I've
had to think a bit about how to write about this book. I acquired it in one of
my recent binges on e-Bay, after having meant to get back to reading more of
Dorothy Evelyn Smith, particularly after Simon at Stuck in a Book recently
wrote in glowing terms about her early novel O the Brave Music.
For
myself, her 1959 novel Miss Plum and Miss
Penny is an absolute treasure, which I raved about here
not long after starting this blog back in 2013, and which I recently announced (yay!) that we would be reprinting in August. As I mentioned in that announcement, I re-read MPAMP just last year and was delighted to find that I loved
it every bit as much as before. But my second Smith novel, 1952's Lost Hill, inspired considerably less enthusiasm here,
and I unfortunately let her lapse after that. But I always wondered if there
were more treasures to be found among her work. O the Brave Music will be queued up next, and Simon has now let us know that it will be reprinted by the British Library's new women's writers imprint, but first I couldn't
resist picking up Brief Flower in
this well-preserved copy complete with dustjacket (though I'm not
entirely sure of the cover image, which makes our heroine look just a bit
demonic…)
And
now my dilemma. First, the positive, of which there is much. Brief Flower is a coming of age story, a
genre I often don't particularly like, but here I was grabbed from the first
page, in which two little girls fearfully but spunkily await the end of the world,
having been told by a surly servant that the approaching storm signifies some
kind of armageddon. It's a brilliant scene, and one which gives a perfect
introduction to Bunny, the novel's narrator (narrating the story from the
distant future when she is already an elderly woman), a spitfire wild child
with enormous self-possession and a delightfully philosophical outlook on her
life. A life that is not without its problems, to be sure. She lives with
Laurie and Madge, who have raised her from infancy but who are, she already
knows, not her parents. She is in fact a bastard, though she has only the
vaguest notion of what that means or why anyone would care about it. The other
girl is Frankie, a neighbour girl and Bunny's devoted friend, plagued by
migraines but with a charming pluck of her own.
Bunny
lives at Blackberry Farm, rundown and impoverished, which Laurie halfheartedly
farms in between trying to write a novel and periodic drinking binges, the
latter of which occasionally lead to him beating Bunny with his belt. Despite
this, Bunny remains devoted to Laurie, and is typically philosophical about his
violence:
Better go hungry than take a beating. Not that I held it against
Laurie when he beat me. I kicked and scratched and swore, and once I bit his
hand so deeply that it had to be bandaged up. But when it was over it was over,
and neither of us referred to it again. I knew that Laurie was ashamed but I knew,
too, that I had usually deserved what I'd got, and we observed a sort of
gentlemen's agreement about the whole thing.
Madge,
who was formerly on the stage, is less demonstrative with Bunny, but clearly
bears her a slightly grudging devotion. And Bunny, due to reasons which we
eventually learn, has been allowed to run absolutely wild, a fact she
appreciates. She clearly sees the positives in her life rather than focusing on
the negative:
Most of the children I knew had fathers and mothers,
grandparents, aunts and uncles and any number of brothers and sisters. I had never
envied them particularly. They always seemed to be running errands, minding
pram-loads of babies, being called in to meals in the middle of games or packed
off to bed while the sun still shone. They had little of the freedom I enjoyed,
living with Laurie and Madge. If I chose to stay out late and thus missed
supper it was my own silly fault and I
went to bed hungry. If I "answered back" I was either ignored or I had
my ears boxed. When Laurie had taken too much to drink on market days he might
take off his belt to me but never without real provocation, which I was honest
enough to admit. Madge grumbled and whined, but she also made me laugh a lot.
Laurie teased me, ignored me, sometimes treated me like a baby and at others
made almost impossible demands on my strength and patience; but he allowed me
to read any book in his possession, and of ten spent hours alone with me, walking
along the beach or climbing the cliff paths, telling me strange stories out of
the past; stories of Greece and Rome that came tumultuously alive in the keen air
of the Yorkshire coast and filled my heart and mind with a richness that has never
faded, after all these years.
