfully tha n h e represents, an d wh o will nothing without taste, for in that cas e his freedom would be of little use to
not reconcil e himself to thi s absoluteness of taste, thinkin g that ther e ar e him; but th e first advantage o f his taste will be to reveal to him the absurd-
certain things that peopl e ought to like, and that the y can be made to like. ity o f the little sticks and tickets . I f h e have taste, I must add, o f course
I a m quit e a t a los s t o imagin e anythin g (a t an y rat e i n thi s matte r o f he will have ingenuity , and m y disrespectful referenc e t o that qualit y just
fiction) tha t peopl e ought to lik e or to dislike. Selectio n wil l be sur e to now was not mean t t o impl y tha t i t i s useless i n fiction . Bu t i t i s only a
take car e o f itself, fo r it has a constant motiv e behin d it . Tha t motive is secondary aid ; th e firs t i s a capacit y fo r receivin g straigh t impressions .
simply experience. A s people fee l life , so they will feel th e ar t tha t i s most Mr. Besan t ha s som e remark s o n th e questio n o f "the story " whic h I
closely relate d t o it . Thi s closenes s o f relation i s what w e should neve r shall not attempt to criticise, thoug h the y seem to me to contain a singular
forget i n talking of the effor t o f the novel . Man y peopl e spea k of it a s a am&iguity, because I do not think I understand them . I cannot see what
factitious, artificia l form , a produc t o f ingenuity, th e busines s of which is is meant b y talking as if there were a part of a novel which is the story and
to alte r an d arrang e th e thing s that surroun d us , to translat e the m int o part o f it which fo r mystical reasons is notunless indee d th e distinction
conventional, traditional moulds . This , however, is a view of the matte r be made i n a sens e in which i t is difficult t o suppose that an y on e should
which carrie s u s bu t a ver y shor t way , condemn s th e ar t t o a n eterna l attempt t o conve y anything . "Th e story, " i f i t represent s anything ,
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represents the subject , th e idea, the donnee of the novel ; and ther e is surely "adventures." Wh y o f adventures mor e tha n o f green spectacle s ? H e
no "school"Mr . Besan t speaks o f a schoolwhic h urge s tha t a nove l mentions a categor y o f impossibl e things , an d amon g the m h e place s
should b e al l treatmen t an d n o subject . Ther e mus t assuredl y b e "fiction withou t adventure. " Wh y without adventure, mor e tha n with -
something t o treat ; ever y schoo l i s intimatel y consciou s o f that . Thi s out matrimony , o r celibacy, or parturition, o r cholera, o r hydropathy, o r
sense of the story being the idea, the starting-point, of the novel, is the only Jansenism ? Thi s seem s to me to bring the novel back to the hapless little
one tha t I see in which it can b e spoken of as something different fro m it s role o f bein g a n artificial , ingenious thingbring i t dow n fro m it s large ,
organic whole ; and sinc e in proportio n a s the wor k i s successful th e idea free characte r o f a n immens e an d exquisit e correspondenc e wit h life .
permeates an d penetrate s it, inform s an d animate s it , s o that ever y wor d And wha t i s adventure, whe n i t come s t o that , an d b y wha t sig n i s th e
and ever y punctuation-point contribut e directl y to the expression, i n that listening pupi l t o recognis e it ? I t i s an adventurea n immens e one
proportion d o we lose our sens e of the stor y being a blad e whic h may b e for m e t o writ e this little article; an d fo r a Bostonia n nymp h t o reject a n
drawn mor e o r les s ou t o f its sheath. Th e stor y and th e novel , th e idea English duk e i s an adventur e onl y less stirring , I shoul d say , tha n fo r a n
and th e form , ar e th e needle and thread, an d I neve r hear d o f a guil d of English duk e to be rejected b y a Bostonian nymph. I see dramas withi n
tailors who recommended th e use of the threa d withou t the needle, o r th e dramas i n that , an d innumerabl e points of view. A psychological reaso n
needle without the thread. Mr . Besant i s not the only critic who may be is, to my imagination, a n objec t adorably pictorial ; to catch th e tin t of its
observed t o hav e spoke n a s i f ther e wer e certai n thing s i n lif e whic h complexionI fee l a s if that ide a might inspire one to Titianesque efforts .
