User contributions for 75.188.199.98

22 November 2017

• 12:2312:23, 22 November 2017 diff hist 0 Talk:First observation of gravitational waves →Suggested split: formatting tweak
• 12:2112:21, 22 November 2017 diff hist +855 Talk:First observation of gravitational waves →Suggested split: thought

20 November 2017

• 21:2721:27, 20 November 2017 diff hist +34 Talk:First observation of gravitational waves →Suggested split: format tweak
• 21:2121:21, 20 November 2017 diff hist +1,147 Talk:First observation of gravitational waves →Suggested split: another editor offered some relevant ideas

18 November 2017

• 20:4620:46, 18 November 2017 diff hist +626 Talk:Silver Cross Tavern →Confusing/awkward phrasing in lede: new section
• 20:0020:00, 18 November 2017 diff hist +590 Talk:George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →Art patronage of George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham: reply
• 16:4916:49, 18 November 2017 diff hist +1,743 Talk:George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →Art patronage of George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham: commentary
• 15:0515:05, 18 November 2017 diff hist +2,454 Talk:George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →Art patronage of George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham: Comment to PBS
• 13:3413:34, 18 November 2017 diff hist −3,230 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: removed ref citations stranded by previous section content removal
• 13:1513:15, 18 November 2017 diff hist +479 Talk:George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →Art patronage of George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham
• 12:3012:30, 18 November 2017 diff hist −8,002 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →Patronage of the arts: Without 1st gaining talkpage consensus, blanked the bulk of an article section and redirected it to another article—as previously unilaterally done by User:PBS under the guise of a mass revert (better options may exist)
• 12:2112:21, 18 November 2017 diff hist +11,236 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham Undid mass revert; obfuscated a unilateral section move made without 1st gaining consensus in existing Talk:George_Villiers,_1st_Duke_of_Buckingham discussion; Further, User:PBS offered no explanation relevant directly to the 13 individual reverts
• 11:0711:07, 18 November 2017 diff hist +28 Familia Caritatis parenthetical translation of 'other language' examples by way of Template:lang-en

17 November 2017

• 17:0617:06, 17 November 2017 diff hist +15 Guildable Manor →Procedure and Court Leet: further tweak for style,consistency, targeting
• 16:5916:59, 17 November 2017 diff hist +7 Guildable Manor →Procedure and Court Leet: wikilink and punctuation
• 15:5515:55, 17 November 2017 diff hist −4 Cy-près doctrine moved "testator" and "settlor" wikilinking forward to initial instances and tweaked some punctuation
• 15:3915:39, 17 November 2017 diff hist −127 London Bridge (Lake Havasu City) bringing up the nursery rhyme seems superfluous/gratuitous/off-topic in the lede of a London Bridge (Lake Havasu City) article
• 15:1915:19, 17 November 2017 diff hist −8 Haytor →Quarrying: simplified a phrase
• 15:1315:13, 17 November 2017 diff hist +17 Talk:Olmsted Locks and Dam added [[Template:Talk reference}} and section heading
• 15:0315:03, 17 November 2017 diff hist +147 Olmsted Locks and Dam "currently" = WP:EPHEMERAL; added specificity and tweaked phrasing
• 14:3614:36, 17 November 2017 diff hist −42 Cofferdam →Portable cofferdams: removed inline external link, it targeted commercial promotional material
• 12:5012:50, 17 November 2017 diff hist +632 MHTML Summary for general readership, i.e. with reduced tech jargon

16 November 2017

• 19:4719:47, 16 November 2017 diff hist +96 Malmö Castle added overview image
• 19:4019:40, 16 November 2017 diff hist 0 Drum tower (Europe) tweaked English phrasing of image caption
• 19:2719:27, 16 November 2017 diff hist 0 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham shortened § 'Notes' column width; the section is fairly long and the majority of 'notes' are fairly short
• 19:1719:17, 16 November 2017 diff hist +71 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref target for existing Template:Sfn 'note'
• 19:1119:11, 16 November 2017 diff hist +374 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref target for existing Template:Sfn 'note'
• 19:0819:08, 16 November 2017 diff hist +248 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref target for existing Template:Sfn 'note'
• 19:0519:05, 16 November 2017 diff hist +279 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref target for existing Template:Sfn 'note'
• 19:0019:00, 16 November 2017 diff hist +378 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref target for existing Template:Sfn 'note' Tag: Incorrectly formatted external link or image
• 18:5318:53, 16 November 2017 diff hist +694 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref targets for existing Template:Sfn 'notes'
• 18:4618:46, 16 November 2017 diff hist +257 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref target for existing Template:Sfn 'note'
• 18:4218:42, 16 November 2017 diff hist +341 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref target for existing Template:Sfn 'note'
• 18:3618:36, 16 November 2017 diff hist +403 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref target for existing Template:Sfn 'note'
• 18:0918:09, 16 November 2017 diff hist +185 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →References: ref lost in aborted 'patronage' move? provides a target for note "42. ^ PubHist & 20047.", i.e. for a Template:Sfn instance – Are there more such in need of repair? Article's ref/note structure seems suboptimal ...
• 17:3617:36, 16 November 2017 diff hist +35 Art patronage of George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham refined wikilink
• 17:0817:08, 16 November 2017 diff hist +35 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →Patronage of the arts: refined wikilink
• 16:2616:26, 16 November 2017 diff hist +4 George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham →Charles I, the Lord Admiral and foreign affairs: tweaked image captions to better indicate 'subject' and 'painter' roles; ie "the Duke" precedes "Rubens" as Villiers is the subject of the article—images included to highlight subject, not artist
• 14:5114:51, 16 November 2017 diff hist +11 Unstan ware removed "After firing" as dubious—pottery is generally burnished while partially dry before firing—and then added a wikilink to pottery burnishing details
• 13:4013:40, 16 November 2017 diff hist +34 Pile bridge →See also: removed Kabouter link as gnomes seem unrelated to Pile bridges; elaborated Fredriksdalsbron as a courtesy to readers
• 12:4412:44, 16 November 2017 diff hist +105 Lord Steward fixed error—missing word, 'Parliament'—and added relevant link and tweaked ref

15 November 2017

• 22:1722:17, 15 November 2017 diff hist +4 Triskelion →Neolithic, Bronze Age, and Iron Age use in Europe: wikilink
• 22:1322:13, 15 November 2017 diff hist 0 Chape moved buckle chape image to related section
• 21:5221:52, 15 November 2017 diff hist 0 Mildenhall Treasure layout tweak
• 20:5120:51, 15 November 2017 diff hist +16 Oppidum of Manching →Economy: wikilink
• 18:5518:55, 15 November 2017 diff hist +12 Mildenhall Treasure added Template:Peacock; see Talk:Mildenhall Treasure#Flowery phrasing
• 18:5018:50, 15 November 2017 diff hist +750 Talk:Mildenhall Treasure →Flowery phrasing: new section
• 17:5117:51, 15 November 2017 diff hist +18 Mildenhall Treasure added 'date of find' as an accompanying detail to 'location of find' in the lede, i.e. placed 'when' with 'where' to better summarize for readers
• 17:2417:24, 15 November 2017 diff hist +49 Cuerdale Hoard 'Cnut of Northumbria', wikilink and § See also
• 15:2415:24, 15 November 2017 diff hist +19 Russian tradition of the Knights Hospitaller placed 'citation needed' tag; the Knights Hospitaller article describes events of the French takeover of Malta rather differently