Good story with bad writing
6 episodes in and it feels like someone started with writing a s*x story but in the middle of writing it all, the person went,"I think we could make a complete series out of this". These students are always horny and just ready to sleep with anything that moves and comes in close proximity with them.
Story and visuals in this episode are relatively very good but the dialogue writing is awful. Something drastic happens and they just move on from the scene like nothing happened just few seconds ago. Still this is one of the good episodes unlike last one which was just compilation of everything bad you could do with filmmaking.
I'm just disappointed with whoever wrote those awful lines and the horny guy in writing department who can't write anything without adding unnecessary s*x in it.
Story and visuals in this episode are relatively very good but the dialogue writing is awful. Something drastic happens and they just move on from the scene like nothing happened just few seconds ago. Still this is one of the good episodes unlike last one which was just compilation of everything bad you could do with filmmaking.
I'm just disappointed with whoever wrote those awful lines and the horny guy in writing department who can't write anything without adding unnecessary s*x in it.
- mht-98693
- Jul 6, 2024