constitute stories , and certai n other s which d o not I fin d th e sam e od d There are fe w things more excitin g t o me, i n short, tha n a psychologica l
implication i n an entertainin g articl e i n th e Pall Mall Gazette, devoted, as reason, an d yet , I protest , th e nove l seem s t o m e th e mos t magnificen t
it happens , t o Mr . Besant' s lecture. "Th e stor y i s the thing! " say s thi s form o f art. I hav e just bee n reading , a t th e sam e time , th e delightfu l
graceful writer , a s i f wit h a ton e o f oppositio n t o som e othe r idea . I story of Treasure Island, b y Mr . Rober t Louis Stevenso n and , i n a manner
should thin k it was, as every painter who, as the tim e for "sending in " hi s less consecutive , th e las t tal e fro m M . Edmon d d e Goncourt , whic h i s
picture loom s i n th e distance , finds himself stil l i n ques t o f a subjecta s entitled Cherie. On e o f these work s treats o f murders, mysteries , island s
every belate d artis t not fixed about his theme wil l heartily agree . Ther e of dreadfu l renown , hairbreadt h escapes , miraculou s coincidence s an d
are som e subject s which spea k t o u s an d other s whic h d o not , bu t h e buried doubloons . Th e othe r treat s o f a littl e Frenc h gir l wh o live d i n
would b e a clever ma n wh o shoul d undertak e t o giv e a rulea n index a fine hous e in Paris , and die d of wounded sensibilit y because no one
expurgatoriusby whic h th e stor y an d th e no-stor y shoul d b e know n would marr y her . I cal l Treasure Island delightful , because i t appear s t o
apart. I t i s impossible (t o me a t least ) t o imagine an y suc h rul e whic h me t o have succeeded wonderfull y i n what i t attempts; and I ventur e t o
shall not be altogether arbitrary . Th e write r i n the Pall Mall opposes the bestow no epithet upon Cherie, which strikes me as having failed deplorabl y
delightful (a s I suppose ) nove l o f Margot l a Balafree t o certai n tale s i n in wha t i t attemptstha t i s i n tracin g th e developmen t o f th e mora l
which "Bostonia n nymphs " appea r t o hav e "rejecte d Englis h duke s for consciousness o f a child . Bu t on e o f thes e production s strike s m e a s
psychological reasons. " I a m no t acquainte d wit h th e romanc e jus t exactly as muc h o f a nove l as the other, an d a s having a "story" quite as
designated, and ca n scarcely forgive the Pall Mall critic for not mentionin g much. Th e mora l consciousnes s of a child is as much a part of life a s the
the nam e o f the author, bu t th e title appears to refer to a lad y wh o may islands of th e Spanis h Main , an d th e on e sor t o f geography seem s t o m e
have received a scar in some heroic adventure. I am inconsolabl e at no t to have those "surprises" o f which Mr. Besan t speaks quite as much a s the
being acquainte d wit h thi s episode , bu t a m utterl y a t a los s t o se e why other. Fo r mysel f (since it come s back i n th e las t resort, a s I say , t o th e
it is a story when the rejection (or acceptance) o f a duke is not, and wh y a preference o f the individual), the pictur e o f the child' s experience ha s th e
reason, psychologica l o r other, i s not a subjec t when a cicatri x is . The y advantage tha t I ca n a t successiv e steps (a n immense luxury , near t o th e
are al l particles o f the multitudinou s life wit h which th e nove l deals, an d "sensual pleasure " o f which Mr . Besant' s criti c i n th e Pall Mall speaks )
surely n o dogm a whic h pretend s t o make i t lawfu l t o touc h th e one an d say Ye s or No , a s it ma y be , t o wha t th e artis t put s befor e me. I hav e
unlawful t o touch th e other wil l stand fo r a moment o n its feet. I t i s the been a child in fact, bu t I have bee n o n a quest for a buried treasur e onl y
special picture that must stand or fall, accordin g a s it seem to possess truth in supposition , an d i t i s a simpl e acciden t tha t wit h M . d e Goncour t I
or t o lac k it . Mr . Besan t doe s not , t o m y sense , light u p th e subjec t b y should hav e for the mos t par t t o sa y No. Wit h Georg e Eliot , whe n sh e
intimating tha t a story must, under penalt y of not being a story, consis t of painted tha t country wit h a far other intelligence , I always sai d Yes .
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The mos t interestin g part o f Mr. Besant' s lectur e i s unfortunately th e The essenc e of moral energ y is to surve y the whol e field, and I shoul d
briefest passagehi s ver y cursor y allusio n t o th e "consciou s mora l directly revers e Mr . Besant' s remar k an d sa y not tha t th e Englis h novel
purpose" o f th e novel . Her e agai n i t i s no t ver y clea r whethe r h e b e has a purpose, but that it has a diffidence. T o what degree a purpose in a
recording a fac t o r layin g down a principle ; it i s a grea t pit y that i n th e work o f art i s a sourc e o f corruption I shal l no t attemp t t o inquire ; th e
latter cas e h e shoul d no t hav e develope d hi s idea . Thi s branc h o f th e one tha t seem s t o me leas t dangerou s i s the purpos e o f making a perfect
subject i s of immense importance , an d Mr . Besant' s fe w words poin t t o work. A s for our novel, I may sa y lastly on this score that as we find it in
considerations of the wides t reach, no t t o b e lightly disposed of. H e will England to-da y i t strike s m e a s addresse d i n a larg e degre e t o "youn g
have treate d th e ar t o f fiction bu t superficiall y wh o i s not prepare d t o go people," an d tha t thi s i n itsel f constitutes a presumptio n tha t i t wil l b e
every inc h o f the wa y tha t thes e considerations will carr y him . I t i s for rather shy. Ther e are certai n thing s which i t i s generally agree d no t t o
this reaso n tha t a t th e beginnin g of these remarks I wa s careful t o notif y discuss, no t even t o mention , befor e youn g people . Tha t i s very well,
the reade r tha t m y reflection s o n s o large a them e hav e n o pretension t o but th e absence o f discussion is not a symptom of the moral passion . Th e
be exhaustive. Lik e Mr. Besant , I hav e lef t th e questio n o f the moralit y purpose of the English novel"a truly admirable thing , and a great caus e
of the novel till the last, and at the last I find I have used up my space. I t for congratulation"strike s m e therefor e a s rathe r negative.
