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272 pages, Hardcover
First published March 12, 2024
* Why is this character here? (Sadly, the question arose most often about female characters, most of whom, except Beverly, are quite flat, often unnamed, even those supposedly of importance to the narrator: “my mother,” “the baby,” “the dancer” [the mother of his child].)
* Why the coy refusal to give certain characters their real or fictional names? (The Senator, the music producer, the famous pop artist, etc.) This convention became very annoying.
* Why must we suffer through so many detailed pages about things that have little to no bearing on the plot, such as
--a basketball game described ad nauseum. (I was convinced this must be a recycled piece of writing he had already published in some form and just stuck in the middle of Chapter 8—part of an essay or short story or cultural piece. I actually looked in the usual places at the beginning and end of the book to see if there was an acknowledgment of that. Nope—guess I was wrong.)
--several old photos at a flea market that apparently have no relevance to the plot.
--a childhood story at the end of the book about boys being boys by fruit-bombing strangers from several stories above.