A nicely told representation of the stages of Grief. After a few tries I managed to reach the end of the travel, then proceeded to do 2 more times trying to see all texts. You did an excellent Job

I love the use of the space. The way the sprite moves and the text is placed all feels very intentional and gives the words more weight. The layout, especially for repeating words and phrases, is just done so exceptionally well and really affects the reading experience. I'm obsessed.

Your poetic voice is really beautiful, and the way you used the sprite and looping background to enhance the narrative I found really inspired! It really was a powerful, reflective journey through your grief late at night, cursing the night, pleading to the stars, reflecting, crying...

The looping choices too also fit the narrative so well! It's not a straight journey through grief, and I can't get over how fitting a choice that is, thank you for making this!

It's put-together well, like a poetry in motion. I second the comment below that using the text boxes to break up thoughts was a really nice touch.

This was really fun! I love how you used the floating text boxes to kind of break up thoughts, and how the placement of the witch reflected their progress on their journey (at least that's my reading of it). Not to mention how solid the styling and presentation is. The special start screen and backgrounds !!! UGH!! this was really cool