is a questio n surrounde d wit h difficulties , a s witnes s th e ver y firs t tha t There i s one poin t a t whic h th e mora l sens e an d th e artisti c sens e lie
meets us, in the form o f a definite question, on the threshold. Vagueness , very near together ; that i s in th e ligh t o f the ver y obvious trut h tha t th e
in such a discussion, is fatal, and wha t is the meaning of your morality an d deepest qualit y o f a work o f art wil l always be the qualit y o f the mind of
your consciou s moral purpose ? Wil l you no t defin e you r term s and ex - the producer. I n proportion a s that intelligenc e is fine will the novel, the
plain ho w ( a novel being a picture ) a pictur e ca n b e either mora l o r im- picture, th e statu e partak e of the substanc e of beauty an d truth . T o b e
moral? Yo u wis h t o pain t a mora l pictur e o r carv e a mora l statue : constituted o f such elements is, to my vision, to have purpose enough. N o
will yo u no t tel l u s how yo u would se t about it ? W e ar e discussin g the good nove l will ever proceed fro m a superficial mind; that seem s to me an
Art o f Fiction ; question s o f ar t ar e question s (i n th e wides t sense ) o f axiom which , for the artist i n fiction, will cover all needful mora l ground:
execution; questions of morality are quit e another affair , an d wil l you not if the youthfu l aspiran t tak e i t to heart it will illuminate for him many of
let us see how it is that yo u find it so easy to mix them u p ? Thes e thing s the mysterie s o f "purpose. " Ther e ar e man y othe r usefu l thing s tha t
are so clear to Mr. Besan t that h e has deduced fro m the m a law which he might be said to him, but I hav e com e to the end of my article, and can
sees embodie d i n Englis h Fiction, and whic h i s "a trul y admirable thin g only touc h the m a s I pass . Th e criti c i n th e Pall Mall Gazette, whom I
and a great cause for congratulation." I t i s a great cause for congratula- have alread y quoted , draw s attentio n t o th e danger , i n speakin g of th e
tion indeed when such thorny problems become as smooth as silk. I ma y art of fiction, of generalising. The dange r tha t he has in mind is rather, I
add tha t i n s o far a s Mr . Besan t perceive s tha t i n poin t o f fac t Englis h imagine, tha t of particularising, for there are some comprehensive remarks
Fiction ha s addressed itsel f preponderantl y t o thes e delicat e question s he which, i n additio n t o thos e embodie d i n Mr . Besant' s suggestiv e lecture,
will appea r t o man y peopl e t o hav e mad e a vai n discovery . The y wil l might withou t fea r o f misleadin g hi m b e addresse d t o th e ingenuou s
have been positively struck, on the contrary, with the moral timidit y of the student. I should remind hi m first of the magnificence of the form that is
usual Englis h novelist; with his (o r with her) aversio n t o face th e difficul - open t o him, which offers t o sight so few restrictions and suc h innumerable
ties with which on ever y side the treatmen t o f reality bristles . H e i s ap t opportunities. Th e othe r arts , i n comparison, appea r confine d an d
to b e extremel y sh y (wherea s th e pictur e tha t Mr . Besan t draw s i s a hampered; th e variou s condition s unde r whic h the y ar e exercise d are so
picture o f boldness) , an d th e sig n o f hi s work , fo r th e mos t part , i s a rigid and definite . Bu t the only condition that I can think of attaching to
cautious silenc e on certai n subjects . I n th e Englis h nove l (b y whic h o f the compositio n o f the nove l is , as I hav e alread y said, tha t i t be sincere .
course I mea n th e America n a s well), more tha n i n an y other , ther e i s a This freedo m i s a splendi d privilege , an d th e firs t lesso n o f the youn g
traditional differenc e betwee n tha t whic h peopl e kno w an d tha t whic h novelist is to learn t o be worthy of it. "Enjo y i t as it deserves," I should
they agre e t o admit tha t the y know, tha t whic h the y se e and tha t which say t o him ; "tak e possession of it, explor e i t t o it s utmost extent , publish
they speak of, that whic h they feel t o be a part o f life an d tha t which the y it, rejoic e i n it . Al l lif e belong s t o you, an d d o no t liste n eithe r to thos e
allow t o ente r int o literature . Ther e i s th e grea t difference , i n short , who would shu t you u p int o corner s o f it and tel l yo u tha t i t is only her e
between what the y tal k of in conversation an d wha t the y tal k of in print . and ther e that art inhabits , o r to those who would persuad e yo u that thi s
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