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Hi there,
I recently started to somehow see if I could put all my projects into one render, hence this image, (sorry its such a big image, you should zoom out if you cant see a light bulb.)

It was a 2 week project, rendered in octane and all modelled in blender, if u want a tutorial on modelling the semi-realistic watch, although only on the body and frame, with no sound the 2 links are here,
part 1part 2
EDIT: the links shud work now…
thanks in advance for any replies,
The squidifier

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anyone??? :frowning:

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it looks like a good render, don’t know if i really have anything to say about it though.

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Looks pretty real, though I do have to admit I’m seeing a lot of sharp edges on objects.

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The only thing that really sticks out to me is that the light bulb glass appears to much like metal while the threading on the base appears to be plastic.

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Very nice DOF.

However - it screams “texture me”. The camera needs a bumpy texture on the front panels, and scratches and dirt all around. The table needs some kind of texture. The bolts need to look scratched and maybe a bit oily. Ditto the watch machanism. The back of the lenses should have a proper mount. Make the lighting more interesting, perhaps a narrow window laying a beam across the scene and part of the wall.

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i agree textures are necesary in this image…(for realism)
perhaps add a point lamp in the bulb and make it translucent…

one thing that bothers me is that the lighting is neutral and there is a broken camera seemingly a expensive on so id suggest make a dramataic light setup… make it tell a story … and instead of the “speaker”, i think it is in the BG, add tools for repairing…

but if your acheiving something else… we’ll see what it will be