It's
only when an older boy, Guy, camping with his friends nearby, appears on the
scene, that Bunny begins to question some of her savagery…
Before
long, however, Bunny's ruggedly idyllic life is disrupted by the reappearance
of her wealthy grandfather, who, having ignored her existence thus far, has
decided he wants to make amends and take her to live with him at Tarn House,
his lavish home, complete with servants, regular, plentiful meals, and elaborate,
spacious gardens. We learn the story of Bunny's mother, which I won't spoil
here, and how Laurie and Madge came into the picture, and it is agreed, against
Bunny's vigorous objections, that she will go to Tarn House for a year and then
be allowed to choose where she wishes to live.
Of
course, Tarn House is the polar opposite of her life at Blackberry Farm (though
her grandfather still allows her considerably leeway), but it presents
challenges and puzzles of its own, some predictable, some definitely not.
For
the most part, it's all really charming and joyful and funny, with a heroine
who is absolutely irresistible (if perhaps slightly unrealistic in her total
independence of thought and self-awareness, though perhaps this is explained by
the fact that it's all an elderly woman's recollections of herself). There were
moments that made me laugh out loud not from hilarity but from sheer delight
(particularly a final scene in which Bunny comes into her own with her
grandfather's stern housekeeper—unforgettable). For most of the time I was
reading it, I was thinking that here, though totally different in just about
every way from Miss Plum and Miss Penny,
was another Dorothy Evelyn Smith that should be brought back into print post
haste. Another treasure.
But…
As
I noted, Bunny is eleven years old when the book begins. She turns twelve
midway through, and then perhaps ages a bit more right near the end. The
trouble starts with her romantic interests. First, there was Guy, age sixteen, to
whom Bunny is almost immediately devoted, and who is perhaps a bit unusual in
returning the devotion of a girl so much his junior. But it is all innocent enough. Guy is amused and
charmed by her, but there's nothing hot and heavy.
Then
she arrives at Tarn House, where one of the gardeners is a Gypsy (of course,
and as earthy and potent as any stereotype) in his twenties who begins making
advances. In contrast with Guy, Lee is openly sexual in his approach, groping
and all. What's more, while Bunny doesn't like
the Gypsy man, she certainly desires
him and is responsive to his efforts. At eleven. Or possibly twelve, by this
point. Shortly after, she gets her first period, acknowledged to be a bit early
in arriving, so perhaps we are meant to believe that she is just extraordinarily
precocious in all areas, but her reaction to it was a wee bit offputting for
me:
I had hated Lee. I had hated myself. I had hated whatever it
was that made me not hate Lee enough to keep away from him.
Now I knew without any shadow of doubt why I hadn't wanted to
keep away from Lee, and the knowledge shattered me.
I might be a woman, but I was an animal, too. I was no better
than Moll, who had to be tied up twice a year .... Oh, beastly thought—I was no
better than a bitch on heat! ...
Now,
I'm all for a liberating acknowledgement that girls and women have sexual
desires. Of course they do, and more power to them. But the plotline of a
20-something man groping an 11-year-old girl who clearly desires him in return
might give some readers pause, particularly in the age of #MeToo.
But
even that's not quite all. As the novel ends (a sort of spoiler alert here,
though it doesn't give away everything), we see an only slightly older Bunny
vowing not to marry unless she can marry Laurie—the man who, though not a blood
relative, has effectively served as her father and raised her from infancy
(Madge, her foster mother of sorts, has conveniently been removed from the
picture)—and it seems we are meant to believe that this is quite likely to
happen.
It's
hard not to be just a wee bit distressed by all of that, and I don't think I'm overly sensitive to such issues.
In
short, Brief Flower is skillfully
written, often quite beautiful, funny, smart in its observations of children,
and frequently touching. It's a lovely, lovely novel on almost every level.
Almost.