Talk:Sami (chimpanzee)/GA1
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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 19:14, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
- was exhibited at the Belgrade Zoo – I would recommend "was kept at the Belgrade Zoo" to maintain the neutral point of view.
- Broglio 2019, p. 286 – The full citation can be found in the same list, which might be not ideal. Usually there is a separate "Bibliography" section with the full citation. An alternative would be to use rp-templates, e.g. {{rp|286}}, placed directly behind the citation to provide the page number in-text.
- Professor Ron Broglio – we usually don't use titles in Wikipedia. Better introduce him like this: "Serbian ethnologist Ron Broglio", and replace "ethnologist" with his specialisation. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:14, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
- Hello, Jens Lallensack. Thanks for picking this up. I've altered the opening sentence. Broglio isn't Serbian and I'm not sure he's an ethnologist. His bio says he's a professor of English and the humanities. So I've changed it to "scholar". As for point #2, I'm not sure I follow. Since it's a minor formatting issue, do you think you can adjust it to your satisfaction? Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 17:23, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- I tried with the rp-templates. They are the most flexible way. If you don't like them, we can have a separate list for full citations, though that might look odd as Broglio would be the only entry. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 17:47, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Jens Lallensack: Whatever you prefer. Any other comments, suggestions or concerns? Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 17:49, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- No, this is looking solid. Will pass it now, congrats! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 17:50, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Jens Lallensack: Whatever you prefer. Any other comments, suggestions or concerns? Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 17:49, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- I tried with the rp-templates. They are the most flexible way. If you don't like them, we can have a separate list for full citations, though that might look odd as Broglio would be the only entry. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 17:47, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
- Hello, Jens Lallensack. Thanks for picking this up. I've altered the opening sentence. Broglio isn't Serbian and I'm not sure he's an ethnologist. His bio says he's a professor of English and the humanities. So I've changed it to "scholar". As for point #2, I'm not sure I follow. Since it's a minor formatting issue, do you think you can adjust it to your satisfaction? Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 17:23, 21 January 2021 (UTC)